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Short Workplace Messages
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Learning Outcomes
‘After studying this chapter,
you should be able to do
the following:
and format of e-mails and
memos in the digital era
workplace
2 Explain workplace mes
saging and texting includ
ing their liabilities and
best practices
3. Identify professional
applications of business
podcasts and the profes:
sional standards underpin
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nmIn many businesses ever-smaller laptops, netbooks, smartphones, and tablets are
making desktop computers obsolete, Powerful mobile devices largely access data and
applications stored in the cloud—in remote networks—not on individual computers
in an office. Virtual private networks (VPNs) offer secure access to organizations’
information from any location in the world that provides an Internet connection. For
better or for worse, businesspeople are increasingly connected 24/7,
Even if you are Internet and social media savvy, you may need to know how
businesses use communication technologies to transmit and share information. This
chapter discusses short forms of workplace communication, beginning with e-mail,
which many workers love to hate, and memos, which are fading away but still necessary
in many organizations.
Furthermore, you will learn about workplace messaging, intero‘fice chat
applications, and comprehensive internal communication platforms. You will study
business podcasts, corporate blogs, and professional sacial media use before exploring
many contemporary cyberthreats. Familarizing yourself with workplace technologies
and best practices can save you time, reduce blunders, and boost your credibility as a
professional
8-la E-Mail: Going Strong at Fifty
Workplace e-mail is unlikely to go away. Roughly 50 years after the first e-mail was sent,
‘otal e-mail traffic keeps growing 4 percent a year worldwide! Office workers receive
on average 120 messages a day; globally, 125 billion business e-mails are exchanged
daily” Despite chat, texting, and mobile messaging of all kinds, most business
messages are stil sent by e-mail Moreover, when it comes to marketing, e-mail is
very much alive and kicking, as we will see in Chapter 8. Tech expert Alexis Madrigal
is one of many staunch defenders of e-mail. “You can't kill email!” he claims. “I's the
cockroach of the Internet, and I mean that as a compliment, This resilience is a good
thing."
Neither social media, augmented reality, and video chatting, nor phishing, hacking,
and spam have diminished the high importance of e-mail in the workplace, Not even
popular workplace applications such as the team communication and collaboration
tool Slack are likely to replace e-mail anytime soon.* One e-mail proponent argues that
e-mails technologically far superior to social media, messaging, and collaboration
platforms; he offers advice on turning e-mail into the biggest, “least-distracting,” and
most sophisticated social network, but one thats offering greater privacy.
E-mail has replaced paper memos for many messages inside organizations and
some letters to external audiences. Most businesspeople (85 percent) now first open
their e-mail on mobile devices Because you can expect to use e-mail extensively to
communicate at work, it's smart to learn how to do it expertly. You may have to adjust
the messaging practices you currently follow for texting, chatting, and posting on
Instagram, Snapchat, or Facebook, but turning out professional e-mails is an easily
attainable goal
8-Ib Common Complaints About E-Mail
Although e-mails recognized as the mainstay of business communication, it's not
always done well. Business journalist Suzy Welch is emphatic that sloppiness and
mistakes are not an option: “You may like to write off-the-cut, tvain-of thought
messages, because it’s fast and easy," she says, "but no one wants to receive them,
(OK? No one.”” Author Vicky Oliver insists that more than one typo per e-mail is.
unprofessional, She also complains about impersonal “one-line emails that are so
transactional they sound like an automaton is responding.” Goldman Sachs CEO
David Solomon is eager to hire graduates with liberal arts backgrounds because writing
skills in general are increasingly harder to find, he laments.
