English Es1 Unit 11
English Es1 Unit 11
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Contents
Unit overview and instructions for use..........................................................................................................................................................3
Teacher notes............................................................................................................................................................................................4
Outcomes and content – Component A....................................................................................................................................................6
Outcomes and content – Component B....................................................................................................................................................8
Week 1........................................................................................................................................................................................................11
Component A teaching and learning.......................................................................................................................................................11
Component B teaching and learning.......................................................................................................................................................12
Lesson 1: Exploring the features of a text that entertains – Wombat Stew............................................................................................13
Lesson 2: Sequencing events and writing sentences with subject-verb-object......................................................................................15
Lesson 3: Compound sentences with prepositional phrases..................................................................................................................17
Lesson 4: Re-creating an entertaining text through role-play.................................................................................................................19
Lesson 5: Writing an entertaining text.....................................................................................................................................................20
Week 2........................................................................................................................................................................................................22
Component A teaching and learning.......................................................................................................................................................22
Component B teaching and learning.......................................................................................................................................................23
Lesson 6: Identifying and comparing the features of texts that inform...................................................................................................24
Lesson 7: Innovating on texts.................................................................................................................................................................26
Lesson 8: Following a recipe...................................................................................................................................................................28
Lesson 9: Drafting a recipe.....................................................................................................................................................................30
Lesson 10: Publishing a recipe...............................................................................................................................................................31
Spelling
Handwriting
To prepare for teaching 1. Refer to Outcomes and content – Component 1. Familiarise yourself with Outcomes and con-
and learning: A, K-2 – Instructional sequence – grapheme– tent – Component B, Textual concepts inform-
phoneme correspondences [825 KB], and the ation and videos, English Textual Concepts
teaching advice documents (hyperlinked in and Learning Processes (2016), and the
Component A teaching and learning table). teaching and learning sequence.
2. Based on student needs identified through on- 2. Based on student needs identified through on-
going assessment data, plan and document going assessment data, determine how you
how you will sequence teaching and learning will support students in whole class and tar-
in whole class and targeted teaching groups geted teaching groups across the two-week
across the two-week cycle. cycle as required.
English Syllabus K-2 © 2021 NSW Education Standards Authority (NESA) for and on behalf of the Crown in right of the State of New
South Wales.
Teacher notes
1. Context refers to factors acting upon composers and responders that affect meaning. To understand context, we look beyond the
text to consider the world in which it was produced and the worlds of its reception. Different contexts can affect the meanings and
values of similar content. – English Textual Concepts and Learning Processes (2016).
2. Understanding of context can be supported through watching the department’s video: Context (5:24).
3. While context is the mentor concept for the conceptual component of this unit, the supporting concept of perspective could be
explored using the mentor text Wombat Stew by Marcia Vaughan.
4. For information on conjunctions, prepositions and compound sentences refer to the NESA Glossary.
5. This unit could enhance student learning towards achievement of outcomes from the Science syllabus and Creative Arts syllabus.
7. In Lesson 9, students will write a draft recipe which they will then publish in Lesson 10. Teachers will need to review students’ draft
recipes prior to Lesson 10 and give appropriate feedback for students to improve their writing when publishing.
8. Consider prior student knowledge and learning about prepositions and verbs, and the language and structural features of texts that
inform and entertain.
9. Reflect on student learning and engagement in activities and record differentiation and adjustments within the unit to inform future
teaching and learning. One way of doing this could be to add comments to the digital file.
10. Content points are linked to the National Literacy Learning Progression version (3).
Levels and indicators sourced from National Literacy Learning Progression © Australian Curriculum, Assessment and Reporting Authority
(ACARA), (accessed 11 January 2023) and was not modified. See references for more information.
