Sentence Writing
Sentence Writing
Paper 2 Writing
Sentences
3. An increasing/growing number of …
To note a certain trend (either increasing or decreasing)
An increasing number of parents realize that their children need more
privacy.
A growing number of children prefer to spend their free time indoors.
Wrong: The students did well on the test they didn’t study very much.
Anna needs a new car she spent the weekend visiting car
dealerships.
Right: The students did well, yet they didn’t study very much.
Anna spent the weekend visiting car dealerships since she needs a
new car.
3. Too long
Sentences that are too long and complicated can hurt the readability of your essay.
Structure your thoughts into well-constructed logical units. Make sure each
conveys exactly the idea you put in it. Avoid the temptation to look sophisticated
through the number of words. Instead, make each sentence perfectly clear.
Wrong: Sentences which are too long will demand hard efforts from the
reader to get in all the details, see through the meaning, and
get the right picture that the named sentence aims to deliver.
Right: Sentences which are too long are hard to read. They might not
deliver the meaning efficiently.