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LEARNING
OUTCOME
Examine the professional
usage, structure, and format
of e-mails and memos in the
digital era workplace
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INSIDER
Fz adem
“T can see email
lasting tens of thou-
sands of years, as
preposterous as that
Sounds. IF email
ever killed, it will be
replaced with some-
thing that has alts
virtues and ll its
problems as wel. 1's
an open system that
anyone can partici
pate in and that has
2 global namespace
It’s a protocol that’s
decades old and has
thousands of clients.
that support it”
Stowart Butorild, EO
of Slack Technologies
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“Email never goes
away, ever, ever, ever
The rule of thumb is
if you wouldn't say it
to your mother, don't
put it in an email.
Emails are archived
like crazy. They are
fon servers you have
never heard of.”
Judith Kallos,
etiquette expert
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E-Mail Overload. In addition to the complaints about confusing and poorly written
‘e-mails, many people are overwhelmed with too many messages. Workers report that
they spend about five hours a day reading and writing e-mail—approximately three
hours on work e-mail and two hours on personal messages Social computing expert
Gloria Mark says that e-mail use is about being in control, stressing out workers wno
struggle in vain to bring down their clogged inboxes to zero. For a study Mark cut off
participants from e-mail for a week and found significant reductions in stress levels.”
Each dlay more than 4 billion glabal e-mail users exchange almost 310 billion e-mails."
Some of those messages are unnecessary, such as those that merely confirm receipt
‘of a message or ones that express thanks. The use of Reply allads ta the inbox,
irritating those who have to skim and delete dozens of messages that barely relate to
them, Others blame e-mail for eliminating the distinction between wark life and home
Iife—now more than ever in the wake of the COVID-19 pandemic because employees
working remotely feel an urgency to be available 24/7 and respond immediately.
‘The Scary Permanence of Digital Messages. Still other e-mail senders fail to recognize
how dangerous e-mail can be. After deletion, e-mail files stil eave trails on servers
within and outside organizations. Long-forgotten messages may turn up in court cases
as damaging and costly evidence—for example, BP engineer Brian Morel's e-mail to
a colleague be 1e disastrous explosion of the Deepwater Horizon cil platform off
the coast of Louisiana that killed 11 workers: "This has been a nightmare well which has.
‘everyone all over the place.” This and ather incriminating e-mails prompted BP to agree
to a decade-long compensation process totaling $65 billion to settle 300 lawsuits."
Organizations can legally monitor their staff's personal e-mail accounts too if the
workers access them on the company’s computer network, Moreover, if employees set
Up their company's e-mail on their smartphones, they have given their employer the
right to remotely delete all personal data on that mobile device.” Even writers with
nothing to hide should be concerned about wh:
best bet is to put nothing in an e-mail message that you wouldn't post on your office
door. Also be sure that you know your organization's e-mail policy before sending
personal messages or forwarding work-related information to your personal e-mail
account. Estimates suggest that almost 20 percent of bosses have fired an employee
for Internet or e-mail-related misuse"
Despite its dark side, e-mail has many advantages and remains a prime
‘communication channel. Therefore, it’s to your advantage to learn when and how to use
it efficiently and safely.
‘ay come back to haunt them. Your
8.lc Knowing When E-Mail Is Appropriate
Short informal messages mostly travel by text, instant message, or chat. In comparison,
‘e-mail is appropriate for longer, more invelved, and well-organized messages that may
provide or request information and respond to inquiries. Itis especially effective for
messages to multiple receivers and messages that must be archived (saved), An e-mail
is also appropriate as a cover document when sending longer attachments,
E-mail, however, is not a substitute for face-to-face conversations or telephone
calls. These channels are much more successful if your goal is to convey enthusiasm or
warmth, explain a complex situation, present a persuasive argument, or smooth over
disagreements, One expert advises delivering messages in person when they “require
a human moment”—thatis, those that are emotional, require negotiation, and relate
to personnel” Researchers have found that people are 34 times more likely to comply
with in-person requests than those sent by e-mail; the scholars also established that
most office workers overestimate the persuasiveness of e-mail”
8-ld Composing Professional E-Mails
Professional e-mails are quite different from messages you may send to friends. Instead
‘of casual words tossed off in haste, professional e-mails are well-considered messages
‘Chapter 5: Short Workplace Messages ane Digital Media‘that involve all three stages of the writing process. They have compelling subject lines,
appropriate greetings, well-organized bodies, and complete closing information. The
following writing plan will help you create information e-mails quickly.
