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CENTRE FOR DISTANCE EDUCATION

B. Com. Part I

Ability Enhancement
Compulsory Course (CBCS)
(Compulsory English)
English for Business Communication
(Academic Year 2019-20 onwards)

(Semester I and II)

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University, Nashik.
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University of Mysore
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 n B. O. S. MEMBERS OF ENGLISH AND LINGUISTICS n
Dr. S. B. Bhambar, Chairman
Tukaram Krishnaji Kolekar Arts and Commerce College,
Nesari, Tal. Gadhinglaj, Dist. Kolhapur

l Dr. Akshay Sarvade, l Prof. (Dr.) Bhagvan S. Jadhav

Department of English, Swami Ramanand Teerth Marathwada
Shivaji University, Kolhapur University, Nanded

l Dr. M. R. Patil l Prof. (Dr.) Jayprakash A. Shinde

Dr. Ghali College, Gadhinglaj, Professor and Former Head,
Dist, Kolhapur Department of English,
Shivaji University, Kolhapur
l Dr. Smt. Prabhavati Arvind Patil
Vivekanand College, Kolhapur l Shri. Sadashiv Pandu Chougule
S. B. Khade Mahavidyalaya, Koparde,
l Dr. Sunil Patil Tal. Karveer, Dist. Kolhapur
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B. N. N. College, Bhiwandi,
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Department of English,
l Dr. Namdev Pandurang Khavare Shivaji University, Kolhapur
Hon. Shri. Annasaheb Dange Arts,
Commerce & Science College,
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Hatkanangale, Dist. Kolhapur
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Willingdon College, Vishrambag, Sangli

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 INTRODUCTION
Dear Students,
You are doing this course of Ability Enhancement Compulsory English as distance
learners. You are studying the same text book which is prescribed for the regular
students. But your course book is organised differently to help you study it on your own.
In all, there are 8 modules. They are divided into two parts for two semesters. In
Semester I, students are required to study three units on Communication Skills and
six units on Reading Comprehension. In the same way you have to study three units
on Communication Skills and six units on Reading Comprehension for Semester-II.
Units on Communication Skills will help you enhance your linguistic competence.
You will be able to describe objectives, people, places and daily routine. You will also
be able to narrate your experiences. Further you will learn to develop your vocabulary
and make enquiries and give instructions. Also you will be able to use English for
Specific purposes in your actual life situations. Unit on Telephonic Communication will
provide you the practical training of how to speak on telephone for various purposes.
Units on Reading Comprehension will add to your literary competence. You will study
short stories, essays, poems, literary articles based on the experiences of writers of
memoirs, one act play etc.
For the purpose of study, the units are developed on the points like Objectives,
Introduction, Content, Vocabulary or Terms to Remember, Check your progress, Key
to check your progress, Exercises, Summary, List of books for further study, etc.
If you read the Self-Instructional Material given here carefully with great interest,
you will be able to develop your own English language and will also get good marks
in the examination.
So, we wish you great success and hope that you will enjoy studying this course.

Editors

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Centre for Distance Education English for Business Communication
Shivaji University,
Kolhapur.
Writing Team

Author’s Name Unit No

Semester-I
Dr. Kalpana Gangatirkar 1
Mahaveer Mahavidyalaya, Kolhapur
Dr. N. P. Khavare 2
Shri. Annasaheb Dange Arts, Commerce &
Science College, Hatkanangale, Dist. Kolhapur
Prin. Dr. Y. B. Gonde 3
Arts College, Wagholi, Tal. Koregaon, Dist. Satara
Dr. Sunil G. Patil 4
Arts and Commerce College, Kasegaon,
Tal. Walwa, Dist. Sangli
Semester-II
Dr. Prashantkumar Kamble 5
Rajarshi Shahu College of Arts and Commerce, Rukadi,
Tal. Hatkanangala, Dist. Kolhapur
Smt. S. R. Prabhune 6
Mahila Mahavidyalaya, Mangalwar Peth Karad, Dist. Satara
Shri. Suhas Raut 7
S. B. Khade Mahavidyalaya Koparde, Tal. Karveer,
Dist. Kolhapur
Dr. Neeta Jokhe 8
Deshbhakt A. B. Naik Arts and Science College,
Chikhli, Tal. Shirala, Dist. Sangli

n Editors n
Dr. N. P. Khavare Dr. S. B. Bhambar
Shri. Annasaheb Dange Arts, Commerce Tukaram Krishnaji Kolekar Arts and
& Science College, Hatkanangale, Commerce College, Nesari, Tal. Gadhinglaj,
Dist. Kolhapur Dist. Kolhapur

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 CONTENTS

English For Business Communication

Semester I (Paper A)
Module 1 A) Developing Vocabulary 1
B) On Saying Please - A. G. Gardiner 18

Module 2 A) Description 28
B) The Unknown Citizen - W. H. Auden 42

Module 3 A) Narration 48
B) Panch Parameshvar - Premchand 68

Module 4 A) Kabuliwala - Rabindranath Tagore 91

B) Offering in the Temple - Desika Pillai 111
C) Felling of the Bunyan Tree - Dilip Chitre 120

Semester II (Paper B)
Module 5 A) Business Correspondence 129
B) Why does the Child Cry - Mulk Raj Anand 164

Module 6 A) Telephonic Communication 177

B) The Necklace - Guy de Maupassant 190

Module 7 A) English for Specific Purposes 208

B) I Thank You God - Bernard Dadie 228

Module 8 A) War - Luigi Pirandello 235

B) The Cuckoo - William Wordsworth 249
C) Let Me Not... - William Shakespeare 257

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Each Unit begins with the section Objectives -

Objectives are directive and indicative of :

1. What has been presented in the Unit and

2. What is expected from you

3. What you are expected to know pertaining to the specific Unit

once you have completed working on the Unit.

The self-check exercises with possible answers will help you to

understand the Unit in the right perspective. Go through the possible
answer only after you write your answers. These exercises are not
to be submitted to us for evaluation. They have been provided to
you as Study Tools to help keep you in the right track as you study
the Unit.

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 Module 1
A) Developing Vocabulary

Contents
1.0 Objectives
1.1 Introduction
1.2 Content
1.2.1 Word Classes
(Self Check Exercises I)
1.2.2 Word Formation Processes
(Self Check Exercises II)
1.2.3 Synonyms and Antonyms
(Self Check Exercises III)
1.2.4 Problem/Confusing Words
(Self Check Exercises IV)
1.3 Key to Self Check Exercises
1.4 Exercises

1.0 Objectives :
After studying and this unit students will be able to:

recognize the major processes that are used in the formation of English words.

understand word-classes and use them in a variety of contexts.

to generate synonyms and antonyms and use them appropriately.

identify and define commonly confused words and use them correctly.

use dictionary properly and to expand vocabulary.

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1.1 Introduction
English is one of the most dominating languages of the world which is having
its impact on every field of work. It is the language of international business,
education, literature, internet and social media. English is the language of translation.
It is one of the most used languages in the world. All over the world it is used as a
link language. English is an important language for all kinds of professional and
personal goals. Language learners all over the world adapt English as per their
general and scientific needs. An important part of learning English is becoming
acquainted with the particular vocabulary of the language. Vocabulary represents one
of the most important skills necessary for learning English. We can not convey
anything without vocabulary. With the help of proper vocabulary we are able to
express ourselves more clearly. Many words have several different meanings; one
must study the meaning of the words and the class of the word, the words in context,
etc.
There are two broad kinds of vocabulary: Active vocabulary and Passive
vocabulary. Active vocabulary is working or functional vocabulary. It consists of
words a person uses for speech or writing. Passive vocabulary consists of words
which a person encounters in texts which he understands but does not use. There are
many language learning techniques to develop vocabulary. In this unit we are going
to focus on – I) Word Classes – open and closed II) Word Formation Processes –
affixation (prefixation and suffixation) III) Synonyms and Antonyms IV) Problems
Words V) Phrasal Verbs.
The most important means for developing vocabulary is, of course, dictionary.
A good dictionary helps to know the pronunciation of a word with stress, the part of
speech a word is, the meaning of the word in context (a poor man, poor in English)
the prefixes and the suffixes a word can take and the changes they can bring about in
the class or part of speech (e.g. beauty (n) beautiful (Aj) beautifully (Av) the plural,
past form etc.) A good dictionary can give you a lot of information about the usage
of words, patterns of construction etc.

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1.2 Content
1.2.1 WORD CLASSES
Modern grammarians classify words into two classes a) open classes b) closed
classes
OPAEN WORD CLASSES
Open Word Classes Symbol Examples
Noun N Krishna, tree, book, radio, mango etc.
Adjective Aj Important, joyous, shy, angry, clean etc.
Main Verb M.V. Play, read, climb, give, dance etc
Adverb Av Now, hard, quickly, soon, perfectly etc.

Noun, Adjective, Adverb and Main Verb are called open class words as they are
indefinitely extendable. New items are constantly being created. They can be
infected. They are called as content words as they carry meaning.
Noun
Noun is a name of an objects, thing, person and place.
Example – I enjoy Hindi Films.
Salil is a great painter.
He loves Mumbai.
Nouns are classified into following kinds.
1) Common Nouns – Name given in common to every person or thing or place of
the same class or kind.
Examples - dog, actor, city, girl, pen etc.
2) Proper Noun - Name of a particular person or place.
Examples - Rabindranath Tagore, New Delhi, Amitabh Bachchan, etc.
3) Collective Noun - Name of collection of things.
Examples - team, army, staff, library, etc.
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4) Concrete Noun - Name of thing which we can see or touch.
Examples - stick, tree, boy, book, etc.
5) Abstract Noun - Name of an action, quality or state.
Examples - love, joy, intelligence, truth, etc.
6) Countable Noun - Noun that can be counted.
Examples - words, teacher, boy, pen, etc.
7) Uncountable Noun - A noun that can not be counted.
Examples - beauty, life, death, knowledge, etc.
8) Material Noun - Name of a material.
Examples - steel, gold, wood, glass, etc.
Adjective
Adjective is a word that gives more information about the noun and expresses
quality, quantity and number.
Two types of Adjectives
1) Attributive Adjectives - Modify the noun and appear before the noun.
Example - The strong man.
2) Predicative Adjective - They are used after verb.
Example - The man is strong.
Other types of Adjectives are:
1) Adjectives of Quality/Qualitative Adjectives – beautiful, hardworking, etc.
2) Adjectives of Quantity/Quantitative Adjectives - enough, much, little, more,
etc.
3) Adjectives of number/Numeral Adjectives - two, all, few, many, etc.
4) Demonstrative Adjectives - this that, these, those.
5) Distributive Adjectives – each, every, any, etc.
6) Interrogative Adjectives - what, whose, whom, which, etc.
7) Possessive Adjectives - My, our, his, etc.
8) Proper Adjectives – Indian, English etc.

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Main Verb:
A verb is a word or phrase indicating an action, an event or a state.
Transitive Verb: A verb which has an object. Examples - I love chocolates.
She plays cricket.
Intransitive Verb: A verb which has no object. Examples - He ran quickly.
They dance gracefully.
Adverb:
A word which gives more information about a verb, an adjective or another
verb.
Types
Adverb of manner - perfectly, slowly, luckily etc.
Adverb of place - near, here, there, above etc.
Adverb of time - after, then, soon, yesterday, etc.
Adverb of frequency - frequently, hardly, always, never etc.
Adverb of certainty - surely, definitely, perhaps etc.
Adverb of degree - very, quite, much, too etc.
Interrogative Adverbs - how, why, where, when etc.
CLOSED WORD CLASSES
Closed word class Symbol Examples
i) Determiner d a, an, the, some, any, all
ii) Pronoun pn I, we, he, himself etc.
iii) Preposition p at, on, of, towards, etc
iv) Conjunction c but, though, so, etc
v) Auxiliary verbs aux may, shall, do, are, etc
vi) Interjection ij oh, hi, aha etc
vii) Enumerator e one two, last, next, fifth etc.

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 Closed class words can not normally be extended but they are grammatically
significant.
Determiners –
Determiners modify nouns. They are grouped as demonstrators (this, that, these,
those) articles (a, an, the) and indefinite pronouns (all, some, many, any, both etc).
Pronoun –
A word which is used in place of a noun or noun phrase is called pronoun.
Personal pronoun – I, we, you, he, she, it, they
Reflexive pronoun – Myself, herself, itself, themselves etc.
Demonstrative pronoun – this, that, these, those etc.
Interrogative pronoun – what, which, whose, whom etc.
Distributive pronoun – each, either, neither, any etc.
Relative pronoun – that, which, where etc.
Conjunction –
A word that joins words, phrases or sentences is called as a conjunction.
Types –
1) Co-ordinate conjunction – and, or, but.
2) Subordinate conjunction – Though, still, because, so, that, even, if, etc.
3) Co-relative conjunction – either…or, neither….nor, not only…but also
etc.
Preposition –
Words or group of words used before a noun or pronoun to show place or
position.
Examples – at, for, which, by, on, over, towards, about, below, during, over etc.

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Auxiliaries –
An auxiliary verb is a verb used with main verbs to show tense, mood and to
form questions.
Primary Auxiliaries
To be – am, is, are, was, were
have – have, has, had
do – do, does, did
Modal Auxiliaries
will, would, shall, should, can, could, ought to, may, might, must, need, dare,
used to
Enumerators – enumerators express number one, two, three…. next, first, second,
third….last
Interjections – Interjections are words which express emotions like, surprise,
pleasure, annoyance, sympathy :
hi, oh, o my God, Hey, Hurray, ah, aha etc.
Self Check Exercises I
A] Identify the word classes of the underlined words in the following sentences.
1) He applied for the post of the manager in the bank.
2) Students came late because they missed the bus.
3) Hurray! India won the match.
4) You must study hard.
5) The beautiful daughter of the king married the poor man.
6) Mihir gave Sushant a bouquet of flowers.
7) They did their job sincerely.
8) Somebody is standing near the door.
9) I know your address.
10) This act is quite intelligent.

