Stage 1 English Communications

Text Response: Film Study

The Shawshank Redemption

 Hope, optimism & future-mindedness
You expect the best in the future, and you work to achieve it. You believe that the future is
something that you can control.

Even though he was an innocent man, convicted of

double murder and sentenced to two life terms, Andy
Andy Dufresne
maintains hope and encourages others to do the same:
• He frequently tells Red, “Get busy
living, or get busy dying”.
• He remains optimistic and often
discusses his dream of living on a
beach in Mexico
No. 1 CHARACTER STRENGTH:

• He shows the other prisoners that if

you hope for something it will
eventually happen. For an example,
for ten years, Andy writes letters to
government departments and
charities to obtain books for the
library.
• He expects the best in the future and
works to achieve it.
No. 2 CHARACTER STRENGTH: Andy Dufresne
Appreciation of beauty and excellence
You notice and appreciate beauty, excellence, and/or skilled performance in all domains of life,
from nature to art to mathematics to science to everyday experience.

Despite the brutality of Shawshank Prison and the horrific things

that happen to him, Andy uses his appreciation of beauty and
excellence to help him cope:
• He carves delicate chess pieces from the rocks he finds.
• He is prepared to endure two months in the “hole” in order to play
the Mozart aria through the prison’s loudspeakers, later telling Red:
“That's the beauty of music. You need it so you don't forget... there
are places in this world that aren't made out of stone.”
• He is highly educated and tutors the other prisoners so that they
can achieve excellence.
No. 3 CHARACTER STRENGTH: Andy Dufresne
Self-control and self-regulation
You self-consciously regulate what you feel and what you do. You are a disciplined person. You
are in control of your appetites and your emotions, not vice versa.

Andy shows both self-control and self-regulation throughout the film

with his reserved personality.
• In the opening scenes, Red observes that Andy “had a quiet way
about him (and) strolled, like a man in a park without a care or a
worry in the world, like he had on an invisible coat that would shield
him from this place.”
• When laundering the money the corrupt Warden Norton brought
into the prison, Andy never took any risks. He tells Red, “If they ever
try to trace any of those accounts, they're gonna end up chasing a
figment of my imagination.” Red replies, “Shit, you're a Rembrandt!”
No. 4 CHARACTER STRENGTH: Andy Dufresne
Creativity, ingenuity and originality
Thinking of new ways to do things is a crucial part of who you are. You are never content with
doing something the conventional way if a better way is possible.

Although prison life is tightly-controlled and the men are treated like
cattle, Andy still manages to be original, creative and ingenius:
• He uses his spare time creatively by making chess pieces during the
day time and tunnelling out of the prison during the night.
• His escape plan was extremely original. As Red observes, “Andy
crawled to freedom through five hundred yards of shit smelling
foulness”.
• Andy’s use of the posters to cover his tunnel and the methods he
used to get rid of the dirt were ingenius.
Caution, prudence and discretion
You are a careful person, and your choices are
consistently prudent ones. You do not say or do
things that you might later regret.
Andy Dufresne
Andy is very discreet in his actions, careful not to
draw attention to himself.
• He never boasts about how smart or successful
he was in the outside world.
• He gains the trust of Warden Norton and the
No. 5 CHARACTER STRENGTH:

prison guards by dealing discreetly with their

financial matters.
• He doesn’t even reveal to his closest friends
that he is planning his escape from Shawshank
Prison.
• Despite the close proximity of other prisoners,
no-one ever hears or suspects that Andy is
digging his way out of his cell.
The resilience of the human spirit
Andy Dufresne showed a lot of determination, courage and
human spirit throughout The Shawshank Redemption. Once he
found out that the cell walls were fragile and that he could dig
an escape hole with his rock hammer, even though he knew it
would take decades he never gave up and succeeded his goal of
freedom.
 The resilience
Resilienceofinthe human spirit
Shawshank
Andy’s spirit is resilient because although he has had everything
-Andy showed resilience
taken away from him by being sent to prison he didn’t
throughout the movie.
- Andy
stop doing things that he loved and was good didn’t let the guards or the
warden get to him.
at. When he offered to do the taxes -forRed said that Andy had an
“invisible coat that would shield
all of the guards it showed that Andy
him from this place” and “ he
could still continue his job. He also didn’t have a worry in the world”.
- Red always was strong and was
organizes for a rock hammer so resilient when he was in
that he can pursue his hobby Shawshank Prison.

