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This document contains feedback on a proposal defense for a study on men's experiences of intimate partner violence (IPV). There are comments on several areas that need correction or improvement such as changing terminology from "victims" to "survivors", strengthening the conceptual framework, justifying sample size choices, including a data analysis section, and addressing validity of the qualitative data rather than reliability. The key issues identified were how the experiences of male survivors of violence would be identified and how ethical issues would be addressed. Overall, the feedback aims to strengthen the proposal by addressing gaps and improving clarity in the methodology and approach.

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Proposal Defense Correction Matrix Comment Reaction

This document contains feedback on a proposal defense for a study on men's experiences of intimate partner violence (IPV). There are comments on several areas that need correction or improvement such as changing terminology from "victims" to "survivors", strengthening the conceptual framework, justifying sample size choices, including a data analysis section, and addressing validity of the qualitative data rather than reliability. The key issues identified were how the experiences of male survivors of violence would be identified and how ethical issues would be addressed. Overall, the feedback aims to strengthen the proposal by addressing gaps and improving clarity in the methodology and approach.

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Proposal Defense Correction Matrix

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Have moved from using the word Corrected through the entire work
victims to survivors
Can you reduce the general objectives The general objective has been reduced to Pg.5
say to perception; prevalence etc. experiences.
You are looking at men and particularly The key ethical issues were identified and ways of Pg.24-25
the male survivors of violence. Ethics addressing them mentioned
and the administrative issues needs to be
clear. First identify the key ethical issues
for your study and how you will be able
to address them.
How will these men survivors of Identification will be done through the use of local Pg.22
violence be identified? leaders
If you consider men who have not Am considering men who have experienced Cover
experienced IPV,then consider changing violence and the title have been changed to page
the title to perception of IPV. If its experiences
experiences, you can stick to men
survivors.
For the sample size determination, and During data collection, the point of saturation will Pg.22
procedures, justify the choice. Read apply in determining the sample size
more about saturation and sufficiency
principles of determining samples in
qualitative studies.
The problem statement language should It has changed Pg.4
change from victim to survivors.
The conceptual framework is not strong. The conceptual framework have been updated and Pg.6
The socio-ecological model should be socio-ecological model considered
anchored within the study
Why can’t you introduce the A paragraph has been included under “background Pg.3-4
characteristics of women perpetrating of the study” section introducing the characteristics
violence on men. of women perpetrating violence.
How do you define IPV? It is a type of repeated pattern of behaviours an Pg.7
intimate partner uses to gain power and control
over another
The scope (time) is from March 2020- Corrected Pg.6
May 2020.
Data analysis is lacking in your proposal. The section for data analysis has been included in Pg.24
You need to read about data analysis and chapter three
have a section. State the method of
analysis and how you will use it.
How will you ensure validity of your Validity has been introduced in chapter three Pg.23
data? What you present is quantitative
reliability. In qualitative focus should be
more on validity.
Your Topic should read “experience of The topic has been updated Cover
IPV among men in Balawoli S/C. or you page
can state as men survivors of experience
of IPV in …..

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