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B] Classify the following words into open class words and close class words.
bench, as, troublesome, maintain, towards, ouch, all, last, were, luckily.
1.2.2 WORD FORMATION PROCESSES
Word formation is the main technique to develop vocabulary. Affixation and
compounding are important word formation processes.
In Affixation new words are formed by adding attachments. There are two types
of affixation - prefixation and suffixation.
Prefixation - In this process an affix is attached to the root/base of the word and new
word is formed. There are many prefixes in English. Study the following chart.
Prefix Root/Base New word
a moral amoral
fore tell foretell
mis calculate miscalculate
de motivate demotivate
un happy unhappy
co pilot co-pilot
dis ease disease
im polite impolite
re appear reappear
inter national international
pre independence preindependence
super man superman
pro active proactive
anti slavery antislavery
non stop nonstop
over take overtake

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 up grade upgrade
vice president vicepresident
en slave enslave
extra ordinary extraordinary
semi final semifinal
auto biography autobiography

Suffixation - In this process, an affix is attached after root/base of the word and new
word is formed. There are many suffixes in English. Study the following chart.
Root/Base Suffix New Word
comfort able comfortable
orphan age orphanage
center al central
differ ent different
affection ate affectionate
captain cy captaincy
king dom kingdom
mountain eer mountaineer
green ery greenery
Japan ese Japanese
two fold twofold
child hood childhood
class ic classic
wed ing wedding
child ish childish

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 Root/Base Suffix New Word
truth ful truthful
civil ize civilize
love ly lovely
dry ness dryness
act or actor
mercy less merciless
employ ee employee

Self Check Exercise II :

A) Form new words by using following prefixes and suffixes.
im-, auto-, -ment, ir-, ster-, -ation vice-, -some, -ify, -ism, counter-, -er, in-
B) Find out the root words of the following.
authority, travelogue, underdeveloped, co-actor, icy, improperly, nonsense,
pan-American, pre-historic, multinational

1.2.2 Synonyms and Antonyms

Synonyms :
Study the underlined words in the following sentences.
1. The train came one hour late.
The train arrived one hour late.
2. Pay the amount of the bill by cheque.
Remit the amount of the bill by cheque.
3. Is that show-piece costly?
Is that show-piece expensive?
4. He is quite polite.
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 He is quite courteous.
You can see that the sentences in each pair mean the same because the
underlined words are synonyms. But they are not prefect synonyms. Words such as
arrive, remit, expensive, courteous are used in formal and written language while
came, pay, costly, polite are used in day today communication. So you have to pay
attention to the context and situation in which they occur. But those words convey
the same general idea.
For Example – smile, laugh, titter, grin, sneer, giggle, guffaw.
1. Madhuri Dixit is famous for her smile.
2. Laughing loudly is considered unmannerly.
3. There was nervous tittering in the studio.
4. Naresh appeared grinning cheerfully.
5. They sneered at his pretentions.
6. The children giggled all the way through the film.
7. She let out a loud guffaw when the boy fell down.
Here are certain examples of synonyms:
1. Sharp – acute
2. try – attempt
3. rule – govern
4. answer - reply
5. precise – exact
6. sorrow – grief
7. swift – quick – speedy
8. intelligent – bright – brilliant
9. lazy – idle
10. pacify – appease

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Antonyms
Compare the following statements.
1. He has a unique personality.
He is a common man.
unique and common man are antonyms.
Antonyms are words that have opposite meaning
Here is a list of antonyms:
right x wrong
awake x asleep
present x absent
dull x cheerful
native x foreign
stupid x wise
arrive x depart
cheap x expensive
freedom x slavery
knowledge x ignorance
Self Check Exercises III
A) Use the following synonyms in your own sentences.
i) bureau, branch, department, agency, office.
ii) apartment, room, flat, suite.
iii) wander, march, plod, stagger.
iv) see, observe, watch, stare.
B) Give synonyms of the following words.
accomplish, death, humble, to request, cultured

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C) Use the following pairs of the antonyms in your own sentences.
appoint-dismiss, debit-credit, inward-outward, wise-foolish, major-minor,
strange-familiar, virtue-vice
D) Give antonyms of the following words.
forward, comedy, traditional, introvert, bloom
1.2.4 Problems words
Some words in English look alike or sound alike. These words create confusion
and we avoid using them. To enrich vocabulary it is necessary to learn them and use
them correctly.
Some words are given below.
1) Adapt – make suitable for
We adapted ourselves to the hot weather.
Adept – skilled
He is an adept in the art of stealing.
Adopt – take
Mr. Darade has adopted a girl child.
2) Alternate – one after the other
We are called an alternate day for football practice.
Alternative – choice
There is no alternative before us but to accept the condition.
3) Berth (a sleeping place)
They got five berths reserved for Mumbai.
Birth (being born)
The old man doesn’t know his exact birth date.
4) Desert – to leave
They deserted the country for two years.

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 Dessert – sweet dish
They were served dessert after the dinner.
Self Check Exercise IV
Look at the following confusing or problem words, their meanings in the
dictionary and use them in your own sentences.
Eligible – illegible, affect-effect, accept-except, principal-principle, historic-
historical, maxim-maximum, course-coarse, jealous-zealous.

1.3 Key to Self Check Exercises

I} A] 1) Noun
2) Conjunction
3) Interjection
4) Auxiliary verb
5) Adjective
6) Noun
7) Adverb
8) Pronoun
9) Main Verb
10) Determiner
B] Open class words – bench, troublesome, mountain, luckily
Close class words – as, ouch, all, last, were
II] A) imperfect, impure, etc
automobile, auto start, etc.
appointment, management, etc
irresponsible, irrelevant, etc.
gangster.
examination, prefixation, etc.

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 Vice-principal, Vice president, etc.
troublesome, awesome, etc.
identify, classify, etc
Marxism, feminism, etc.
counterattack, counteract, etc
teacher, dealer, etc.
insane, intact, etc.
B) author, travel, develop, act,
ice, proper, sense, America, history, nation.
III] A) i) The case was given to the Central Bureau of Intelligence New Delhi.
There was a get-together of the 1995 branch of the school.
She joined the town’s police department.
Meera started an advertising agency.
The manager had phoned the head office for more details.
ii) The apartment was situated near the blue sea.
He rents rooms to college students.
Sara lives with her friends in a small flat in London.
Manisha had booked a suite in fivestar Hotel.
iii) Having ample time, we wandered here and there.
The victorious army marched through the streets of the city.
Tired after a long trek, we plodded wearily to our hotel.
The drunker staggered through the streets.
iv) Have you seen my glasses?
He watches television every evening.
Please observe the reaction of these two chemicals.
The man stared at that lady.

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 B) Synonyms
accomplish - achieve death - demise humble - modest
to request - appeal cultured - civilized
C) 1) He was appointed as the superintendent of the office.
The clerk was dismissed without notice.
2) The bank accepts debit or credit cards.
3) They moved inward.
They showed no outward sings of fear.
4) Its dark, it is wise to stop.
His foolish activities make us to laugh.
5) Use of drugs by young people is a major problem today.
Don’t get upset by minor things.
6) I faced a very strange experience.
He can see familiar faces in the hall.
7) Ripe the virtues and wipe the vices.
D) Antonyms
Forward x backward traditional x modern
comedy x tragedy introvert x extrovert
bloom x fade
IV] 1) Mr. Prakash Deshmukh was the most eligible candidate amongst all the
candidates.
We can not read this letter. The handwriting is quite illegible.
2) Literature affects society.
The effect of mobile on children is a serious problem today.
3) The writer accepted the invitation.
Except Shantanu, all were present.
4) Principal Deshpande is a man of principles.
5) Winning the world cup was a historic incident.
‘Shriman Yogi’ is a historical novel.
6) He has a habit to use maxims while speaking.
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7) The course was quite interesting.
The film was coarse.
8) Mrs. Karkare is always jealous of her neighbours.
Mrs. Pandhare takes part in every activity. She is zealous.
Exercises:
Identify the word classes of the underlined words in the following sentences
1) 1. He applied for the post of the teacher in the Government School.
2. Girls came late because they missed the train.
3. Hurray! We won the match.
4. The man stabbed himself.
5. Five Pandavas won hundred Kauravas.
6. Perhaps he is absent.
7. Wait for me.
8. Mrs. Kulkarni is a kind lady.
9. He applied for the post of the teacher in the Government School.
2) Form the new words by using prefixes and suffixes
un-, auto-, dis-, -ism, -ment, -ful, -tion, -ee, -ish, -less, over-, -, some-, bi-, -er,
micro-,
3) Use the following synonyms and antonyms in your own sentences.
implore-beg, eat-swallow, tell and express
4) Use the following phrasal verbs in your own sentences. Meanings of them
are given in the brackets.
get by (manage), get over (recover), set off (start), pass away (die), call off
(cancel)

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 B) On Smiles
A.G. Gardiner

Contents
1.0 Objectives
1.1 Introduction
1.2 The Text
1.2.1 Section I
Terms to Remember
Check your progress
1.2.2 Section II
Terms to Remember
Check your progress
1.3 Summary
1.4 Answers to check your progress
1.5 Exercises

1.0 Objectives :
After reading this unit you will be able to:

know about A.G.Gardiner as a British author.

define the importance of smile in human life.

differentiate between different types of smiles.

know the miraculous effects of smile in different avenues of life.

know how smile can be an impressive weapon of politicians.

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1.1 Introduction:
Alfred George Gardiner - (1865–1946) was a British journalist and author. His
essays, written under the pen-name Alpha of the Plough, are highly regarded.
Gardiner was born in Chelmsford, the son of a cabinet-maker and alcoholic. As a boy
he worked at the Chelmsford Chronicle and the Bournemouth Directory. In 1899, he
was appointed editor of the Blackburn Weekly Telegraph. This choice soon proved a
great success; under Gardiner's direction, it became one of the leading liberal
journals. Gardiner resigned in 1919, over a disagreement with George Cadbury,
owner of the Daily News. From 1915, he contributed to ‘The Star’ under the
pseudonym Alpha of the Plough. His essays are uniformly elegant, graceful and
humorous. His uniqueness lay in his ability to teach the basic truths of life in an easy
and amusing manner. This essay is taken from his ‘Many Furrows’ (1924).

1.2 Text: On Smiles :

1.2.1 Section I
If I were to be born into this world again and had the choice of my endowments
I should arrange very carefully about my smile. There is nothing so irresistible as the
right sort of smile. It is better than the silver spoon in the mouth. It will carry you
any- where and win you anything, including the silver spoon. It disarms your
enemies and makes them forget that they have a grudge against you. “I have a great
many reasons for disliking you/' said a well- known public man to a friend of mine
the other day, "but when I am with you I can never remember what they are." It was
the flash of sunshine that did for him. He could not preserve his hostility in the
presence of the other's disarming smile and gay good humour. He just yielded up his
sword and sunned himself in the pleasant weather that the other carried with him like
an atmosphere.
At the Bar, of course, a pleasant address is worth a fortune. I suppose there has
been no more successful figure in the law courts in our time than Rufus Isaacs, but I
fancy he won as many of his victories by the debonair smile with which he irradiated
the courts as by his law. You could see the judge on the bench and the jury in the box
basking in the warmth that he shed around them. The weather might be as harsh as it
liked outside; but here the sky was clear and the sun was shining genially. It was a
fine day and the only blot on the landscape was the un- happy counsel for the other

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side, who thumped the table and got red in the face as he saw his client's case melting
away like snow before a south wind.
And among politicians it is notorious that a popular smile is the shortest cut to
the great heart of democracy. In an estimate of the qualities that have contributed to
Mr. Lloyd George's amazing success a high place would have to be given to the
twinkling smile, so merry and mischievous, so engagingly frank and so essentially
secret and calculating, with which, by the help of the photographer, he has irradiated
his generation. If Mr. Asquith had learned how to smile for public consumption, the
history of English politics, and even of the world, would have been vastly different;
but Mr. Asquith's smile is private and intellectual and has no pictorial value, and I
doubt whether anyone ever heard him laugh outright. He was born without the chief
equipment of the politician in a democratic age. No one knew the value of that
equipment more than Theodore Roosevelt. He was the most idolized public man
America has produced for half a century, and he owed his popularity more to his
enormous smile than to any other quality. It was like a baron of beef. You could cut
and come again. There was no end to it. It seemed to stretch across the Continent
from the Atlantic to the Pacific, and when it burst into laughter it shook the land like
a merry earthquake. There was not much behind the smile, but it was the genuine
article, the expression a companionable spirit and a healthy enjoyment of life, and it
knocked the Americans "all of a heap." Woodrow Wilson's smile was almost as
spacious as Roosevelt's, but it was less infectious, for it was thoughtful and
reflective; came from the mind rather than the feelings, and never burst into laughter.
It was the smile of the schoolmaster, while Roosevelt's was the smile of the
uproarious schoolboy who was having no end of "a bully time."
Terms to Remember:
1. endowment (N) - ability
2. irresistible (Aj) - convincing
3. disarm (V) - to take away the weapons of
4. hostility (N) - enimity
5. yield up the sword (ph.v) - to give up
6. debonair (Aj) - courteous
7. irradiate (V) - to light up
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8. basking in the warmth (Ph.v) - relax
9. Genially (Av) - mildly
10. pictorial (Aj) - explained the pictures
11. idolized (Aj) - celebrity
12. companionable (Aj) - friendly
13. infectious (Aj) - transmitted from one person to another
14. uproarious (Aj) - very noisy
Check you progress :
A] Complete the following sentences, choosing the correct alternative from the
options given below it.
1) __________ won many of his victories by the debonair smile.
a) Lloyd George b) Asquith
c) Theodore Roosevelt d) Rufus Isaacs
2) Among the politicians a popular _________ is the shortest cut to the great
heart of democracy.
a) smile b) speech c) act d) trick
3) ___________ smile has no pictorial value.
a) Mr.Lloyd Geroge’s b) Mr.Asquith’s
c) Mr.Roosevelt’s d) Mr.Rufus Isaacs
4) ______________ was the most idolized public man in America.
a) Theodore Roosvelt b) Lloyd George
c) Rufus Isaacs d) Asquith
5) Roosevelt’s smile is compared with the smile of a ___________
a) philosopher b) politician c) schoolboy d) actor