Focus area and outcome Content points and National Literacy Learning Progression
Phonological awareness identify the difference between a voiced phoneme and an un-
phonological units in spoken words as a strategy for reading and blend aloud all phonemes when asked to delete, add or sub-
creating texts stitute an initial phoneme (PhA5)
ENE-PRINT-01 – tracks written text from left to right and from top
to bottom of the page and identifies visual and spatial features of
print
ENE-PHOKW-01 – uses single-letter grapheme–phoneme corres- pondences to read CCVC and CVCC words, and apply this
pondences and common digraphs to decode and encode words when reading texts, including decodable texts (PKW3,
ENE-REFLU-01 – reads decodable texts aloud with automaticity and taught high-frequency words with automaticity
ENE-RECOM-01 – comprehends independently read texts using stop reading when a break in comprehension is registered
background knowledge, word knowledge and understanding of (UnT4)
how sentences connect
ask a question or make a statement to clarify meaning
(UnT3) (UnT4)
Spelling know that words do not usually end with the letter v, and that
logical generalisations and strategies to spell taught familiar and spell high-frequency compound words and homophones
ENE-HANDW-01 – produces all lower-case and upper-case let- and downward diagonal stroke when forming letter shapes
Focus area and outcome Content points and National Literacy Learning Progression
Oral language and communication recognise how nonverbal language can contribute to mean-
conventions and language with familiar peers and adults use connectives such as and, but and because when speak-
ing (SpK2)
ENE-VOCAB-01 – understands and effectively uses Tier 1 words groups of images or words
ENE-CWT-01 – creates written texts that include at least 2 related identify and use verbs in simple sentences, including in own
ideas and correct simple sentences writing (GrA2)
Understanding and responding to literature identify and contrast features of texts that inform, persuade
Phonological awareness
and
Phonic knowledge
15 minutes
15 minutes
Print conventions,
Reading comprehension
and Reading fluency
30 minutes
Learning intention
Students are learning to identify features of texts that entertain and re-create an imaginative text.
Success criteria
Students can:
Sentence strips
Optional: Natural items from the playground environment (leaves, gumnuts, twigs, grass, small rocks)
2. Explore the context of the text by introducing the main character, Dingo, and the other Australian animals featured. Start an anchor
chart by drawing and labelling the animals from the text; this can be used throughout the unit to support student writing. Use the
chart to prompt a discussion with students sharing their knowledge about dingoes, for example, they are strong, predators, meat
eaters. Discuss how the author has used what is known about Australian animals and their environment to create an imaginative
text that entertains children.
4. Read the text Wombat Stew. Review students’ predictions from activity 3. Discuss some of the features in the text that students
found entertaining. For example, the illustrations, rhyme and repetition. Ask students who might enjoy reading this text and why.
5. Display the page of Dingo tasting the stew. Unpack the features on the page, including Dingo’s expression; the tears or sweat
falling off his face; the noise he makes, as shown in the speech bubble; the text, for example, “I am poisoned!” he howled. Identify
the punctuation used in the text and discuss the purpose of the exclamation.
6. In pairs, students discuss Dingo’s reaction. Support discussion with questions. For example:
Show how you would react if you tasted the wombat stew. What would you do or say?
7. Revisit the text and identify other parts of the story that show the reactions of different characters through the illustrations and text.
Name how the characters are feeling in the scenes.
8. Discuss how facial expression and body language contribute to meaning. In small groups, students role-play scenes from the text
by creating freeze frames to show the characters’ reactions and feelings. Allocate scenes to groups. For example:
when Platypus (smirks, looks confident) first tricks Dingo (shocked, surprised) by suggesting adding mud to the stew
animals showing that they do not like Dingo singing (annoyed, hands over ears, bothered)
the animals’ reaction when Dingo tries the stew and runs away (laughing, celebrating).
9. Students take turns sharing their freeze frames while the rest of the class guesses the scene they are depicting from the text. As
students are describing the characters’ reactions/feelings, write these for students to refer to during independent writing.
10. Using one of the group’s freeze frames, model writing a sentence to describe it. For example, Dingo is proud. Wombat is scared.
11. Students draw a picture of the scene they acted out in activity 8 and write a sentence to describe it. They can use the chart and
teacher modelling to write independently.
Too hard? Students draw and label their freeze frame scene.
Too easy? Students use the conjunction ‘because’ to write a compound sentence. For example, Dingo is proud because he caught
Wombat.
2. Using a pre-cut, enlarged copy of Resource 1: Vocabulary cards, display and categorise the words as ‘characters’ and ‘stew
ingredients’. Then, as a class, match the characters to the ingredients they added to the stew, in order of how this occurred in the
text. Model orally recalling the sequence of events using the cards as prompts. For example, first Dingo caught Wombat, then
Platypus put mud into the stew.