Information E-Mails
SUBJECT LINE: Summarize the main idea in condensed form
OPENING: Reveal the main idea immediately but in expanded form (complete
sentences)
Bopy: Explain and justify the main idea using headings, bulleted lists, and
other high-skim techniques when appropriate
CLOSING: Include (a) action information, dates, or deadlines; (o) a summary of
the message; or (¢) closing thought.
Draft a Compelling but Concise Subject Line. A crucial part of an e-mail sits subject
line—not surprising when writers can expect that their messages will be viewed on
mobile devices by busy people, Avoid meaningless statements such as Help, Urgent, or
Meeting. Summarize the purpose of the message clearly and make the receiver want to
open the message. Try to include a verb (Need You fo Attend Las Vegas Trade Show). In
some instances the subject line can be the entire message (Meeting Location Changed
to Conference Room I) Also be sure to adjust the subject ine if
the topic changes after a thread of replies emerges. Subject lines should appear as
combination of uppercase and lowercase letters—never in all lowercase letters or
all caps,
ened nc ace renee
Budget Report Need You to Prepare a Budget Report
Division Meeting Middle Atlantic Division Meeting
Rescheduled for April 22
Important! Please Schedule Your OSHA Safety Training
Parking Permits New Employee Parking Permits Available
From HR
Include a Greeting, To help receivers see the beginning of a message and to help
‘them recognize whether they are the primary or secondary receiver, include a greeting,
also called a salutation, The greeting sets the tone for the message and reflects your
audience analysis. For friends and colleagues, try friendly greetings (Hi, Lara; Thanks,
Lara; Good morning, Lara; or Greetings, Lara). For more formal messages and those to
outsiders, include an honorific and last name (Dear Ms. Ingram). When a given name is
gender-neutral (unisex), andl the gender of identity is not known, omit the honorific. Use
the full name of the recipient instead (Dear Robin Gray)
Organize the Body for Readability and Tone. In the revision phase, ask yourself
how you could make your message mare readable. Did you start directly? Did you
group similar topics together? Could some information be presented with bulleted or
numbered lists? Could you add headings—especially if the message contains more
than 2 few paragraphs? Do you see any phrases or sentences that you could condense?
Get rid of wordiness, but don't sacrifice clarity. Ifa longer sentence is necessary for
comprehension, then keep it. To convey the best tone, read the message aloud. Ifit
sounds curt, it probably is.
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what's relatively
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whelming amount of
electronic exchanges
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benefit of vocal
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Close Bifectively. At the end of your message, include an action statement with due
dates and requests. Although complimentary closes are unnecessary, you might include
a friendly closing such as Many thanks or Warm regards. Do include your name because
messages without names become confusing when forwarded or when they are part of a
long thread of responses
For most messages, include full contact information in a signature block, which your
‘e-mail application can insert automatically, Medel Document 5.1 illustrates a ‘ypical
information e-mail that starts directly and displays proper formatting, It also illustrates
how a draft can be revised to improve readability.
8-le Keeping Your Inbox in Check
Instead of letting your inbox consume your time and crimp your productivity, you
‘can contral it hy observing a few time-management strategies. The most important
strategy is checking your e-mail at set times, such as fist thing in the morning and
again after lunch or at 4 p.m. To avoid being distracted, be sure to turn off your audio
and visual alerts. No fair peeking! If mornings are your best working times, check your
‘e-mail later in the day. Discuss with our boss your schedule for responding and share it
with your colleagues.
