Online Writing PDF
Online Writing PDF
Look for a "by" phrase (e.g., "by the dog" in the last example above). If you find one, the sentence may be in the passive
voice. Rewrite the sentence so that the subject buried in the "by" clause is closer to the beginning of the sentence.
If the subject of the sentence is somewhat anonymous, see if you can use a general term, such as "researchers," or "the
study," or "experts in this field."
4. So is your lede
If your headline is the key to the article, your lede is the hallway to keeping a reader interested in staying with the story.
Bad: A truck rollover has closed the highway and sent several people to hospital.
*Where did this happen? Why are people in hospital? Do I need to keep reading this?
Good: The 401 is currently closed in both directions at the DVP after a truck rollover sent several people to hospital with severe
injuries.
*How did this happen? I must keep reading!
Poor spelling and grammar detracts from your story and makes the entire Global News website look bad.
Microsoft Word and Google Docs have built-in spell and grammar tools. Wordpress has a spellchecker as well.
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