4. Discuss the characters’ actions when collecting the different ingredients for the stew. Refer to the text by identifying the verb (action
word) that describes how each character collected the ingredients. Write verbs for the sentences that match the cards. For
example, caught, scooped up, picked, snapped, dug, thought.
5. Revise that a simple sentence contains a subject, verb and an object to convey an idea. Using the sentence frame, model writing 3
simple sentences using subject-verb-object to retell the sequence of the first 3 events of characters collecting ingredients. For
example:
6. Using personal vocabulary and words on display, students write 3 sentences using the subject-verb-object structure to complete
sequencing the events. For example:
Too easy? Students add details to describe the ingredients. For example, big blobs of mud, finest feathers, one hundred flies.
7. In pairs, students role-play the sentences they wrote. For example, ‘Echidna digging up creepy crawlies.’ Encourage students to
make their role-play entertaining through facial expressions and movement.
Early Stage 1 Assessment task 1 – Collecting work samples from this lesson allows students to demonstrate achievement towards the
following syllabus outcomes and content points:
ENE-VOCAB-01 – understands and effectively uses Tier 1 words and Tier 2 words in familiar contexts
- use vocabulary to select, match and provide categories for groups of images or words.
ENE-RECOM-01 – comprehends independently read texts using background knowledge, word knowledge and understanding of how
sentences connect
ENE-CWT-01 – creates written texts that include at least 2 related ideas and correct simple sentences
2. Introduce the concept of compound sentences with prepositional phrases. Refer to Resource 2: Teacher resource to understand
how the text demonstrates compound sentences with prepositional phrases and an inferred subject in the second clause. This can
be explored and differentiated as appropriate or used for teacher reference.
3. Revisit the text to show how the author has used compound sentences with prepositional phrases to present 2 ideas in one
sentence. For example, ‘Platypus scooped up big blobs of mud with his tail and tipped them into the stew.’ Highlight that a
compound sentence joins 2 ideas using a connective such as ‘and’.
4. Using an enlarged copy of Resource 3: Compound sentences, deconstruct some of the compound sentences from the text, drawing
attention to the 2 ideas and the conjunction that connects them. If appropriate, remind students that the subject in the second
clause can sometimes be inferred.
5. Refer to the bank of verbs recorded on the sentence frame in Lesson 2 that describes how the characters added ingredients to the
stew. Revise prepositional phrases and highlight those in the text. For example, into the stew, into the billycan.
6. Provide an opportunity for students to experiment with compound sentences and conjunctions in speech. Students sit in a circle
with a billycan prop placed in the centre. Through role-play, they practise saying compound sentences with a prepositional phrase.
For example, ‘Lizard snapped flies and flipped them into the stew.’ This activity could be completed in small groups so that each
student has a turn.
Too hard? Use Resource 1: Vocabulary cards to support students with saying a compound sentence.
8. Students turn the simple sentences they wrote in Lesson 2 into a compound sentence with a prepositional phrase. For example:
Echidna dug up creepy crawlies and (he) dropped them into the stew.
Koala thought of gumnuts and (he) shook them into the stew.
Encourage students to use words on display and the sentence frame to support independent writing.
Too hard? Jointly construct compound sentences using conjunctions and prepositional phrases.
Early Stage 1 Assessment task 2 – Observations from this lesson allow students to demonstrate achievement towards the following
syllabus outcomes and content points:
ENE-OLC-01 – communicates effectively by using interpersonal conventions and language with familiar peers and adults
ENE-RECOM-01 – comprehends independently read texts using background knowledge, word knowledge and understanding of how
sentences connect
2. Brainstorm and record several Australian animals by drawing and labelling them for students to refer to during independent writing.
Use the brainstorm activity for students to share what they know about the animals, including the purpose of physical features and
what the animals eat. Ensure to include some animals that are ‘predators’, like Dingo.
3. In small groups, students re-create Wombat Stew using different animals recorded in activity 2. Each student is allocated an animal
role, with one being the ‘predator’ like Dingo and one being the ‘intended meal’ like Wombat. They will each decide on their actions,
based on their animal character, and what ingredients they will add to the stew. For example, ‘Kangaroo digs up clumps of grass
with her paws and puts it into the stew.’ Provide students with a range of resources for students to use as costumes or props, such
as billycans, pots and items for stew ingredients. Students act out their role and verbalise their actions using verbs, compound
sentences and prepositions to revise the learning from Lesson 3. Students think of a title for their story that matches their animals,
such as ‘Wallaby Stew’.