Another excellent time-saver is the two-minute rule. you can read and respond
toa message within two minutes, then take care of it immediately. For messages that
require more time, add them to your to-do list or schedule them on your calendar. To
be polite, send a quick note telling the sender when you plan to respond. Blogger and
podcaster Merlin Mann suggests that "Your job is not to read an email and then read it
again.” Instead, he recommends taking one of five steps right away: delete, delegate,
respond, defer, or do.”
8-1f Replying Efficiently With Down-Editing
When answering e-mail, a useful skill to develop is dewn-editing, This involves
inserting your responses to parts of the incoming message. After a courteous opening,
your reply message wil include only the parts of the incoming message to which you
are responding. Delete the sender's message headers, signature, and all unnecessary
parts, Your responses can be identified with your initals if more than one person will
be seeing the response. Another efficient technique is to use a different font color for
your down-edits I takes a litle practice to develop this skill, particularly formatting
the e-mail, but the down-edited reply reduces confusion, saves writing and reading
time, and makes you look professional. Figure 5.1 shows additional best practices for
managing your e-mail
8-1g Writing Interoffice Memos
In adcltion to e-mail, you should be familiar with another workplace clocument type,
the interoffice memorandum. Although e-mail has largely replaced memos, you may
still be called on to use the meme format in specific instances. Memos are necessary
for important internal messages that (are too ong for e-mail, (b) require a permane
record, (@) demand formality oc) inform employees who may not have work e-mail,
such as those in manufacturing or construction. Within organizations, memos deliver
changes in procedures, official instructions, and reports
The memo formats particularly necessary for complex, lengthy internal messages
Prepared as memos, long messages are then delivered as attachments to e-mail cover
messages, Memos seem to function better as permanent records than e-mail messages
because the latter may be cumbersome to store and may contain a long thread of
confusing replies. E-mails also may change the origination date whenever the file is
accessed, thus making it impossible to know the original date of the message.
‘Chapter 5: Short Workplace Messages ane Digital MediaModel Document 5.1 Creating an Information E-Mail
‘Angel Fuentes
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When preparing e-mail attachments, be sure that they carry sufficient identifying
information. Because the attachment may become separated from the cover e-mail
message, it must be named thoughtfully, Preparing the e-mail attachment as a memo
provides a handy format that identifies the date, sender, receiver, and subject.
‘Comparing Memos and E-Mails. Memos have much in common with e-mails. Both
usually carry nonsensitve information that may be organized directly with the main idea
first. Both have guide words calling for a subject line, a dateline, and the identification
of the sender and receiver. To enhance readability, both should be organized with
headings, bulleted lists, and enumerated items whenever possible
Similarities. E-mails and memos both generally close with (a) action information,
dates, or deadlines; (b) a summary of the message: or (e) a closing thought.
{An effective memo or e-mail closing might be Please create a slideshow featuring
our new product line by April 20 so that we are prepared for the trade show in May.
In more detailed messages, a summary of main points may be an appropriate closing
Ifno action request is made and a closing summary is unnecessary, you might end with
a simple concluding thought (Im glad to answer your questions or This sounds like a
worthwhile project.
Differences. You need not close messages to coworkers with goodiill statements
‘such as those found in e-mails or letters to customers and clients. However, some
‘losing thought is often necessary to avoid sounding abrupt, Closings can show
gratitude or encourage feedback with remarks such as I sincerely appreciate your help,
‘or What are your ideas on this proposal? Other closings look forward to what's next,
such as How would you like to proceed? Avoid closing with overused expressions such
as Please let me know if| may be of further assistance. This ending souncis mechanical
and insincere.
In Medel Document 5.2, notice how interoffice memos are formatted and how they
‘can be created to improve readability with lists, tables, and white space.
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following ee that readers recognize ‘he events and services We provide:
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3. Answer Questions, Our website should provide answers to frequently asked
(questions such as the following:
Do audience members or eat flles have to pay to attend the event?
How often do seat filers have to move around?
Will seat filers be on camera?
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