Ch. 2 BC 2.5
Ch. 2 BC 2.5
Communication
Hi everyone,
[Winston Churchill, was a British soldier, and writer who served as Prime Minister of
the United Kingdom (UK) from 1940 to 1945, during the Second World War, and
again from 1951 to 1955].
Include Only Relevant Material
Example
Wordy: We hereby wish to let you know that our company is pleased
with the confidence you have respond in us.
Hi Matt,
I wanted to quickly discuss the email marketing campaign
that we analyzed last Thursday. Our target market will
want to know about the company's good efforts,
especially our goals to become sustainable and help
local schools. This would make a far greater impact, and
it would stay in their minds longer than a traditional sales
pitch.
What do you think?
Jessica
3) Consideration
Example
We-Attitude: I Am delighted to announce that we will be
extending our hours to make shopping more convenient.
e.g.:
General
He is very intelligent student of class and stood first in
the class.
Concrete
Familiar us Pretention
About
Circa
After
Subsequent
Home
Domicile
For example
e.g.
Construct Effective Sentences
and Paragraphs
At the core of clarity is the sentences. This grammatical
statement, when clearly expressed, moves thoughts within a
paragraph. Important characteristics to consider are length,
unity, coherence, and emphasis.
What is this email about? Well, we're not sure. if there are
multiple Daniels in John's department, John won't know
who Skip is talking about.
Good Example
Hi John,
I wanted to write you a quick note about Daniel Kedar, who's
working in your department. In recent weeks, he's helped the IT
department through several pressing deadlines on his own time.
We've got a tough upgrade project due to run over the next three
months, and his knowledge and skills would prove invaluable.
Could we please have his help with this work?
I'd appreciate speaking with you about this. When is it best to
call you to discuss this further?
Best wishes,
Skip
Hi Daniel,
Thanks so much for meeting me at lunch today! I enjoyed
our conservation, and I'm looking forward to moving
ahead on our project. I'm sure that the two-weak deadline
won't be an issue.
Thanks again, and I'll speak to you soon!
Best,
Jack Miller