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Week 6 Assignment Paper Reflection

The document is a student's reflection on feedback received for a paper assignment. The student identifies areas they did well such as paragraph length and their introduction. They acknowledge the major issue noted by the instructor was not sharing personal memories about Breckenridge and instead telling the reader what activities they could do there. The student picks three comments made by the instructor on staying on topic, avoiding plagiarism, and including a thesis statement. They reflect on how they could have avoided these issues such as focusing more on the prompt and sharing personal experiences rather than outside sources.

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Week 6 Assignment Paper Reflection

The document is a student's reflection on feedback received for a paper assignment. The student identifies areas they did well such as paragraph length and their introduction. They acknowledge the major issue noted by the instructor was not sharing personal memories about Breckenridge and instead telling the reader what activities they could do there. The student picks three comments made by the instructor on staying on topic, avoiding plagiarism, and including a thesis statement. They reflect on how they could have avoided these issues such as focusing more on the prompt and sharing personal experiences rather than outside sources.

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Week #6 Assignment Paper Reflection

Go into D2L and open your paper that has been graded and has my comments. After
looking at all of my comments within your paper, complete the following.

General Comments Regarding the Entire Paper. Answer in 3-5 sentences.

1. What do you think you did well in this paper? What are you most proud of?

I feel like I did really well on making the paragraphs long enough. I thought I was going
to get a better grade but it's ok. I am learning how to get a better grade. I think I did
really well on the introduction. All I needed to do was put the thesis statement at the
end.

2. What did I identify as the major issue, or issues you seem to repeat? Are you
surprised or unsurprised that you struggled in the areas I identified? Why?
I know the major issue was I was telling you about Breckenridge and not telling
the memories I had in Breckenridge. I wasn't telling you what I do in
Breckenridge, I was telling you what you can do.
3. What might have helped you avoid these issues?
I feel like what would help me is just staying on topic and focusing on The prompt. I feel
like I could have written it first and had you look at it before I turned it in.

Comments within Your Essay

Pick three individual comments I made in your paper that seem to be important in the
scope of your essay (not grammar or spelling, but comments regarding larger issues
like organization, development, etc.) Summarize those comments and then reflect on
why they might be problematic. Address how you could have avoided them, etc.

1. You are relying on outside sources to develop your points. This is a form of
plagiarism. I feel like I need to just go off my head and not look it up.
2. Your thesis needs to be at the end of the introduction—that Breckenridge is
significant to you because of the memories you have made there and others can
appreciate it year round unlike the more expensive places like Vail or Aspen. I
just never knew the thesis statement goes at the end of your introduction but now
I know to fix that for next time.
3. You are telling us different activities to do in Breckenridge, but you need to show
us why they are special to you with personal examples. I just need to stay on
topic and stay on the prompt. I just need to share more memories about when I
went and what I did.

Sentence Level Errors:

If you have a grammar error, look up what it is, write the definition, and then write the
corrected sentence. If you used “you” rewrite the sentence. If you did not have a
grammar error or use “you,” write “I did not have noticeable grammar issues.”

and for how nice it is and how cheap it is we[LE1] can't beat that. The reason why Breck[LE2]
enridge is

[LE1]Grammar error: second person pronoun.


[LE2]Grammar error: capitalization rules.

a rocky Mountain [LE1] town

[LE1]Grammar error: capitalization rules.

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