The Last Photograph Draft 3
The Last Photograph Draft 3
---Confucius
{Translation: Why aren’t you getting up! sleeping all day! You can at
least help with the room upstairs! Only 10 days till the flight! Hey!}
(Hazy vision)
(Protagonist opens eyes)
(Protagonist gets up)
(A glimpse of brushing teeth)
(A glimpse of walking upstairs)
(Looks at the interior of the room)
Father Voice:
Narrator:
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator:
Narrator:
{Note: the negatives are the only thing in frame that are slightly
colored}
Narrator:
The past was never quite easier, yet somehow seemed simpler.
Maybe that’s what made it so fascinating?
Or maybe it’s just the tedious bland present …
Narrator:
(Fade out)
{Note: the characters are talking but the sound of it won’t be included}
(Stares into the street)
{Translated: You can print it out …but there’s room for one more}
So far the protagonist seems too apathetic. Make him smile at least
once. Preferably in the girl’s scene.
(Ext. looking out at the streets in front of him as the Rickshaws, Car and
people pass by)
(Starts walking)
Narrator:
Only one?// unnecessary. Sounds like Mr. obvious. How about replacing
this with a reply to the studio’s mama with the protagonist saying “AR
EKTAI”?
(Travelling in bus as he stares out the window) //better if he wears
glasses and smudging them on his shirt
Voice of a girl:
(Walking home)
(Walks by a mosque)
Narrator:
Who am I to decide what’s the only one?// which is the one arektu deep
shonay
(Int. home)
(Takes off shoes)
Uncle:
//reply to mama’s call like ha ashi mama! Your nayok seems a bit
listless.
(Walks towards mother and uncle. Both of them are sitting in the dining
table)
Uncle:
bole de ekhoni!
Narrator:
Friend: [ ]
(Focus on random stuff on the street… birds flocking, tea stall, a couple
sitting, people walking etc.)
Friend (cont’d): [ ]
Details we observe add layers to their personality …
even the conversations…more audible and distinct…
but eventually…as more time….
(Slowly …sound of the street enters into the conversation and gets
louder and louder making the last few words barely audible)
(Int. home)
(Sitting on the table, doodling on the copy …with a cup of tea on the
table…)
(A knock is heard)
Dad:
Worried about the trip?
Protagonist:
No…
Dad:
Then?
Protagonist:
Dad:
Protagonist:
Why?
Dad:
Dad:
Ekdin bujhbi.
Dad (Voice):
Someone who can adapt through the wear and tear of time.
Narrator:
Flexible…
Narrator:
(An old picture of the family with mom holding/carrying the child)
Narrator:
(Fade out)
Girl:
//this scene isn’t necessary. You gotta let it sink into the viewers for a
bit.
(Protagonist setting up Dominoes with Jenga blocks)
(Transition)
(They are playing a board game and the cards and pieces are spread
accordingly in the table)
Protagonist:
Friend:
Friend 2:
Aand what are you even searching for? Are you the traitor?
(A shotgun card)
(Instead of the cards from the board game …protagonist now has
printed pictures on his hand and he is holding them the same way he
was holding the cards)
//me likey
(Protagonist gets out of room and finds uncle and aunt together)
Aunt (smiles):
Shuvo shokal
Mum:
Mum(cont’d):
ei koita bag ami age theke guchai rakchi baki gula tora korbi...
ar bashar shob habi jabi kagoj bikri kore dibo...
kono ta rakhte chaile alada kore rakhbi...
{Translated: these few bags I’m packing up early …the rest are up to you
guys
and I'm getting rid of all the junk in the household...
if you you want to save any then store them separately}
(Uncle and Aunt still standing close to each other)
(Uncle and Aunt notice that Mum locks a small lock in the luggage)
Protagonist:
Friend:
Protagonist:
Friend:
Protagonist:
Friend:
Friend:
(takes a moment)
Friend (cont’d):
Pokemon card
Protagonist:
(Laughs)
Friend:
Narrator:
((Camera focuses on the table which has 3-4 pictures lying around)
Narrator:
Girl:
Girl (cont’d):
Plus I hate digital everything // plus I kinda like vintage stuff dile bhalo
hoy
(Finally she spins her palm and asks ‘what?’ with her fingers….4th
picture)
Protagonist:
Protagonist:
She wasn’t
Friend:
(Awkward silence)
Friend:
Protagonist:
Friend:
Narrator:
Always stuck somewhere between the weight of the past and the wait
for the future.
Narrator:
Father:
Father(cont’d):
Protagonist:
chinta korchi
Father:
ki?
Protagonist:
Mum:
kisher chobi?
Protagonist:
je kono kichu
{Translated: anything…}
Mum:
jani na…
amar tho mone hocche amra shobai mile ekhon khacchi etar e chobi
tula jeto…
ekshathe achi…
kichu din por tho chole jacchi ...
Protagonist:
baba?
{Translated: dad?}
Father:
ami mukto nil akasher chobi tulte chai…. Kono megh thakbe na jedin//
porishkar akash bolish,nobody says mukto neel in real life
Uncle:
keno??
{Translated: why??}
Father:
{Translated: the smile of someone old and poor…I have no exact face in
mind…someone from the village…}
(Silence)
(Noise of family eating… i.e clink of fork, pouring water on glass etc.)
Uncle (cont’d):
amar kache shob shomoi obaak lage manusher hashi ashe kotha
theke?
(Starts laughing)
Narrator:
{Note: the scene that’ll follow will include a few 4-5 people just
stepping into the same frame and leaving it …there’ll be no words said
…they’ll explain what picture they would take and step out the frame
….i.e enter through left and exit through right}
((The lower parts of his feet are not part of the frame))
(As they leave together with him showing her his wallet is empty)
(He fakes surprise and fakes crying because it is empty)//this has turjo
written all over it xD
{Note: have to figure a way out to convey that the picture is of his dead
parent}
//can you show teardrops falling on it? With the friends face out of the
camera?
(Fade out)
(Friend sends photo of him that was taken before – picture with
protagonist’s eyes closed)
Friend:
Protagonist:
(Friend laughs)
Friend:
//Hubs Ka Dum :3
(Protagonist continues packing and covering shelf so that dust
wouldn’t enter)
(Friend sends photo of him that was taken before – pic with
protagonist’s eyes closed as a meme with the text)
(Meme Reads: Why are the greatest truth found with eyes closed?)
Protagonist:
Friend:
Friend:
…if you can’t find it within your soul its somewhere within the internet…
(Protagonist says goodbye to friend)
Narrator:
Narrator:
{Note: a corresponding picture of some sort…. E.g A boy jumping into the
river and moment before the splash}
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator:
And I tried so hard to convince myself…
of that something… and yet…
not all of us are blessed and that’s what I kept thinking…
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator (cont’d):
Narrator:
Narrator:
Narrator (cont’d):
You knew me pretty well …so it probably doesn’t surprise you …
I wonder if I should’ve done things differently…
were there better options? Probably.
Narrator (cont’d):
THE END