5. Optional: Students perform their plays at a school assembly or for other classes/family or school community.
3. The groups work together to draw the sequence of events in their story (order of animal and ingredients put into the stew). Each
student uses a sentence strip to write a compound sentence with a prepositional phrase to match their animal character/illustration.
Students use the co-constructed sentences from activity 2 and words on display in the classroom and from the text as a support.
Students will need this piece of work for Lesson 6.
Too hard? Jointly construct compound sentences using conjunctions and prepositional phrases.
Too easy? Add describing words to the prepositional phrases. For example, ‘into the gooey stew’.
4. Optional: Provide students with additional time to publish their work into mini books with illustrations.
Phonological awareness
and
Phonic knowledge
15 minutes
15 minutes
Print conventions,
Reading comprehension
and Reading fluency
30 minutes
Learning intention
Students are learning to identify and contrast the features of texts that entertain and inform and write a recipe.
Success criteria
Students can:
write a recipe
Natural items from the playground environment (leaves, gumnuts, twigs, grass, small rocks)
Diced fruit, fruit juice, plastic cups and spoons (class supply)
2. Ask students what they know about recipes and their purpose. Display a smoothie recipe from page 10 or 11 in the ABC Kids
Recipe Book. Walk through the features of the recipe and explain that these are common features of most recipes. For example,
the title informs the reader what the end product will be, there is a list of required ingredients and items under the heading ‘What
you need’, and the steps or instructions under the heading ‘What to do’. Discuss how these recipe features inform the reader of
what they need and how to follow a recipe.
3. Highlight how the recipe’s instruction is sequenced in order of what to do. Discuss why this is an important feature in a recipe. Ask
students what would happen if the steps in a recipe were not in order. Compare how the events in an imaginative text, like Wombat
Stew, are also sequenced.
5. Explain that students will experiment with writing a recipe, using the text Wombat Stew. Discuss how the title ‘Wombat Stew’
sounds like a recipe.
6. Model how to identify and group features of a recipe using Wombat Stew as a stimulus and Resource 4: Recipe scaffold.
7. Draw and list the ingredients and items required, and model writing the instructions or steps. Differentiate the written instructions or
method according to student needs. These could be broken down into a series of steps using different verbs used in Week 1 or a
simple step as shown in the smoothie recipe. For example, Put all the ingredients into a pot and mix.
8. Students experiment with identifying and grouping features of a recipe using their re-created text from Lesson 5. They draw or write
the required ingredients, items and steps from their re-created text on Resource 4: Recipe scaffold.
Too hard? Display the chart from Lesson 2 to support students to draw the ingredients and items required to make wombat stew.
Early Stage 1 Assessment task 3 – Collecting work samples from this lesson allows students to demonstrate achievement towards the
following syllabus outcomes and content points:
ENE-CWT-01 – creates written texts that include at least 2 related ideas and correct simple sentences
- identify and contrast features of texts that inform, persuade and/or entertain.
2. Take students outside to collect ‘ingredients’ for their ‘playground stew’. In small groups, students collect 4-5 natural materials from
the playground environment to take back to the classroom for their stew.
3. Review ingredients collected by students. Create a word bank of ingredients and add images to support meaning.
4. Using Resource 4: Recipe scaffold, students write the heading ‘Playground Stew’ and record the ingredients and utensils needed
for their recipe as drawings or words.
5. Remind students how the characters from the text collected the ingredients for the stew, as described in Lesson 2. Brainstorm
interesting verbs to describe how students collected ingredients for their recipe. For example, pick, scoop, dig up, grab, pull, gather,
collect. Add verbs to the word bank.
6. Ask students to imagine how they will add their ingredients to a pot to make their playground stew. Brainstorm verbs to describe
these actions and add them to the word bank.
7. In small groups, students use the collected ingredients to orally compose a set of steps for the recipe. Encourage each student to
use a different verb. For example:
8. Select students to share their steps with the class. Using students’ examples and vocabulary from the word banks, model writing 2
simple sentences with prepositional phrases as a procedure to make playground stew. For example:
Gather (verb) sticks and mud (noun) from the playground (prepositional phrase).