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B] Vocabulary exercises.
1) Give synonyms for the following.
enemy, debonair, merry, popular, feelings
2) Form new words by adding prefixes or suffixes to the following words.
arrange, like, enjoy, heath, end.
1.2.2 Section II
Really first-rate smiles are rare. For the most part our smiles add little to our
self-expression. If we are dull, they are dull. If we are sinister, they are only a little
more sinister. If we are smug, they only emphasize our smugness. If, like the Lord
High Everything Else, we were born sneering, our smile is apt to be a sneer, too. If
we are terrible, like Swift, we shall have his "terrible smile." Only rarely do we light
upon the smile that is a revelation. Harry Lauder's smile is like a national institution
or a natural element. It is plentiful enough to fill the world. It is a continual and
abundant feast that requires neither words nor chorus, and when he laughs you can
no more help feeling happy than he can. Lord Balfour's smile is famous in another
way. It has the untroubled sweetness of a child's, and there are few who can resist its
charm; but it is elusive and seems too much like a mask that has little to do with the
real man. You feel that he would send you to the scaffold with the same seraphic
sweetness with which he would pass you the sugar. It is not an emanation of the man
like that abundant smile, at once good-humored and sardonic, with which Mr. Birrell
sets the company aglow.
The most memorable smiles are those which have the quality of the unexpected.
A smile that is habitual rarely pleases, for it suggests policy, and the essence of a
smile is its spontaneity and lack of deliberation. Archbishop Temple said he hated
people who were always smiling, and then, looking across the luncheon table at the
vicar who had been doing his best to ingratiate himself with the terrible prelate,
added: "Look at the vicar there he's always smiling." It was a cruel affront, but the
smile that has the quality of an artifice is hard to bear. It was so in the case of Mrs.
Barbauld, of whom it was said that she wore such a habitual smile that it made your
face ache to look at her. One would almost prefer the other melancholy extreme,
illustrated by that gloomy fanatic, Philip II., who is said to have laughed only once in
his life, and that on receiving the merry news of the massacre of St. Bartholomew.

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The smiles that dwell in the mind most are those that break suddenly like sunshine
from unexpected places. That was the quality of the curiously wistful smile that
played over the ascetic features of Lord Morley in conversation. You could forgive
all his asperities when he smiled. But the most delightful example of the un-
expected smile that I know is that of the pianist, Frederic Lamond. The intensity of
his countenance forbids the suggestion of a smile, and at the piano he seems to
descend into unfathomable depths of gravity and spiritual remoteness. But when the
piece is over and the house breaks out into thunders of applause, he emerges from the
depths with a smile that suggests that the Land of Beulah has broken on his sight. It
is so sudden a transition that you almost seem to catch a glimpse of the Land of
Beulah yourself.
But it is no use for those of us who have only hum- drum smiles to attempt to set
up a smile that is an incantation. Smiles, like poets, are born, not made. If they are
made, they are not smiles, but grimaces, and convict us on the spot. They are simply
an attempt to circulate false news. There is no remedy for us of the negligible smile,
but to be born again and to be born different, not outside but within, for the smile is
only the publication of the inward spirit.
Terms to Remember :
1. sinister (Aj) - unlucky, ominous
2. smug (Aj) - self-satisfied
3. revelation (N) - realization
4. abundant (Aj) - a lot of
5. elusive (Aj) - difficult to find
6. scatfold (N) - platform used for criminal exection
7. seraphic (Aj) - pure and sublime
8. emanation (N) - That which flows or proceeds from any object as a source
9. sardonic (Aj) - scornfully mocking
10. ingratiate (V) - to win favour by pleasing one
11. prelate (N) - a clergy man of high rank
12. affront (N) - to insult intentionally and openly

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13. melancholy (Aj) - sad
14. fanatic (A) - extremist
15. massacre (N) - slaughter
16. wishful (A) - thoughtful
17. asperities (N) - rough, harsh
18. countenance (N) - facial expression
19. ascetic (Aj) - self-controlled
20. unfathomable (Aj) - impossible to understand
21. hum-dream (A) - dull
22. incantation (N) - spell and charm
23. grimaces (N) - made up face
Check your progress:
A] Answer the following questions in one word/phrase/sentence.
1) What types of smiles are rare?
2) What is the essence of a smile?
3) Where do smiles dwell?
4) Whose smile reflects the untroubled sweetness of a child?
5) What is A.G.Gardiner’s pseudonym?
B) Rewrite the sentences by choosing the correct alternatives from those given
below.
1) Memorable smiles are__________
a) expected b) genuine c) unexpected d) hone of these
2) _________ laughed only once his life.
a) Philip II b) Mrs. Barbauld c) Lord Morley d) Frederic Lamond
3) To Gardiner, smiles like poets, are ________ not made.
a) taught b) copied c) born d) expressed

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 4) The most delightful example of the unexpected smile is that of __________
a) Frederic Lamond b) Philip II
c) Archbishop Temple d) Lord Morely
5) Smile is the only publication of the _________
a) inward spirit b) Outward spirit
c) mind d) thought
D) Make new words by using prefixes and suffixes given below.
-ation, im-, -ify, -est, re-, -ed, semi-, -ly, -ing
E) Give antonyms of the following words.
careful, modest, pleasant, private, spontaneity
1.3 Summary:
According to A.G.Gardiner the right sort of smile is better than the silver spoon
in the mouth. Smile disarms your enemy and can change your enemies into friends.
Rufus Isaacs’ debonair smile can help him to win many victories in law courts. In
politics too, a popular smile is the shortest cut to the great heart of democracy.
Mr.Lloyd George’s amazing success is due to his merry and mischievous smile
unlike Mr.Asquith whose smile was private and intellectual. A.G.Gardiner praises
friendly, infectious and healthy smile of the idolized public Man of America,
Theodore Roosevelt.
According to A.G.Gardiner first rate smiles are rare. Smiles add to our self
expression. If we are dull, they are dull. If we are sinister, they are sinister. If we are
smug, they emphasize our smugness. Terrible smile or sneering smile reflects inner
self. Harry lauder’s smile has the ability of making everybody happy. Lord Balfour’s
smile expresses the untroubled sweetness of a child.
A.G.Gardiner asserts that the most memorable smiles are those which have the
quality of the unexpected. The essence of a smile is its spontaneity and lack of
deliberation. Artificial smile is the worst smile. Gardiner exemplifies that the most
delightful unexpected smile is that of the pianist Frederic Lamond. Smiles, like poets
are born not made. Smile is the only publication of the inward sprit.

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1.4 Key to self check exercises
1.2.1 A) 1-d, 2-a, 3-b, 4-a, 5-c
B) 1) enemy – foe, debonair – gracious, merry-happy, popular-famous,
feelings – emotions
2) arrange – rearrange, arrangement
like – unlike, likewise
enjoy – enjoyment
health – healthy, unhealthy
end – ending, unending
1.2.2 A) 1) First rate smiles are rare.
2) The essence of a smile is its spontaneity and lack of deliberation.
3) Smiles dwell in the mind.
4) Lord Balfour’s smile expresses the untroubled sweetness of a child.
5) A.G.Gardiner’s pseudonym is ‘Alpha of the Plough’.
B) 1-c, 2-a, 3-c, 4-a, 5-a
C) ation-publication, examination
im- - impure, imperfect
-ify - satisfy, pacify
-est - cheapest, tallest
re - rewrite, resend
-ed - locked, printed
semi - semifinal, semistich
-ly - bravely, lightly
-ing - feeling, daring
D) careful x careless, modest x arrogant, pleasant x unpleasant, private x
public, spontaneity x deliberation

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1.5 Exercises:
A) Answer the following questions in 3 to 4 sentences each.
1) Why does Gardiner say that smile is better than a silver spoon in the
mouth?
2) Comment on Gardiner’s views about unexpected smiles.
3) When and how smiles become simply an attempt to circulate false news?
B) Write short notes on the following in 4 to 5 sentences each.
1) Debonair Smile
2) Gardiner’s views on smile
3) Infectious Smile
C) Vocabulary Exercises:
Make new words by using the prefixes and the suffixes given below.
-ation, im- , -ify, - est, -ed, re-, semi-
D) Writing Activity:
Write a paragraph about ‘Smile is the publication of the mind.’


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 Module
A) Description

Contents
2.0 Objectives
2.1 Introduction
2.2 Presentation of Subject matter
2.2.1 Sub-content I (Describing Persons)
(Check your progress I)
2.2.2 Sub-content II (Describing Places)
(Check your progress II)
2.2.3 Sub-content III (Describing Office)
(Check your progress III)
2.2.4 Sub-content IV (Describing Objects)
(Check your progress IV)
2.3 Summary
2.4 Answers to Check your progress
2.5 Exercises
2.6 Reference for further study

2.0 Objectives:
After studying this unit you will be able to:
• understand: about familiar objects, people and places.
• explain: important traits of objects, people and places.
• find relationship between: objects, people and places.

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2.1. Introduction:
In this unit you are going to learn how to describe a person, a place or a thing.
To describe them you need to choose appropriate words and correct language.
Normally places and things are described using Present Tense because places and
things are still there for all to see. But you can use Past Tense when you think of
them as a past experience. To describe a person you have to make use of Present
Tense as well as different adjectives as people vary in terms of their physical
appearance and personalities, and the words that are used to describe them are just as
varied.

2.2. Presentation of Subject matter

2.2.1 Sub-content I
Describing persons:
Description of a person is very important in certain practical situation.
Sometimes a missing person will have to be identified from a description given by
the members of his/her family. If a recent photograph is not available, then the
description will be the only means of identifying a person.
OR
When you describe a person, you have to state following things:
1. Whether a person is a man or woman, a boy or girl or a child.
2. Whether he/she is young/old/middle aged/ baby/ infant.
3. You have to make use of different adjectives to describe the face, the eyes, the
nose, the ears, the hair, the complexion and even the mood.
In short, you have to use appropriate vocabulary and it is important to have the
vocabulary because you may, at some point in your life, face a situation that requires
you to describe someone. Read the following descriptions:

Rekha has thick, curly hair fumbling down to her shoulders. Her face is round, and
she has large dark eyes with prominent eyebrows. She has a small straight nose. She
has a long neck and narrow shoulders.

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John has a squarish face, with a high forehead and short straight hair. His eyes are
small and eyebrows thin. He has a broad, curved nose and a small mouth. He has a
pointed chin. His ears are prominent.
Now look at the use of adjectives in above description:
. . . . . .thick curly hair
. . . . . has a broad curved nose
. . . . . a long neck and narrow shoulders
. . . . . has a pointed chin.
Adjectives play very important role in describing a person. See one more example:

This is a young woman with a round face. Her hair is thick black, long and parted in
the middle. She has a long nose. Her lips are thin and she has a short chin. Her eyes
are big with thin eyebrows. She must be around 30 years. She looks very happy.

Note the use of language in above description.

This is . . . . . . . . . .
She has . . . . . . . . . .
Her lips are. . . . . . .
Her hair is . . . . . . .
You can say:
This is a young man with an oval face.
His eyes are big and eyebrows are thick.
He has a protruding nose.
He has put on a shirt.
He looks cheerful.
The old man has white hair at the fringes just above the years.

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Prepositional phrases are used in above description to avoid repetition of ‘he has’
or ‘it is’
This is a young woman with a round face.
Her eyes are big with thin eyebrows.
As stated earlier, adjectives play vital role in describing a person. Here is a list
of adjectives you need for describing different persons and their features.
Physical stature –tall, short, of medium height
Complexion- fair, wheat colored, brown and dark
Face- angular, oval, square, long, round, wrinkled, freckled, with a beauty spot or a
mole, with a dimple in the chin, with a pointed beard and moustache
Nose- big, enormous, huge, large, nostrils, flat, curved, Roman, flat, beaky, hooked,
crooked, snub, tip-tilted, narrow, straight, pointed, sharp, little, small, stubby, tiny,
long, short, prominent, upturned
Eyes (shape) - large, small, round, squinty, hollow, tear-filled, big, heavy, hooded
Eyes- (color) - black, brown, hazel, green, blue
Hair – (style) – long, short, loosely cut, cropped, bunched at the back, parted in the
middle, parted at the side, ponytail, slicked down, curly, wavy
Hair- (color) - black, brown, grey, white, grey, silver
Build- small, slim; thin, plump, stout, solid, muscular
Forehead- broad, narrow, furrowed, wrinkled, smooth, sloping, high, large, small
Appearance- attractive, unattractive, impressive, unimpressive, good-looking,
pleasant-looking, beautiful, handsome, worried, cheerful, thoughtful
Now let us read the following description carefully:
The young girl stood at the entrance to the house. She appears to be sixteen years
old. She has a small, oval face with a sharp, upturned nose and a wide mouth. Her
hair is long, thick, plait thrown forward over her shoulder. Her eyes are small and
black. She has wore a plain salwar kameez with a printed dupatta. She is looking
towards distant fields.

