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Peer Feedback Sheet

This document contains a peer review of a student's essay, with the reviewer providing feedback on various elements of the essay such as the introduction, thesis statement, topic sentences, paragraph structure, concluding sentences, and following the style guide. The reviewer gave the essay high marks, noting that the introduction caught their attention, the thesis statement was clear, each paragraph followed from the topic sentence, and the conclusion restated the main points and thesis.

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Peer Feedback Sheet

This document contains a peer review of a student's essay, with the reviewer providing feedback on various elements of the essay such as the introduction, thesis statement, topic sentences, paragraph structure, concluding sentences, and following the style guide. The reviewer gave the essay high marks, noting that the introduction caught their attention, the thesis statement was clear, each paragraph followed from the topic sentence, and the conclusion restated the main points and thesis.

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Peer correction printout

Writer’s Name XiaoXiangYu Writer’s Class 5

I would prefer my feedback to be given anonymously


(tick here if you do NOT want direct feedback)

GRADING STUDENT

Read the essay you are given carefully. This is a first draft so you will help the student make changes to their essay. Mark the column
on the right according to how well or poorly you think the writer completed each part.

Very well：This introduction made me want to read on


Does the introduction catch your attention? and aroused my interest.

Very well：This article will analyze the regional


Is the thesis statement easy to identify? economic development of Xi'an city through SWOT
method .The article is divided into four parts, it is easy
to identify.
Very well：The thesis statement shows very clearly what
Does the thesis statement make it clear what is to be presented.
the essay will present?
Very well：Yes, each paragraph has a clear topic
The student has clear topic sentences in each sentence.
paragraph?

Does the content of each paragraph follow on Very well：Yes, every piece of content comes from a
from the topic sentence? topic sentence.

Very well：Yes,Every sentence has a clear end point.


Is there a clear concluding point in each
sentence?

Does the writer summarize his/her main Very well:Yes,At the end of the thesis summarized up his
points in the conclusion? main points.

Very well：Yes,very clearly restate his thesis in the


Does the writer restate the thesis in the
conclusion.
conclusion?

Very well：Yes,student follow the style guide,and


Does the student follow the style guide? remember to add references at the end。

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