Stir (verb) the sticks and mud (noun) into the stew (prepositional phrase).
9. Model writing a compound sentence using the simple sentences from activity 8. For example, Gather ingredients from the
playground and stir into the stew. Identify each clause and the conjunction ‘and’.
10. Students use vocabulary on display to complete Resource 4: Recipe scaffold, writing a compound sentence as an instruction for
their recipe.
Too hard? Students write simple sentences or draw the steps for their recipe.
11. Students role-play making the stew, using their sentences from activity 10 to match their actions. At the end of the role-play,
encourage students to express their like/dislike using nonverbal language and facial expressions to show how they would react to
tasting the playground stew.
Early Stage 1 Assessment task 4 – Observations and work samples from this lesson allow students to demonstrate achievement
towards the following syllabus outcomes and content points:
ENE-CWT-01 – creates written texts that include at least 2 related ideas and correct simple sentences
- experiment with writing compound sentences and recognise that each clause makes meaning by itself.
2. Display the Frozen Fruit Cups recipe on page 23 of the ABC Kids Recipe Book (or alternative recipe). Explain that the purpose of
the recipe is to inform readers how to make a frozen fruit cup. In this lesson, the class will read and follow the steps of the recipe
together to make frozen fruit cups.
3. Prepare the ingredients and set up the class so that students can access the ingredients and items required to make a frozen fruit
cup.
4. As a class, read the list of ingredients and items in the recipe. Provide students with time to collect these, then ask students to sort
items into 2 categories: ingredients and items. Students label their plastic cups with their name.
5. Read through the rest of the recipe, step-by-step, until all students have made a frozen fruit cup using the fruit they like. Set fruit
cups away to be frozen.
7. Model writing a sentence describing how the frozen fruit cup was made. For example, ‘I put kiwi fruit and orange juice in the cup
and mixed it.’
Too hard? Students draw and label the steps taken to follow the recipe.
Early Stage 1 Assessment task 5 – Collecting work samples from this lesson allows students to demonstrate achievement towards the
following syllabus outcomes and content points:
ENE-VOCAB-01 – understands and effectively uses Tier 1 words and Tier 2 words in familiar contexts
- use vocabulary to select, match and provide categories for groups of images or words.
ENE-RECOM-01 – comprehends independently read texts using background knowledge, word knowledge and understanding of how
sentences connect
- identify and contrast features of texts that inform, persuade and/or entertain
- identify texts that are composed for specific audiences and purposes.
2. Brainstorm ingredients that could be used on a sandwich. For example, cheese, tomato, lettuce. Create an illustrated word bank to
support student writing.
3. Discuss the items required to make a sandwich. For example, plate, knife, chopping board. Add to the illustrated word bank.
4. Co-construct simple sentences using verbs, nouns and prepositional phrases for a procedure to make a sandwich. For example:
5. Students draft simple sentences using verbs, nouns and prepositional phrases to make a sandwich with ingredients of their choice.
Too hard? Students draw images to represent the steps. Jointly construct or scribe sentences.
Too easy? Students write compound sentences with prepositional phrases for 2 or more ingredients.
6. Students review and self-assess their writing, checking that sentences begin with a capital letter and end with a full stop. Students
can use a coloured pencil to mark edits.
2. Using an enlarged copy of Resource 4: Recipe scaffold, model writing the complete sandwich recipe, including a title. Refer to the
word bank of ingredients and items and the co-constructed sentence frame from Lesson 9 to support the publishing process.
5. Compile published recipes into a class recipe book. Discuss the audience and purpose of the recipe book.
Early Stage 1 Assessment task 6 – Collecting work samples from this lesson allows students to demonstrate achievement towards the
following syllabus outcomes and content points:
ENE-CWT-01 – creates written texts that include at least 2 related ideas and correct simple sentences
- understand they can improve their writing based on feedback from teachers
- understand that punctuation is a feature of written language and how it impacts meaning.
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Platypus scooped up blobs of mud and tipped them into the stew.
Emu picked her feathers and dropped them into the stew.
Lizard snapped one hundred flies and flipped them into the stew.
Echidna dug up creepy crawlies and dropped them into the stew.
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