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Look at the construction used in above the discussion:
She appears to be sixteen years old.
She has a small, oval face with a sharp, upturned nose and a wide mouth.
Her hair is long, thick, plait thrown forward over her shoulder.
She has wore a salwar kameez with a printed dupatta.
Check your progress: I
1. Write short descriptive passage about:
a) Your favourite cricketer
b) Your best Teacher

2.2.2. Sub-content II
Describing Places:
In describing building or place you need to give as many details as you can. You
must be able to describe all that you see. While describing a place or a building you
should mention following things:
1. Location
2. Size
3. Special features
4. Other interesting information connected with it.
Read the description given below carefully:
This is Sharada’s home. It is located in the East End of the city. The house is large
and imposing with sparkling whitewashed walls and a sloping, red-tiled roof. There
are long narrow windows facing the front, all shuttered against the mid-morning
heat. Eight granite steps lead to a long verandah at the entrance to which stood thick
pillars made of old polished woods. Facing the pillared entrance is a large wooden
door with a solid metal latch on which hung old fashioned lock. There is nobody
around but the sound of hurrying feet and light, happy chatter can be heard coming
from the depths of the house.

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Note the use of language in above description:
It is located. . . . . . . . . .
The house is large and imposing with . . . . . . . . .
Eight granite steps lead to . . . . . . . . .
Facing the. . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . on which hung old fashioned lock.
Use the following words/phrases while describing building or place.
Location Size Special features
Seaside Large Domes gates
Riverside Small Towers balconies
On the top of a hill Huge Carvings statues
In a valley Tiny Arches
In the heart of the town Imposing windows
The Structures - It is. . . . ., There is. . . . . ., My house is . . . . ., My college is. . . . .,
It has. . . . . ., are very commonly used in description.
Following adjectives may be used in describing a building:
Adjectives of size - big, small, broad, narrow, short, tall etc.
Adjectives of quality - beautiful, wonderful, calm, quiet, pleasing etc.
You may use following structures to describe part or features of a place.
It has two windows.
The temple has stone walls.
Check your progress: II
Describe the following places writing a paragraph on each on them.
1. A temple
2. Your favourite Hill Station

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2.2.3 Sub-content III
Describing an Office:
Sometimes we visit any office for our personal work. Each office has a typical
appearance. Read the following description of a typical office:
It is a modern office. It is located on the second floor of the building. To the right
hand there is a posh counter. A lady sits there as a receptionist. There is a phone by
her side and switch- board in front of her to contact the manager and other sections
through intercom. To the left hand side, there are comfortable wooden chairs for
visitors. The door at the left hand corner leads to the main office. In this office there
is a large wooden table of the section officer. Opposite to this table, there are three
tables with a filing cabinet. These tables are for three senior clerks. At the corner of
the office, there is a table with a computer and printer. A computer operator sits at
this table. On the table of the officer, there is a computer with a printer and a
scanner, a pen stand, a tray to keep files etc. On every table, there is a computer
with a printer, a pen stand and a tray to keep files. There is a small bulletin board on
the wall with a calendar. At the other corner, there is a dust-bin. The office looks
very decent as the floor is covered by the red carpet.

Note the important things used in this description:

1. A simple present tense is used.
2. The structures ‘there is and ‘there are’ are frequently used.
3. Prepositional phrases, which indicate place or location, are commonly used.
to the right, to the left, in front of, at the corner, on the table, on the wall etc.
4. Look at the constructions used in the above description
To the right hand, there is a posh counter.
The door at the left corner leads to the main office.
On the table of the officer, there is a. . . . . . . .
Here are some steps you follow when you describe an office:
1. Location of the office

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2. Areas in the office
3. The work place
4. The equipment and stationary.
1. Location of the office- This explains where is an office located. This could
include the name of the building and the floor.

2. Areas in the office- This explains the different areas or spaces within the
office such as conference room, canteen, recreation room etc.

3. Office equipment and Stationary- This refers to the materials in the office.
This include table, chair, laptop, printer, pens, paper, stapler, clips etc.

4. The workplace- This describes the exact spot in the office where daily tasks
are done. The work place consists of the basic office equipment needed to do
the job.

Here are some more examples of the structures:

The LIC office is on the second floor of the Tara Terrace.
The finance team sits near to the conference room.
There is a big, green leather chair by the desk of the boss.
The office had been recently remodeled, and its new furniture includes a huge
bookcase, and a table with a computer and a printer.
The floor of the office is covered by a bright, red carpet that has a pattern of large
white rings.
Below the table there is a cupboard where books are kept.
On the table there is an inkpot, blotting paper and a pen.
There is a sofa next to the main entrance.

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Check your progress: III
1. Write a detailed description of your college office.

2.2.4 Sub-content IV
Describing Objects:
When you describe an object you have to describe three things:
1. Its category or class
2. Its characteristics
3. Its function or use
See for example:
A pressure cooker is a vessel in which food is cooked. It consists of a very strong
vessel made of aluminium alloy, with a lid that fits tightly on the top. The lid can
be sealed on the vessel by a means of a rubber ring. At the centre of the lid there is
a vent, or a whole through which steam can escape. There is a handle attached to
the lid. There is also a handle attached to the vessel also. They are made of hard
fiber.

Note the structures used in the above description:

1. A pressure cooker is a vessel. . . . .
2. It consists of. . . . .
3. There is a vent . . . . . . . .
4. There is a handle attached to. . . . .
Now study the following description of a Tractor:
A Tractor –
A tractor is a vehicle. It is used for farm work and carrying loads. There are two
independents units. There is a tractor and a trolly. A tractor is divided into two parts.
The first part consists of engine and the second part consists of its system for a

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driver.
A tractor has its engine ahead of a driver. The engine also has a narrow shape
with a bonnet on it. The engine is carried with the front two wheels which are a
smaller size than the rear wheels. On the bonnet of the engine there is an exhaust
pipe taken upwards so that the smoke may go up in the sky.
Adjoining the engine, there is a second part- the driver. There is a steering
wheel between the driver and the engine. On the right side of the driver, there is a
lever. At the left foot of the driver, there is a clutch. There is a pedal operating breaks
at the right foot of the driver. The rear wheels of the tractor are bigger than the front
wheels. There are side indicators on the mudguard of rear wheels. And, there are
headlamps on the guard on the front side above the front wheels.

Look at the constructions used in the above description:

A tractor is a vehicle . . . . . .
It is used for. . . . . . . . .
There is an . . . . . . . . . .
On the right side of the driver, there is. . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . at the right foot of the driver
Check your progress: IV
1) Now try to give description of the following things with the help of the points
given above
a) A Fridge
b) A cell phone

2.3 Summary
The present unit presents short pieces of description of people, objects, offices
and places showing structures useful for writing descriptions of familiar things,
people and places. The unit introduces structures and vocabulary useful for writing
descriptions of things familiar to students. The unit is interspersed with self-check
exercises for the students to practice writing. Model answers of these self-check

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exercises are provided for them to check their own answers and make corrections
where necessary.

2.4 Answers to Check your progress

Check your progress I : Answers:
a) Your favourite cricketer
My favourite cricketer is Virat Kohli. He is twenty eight years old. His
Nickname is Cheeku. He is over 5 ft 9 in (1.75 m) tall and has a muscular physique.
He is a very physical type of player. He likes to impose himself on the game, backs it
up with his skill. He has dark black eyes and straight black hair. Kohli is
superstitious. He wears black wristbands as a cricket superstition; earlier, he used to
wear the same pair of gloves with which he had "been scoring". Apart from a
religious black thread, he has also been wearing a kara on his right arm since 2012.
Born and raised in Delhi, Kohli represented the city's cricket team at various age-
group levels before making his first-class debut in 2006. He captained India Under-
19s to victory at the 2008 Under-19 World Cup in Malaysia, and a few months later,
made his ODI debut for India against Sri Lanka at the age of 19. Initially having
played as a reserve batsman in the Indian team, he soon established himself as a
regular in the ODI middle-order and was part of the squad that won the 2011 World
Cup. He made his Test debut in 2011. A typical modern-day cricketer, Virat Kohli
plays his game aggressively, bares his emotions loudly in public, yet retains the
element of maturity that forms an integral part of every good and great player. Virat
loves eating fresh home cooked food. Eating less to be in shape doesn’t seem to be
Virat’s idea of staying fit. He is not shy of eating food but he is not a food junkie. He
has a gym in his house where he works out with his personal trainer for three hours
every day. The rest of the day is spent in practicing, driving and with friends. He has
four cars including an open sports car and huge collection of dark glasses and
designer watches.
b) Your Best Teacher
M. N. Kulkarni was my favourite teacher at school. He used to teach us English.
He could make learning grammar also a very enjoyable class. He used to tell us
interesting jokes while teaching. He was sympathetic and quite helpful when we
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about thirty-five years old. He was fat and about six feet tall. He had fair
complexion, and he sported thin moustache. He used to smile quite a lot while
teaching. I hardly remember him to be angry. He made us speak English, read aloud
in the class and we were never afraid of answering questions in his class. M. N.
Kulkarni used to play cricket very well. He was also good singer. In our annual
gathering, he used to sing classical songs. He was really a best and ideal teacher in
our school.
Check your progress II: Answers:
1. A Temple
Ours is a small village on the bank of the river Chikutra. The river Chikutra and
the temple outside the village, on the bank of the river are our most attractive places
in our village. The temple is very old. It is said that it was built about three hundred
years ago. It is a stone temple and it has beautiful natural surroundings. It is the
temple of Lord Shiva. There are massive stone pillars as we enter the temple. The
floor is also of black stone and very cool. There are massive stone windows, which
allow the rays of the sun to light the hall of the temple. There are steps to get down to
the Shiva Lingam in the sanctorum. Inside, it is rather dark, but there is an oil lamp
burning in it. There is a priest, who lives nearby, and looks after the temple. Every
Monday, people of the village gather at the temple, performing Puja. On the day of
Mahashivaratri, there is a huge gathering at the temple. People of the village, old and
young, came to the temple every morning and evening. It is a favourite place for all.
2. Your favourite Hill Station
My favourite hill station is Mahabaleshwar. It is 1,372 meters above sea level,
around Lake Venna, is the highest hill station in the Western Ghats of Maharashtra.
It is one of the most spectacular and the largest of Maharashtra hill-stations.
Mahabaleshwar in Sanskrit means God of Great Power. The Britishers built various
mansions, cottages and bungalows around the town, lending it a charming,
sophistication. There are 30 valley viewpoints with panoramic vistas scattered
around the hill station and their access roads make for shady, pleasant walks and
treks. Mahabaleshwar along with Panchgani makes the most popular hill resorts in
the Maharashtra state of India. Far away from the madding crowds the hill resort
makes an excellent holiday destination. The natural beauty of Mahabaleshwar
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alike. The heat and the dust of the plains give way to the cool breezes and the
gorgeous greens of Mahabaleshwar. The hill resort of Mahabaleshwar derives its
name from the God "Mahabali". There is a temple dedicated to Lord Mahabali
namely the old Mahabaleshwar Temple.
Check your progress III: Answers
1. Description of your college office.
My college name is ADACS College, Kolhapur. My college office is a modern
office. It is located in the first floor of the building. To the left hand there is a posh
counter. A boy sits there as a receptionist. There is a phone by his side and switch-
board in front of him to contact the principal and other sections through intercom. To
the right hand side, there are comfortable wooden chairs for visitors. The door at the
left hand corner leads to the main office. In this office there is a large wooden cabin
for O.S. Opposite to this table, there are four tables with a filing cabinet. These
tables are for senior and junior clerks. At the corner of the office, there is a table with
a computer and printer, scanner, a pen stand, a tray to keep files etc. There is a small
bulletin board on the wall with a calendar. At the other corner, there is a dust-bin.
The office looks very decent as the floor is covered by the brown carpet.
Check your progress IV: Answers
1. Fridge
A fridge is a very useful and necessary device in the kitchen. It is very useful to
store fruits, vegetables, milk, ice-cream, pickles, jams, cold-drinks, etc. We can use it
to keep some special medicines in it. There are four compartments inside the fridge,
and a shelf inside its door. The uppermost compartment is the freezer in which we
can keep a tray for ice-cubes, and in the space by its side, we can keep ice-cream
cups, cadbury, etc. The last one is a bigger well, in which we can keep vegetables.
We can use fridge for making ice-cream at home, putting the ice-cream maker in the
freezer.
2. A cell-phone
A cell-phone is a very useful and necessary device for everyone in modern
world. My cell-phone is the latest Samsung J7 model, which is not only a phone, but
also a device for storing all essential information, a telephone directory, financial
transaction, addresses, etc. I can use for it for sending and receiving messages. My

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cell-phone provides immense entertainment to me. I have stored in it all my favourite
songs and movies. It has a powerful camera in it, and a device to attach it to my
laptop. I use my cell-phone to keep record of my financial transactions, bank account
numbers, gas booking account, electricity bill account, and all essential information,
such as my C. V. postal addresses, etc. my cell-phone is always with me, wherever I
go. There many useful apps which provide information about train, weather, rain,
health, etc.

2.5 Exercises:
1. Write a description of an old person you know. Try to include the following
information:
Is he or she tall or short, fat or thin? What is the shape of persons face-round,
oval or square? Does the person have thick hair? Is the hair straight or curly? Is
the forehead broad or narrow? Is the nose straight, or upturned or flat? How is
he or she dressed? What impression do you get of his or her personality from the
person’s appearance and dress?
2. Write a description of your house with the help of following points.
a) Location
b) Its material
c) Its special features.
3. Write a description of a calculator.

2.6 Reference for further study:

1. Read biographies of famous people and note how they describe their days at
school.

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 B) The Unknown Citizen
W.H. Auden

Contents
2.0 Objectives
2.1 Introduction
2.2 The Poem
2.3 Terms to Remember
2.4 Check your progress
2.5 Answers to Check your progress
2.6 Summary
2.7 Exercises
2.8 Reference for further study

2.0 Objectives:
After studying this unit you will be able to:
• understand wit and irony in complaining about bureaucratic, semi-socialist
Western societies.
• explain an ironical picture of a model citizen in a modern Urban-industrial
society
• find relationship between modern man and society.