by making chess pieces out

of stone.
The resilience of the human spirit
In The Shawshank Redemption the
resilience of the human spirit is very
clear. This is shown when Andy always
looks on the positive side of everything.
He doesn’t allow the prison to take away
his personality. He likes to do things to
help to make him still feel normal and
free. Red, and some of the other cell
mates, don’t have the same perspective
as Andy though. Some of them have been
in prison so long they can no longer face
the outside world.
Art and Poetry
 Memories by Lauren Grant

These memories follow me everywhere.

They are as beautiful as a night sky,
Also as terrifying as what lies within.
As I walk into the night,
I feel as mysterious as a cat in the shadows,
But as wild as an untamed lion.
This world is a big place,
But I am no longer hiding in the shadows.
My life is now filled with beautiful colours. Artist: Kate Tucker
There is a way by Calvin Summersides
Standing up for what you believe in
is the way you know that you are an individual.
When you stand up for yourself
You always have a sense of pride.
You have a feeling that nothing can touch you,
Nothing is impossible.
Life is an adventure,
Live every day like it is your last.
Sometimes life gets turned upside-down,
But there is always a way you can fix it.
Life can get you down,
But there are people that can pick you up.
From the darkness there is always light.

Artist: Tahlia Eidam

 The Exciting Future by Scott Paech
I am very excited about
what’s going to happen today,
Tomorrow, next week,
next month, next year,
even next decade.
I may be as clueless as a spider
about what’s going to happen in the future,
but I never let it bother me.
Even my eyes can see that the future is bright.
Artist: Tim Storrier
As mysterious as the future is, it is just as exciting.
Who knows what sort of hobby I might have
in a few decades’ time?
To some people, the future is as scary as a tiger,
But I always stay optimistic no matter what the future may hold.
The more I think about the future, the more excited I get.
Life is a rollercoaster,
Only more unpredictable
And more enjoyable for everyone.
Don’t you LOVE it when…
… there’s been a
run of 40 degree
days and suddenly
the heavens open
and rain pours
down?
Courtney
Don’t you LOVE it when…
… the crazy hot
northerly wind is
playing havoc with
your hay-fever and
you suddenly realise
you’re not wearing
makeup and can rub
your eyes? Bliss!
Ashleigh
Don’t you LOVE it when…
your team wins??!!
Your team is behind on
goals and it’s the final
but you have a final
push and score two
goals to win the game.
Chloe
 Don’t you LOVE it when…
… your crush notices you?
You’re walking home from school
lost in a daydream, when your
crush rides by. Amazingly, he
stops to talk, tells you he is on
the way to football training, then
ends up being late because the
two of you were having so much
fun. Sarah
Don’t you LOVE it when…
…you stop at traffic
lights and pull faces at
the annoying kids in
the next car when their
parents aren’t looking?
Ella
Don’t you LOVE it when…

…you get home

from school,
absolutely starving,
and for once,
there’s lots of good
stuff to eat?
Peter
Don’t you LOVE it when…
YOU’RE FEELING DOWN BUT
THERE IS THAT ONE FRIEND
WHO IS THERE TO HELP.

You’re having a horrible day

and that friend says/does the
one thing which makes almost
everything better.

John
Don’t you LOVE it when…
You get home from school
feeling tired and grumpy and
instead of your mum nagging
you to clean your room or do
your homework, she suggests
you make pancakes together
then go to the movies!
Erin
Don’t you LOVE it when…
...you haven't done your homework
and the teacher decides
not to check it?
You spent all night having fun and forgot
to finish your homework.
The next day you’re sitting in class scared
and the teacher forgets all about it.

Franz
Don’t you LOVE it when…
you correct a
teacher?
The teacher’s sure she has
the right answer but you
prove her wrong.

John
 “Dream” homework
Over the next week, you need to give this sentence beginning
plenty of consideration and write your most thoughtful sentence ending.
Then, you need to ask three other people to do the same – a friend,
a family member and the oldest person you know.

