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@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Data is Living and Relational
-A common problem with data science and machine learning tutorials is the published and studied data sets are often nothing like what you’ll find in industry.
+A common problem with data science and machine learning tutorials is the published and studied datasets are often nothing like what you’ll find in industry.
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ They are:
- usually denormalized into a single tabular form, e.g. a CSV file
- often relatively tiny to medium amounts of data, not big data
- always static, with new rows never added
-- sometimes pre-treated to clean or simplify the data
+- sometimes pretreated to clean or simplify the data
-As Data Science transitions from academia into industry, these norms influence organizations and applications. Professional Data Scientists need teams of Data Engineers to move data from production databases into data warehouses and denormalized schemas which are more familiar, and ideally easier to work with. Large offline batch jobs are a typical integration point between Data Scientists and their Engineering counterparts, who primarily deal with online systems. As the systems grow more complex, additional specialized Machine Learning Engineers are required to optimize performance and scalability bottlenecks between databases, warehouses, models and applications.
+As Data Science transitions from academia into industry, these norms influence organizations and applications. Professional Data Scientists need teams of Data Engineers to move data from production databases into data warehouses and denormalized schemas, which are more familiar and ideally easier to work with. Large offline batch jobs are a typical integration point between Data Scientists and their Engineering counterparts, who primarily deal with online systems. As the systems grow more complex, additional specialized Machine Learning Engineers are required to optimize performance and scalability bottlenecks between databases, warehouses, models and applications.
-This eventually leads to expensive maintenance and to terminal complexity: new improvements to the system become exponentially more difficult. Ultimately, previously working models start getting replaced by simpler solutions, so the business can continue to iterate. This is not a new phenomenon, see the fate of the Netflix Prize.
+This eventually leads to expensive maintenance and terminal complexity: new improvements to the system become exponentially more difficult. Ultimately, previously working models start getting replaced by simpler solutions, so the business can continue to iterate. This is not a new phenomenon, see the fate of the Netflix Prize.
Announcing the PostgresML Gym 🎉
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@@ -55,17 +55,17 @@ Instead of starting from the academic perspective that data is dead, PostgresML

-Relationa data:
+Relational data:
- is normalized for real time performance and correctness considerations
-- has new rows added and updated constantly, which form the incomplete features for a prediction
+- has new rows added and updated constantly, which form incomplete features for a prediction
-Meanwhile, denormalized data sets:
+Meanwhile, denormalized datasets:
-- may grow to billions of rows, where single updates multiple into mass rewrites
-- often span multiple iterations of the schema, where software bugs leave behind outliers
+- may grow to billions of rows, where single updates multiply into mass rewrites
+- often span multiple iterations of the schema, with software bugs leaving behind outliers
-We think it’s worth attempting to move the machine learning process and modern data architectures beyond the status quo. To that end, we’re building the PostgresML Gym, a free offering, to provide a test bed for real world ML experimentation in a Postgres database. Your personal Gym will include the PostgresML dashboard, several tutorial notebooks to get you started, and access to your own personal PostgreSQL database, supercharged with our machine learning extension.
+We think it’s worth attempting to move the machine learning process and modern data architectures beyond the status quo. To that end, we’re building the PostgresML Gym, a free offering, to provide a test bed for real world ML experimentation, in a Postgres database. Your personal Gym will include the PostgresML dashboard, several tutorial notebooks to get you started, and access to your own personal PostgreSQL database, supercharged with our machine learning extension.