2.1 Introduction:
Wystan Hugh Auden (21 February 1907 – 29 September 1973) was an English
poet, who later became an American citizen. He is best known for love poems such
as "Funeral Blues," poems on political and social themes like "September 1, 1939"
and "The Shield of Achilles," poems on cultural and psychological themes such
as 'The Age of Anxiety', and poems on religious themes such as "For the Time
Being" and "Horae Canonica".

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 'The Unknown Citizen', a light satirical lyric, was first published in the Listener,
August 1939, and was later included in Collected Shorter Poems, 1950. It presents an
ironical picture of a model citizen in a modern Urban-industrial society.
1) The Poem:
To JS/07 M 378
This Marble Monument
Is Erected by the State)

He was found by the Bureau of Statistics to be

One against whom there was no official complaint,
And all the reports on his conduct agree
That, in the modern sense of an old-fashioned word, he was a saint,
For in everything he did he served the Greater Community.
Except for the War till the day he retired
He worked in a factory and never got fired,
But satisfied his employers, Fudge Motors Inc.
Yet he wasn’t a scab or odd in his views,
For his Union reports that he paid his dues,
(Our report on his Union shows it was sound)
And our Social Psychology workers found
That he was popular with his mates and liked a drink.
The Press are convinced that he bought a paper every day
And that his reactions to advertisements were normal in every way.
Policies taken out in his name prove that he was fully insured,
And his Health-card shows he was once in hospital but left it cured.
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 He was fully sensible to the advantages of the Installment Plan
And had everything necessary to the Modern Man,
A phonograph, a radio, a car and a frigidaire.
Our researchers into Public Opinion are content
That he held the proper opinions for the time of year;
When there was peace, he was for peace: when there was war, he went.
He was married and added five children to the population,
Which our Eugenist says was the right number for a parent of his generation.
And our teachers report that he never interfered with their education.
Was he free? Was he happy? The question is absurd:
Had anything been wrong, we should certainly have heard.

2.3 Terms to Remember:

To JS/07 M 378 : The statistical records refer to a man by numbers. Auden is here
ridiculing the practice by which man is reduced a mere number.
he was a saint : a perfect citizen who upheld the values of the society in which he
lived.
the Greater Community: Society or the nation
got fired : dismissed from his post
Fudge, Motors, Inc : The name of the company in which he worked.
Scab : a mean, worthless fellow who does not even pay the membership fee of his
trade union
mates : colleagues
odd (adj) : whimsical
Producers Research and High-Grade Living : names of the two firms
Phonograph : gramophone
Frigdaire : refrigerator
Our researchers ……
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….the time of year : the sentence is ironical. He had no firm opinion, his opinion
changed from time to time. He was an opportunist.
Eugenist (n) : a scientist who studies the problem of population control
Was he free? Was he happy? ............ heard : These lines are again ironical. There is
total regimentation in modern industrial society, and man is reduced to a mere
number. He loses all individuality and becomes a mere number.

2.4 Check your progress

A) Rewrite the following sentences by choosing the correct alternatives.
1. The present poem ‘The Unknown Citizen’ is written by-------------------.
a) W.H. Auden b) W. B. Yeats
c) T. S. Eliot c) D. H. Lawrence
2. He worked in a factory and he was never------------------.
a) got fired b) paid for his job
c) offered promotion d) granted leaves
3. The health-card of the 'Unknown Citizen' shows that he was ---------------in
hospital.
a) once b) twice c) never d) many times
4. According to Auden man is reduced to a mere---------------.
a) number b) entity c) voter d) citizen
5. 'The Unknown Citizen' added-------------------to the population.
a) five b) two c) three d) six
B) Answer the following questions in one sentence each:
1. What is the poem about?
2. Where did the Unknown Citizen work?
3. What do teachers report about him?
4. Why does the poet call him a saint?
5. What are the things he possesses?

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2.5 Answers to check your progress
A) The correct alternatives.
1. a) W.H. Auden.
2. a) got fired.
3. a) once
4. a) number.
5. a) five
B) Answer the following questions in one sentence each:
i) The poem is about wit and irony in complaining about bureaucratic, semi-
socialist Western societies.
ii) The Unknown Citizen works in a factory, Fudge Motors Inc.
iii) Teachers report about him is that he never interfered with their education.
iv) The poet calls him a saint because he was a perfect citizen who upheld the
values of the society in which he lived.
v) The things he possesses are a phonograph, a radio, a car and a frigidaire.

2.6 Summary :
A marble monument marks the burial site of a citizen known only by his
alphanumeric identity: JS/07 M 378. In words etched on the monument, the
government praises the “Unknown Citizen” for supporting and conforming to the
will of the state. For example, he always held government-approved opinions, never
once advocating a controversial idea. If the government declared war, he did not
question the decision. Instead, he put on his uniform and followed the crowd to the
battlefield. If it declared peace, he accepted that decision too and returned to society.
In short, he led a life of exemplary docility and submissiveness. ....... Moreover, he
was consistent, holding the same job for his entire life. Not one to arouse discontent
on the job, he never said or did anything to anger company bosses or union
representatives. When reading the paper, he avoided perusing stories about
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 At home, he supported the national economy by having all the right things—a
phonograph, a radio, a car, and a refrigerator. To his credit, the government
eugenicist found, he had the right number of children. By being a good sheep and
following the government shepherd, he without doubt led a happy, contented life.

2.7 Exercises:
A) Answer the following questions in 3 to 4 sentences each.
1. How was the work performance of the Unknown Citizen in a factory?
2. What do Producers Research and High-grade living declare about the
Unknown Citizen?
3. What is the opinion about the Unknown Citizen of the Researchers into
Public Opinion?
B) Write Short notes on the following in 4 to 5 sentences each.
1. An ironical picture of a model citizen
2. The central idea of the poem
3. The depiction of the loss of individuality in the modern society

2.8 Writing Activity:

1) Write an essay on a model citizen in modern Indian society.

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 Module 3
A) Narration

Index
3.0 Objectives
3.1 Introduction
3.2 Presentation of subject matter
3.2.1 Section I
Check your progress
3.2.2 Section II
Check your progress
3.2.3 Section III
Check your progress
3.2.4 Section IV
3.3 Summary
3.4 Terms to remember
3.5 Answers to check your progress
3.6 Exercise

3.0 Objectives:
After studying this unit you will be able to:
1. understand the skill of narration.
2. explain how to talk about past or present incidents, events and experiences.

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3.1 Introduction
In the previous Module, you studied ‘Description Skill' where you studies that in
describing things, places or people what you need is the knowledge of the use of
present tense. Likewise, in learning the skill of ‘Narration’ you need to know the use
of or the knowledge of the use of past tense. This skill is important in your social as
well as professional life.

3.2 Presentation of subject matter :

I) Narration is used for narrating past experiences. It is also used in news
reports and storytelling, usually in some kind of chronological order. It also means
any kind of explaining or telling something. We like to listen the stories, especially
the scary ghost stories around a campfire. The narrator of a story may be a named
character in the story or an outside observer. This narrator or a character or author’s
persona that tells a story-control everything you know about the characters and the
events.
This Narrator can be a FIRST PERSON narrator where an "I" (occasionally a
"we") speaks from his/her subject position. This kind of narrator is usually a
character in the story interacting with other characters. We see those interactions
through the narrator's eyes (point of view) and we can't know the things that
the narrator doesn't know.
The other type of narration gives us a THIRD PERSON point of view. It is told
by a narrator who is not part of the story and generally uses pronouns such as: he,
she, it, they, them, their, him, her, it's, etc.
See for example:
Vijay was a natural motivator. If an employee was having a bad day, Vijay was
there telling the employee how to look on the positive side of the situation.
This really made curious and so I went up to Vijay and asked him, “I don’t get it!
You can’t be a positive person all the time. How do you do it?”
Vijay replied, “Each morning I wake up and tell myself that I have two choices
today: I can choose to be in a good mood or I can choose to be in a bad mood.
And every day, I choose to be in a good mood. Each time something bad happens, I

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“Yeah, right, it’s not that easy,” I replied.

OR
Avinash was a shy but mentally disabled boy. He had no close relative when his
mother died. When he retired to an orphanage, a teenage boy named Dilip became
his friend. It was only Dilip who used to talk to him, take care of him. He taught
him first learning lessons and also taught him the skills of gardening. Meanwhile,
Dilip started taking Avinash to a restaurant across the street and near a hardware
store. When Avinash saw Manda, the tough manager of the hardware store, he falls
in love with her. He began leaving flowers for her in front of the store at the early
daybreak. Although Manda doesn’t find who is giving her flowers, the unexpected
daily gift of beautiful flowers made her happy.

Let’s start with these interesting stories:

What is the difference between the narrations of these two stories?
1) In the first story, the narrator (using the first-person pronoun ‘I’) is a character in
the story. We can hear and see only what the narrator hears and sees.
2) In the second story, the narrator is an outside observer and plays no part in the
story but can tell us what all the characters are thinking and feeling. He
indirectly tells us that Santosh is shy and mentally disabled.
3) Though the narrator of the second story is not a part of the story, he/she knows
everything. He/she knows all the details about the character (Avinash) and
reveals him to us. Interesting, isn’t it?
When you read newspapers you must see that many of the news items/news
reports do tell something that has happened in the past especially happened on the
last day. The reporter narrates it from his point of view.
You can also narrate some personal experiences or report some past happenings
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Read the following newsreport for example:
To spread awareness of the importance of wearing helmets among two-wheeler
riders, yesterday police observed a road safety rally. It was held as part of the ‘Road
Safety Week’ observed throughout the district.
Around 400 police personnel and 200 riding enthusiasts from different biker
groups took part in the rally. It was jointly flagged off at the police headquarters by
the police commissioner.
Over 1600 helmets and masks were distributed to the police personnel during
the rally. Sensitizing locals on following traffic rules and regulations from a smooth
and safe ride, the participants also appealed to the motorists and pillion riders to
wear helmets, for their own safety.
Making an appeal to everyone to follow rules, commissioner said, “Following
traffic rules is for our own security and the security of our loved ones.”

This is narrated by a reporter making use of simple past tense. e.g.

Observed was held
took part was jointly flagged off
were distributed appealed
In such kind of narrations, we find the use of past tense. You know that a
construction turns into past tense either by using verb forms as was/were or is
regularly formed in by attaching–ed to the main verb or by using the past participle
of the main verb.
For example:
i) The last train reached the Orange City in time. (to reach (v) – reached (simple
past))
ii) Shweta received a letter from the employment office a week ago. (to receive (v)
– received (simple past))
iii) Sachin earned ten thousand rupees in his first attempt of the negotiations. (to
earn (v) – earned (simple past))

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iv) Yogita and Jay visited Mauritius in the month of December last year. (to visit
(v) – visited (simple past))
It is not that only affixing –ed suffix makes past tense of the main verb.
There are also irregular past forms of the verbs also:
to speak spoke (not speaked)
to eat ate (not eated)
to understand understood (not understanded)
to begin began (not begined)
to meet met (not meted)
There are also irregular past and pastparticiple forms of the verbs. Note that
some English verbs have the same forms for present, past and pastparticiple,
e.g. cut, split, hit, quit, set, spread, burst, put, etc.
the base, (infinitive) simple past past participle
buy bought bought
cut cut cut
eat ate eaten
know knew known
hit hit hit

These types of verbs are confusing for those who are learning English as a
second or third language. So you need to study these types of verbs and try to make a
list of them using a good dictionary and any grammar book from your library.
Remember that a good narrative skill requires a sequence of past and past perfect
tense.
The other distinction is of the use of past participle.
We use the verb had and the past participle for the past perfect:
The past perfect is used in the same way as the present perfect, but it refers to a
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See for example:
1. When we reached there, we found that he had managed to call his mother.
2. She didn’t want to move. She had lived in that village all her life.
3. I was sorry when the factory closed. I had worked there since I left school.
4. My eighteenth birthday was the worst day I had ever had.
5. I couldn’t get into the house. I had lost my keys.
6. I wish I hadn’t spent so much money last month.
Here, the clause ‘when we reached there’ shows a point in the past and his
action of calling mother was over. So we have a past perfect tense with a grammar
equation.
had + past participle
See the following example of narration of a personal experience.
I first met Preetam on the day I turned thirteen. She was the new girl in school
and, as luck or fate would have it, the only spare desk in the maths class that morning
was the desk next to mine. Of course, it was difficult for me to speak to her. I could
not look at her, even, except for a secret glance or two when she was preoccupied
with the tedious quadratic equations the teacher was trying to explain on the board,
but by the end of that first lesson I had already fallen in love with her.
It took another three weeks of silence and secret glances before I found out
Preetam felt the same way about me. Her older sister's best friend - a big girl, in
every dimension, and certainly not a girl to argue with - pulled me into the bike sheds
one afternoon by my tie and told me Preetam thought I was cute and if I didn't do
something about it soon I was dead. Within an hour, I had asked Preetam to the
cinema next Saturday.

