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301 Rhetorical Analysis Essay Rubric: Criteria Absent or Below Basic Developing Proficient Advanced Comments

The rubric assesses 5 criteria for a rhetorical analysis essay: 1) rhetorical focus, 2) ethical research, 3) persuasive arguments, 4) organization and focus, and 5) academic language and design. Based on the comments, the essay showed strengths in its introduction and definition section, but weaknesses in transitions between paragraphs and overall organization. The feedback suggested improving citation style, adding a clear counterargument, and reorganizing paragraphs for better focus.

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301 Rhetorical Analysis Essay Rubric: Criteria Absent or Below Basic Developing Proficient Advanced Comments

The rubric assesses 5 criteria for a rhetorical analysis essay: 1) rhetorical focus, 2) ethical research, 3) persuasive arguments, 4) organization and focus, and 5) academic language and design. Based on the comments, the essay showed strengths in its introduction and definition section, but weaknesses in transitions between paragraphs and overall organization. The feedback suggested improving citation style, adding a clear counterargument, and reorganizing paragraphs for better focus.

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301 Rhetorical Analysis Essay Rubric

Criteria Absent or Developing Proficient Advanced Comments:


Below Basic
1 Rhetorical Focus: Write The paper was half informal and formal. There would be parts where word choice
formally and informally, in- would be a great factor. If that is done then this paper could be very powerful
class and out-of-class, for a X paper.
variety of audiences and
purposes.
2 Ethical Research: Using The information from the sources are good, but when stating who said that needs
the appropriate major’s a lot of work. Try using the Purdue guidelines they provide online. That will help
customary citation style, you with plagiarism. That website will tell you the proper way to cite any source
ethically cite and X in any format.
communicate information
from a variety of discipline-
appropriate sources.

3 Persuasive Arguments: One major thing I did not notice was your counter argument. I was sure what it
Compare, evaluate, was or if it was there. Try being more clear or stating that this certain paragraph is
synthesize, and communicate your counter argument. Also , the intro was a great, you started out with statistics
carefully, objectively, and showing how drugs are a danger.
persuasively the relative
merits of alternative or X
opposing arguments,
assumptions, and cultural
values. Integrate this
evaluative work into a
persuasive argument.

4 Organization and Focus: The focus and organization of the paper can me improved a little more. For
Organize, focus, and example try organizing your paragraphs like this 1. Intro 2. Explaining what
communicate one’s thoughts opioids are 3. How they have become a problem 4. Research 5. Research 6.
clearly and effectively to X Counter argument etc.
address a rhetorical situation.

5 Academic Language and Again some of the language of this essay can be changed to better express what
Design: Recognize, you are trying to express.
evaluate, and employ the
features and contexts of
language and design that
express and influence X
meaning and that
demonstrate sensitivity to
gender and cultural
differences.
Two Overall Strengths: 1. Introduction was good

2. thorough defining of the definition of what opioids are

Two Overall Weaknesses: 1. Transitions need work

2. Organization (need to make some paragraphs more clear)

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