When I dream of the future, I dream of...

 Year Eights’ ideas:
When I dream of the future, I dream of…
my life being full of music and
everything involving music.
TC

When I dream of the future I dream of…

a world without bullying for everyone, for everyone to be
happy and to know they won’t be judged on their
appearance, or picked on for any other reason.
Bree Davis

When I dream of the future, I dream of…

becoming a professional
photographer.
Emily Baker
 More Year Eight ideas:
When I dream of the future, I dream
that cancer will no longer exist.

Raisa

When I dream of the future, I dream of…

ponies, rainbows and lollipops.
Casey
When I dream of the future I dream of….
a world made of candy and
chocolate.
Niki
 Their friends’ ideas…

When I dream of the future, I

dream of monkeys flying cars.
Raisa’s friend, Chloe Noble

When I dream of the future I dream of…

everything being chocolate and you can
eat and eat and never get fat.
Kelsey’s friend, Rebecca

When I dream of the future I dream of…

a world where Minecraft is
EVERYTHING and every part of every
day is a competition.
Josh Norris’ friend, Matt
 More Year Eights’ friends’ ideas:
When I dream of the future, I dream of…
a world with no wars
and no violence
Andrew, TC’s friend

When I dream of the future, I dream

of being a carpenter and having a
happy family.
Marcus’ friend, Joe Wynne-Williams

When I dream of the future, I dream of….

being a graphic designer or designing
guitars.
Ashleigh’s friend, Alannah Danielse
 Their family members’ ideas…
When I dream of the future I dream of…
the world being a safer place for
everyone, and for there to be no
violence. Bree’s grandma

When I dream of the future, I dream of……

palm trees, lagoons and sunny days on
my dream island.
Emily Baker’s grandmother Meredith

When I dream of the future, I dream

about being happy and having good
health.
Marcus’s Nana Irene
 More family members’ ideas…
When I dream of the future, I dream of…
no more wars and that we are equal whether we are
male or female, gay or straight. I also dream that no
man, woman or child ever has to deal with cancer.
Selina’s mum

When I dream of the future I dream of…

…peace, happiness and a place
where animals are treated well.
Riley’s grandpa

When I dream of the future I dream of…

…happiness for my children.
Raisa’s dad
Gratitude
You are aware of the good things that happen to you, and you
never take them for granted. Your friends and family members
know that you are a grateful person because you always take the
time to express your thanks.
 On behalf of all the Year 8s, and to celebrate Harmony Day,
Htoo and Jack would like to thank

Mrs Williams
“If you think you can,
you can.
And if you think you can't, We know organising the camp
you're right.”
was lots of work for you (and
Mary Kay Ash
we know you didn’t get much
sleep) but we had a great time
and the camp was lots of fun.
So, thanks a lot.
On behalf of the Year 8s, and to celebrate Harmony Day,
Ryan would like to thank

You are a nice friendly bus driver who

always says hello. You brighten up our
day in the most thoughtful ways. I’d
like to thank you for always being
friendly and driving safely.

“To believe in yourself and to follow your dreams, to have

goals in life and a drive to succeed, and to surround
yourself with the things and the people that make you
happy - this is success!”
Sasha Azevedo
On behalf of all the year 8s, and to celebrate Harmony Day,
Scott would like to thank

Thank you for having the

library open at lunchtime and
keeping it in full order the
whole time for everyone.

“Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you will

land amongst the stars.”
Jill McLemore
 On behalf of all the year 8s and to celebrate Harmony Day,
Liam Knotts and Bradley Bateman we world like to thank

Thank you for all the work you do to make our

school look good and to fix things when they break.

“You must be the change you wish to see in the world.”

Mahatma Gandhi
 On behalf of the year 8s, and to celebrate Harmony Day, Joseph and Dylan would like to thank

Thank you for being such a fantastic

teacher and showing us areas around the
school when we couldn't find them in the
very first week. I personally would also
like to thank you for not sending me to BP
for going on the roof to get the soccer ball
down for the year 9s. We would also like
to thank you for being such a great helper
and more importantly for doing your job
so well. If we could afford it, we would buy
“Be careful eating fruits and nuts;
you a car like this  you are what you eat”