The other important thing that you should know while narrating experience is
the use of time-markers. While referring your past experiences or memories what do
you do? You try to relate your reflections using some timemarkers such as BEFORE,
LATER, SOON, STILL, EVER SINCE, etc. These time-markers introduce a time
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 after so much time after that at first
before beginning, ending eventually
earlier even when ever since
following from then on from, to
in time last later
meanwhile near, far next
while, now over soon
still the next day then

See how these/such types of time-markers are used in the following passage:
The Prime Minister today announced the Commonwealth Games would be held
smoothly, despite delays in the preparation of venues. He also made it clear that
construction rubble would be cleared from roads by the end of this month.
Meanwhile, the Sports Ministry has called for a high-level meeting on Monday to
discuss the final touches to the Games. There would be three levels of activity, a
spokesperson for the Ministry told today. Firstly, a team of top security experts
would visit the venue to seal all entries. After that, international observers would
inspect the facilities, and finally, the PM would himself visit the stadium before
declaring the games venues ready. However, work of the venues would be halted
next week, as it wanted the contractors to clear all venues and roads of the
construction waste and heavy machinery that still blocked many of the streets of
the city. In spite of the delay that might cause, the ministry believed that the games
would begin on time. In short, everything would be done to make this
commonwealth games the greatest sports event ever organised by a Third World
Country.

The use of such kind of adverb clause relates the action of the main clause.
For example:
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2. While waiting for the food to arrive, we were happy to sit and chat in the
relaxing surroundings.
3. Later, as they walked back to their bedroom, Sumit looked up at window.
4. Before I got out of bed, I spent a little time thinking about what I'll be doing the
rest of the day.
Most of the times, these time expressions are needed to arrange sequence of
actions in your narration. These expressions help you arrange your past experience in
a specific chronological order.
For example:
1. To begin with, I made all necessary preparations for making a cup of tea.
2. At first, I took a teapot and put it on the gas-stove.
3. Then, I added sufficient amount of milk and water.
4. Lateron, I added a tablespoon of sugar and allowed it to boil.
5. After some time, I added a teaspoon of tea powder.
6. In the end, I allowed this mixture to boil for few more minutes.
7. Finally, I enjoyed my first recipe, my own cup of tea.
You can also narrate your tea-making experience in the following manner.
How I prepared my first cup of tea
Last evening some of my friends came to my house. My mother was not at home.
So I myself had to make tea for my friends. I seated them in the drawing room.
Then I went to the kitchen and lighted a stove. I put some water into the kettle and
placed it on the stove. After some time the water began to boil. Now I put some
tea-leaves and sugar into the boiling water. Again I let it boil for a few seconds.
Then I added milk to it. The tea was ready to serve. It gave a very good flavour. I
poured it into the tea-pot and covered the tea-pot with a lid. I arranged the tea-pot,
cups and saucers in a tray and served to my friends. I was happy that they all liked
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TASK 1
Check your progress
(a) Rewrite the following sentences using appropriate simple past and past
perfect forms of the verbs given in the brackets:
1. I lost the key that he (give) to me.
2. He told me that he (watch) the film.
3. I went outside as I (hear) a noise.
4. When they came home, Anisa (cook) dinner.
5. We could not send you a postcard because we (lose) your address.
6. The storm (destroy) the house that they had built.
7. When they went out to play, she (finish) her homework.
8. She (eat) all of the food that we had made.
9. He (fail) to identify him in this meeting.
(b) Complete the following piece of incomplete narration with the help of
appropriate time markers and linkers.
Manager of a firm advertised - night watchman - applicants presented -
manager not satisfied - found something wrong with each man - there was Raju
- an applicant - sat in a corner - patiently waiting - his turn came - manager
found nothing wrong in his appearance - questioned about his health - got the
reply - I suffering from sleeplessness - manager happy - appointed him
(c) Narrate your experience:
i. Narrate the experience of your birthday celebration this year.
ii. Narrate the experience of your participation in college NSS camp.
iii. Narrate your college tour experience.
iv. Do you remember your first kitchen experience? Narrate it in your own
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II) Use of linking words and phrases :
When you narrate a past event or experience, you need to use time-linkers to
link clauses and sentences in a paragraph. See, for example, the expressions
underlined in the following examples:
Last Sunday, I went to the railway station to see off my uncle. The platform
presented a colourful scene. There were a large number of passengers on the
platform. Some of them were sitting on their luggage. Some were just standing and
talking. The hawkers and vendors were selling their wares. Coolies were bringing in
the luggage on their heads and shoulders. Some railway porters were moving about
with their trolleys loaded with bundles and parcels. The train was a little late. Some
passengers became impatient. They went to the edge of the platform again and
again to see if the train was coming. At last the train came in. It was crowded.
Passengers ran from one compartment to the other to find seats. There was a good
deal of jostling. I elbowed my way in and was able to get a good seat for my uncle.
After about ten minutes, the engine whistled and the guard waved his green flag.
The train left the station, and now there was clam again.

In the same way, you need linkers or linking expressions which express reasons,
purpose, contrast, consequence, comparison, or to make additions and to give
examples, etc.
While narration, time markers, linking words and phrases can be helpful in
presenting your views and opinions powerfully. These linkers are used for various
purposes such as for supporting our opinions, giving emphasis, showing agreement
or disagreement or other such common purposes. However, these words have
different meanings, nuances, and connotations. Before using a particular linker, be
sure of its meaning and usage. Some of the linking words and phrases are as follows:
Linking words used to show effect, result or consequences:
as a result, for, consequently, under those circumstances, thus, therefore, in that
case, because, thereupon, for this reason, henceforth, hence, accordingly, hence,
etc.

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Linking words used for your agreement or showing similarity:
in the first place, again, moreover, not only ... but also, as well as, as a matter of
fact, together with, in addition, likewise, comparatively, in the same fashion,
similarly, furthermore, by the same way, etc.
Linking words used in supporting examples, emphasis or point of view:
in other words, to put it differently, in fact, in particular, as an illustration, to be
sure, in detail, in this case, for this reason, to put it another way, that is to say,
with attention to, by all means, surely, certainly, etc.
Linking words used to suggest time/chronology:
at the present time, after, henceforth, from time to time, later, whenever,
sooner or later, eventually, until, meanwhile, further, to begin with, since,
during, in due time, as soon as, prior to, by the time, all of a sudden,
immediately, formerly, suddenly, presently, finally, occasionally, etc
Linking words used to suggest space, location or place:
in the middle, here, further, to the left/right, beyond that, on this side, in the
distance, here and there, in the background, in the centre of, opposite to, near,
above, below, under, between, across, behind, alongside, etc.
Linking words used in showing opposition / limitation / contradiction:
although, although this may be true, but, in contrast, still instead, different from,
unlike, whereas, of course ... but, despite, on the other hand, on the contrary,
otherwise, at the same time, however, in spite of, besides, rather, above all,
notwithstanding, after all, in reality, etc.
Linking words used in cause/ condition / purpose:
in the event that, in this case, then, provided that, as / so long as, unless, given
that, on (the) condition (that), even if, with this intention, so as to, in the hope
that, while, due to, in view of, because of, etc.
There are many more. It is necessary for you to learn the use of these link words
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For example:
• As soon as he earned his diploma, he got a good job.
• Could you ask her to respond my call as soon as possible?
• While she was doing some shopping, she met one of her friends.
• The girl kept playing with her mobile phone during the whole movie.
• During the holiday, I didn’t read even a single book.
• By the time the waiter took our order, we had waited for an hour.
• By the time we found a shelter, we had already got wet.
• I studied until midnight last night.
• She had looked after the babies until I came back from a three-day holiday.

TASK 2
Check your progress
Use the following linking words or connecting/cohesive devices in your own
sentences suggesting various purpose/s.
linking words/connecting/cohesive devices to...

ADDITION TIME PLACE COMPARISON CONTRAST

furthermore immediately opposite in the same way nevertheless
to
in addition meantime beyond similarly on the contrary
even more simultaneously nearby in like manner and yet
finally until now adjacent in similar fashion on the other
to hand
besides sometimes below likewise at the same
time

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III) Some more examples of Narration :
Narration is not always narration of action or event. It may be narration of
details of life of someone. There may not be single words or linking expressions as
above, but there is a sequence of sentences according to birth, schooling, higher
education, achievements in person’s life. For example, see how the biographical
details of a person are expanded into a small passage:
Prafulla Chandra Ray was born on 2 August, 1861 in the district of Jessore, now in
Bangladesh, close to the birthplace of Madhusudan Dutt, widely regarded as the
Milton of Bengal. It was the best of times and the worst… The British had by now
perfected their role as masters and British values permeated the Indian upper classes
to the very last detail like table manners. That of course, was not the worst of the
British influence. What was far more demeaning to the educated Indians – and there
were several – was the fact that senior government positions were closed to them.
Being forfeited of one’s right in one’s land of birth would become the rallying point
for the Indian intelligentsia in the years to come. Ray’s father Harish Chandra Ray, a
man of learning and taste, was closely associated with the cultural and intellectual
leaders of the time and exerted great influence on his son. Ray had his early
schooling in the village school founded by his father but soon his father shifted to
Calcutta and at the age of nine, little Prafulla set eyes for the first time, on the
bustling city that would be his home for many years to come. He was filled with
wonder at the ever-changing sights and sounds – the city seemed to change moods
ever so often! His formal schooling was interrupted due to illness but that did not
affect his education.
See another example of the first-person narration where the narrator is telling of his
childhood memories.
I was born in a middle-class Tamil family in the island town of Rameswaram in the
Madras State. My father, Jainulabdeen, had neither much formal education nor much
wealth; despite these disadvantages, he possessed great innate wisdom and a true
generosity of spirit. He had an ideal helpmate in my mother, Ashiamma. I do not
recall the exact number of people she fed every day, but I am quite certain that far
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TASK 3
Check your progress
Now from the following details of Chhatrapati Shivaji Maharaj, write a small
paragraph with a proper sequence of events and by making use of appropriate verbs
and time-linkers / expressions.
Chhatrapati Shivaji Maharaj

1630 born at fort Shivneri

1647 conquered fort Torna and Rohida
1656 captured Jaoli from Yeshwantrao (Chandrarao) More
1659 killed Afzal Khan (Bijapur)
1660 escape from Siddhi Johar’s siege (Fort Panhala), battle of Pawan Khind
1663 attacked Shahiste Khan at Lal Mahal, Pune
1664 looted Surat, the prosperous trade centre of Aurangzeb
1665 treaty ofPurandar, Mirzaraja Jaysing
1666 visit to Agra and the escape
1674 crowned, the title of Maharaja Chhatrapati (Fort Raigad)
1676 Karnataka expedition
1680 died (Fort Raigad)

IV) Narrating from a different point of view:

You can narrate an event or a story as the third person. For example, a news
item is a narration by a third person. The same story or an event can be narrated by
the person involved in the event and number of changes will take place in such a
narration.
Read the following incident:
My mother wanted to have some postage stamps and envelopes. She asked me to go
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Post-office. There was a long queue at the counter. I placed my bicycle against the
outer wall of the Post-office and joined the queue. Unluckily, I forgot to lock my
bicycle. When I came back after getting the stamps and envelopes, there was a big
shock for me. My bicycle was missing! I enquired from those around, but nobody
knew who had taken it. With sad heart, I walked back home. I told mother about the
loss of the bicycle. She was very angry with me. She rebuked me for my
carelessness. I could only hang my head and listen!

This is a brief account of what happened with the narrator.

You have already seen how past tense and past continuous tense are used in
narratives like this. This gives you a good example of the use of past tense. Note the
following expressions:
My mother wanted to..., She asked me to..., I took my bicycleand rode...,
There was a long queue..., I placed my bicycle..., I forgot to..., When I
came back..., there was a big shock, bicycle was missing..., I enquired...,
etc.
The narrator has given almost all details of the incident. But this is narrated from
the first-person narrator’s point of view. But you can invert it and you can change the
narrator also. For example, you can rewrite this incident from the ‘Mother’s Point of
View’.
How will the narrator’s mother narrate it from her own point of view? What
changes will be there in the narration if the same incident if being told by ‘the
mother’? Try your hand to rewrite it.

3.3 Summary:
Narration is one of the most important skills of communication. It is used for
talking about personal, social and professional life. Narration means talking about
incidents, events and personal experiences of the past. It also means talking about
incident and events of the present time. With the help of the skill of narration we tell
stories, we make reports, we make news, we write a note on experiments, projects
etc. While talking about incidents and events we go in a proper sequence, in a proper
order. At first we talk about the beginning part of the incident, then we talk about the
next parts of the incident one by one and lastly we talk about the end of the story or
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incident. Thus, for narration of your experience you have to follow chronological
order of the event. Only then the story, the report or the incident gives a clear
information to the reader and naturally it creates its own everlasting impression on
the mind of the reader. It is because of this we love and like to read stories incidents,
news, reports etc. Isn’t it?

3.4 Terms to Remember:

Narration - a skill for telling the story.
Professional - connected with a job that needs special training or skill.
Calamity - disaster, difficult circumstances.
Address - to give a call, to talk to someone.
Contribute - to have a share
Chronological - order of numbers like 1,2,3
Everlasting - permanent

3.5 Answers to check your progress

Task 1 : Check your progress
a) Rewrite the following sentences using appropriate simple past and past
perfect forms of the verbs given in the sentences:
1. I lost the key that he had given to me.
2. He told me that he had watched the film.
3. I went outside as I heard a noise.
4. When they came home. Anisa had cooked dinner.
5. We couldnot send you a postcard because we had lost your address.
6. The storm destroyed the house that they had built.
7. When they went out to play, she had finished her homework.
8. She ate all of the food that we had made.
9. He failed to identify him in this meeting.

