Pertemuan 8 Analytical Exposition Texts Exercise
Pertemuan 8 Analytical Exposition Texts Exercise
There are 3 (three) exercises you have to do. Each exercise consists of a
text and three columns. Read the text carefully. Then, fill the blank in
three columns correctly. Before doing the task, observe the example in
order to show you how to do the three exercises properly.
Example:
Cramming is Bad
How do you study when the test is coming? Do you start preparing for the
test weeks or months before the test or leave things to the last hour? If you start
studying weeks or months before the test, it is great. However, if you study all
the material in the last hour or minute, it is not good for you and it is called
cramming.
Thesis:
Arguments:
Reiteration/Conclusion:
To sum up, cramming is bad because it disturbs our regular sleep cycle which
cause temporary intellectual lapses and using stimulant for cramming gives bad
effect to our health.
Exercise (1):
The second reason is that it helps kidney work. Our kidney processes 200
liters of blood in our body every day. It also filters out waste and delivers urine
to the bladder. To do all the tasks, our kidney needs enough water because water
is used to clean anything that is unnecessary for our body. Furthermore, drinking
water can moisturize our skin. It makes our skin feel fresh, soft, bright and
smooth.
Additionally, drinking enough water every day can also improve the
function of our brain. It can help us to concentrate more and unlease the nervous
system in the brain. In conclusion, drinking water is important because it is
needed for our interstitial fluid, helps kidney work, is good for healty skin, and
improves the function of our brain.
Thesis: The Importance of Drinking Water
Arguments:
There are several reasons why you should drink enough water. Firstly,
interstitial fluid is obtained by drinking lots of water. Water is used by the body
to digest food and help transport nutrients throughout the body. In addition,
interstitial fluid is also useful for producing saliva and regulating body
temperature.
The second reason is that it helps kidney work. Our kidney processes 200 liters
of blood in our body every day. It also filters out waste and delivers urine to the
bladder. To do all the tasks, our kidney needs enough water because water is
used to clean anything that is unnecessary for our body. Furthermore, drinking
water can moisturize our skin. It makes our skin feel fresh, soft, bright and
smooth.
Reiteration/Conclusion:
Exercise (2):
The Problem of Being Too Fat
Being too fat is recognized as a major factor for heart disease. Due to the
overweight, the heart will work harder. It can lead to the heart attack.
Furthermore, obesity potentially rises blood cholesterol and blood pressure. In
addition, being too fat can change the amount of sugar in the blood. This will
cause diabetes and other serious disease.
Beside all of that, being too fat is often avoided by many young women. They
said that becoming too fat will bother their physical beauty appearance.
More serious studies are necessary to see the effect of obesity. However, it
is clear enough that overweight is not good enough for healthy life.
Thesis:
Arguments:
Being too fat is recognized as a major factor for heart disease. Due to the
overweight, the heart will work harder. It can lead to the heart attack.
Furthermore, obesity potentially rises blood cholesterol and blood pressure. In
addition, being too fat can change the amount of sugar in the blood. This will
cause diabetes and other serious disease.
Beside all of that, being too fat is often avoided by many young women. They
said that becoming too fat will bother their physical beauty appearance.
Reiteration/Conclusion:
More serious studies are necessary to see the effect of obesity. However,
it is clear enough that overweight is not good enough for healthy life.
Exercise (3):
The emergence of the internet has given internet entrepreneurs many ways
to make money. Writers are one group that have benefited from their talents as a
result in the rise of internet based on jobs.
Article writing is also good money to earn money online. Make sure to gear
your articles to promote and advertise you own business ventures. These articles
are a free way to market the products and services you offer for free. The most
effective advertising with these articles comes from the dialogue box that is
inserted at the end of each article. These dialogue boxes contain links to basically
any website you would like to drive traffic to. For instance, you might have one
link in your dialogue box to a product you are selling and one to a blog where
you are promoting a discussing on other products.
Writing takes some time to gain credibility through but once it’s done’
earning potential can become very powerful.
Thesis:
The emergence of the internet has given internet entrepreneurs many ways to
make money. Writers are one group that have benefited from their talents as a
result in the rise of internet based on jobs
Arguments:
Reiteration/Conclusion:
Writing takes some time to gain credibility through but once it’s done’
earning potential can become very powerful.