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b) Complete the following piece of incomplete narration with the help of
appropriate time markers and linkers:
Manager of a firm advertised for a night watchman. Some applicants
presented themselves for interview. But the manager was not satisfied with their
performance. He found smething wrong with each one. Among these applicants
there was one applicant. His name was Raju. He was setting in a corner waiting
patiently turn. When he faced interview the manager found nothing wrong in his
appearance. When the manager questioned him about his health at that time he
got the reply “Sir I’m suffering from sleeplessness”. Upon this the manager was
very happy and immediately he appointed him.
c) Narrate your experience
I) My Birthday
I celebrated my birthday on 15th march 2019. On that occasion all my close
friends were present. All my relatives were also present for my birthday. My parents
had arranged decoration and attractive lighting with colourful balloons in the house. I
cut off the cake and my sister fed me with a piece of cake. All my friends and
relatives gave me good wishes. Really, it was a memorable birthday.
II) Our N.S.S. Special Camp
Our N.S.S. special camp took place in the first week of January. It was held at
Rautwadi. Nearly fifty boy and girl students participated in the camp. During that
week we undertook many activities. We constructed C.C.T’s on the top of the hill for
storing water. We cleaned up the whole village one day. We also attended lectures on
various subjects. Really it was a very good N.S.S camp.
III) Our College Tour
In the last month our college organized Konkan tour. Nearly fifty students
participated in the tour. In addition to it, four teachers and one peon joined the tour.
We hired a travel bus. It was a two day long tour. At first we visited to
Sangameshwar. Thirdly, we saw Ratnagiri. Fourthly, we went to Sindhudurg fort.
Lastly we visited to Vijaydurg. Really, it was a memorable trip.
In this passage, students, you will find a number of words of conjunction,
adverbs/adverb phrases connecting one sentence with another and giving you one
complete and meaningful idea of tour undertaken by the college students in the last
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month. The adverbs like nearly, secondly, thirdly, fourthly, lastly, really etc. have
connected one sentence with another. Next to this, even the prepositional phrases like
in the last month, in addition to it, at first, have connected one sentence with another
and clear information about the college tour is given. Thus, we have to keep in mind
that the passages of narration include conjuctions, adverbs, adverb phrases,
prepositional phrases etc. for connecting all sentences in that passage and they
communicate one thought/one idea in that passage clearly to the reader.
IV) My First Kitchen Experience
On that day I was alone at home. My parents and brother had gone to a nearly
village for marketing. I felt the need of having a cup of tea. I had no idea of making
tea. But I decided to prepare tea. I lighted the gas stove. I took one pot and poured
two cups of water into it. Then I added sugar and tea powder in to the water and
boiled it. At last I poured half a cup of milk into it. I tasted my first cup of tea and
liked it very much.
Task 2 : Check your progress.
Use the following linking words or connecting/cohesive devices in your own
sentences suggesting various purposes.
1) Raju took the invitation card and furthermore he promised to remain present for
the function.
2) In addition to good batting, he also bowled well.
3) At first he lost the match and what’s even more is that he lost a lot of money.
4) Finally we reached there.
5) Beside the chief minister, other ministers also attended the ceremony.
6) When he saw me, immediately he called me in a loud voice.
7) It is too diffecult to study simultaneously two degree eourses.
8) Until now I have never met him.
9) Sometimes he will disclose the fact.
10) My house is opposite to Ram Bakery.
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12) He comes from one of the nearby villages.
13) Our college is adjacent to the post office.
14) See below and tell me what is written there.
15) I saluted her and she responded me in the same way.
16) He is too clever, similarly his brother is also too clever.
17) He welcomed me heartly and in like manner I also welcomed him.
18) Geeta raised her eyebrows after listening to the incident and in similar fashion
vandana also raised her eyebrows.
19) She was ill nevertheless she remained present.
20) On the other hand the teacher told me to cancel my admission.
21) He warned me not to chew tobacco. At the same time he suggested me to join
yoga class.
Task 3 – Check your progress.
I) Chhatrapati Shivaji Maharaj
Chhatrapati Shivaji Maharaj was born at Shivneri fort in 1630. In 1647 Shivaji
conquered Torna and Rohida forts. After that he captured Jaoli from Yashwantrao
(Chandrarao) More in 1656. Then in 1659 Shivaji killed Afzalkhan. In 1660 he
escaped from Siddhi Johar’s siege. At Panhala fort. It is also known as battle of
Pawankhind. Later on in 1663 he looted Surat the prosperous trade centre of
Aurangzeb. Next to this The treaty of Purandar with Mirza Raje Jaysing took place in
1665. Immediately after that Shivaji visited to Agra and escaped from Agra in 1666.
In 1674 the coronation of Shivaji took place. Then in 1676 he undertook Karnatak
expedition. At last he passed away at Raigad fort in 1680.

3.6 Exercises:
1. Write a paragraph about a very good day or a very bad day in your life.
2. Rewrite the story of Jumman and Algu with the help of the story, Panch
Parameshvar supposing Alguas the narrator of the story.

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3. Complete the following narratives by using your imagination.
a) A rich farmer - lot of land - cattle and servants - two sons - happy life -
After some years younger son unhappy - asked for his share of the property
- wouldn't listen to father's advice - got his share - sold them all - went
away to another country - fell into bad ways - soon all money gone - poor -
no one to help him - understood his mistake.
b) Abdul - clever thief - robs the rich - gives all to the sick and the needy -
other thieves jealous - plan to get rid of him - challenge Abdul to steal the
King's pyjamas - Abdul accepts challenge - finds king sleeping - opens a
bottle of red ants on the bed - King badly bitten - cries for help - servants
rush in pretends to look for ants - Abdul removes King's pyjamas – escapes
- other thieves dumbfounded - accept Abdul their leader.

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 B) Panch Parameshwar
Premchand

Index
3.0 Objectives
3.1 Introduction
3.2 Presentation of subject matter
3.3.1 Section I
Check your progress
3.3.2 Section II
Check your progress
3.3.3 Section III
Check your progress
3.4 Summary
3.5 Terms to remember
3.6 Answers to check your progress
3.7 Exercises

3.0 Objectives:
In this unit you are going to learn:
• about Premchand as an Indian short story writer.
• the form of short story.
• the story of Panchayat in a village.
• the continuance of bond of friendship.

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3.1 Introduction
Premchand (1880-1936) is a famous Indian writer in the 20th century. He is a
well-known novelist and short story writer in Hindi language. In his novels and short
stories he depicts reality in contemporary Indian society. Premchand wrote a dozen
novels and plays. He depicts the problems faced by ordinary poor people, farmers,
labourers in Indian society. Those problems are communalism, corruption,
zamindari, poverty, colonialism etc. Premchand uses the dialect of the common
people for discussing these problems. The real name of Munshi Premchand is
Dhanpat Rai Srivastava. In the world of literature, he is known especially by his pen
name Munshi Premchand. In Urdu he wrote under the pen name of Nawabrai.
As a short story writer Premchand wrote over 300 stories. His well-known
stories include the stories such as Panch Parameshwar (The Holy Panchayat)
Shatranj Ke Khiladi, Poos Ki Raat, Do Bailonki Katha, Kafan, Bade Ghar Ki Beti,
Udhar Ki Ghadi, Idgah etc. He uses simple language for discussing the problems of
the downtrodden and the problems in rural and urban India in the first quarter of the
20th century.

3.2 The subject matter of the story.

The story ‘Panch Parameshwar’ or ‘The Holy Panchayat’ is a very famous story
written by Premchand. The story is set in a village. The two protagonists in this story
Jumman Shaikh and Algu Chowdhry are close friends right from their childhood,
Infact, they belong to two different religions. And they share nothing between them
in case of food or religion. What has brought these two friends together is the only
mental and emotional attachment between them. However, a point of rift comes in
their friendship when Algu as a sarpanch has to take one decision about Jumman’s
distant aunt with the help of the panchayat. The decision is very hard and bittersome
on the part of Jumman as well as Algu. It is expected that it will naturally break up
their friendship. Their friendship is broken for some time. However, it is again the
same decision that restores the bond of friendship between Jumman and Algu.
3.3.1 Section I
Jumman Shiakh and Algu Chowdhry were very close friends. They were
partners in farming. Some of their dealings were also done jointly. They trusted each
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under Algu’s care. And whenever Algu went out he left his house to Jumman to look
after. They neither inter-dined, nor were thay co-religionists, yet there was a bond
between them at certain concurrence of views. And such indeed is the basis of true
friendship.
Their friendship began when they were boys, and Jumman’s father, Jumraati,
was their tutor. Algu had served his guru with reat diligence, by cleaning many cups
and plates for him. The turor’s hookah never came to rest even for a moment, for
Algu would keep ‘filling up’ the chillum continually. Algu’s father was old-
fashioned in his views. He believed that serving the guru was more important than
acquiring knowledge. He would say that you didn’t acquire knowledge by reading
books but through the guru’s blessings. Therefore, if Jumraati Shaikh’s blissings or
his companiship did not yield any results, Algu would then rest content with the
thought that he had tried his best to acquire knowledge but he did not succeed
because it was not so destined.
However, Jumraati Shaikh himself did not subscribe to this view. He had greater
faith in rod. And because of that rod, Jumman was respected in the villages around
here. Not even the court clerk could raise any objection to the documents prepared by
Jumman. The postman, the constable and the tehsil peon – all looked up to him. So
as a result, while Algu was respected for his money, Jumman Shaikh was respected
for his unique knowledge.
Jumman Shaikh had an old aunt who had some property but no other near
relation than Jumman. Jumman had coaxed her into transferring this property in his
name. Until the transfer deed had been registered, the aunt was pampered and
indulged. She was treated to many tasty dishes. It was, as if, raining puddings, but
this hospitality came to a stamping halt as soon as the transfer deed was stamped.
Jumman’s wife, Kariman, began to dish out, along with chapatis, hot and bitter
curries of words. Jumman Shaikh also became cold. Now the poor aunt had to
swallow bitter words every day:
“God knows how long would this old woman live! She has bought us by
just transferring a few bighas of land. And she must have her dal fried in ghee!
We
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The aunt listened to all this for a few days, and when she could stand it no
longer she complained to Jumman. Jumman didn’t think it right to interfere in the
house mistress’s domain. And this state of affairs went on for some more time. At
last, the aunt said to Jumman, ‘Son, I can’t carry on like this. You pay me a sum
every month and I shall live by myself.’
Jumman retorted rudely, ‘Do you think we grow money here?’
The aunt asked politely, ‘Do I or do I not need a bare minimum?’
Jumman replied sternly, ‘No one thought you had conquered death.’
The aunt was upset. She threatened to call the panchayat. Jumman laughed
heartily like the hunter who laughs to himself as he watches the deer walking into his
trap. He said, ‘Why not, call the panchayat by all means. Let things be decided once
for all. I don’t like this constant bickering.’
Jumman had no doubt at all as to who would win at the panchayat. There was no
one in the villages around who did not owe him a debt of gratitude; no one who
would dare to antagonise him. God’s angels won’t come down to hold the panchayat.
After this, for many days, leaning on her stick, the old woman moved from village to
village, with her back bent like a bow. Walking was painful but the issue had to be
settled.
There was hardly a soul to whom she did not narrate her tale of woe. A few
dismissed her story with just lip sympathy. Some decried the world in general. ‘One
may have one’s foot in the grave, yet there is no end to greed! What does a person
need? Eat your bread and remember Allah. Why bother about land and farming now?
There were some who got an opportunity to poke fun at her. Bent back, toothless
mouth, matted hair – so much to laugh art just, kind and compassionate people who
would listen to this unfortunate woman’s sad story and console her were few indeed.
Finally, she came to Algu Chowdhry’s door. She threw down her stick and sat down
to rest. Then she said, ‘You should also come to the panchayat meeting on my
behalf.’
Algu said, ‘What shall I do there? There will be enough people from the villages
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 The old woman said, ‘I have cried my heart out to all. But now it is up to them
to come.’
Algu said, ‘I shall come, but I won’t open my mouth.’
‘Why, son?’
‘It’s my sweet will. Jumman is my old friend. I can’t go against him.’
‘Son’ won’t you stand up for justice for fear of losing your friendship?’
Check your progress
A. Answer the following questions in one word/one phrase/one sentence.
1) On what account Jumman and Algu were close friends?
2) What is the name of Jumman’s father?
3) From whom Jumman got property?
4) After her bad treatment from Jumman’s wife, what did the old aunt decide?
5) Did anybody listen to the problem of the old aunt?
6) To whom finally did the old aunt meet?
7) What did Algu say after the request from the old aunt?
B. Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct alternatives:
1. When Jumman had gone on ____________tour he had left his house under
Algu’s care.
a) Kashi b) Makka
c) Hajj d) Masjid
2. ______________ had an old aunt who had some property.
a) Algu b) Jumman
c) Sahu d) Jumraati
3. ____________ was a guru of Jumman and Algu
a) Ramdhan b) Sahu
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 4. __________ transferred her property to Jumman
a) Jumraati b) Algu
c) The old aunt d) Sahu
5. The old aunt met ___________ people in the.
a) few b) two
c) all d) nobody.
3.3.2 Section II
One evening the panchayat gathered under a tree, Shaikh Jumman had spread
his sheet even before. He had made provision for paan, ilaichi, hookah and tobacco.
And he himself was sitting with Algu Chowdhry at some distance. And he greeted
with a discrete salaam everyone who came to attend the panchayat meeting. Soon
after the sun set, when the chattering birds had settled in the tree, the meeting began.
Every inch of the ground was filled up, but most of those who had gathered here
were onlookers. Of the invitees only they, who had a grudge against Jumman, had
come. A fire was lighted at one corner where the barber was filling up chillum after
chillum non-stop. It was impossible to decide whether smoke rising from the burning
cow dung cakes was thicker or that from the puffs exhaled by the hookah smokers.
Boys were running all around, shouting, crying. It was a noisy scene. The village
dogs in large packs too had descended upon the scene, hoping there would be a big
feast here.
The members of the panchayat sat down and the old woman began her
supplication.
‘Members of the panchayat, it’s three years now, since I willed all my property
to my nephew Jumman. You must be knowing this. Jumman had promised to feed
and clothe me till my death. But I neither get enough to eat nor to wear. I have put up
with it for long, I can stand it no longer. I’m a helpless widow. I can’t go to court.
Where else should I come with my miserable tale except to you? I shall accept
whatever you decide. If I’m at fault punish me. If Jumman is wrong, admonish him.
Why does he want to earn the curses of a helpless woman? I shall obey the
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 Ramdhan Mishra, many of whose clients had been won over by Jumman, said,
‘Jumman mian, choose your panchayat members. Decide just now. Afterwards, you
will have to accept their judgement.’
Jumman saw that most of those present here were hostile to him for one reason
or another. He said, ‘The word of the panchayat is the word of Allah. Let my aunt
choose whomsoever she wants. I have no objection.’
The old woman shouted. ‘O man of Allah, why don’t you name the members? I
should also know something.’
Jumman retorted angrily, ‘Don’t force me to open my mouth. You have
complained. Choose whomsoever you like.’
The aunt understood Jumman’s taunt. She said, ‘Son, fear God. What are you
insinuating? The panches don’t take sides. And if you can’t trust anyone, let it go.
Hope you trust Algu Chowdhry. Ok, I accept him as the sarpanch.’
Jumman was delighted, but hiding his feelings he said, ‘Let it be Algu. For me,
Ramdhan and Algu are the same.’
Algu didn’t want to get involved in this. He said, ‘Aunt, you know that Jumman
is my close friend.’
Khaala said, ‘Son, no one barters his imaan for friendship. God resides in the
heart of a panch. Whatever the panch says is the word of God.’
Algu Chowdry said, ‘Shaikh Jumman, you and I are old friends. We have helped
each other on many occasions. But at this moment you and khaala are equal in my
eyes. You can put forward your case before the panchayat.’
Jumman was sure that he would win the case. Algu was saying all this for a
public show. Therefore he spoke in a very composed manner. ‘O members of the
panchayat three years ago khaalajaan had transferred her property in my name. I had
agreed to provide her with food and clothing till her death. God is witness, I have
never ill-treated her. I regard her as my mother and it is my duty to serve her. But
what can I do if my wife and she don’t always see eye to eye? Khaalajaan is
demanding a monthly allowance from me separately. All of you know the value of
the property. It is not so profitable that I can provide a monthly allowance to her out
of it. Moreover, there is no mention of a monthly expense in the agreement. That’s
all I have to say. It is now for the panches to give their judgement.’
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 Algu Chowdhry needed to go to the court regularly for some or other of his
business. This had made him a completely legal minded person. He began to cross-
examine Jumman. Every word he said was like a hammer stroke on Jumman’s chest.
Ramdhan Mishra was enjoying it all. Jumman was taken aback at Algu’s conduct.
Only just now he was talking to him like a friend, and now he seemed bent upon
digging his grave. Was he trying to settle some old score? Will his long friendship be
of no help?
While Jumman Shaikh was lost in mental tussle, Algu announced the
judgement.
‘Shaikh Jumman, the panchayat has considered this matter. To us, it looks fair
and just that KhaalaJaan be given a monthly allowance. We are of the view that the
property is valuable enough to provide khaalajaan a monthly allowance. This is our
decision. And if this is not acceptable to you, then the agreement for transfer of
property would stand annulled.’
Jumman was stunned to hear this decision. Your own friend stabbing you in the
back! What else would you call it expect the trickery of fate? The very person on
whom you had all the faith betrayed you when you needed him most. Such are the
times when friendship is tested. So that is what friendship is in the Kalyug. It is
human crookedness that has brought so many calamities upon the country. The
epidemics like cholera and plague were the result of such misdeeds.
On the other hand, Ramdhan Mishra and other members of the panchayat were
praising Algu Chowdhry’s sense of justice. They said, ‘This is what a panchayat is.
He has separated the grain from the chaff. Friendship has its own place but to follow
the dharma is the most important thing. The earth has stayed where it is because of
such truthful people or it would have sunk into the underworld by now.’
This judgement shook the very basis of Algu and Jumman’s friendship. The old
intimacy was gone. Such a long friendship could not stand just one single jolt of
truth. Surely it had been erected on a very shaky foundation.
Now their relationship turned very formal, limited to mere courtesies. They met
but just as a sword meets a shield.
Algu’s treachery troubled Jumman constantly and he was always thinking of
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Check your progress.
A. Answer the following questions in one word/one phrase/one sentence.
1) At which place the panchayat was held?
2) What Jumman had promised his aunt?
3) What is the complaint of the old aunt?
4) Whom does the aunt accept as a sarpanch?
5) Did Algu work as a sarpanch?
B. Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct alternatives:
1) It was decided that the old aunt be given __________
a) a book b) clothes
c) a monthly allowance d) nothing
2) The judgement was given by __________
a) Algu b) Jumman
c) Ramdhan d) Nobody
3) The Judgement broke friendship between __________
a) Jumraati and Algu b) Ramdhan and Algu
c) Jumman and Algu d) the aunt and Sahu’s wife
4) ________ forgot friendship for justice.
a) Sahu b) The aunt
c) Algu d) Jumman
5) _______ thought of taking revenge of Algu.
a) Jumman b) Ramdhan
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3.3.3 Section III
The success in doing a good deed takes a long time to come, but not so in the
case of bad deeds. And the opportunity to take revenge came to Jumman very soon.
A year ago Algu Chowdhry had purchased a handsome pair of oxen from Batesar.
The oxen were of the Pachchain breed, with beautiful long horns. For months people
from the neighbouring villages came to cast their admiring glances at the pair. Out of
pure chance, one of the oxen died just a month after Jumman’s panchayat. Jumman
said to his friends that Algu had been punished for treachery. One may rest content
but God from above keeps watch on our good and bad deeds. Algu on the other hand
began to suspect that Jumman had poisoned the ox. His wife too threw the blame on
Jumman. She said Jumman had done some mischief. And one day a war of words
broke out between Algu’s wife and Kariman. Words flowed in great streams from
both sides, and all the similes and metaphors, sarcasms and hyperboles were
exhausted. Jumman somehow pacified them. He rebuked his wife into silence and
made her quit the battlefield. On the other side Algu used a stick to silence his wife.
Now, what use was a single ox? Algu tried to find a matching one but without
success. At last, he decided to sell it off. There was a trader named Samjhu Sahu who
drove a cart. He carried gur and ghee from the village to the market and returned
with oil and salt, which he sold in the village. He thought of buying this ox. If he had
this ox he would be able to make three trips easily. These days it was difficult to
make even one. He looked at the ox, yoked it to his cart to test, got the hair on its
body examined to know whether it was a propitious animal to buy, bargained the
price and finally bought it. He promised to pay the price within one month. Algu
Chowdhry agreed, unmindful of any loss.
As soon as Samjhu had the ox he began to drive it hard. He made three to four
trips every day, without caring to feed the animal properly. All he cared was to drive
him. When he took him to the market he fed it with some dry fodder. And before he
could breathe easy he was yoked again. When he was at Algu Chowdhry’s home the
ox had a very peaceful existence. He was yoked to a chariot-like cart once in a while
and then he would go racing for miles without care. At Algu’s house, his diet
consisted of clean water, ground arhar dal, fodder mixed with oil cake; and not only
this, on occasions he would have the pleasure of tasting ghee too. From morning till
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That life of peace and enjoyment, and this twenty-four hour struggle! He became
emaciated just in one month. The moment he saw the yoke his mouth dried up.
Moving even a step had become difficult. Bones had become visible. But he was
self-respecting and didn’t like to be beaten or whipped.
One day on his fourth trip, Samjhu put a double load on him. Exhausted after the
day’s work he was unable to lift his feet, but Samjhu kept on whipping him. He ran
with all his strength, and after a short distance slowed down to gain his breath. But
Sahuji, in a hurry to reach home, kept on lashing at him with his whip. He once again
tried to pick up pace but his strength failed. He collapsed and did not rise again.
Sahuji whipped him mercilessly, pulled his legs, pushed a stick into his nostrils, but
how would a dead animal rise on his feet? When Sahuji suspected the worst he cast
an intent look at the ox, then unyoked him, wondering how to drive the cart home.
He shouted but the country pathways close like the eyes of children at sunset. He
could not see anyone. There was no village close by. In anger, he delivered a few
more lashes to the dead animal shouting that he should have died after reaching
home. Who would pull the cart now? Sahuji was burning with anger. He had sold
many sacks of gur and many tins of ghee and was carrying about 250 rupees with
him. In addition, there were a few sacks of salt and tins of oil on the cart. He just
couldn’t leave them here. Helpless he decided to spend the night in the cart. He
smoked a chillum, sang a song and in this way he kept awake till midnight. He
thought he had kept awake throughout, but when he opened his eyes at the break of
day and touched his waist he found the pouch containing the money missing. A few
tins of oil were also missing. In anguish, the poor man beat his head and fell flat on
the ground. He reached home wailing and weeping. When Sahuji’s wife heard the
story, first she cried and then started cursing AlguChowdhry for having sold them an
unpropitious ox that had caused them such a huge loss.
Many months passed. Whenever Algu went to their house to ask for the price of
the ox both husband and wife would fall upon him like a dog and start abusing him.
‘Look. We have lost our life’s earnings and have been ruined and you are asking for
the price of the ox. You had given us a near dead ox and now you want its price. You
have deceived us, forcing us to buy a ruinous animal. Do you think we are fools? We
too are banias, we can’t be fooled like children. First, go and wash your face in a
ditch and then ask for the price of the ox. If you don’t accept this, take our two oxen
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 Chowdhry had plenty of ill-wishers. On this occasion, they came together in
support of Sahuji. But it was not easy for Algu to give up his claim for one hundred
and fifty rupees. He lost his cool one day. Sahuji went home to look for a lathi, and
his wife took his place in front of Algu. Arguments led to fighting. Sahuji’s wife ran
home and shut the doors. The villagers gathered there on hearing the hullabaloo.
They tried to pacify both the parties. But this didn’t work. They asked for a
panchayat to be called to settle the issue. Sahuji agreed. Algu too agreed.
Preparations for the panchayat began. Both the sides began to look for their
supporters. On the third day, the panchayat sat under the same tree. This was the time
in the evening when the crows were holding their own panchayat. They were
contending whether or not they had any rights over the peanut pods; and until this
question was settled they were to continue protesting against the watchman. A flock
of parrots sitting in the tree wondering whether human beings had any right to call
them shameless when they themselves had no qualms about deceiving their own
friends.
The panchayat began its meeting. Ramdhan Mishra said, ‘Why waste time. Let
us elect the five members. Come Chowdhry, whom do you elect?
Algu said in a humble voice, ‘Let Samjhu Sahu choose.’
Samjhu stood up and said sharply, ‘I choose Jumman Shaikh.’
The moment Algu heard Jumman’s name his hear began to beat fast as if some
had slapped him. Ramdhan was Algu’s friend. He could sense the problem. He said,
‘come, Chowdhry, do you have any objection?’
Chowdhry said in a thin voice, ‘No, why should I object?’
A newspaper editor, ensconced in his comfortable seat, attacks a ministry
recklessly and brazenly with his aggressive writing: but there are times when he
himself joins the ministry. And then his writing becomes so penetrating, so
thoughtful and so just. This is the result of the responsibility that falls upon him. A
young man’s wild behavior always keeps his parents worried. They fear that he
would bring a bad name to the family. But the moment the burden of family falls
upon him, the undisciplined and wayward young man becomes a persevering and
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 Jumman Shaikh also became conscious of such a responsibility, the moment he
was given the high office of the Sarpanch. He realised that at this moment he was
seated on the highest throne of justice and righteousness. Whatever he uttered now
would be the word of God, and any prejudice of his mind must not contaminate that
voice. He must not deviate even a bit from truth.
The panches began to interrogate both the parties. All were agreed that Samjhu
Sahu must pay the price of the ox. But two members were of the view that he should
be given some relief for the loss of the ox. Against this, two members wanted
Samjhu to be punished further, in addition to this, so that no one would in the future
dare to behave with such barbarity towards an animal. In the end, Jumman announce
the judgement.
‘Algu Chowdhry and SamjhuSahu, the panchayat has carefully deliberated on
your dispute. It is proper that Samjhu should pay the price of the ox. The ox was not
suffering from any disease when he bought it. If the price had been paid then,
Samjhu would not have been able to raise this question. The ox died because he was
forced to work to hard and was not properly fed.’
Ramdhan said, ‘Samjhu is responsible for killing the ox and he should be
punished for this.’
Jumman said, ‘That is another issue. We have nothing to do with it.’
JhagduSahu said, ‘SamjhuSahu should be given some relief.’
Jumman said, ‘This is up to Algu Chowdhry. If he agrees, it will be an act of
goodness.’
Algu Chowdhry was overjoyed. He stood up and shouted, ‘Victory to panch
parmeshwar!
This was echoed from all sides, ‘Victory to panch parmeshwar.’
Everyone admired Jumman’s judgement. ‘This is justice. This is not the work of
man. God himself resides in the panch parmeshwar. It is His doing. Who can prove
the wrong as righy before the panches!
At the end, Jumman came to Algu and, embracing him, said, ‘Ever since you
had given the judgement against me I had become your sworn enemy. But today I
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foe. You cannot think of anything except justice. Today I am convinced that God
himself speaks through the voice of a panch.’
Algu began to cry. His tears washed off the bitterness that had rankled their
hearts. The withered plant of friendship had become green again.
Check your progress.
A. Answer the following questions in one word/one phrase/one sentence.
1) Does bad deed/or good deed take a long time to come to success?
2) Who got opportunity of taking revenge of Algu?
3) What happened to Algu’s ox after the panchayat?
4) Who did purchas Algu’s second ox?
5) What did Sahu carry from the market?
6) Who was the sarpanch for Algu’s panchayat?
7) What decision did Jumman give?
B. Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct alternatives:
1) Sahu purchased Algu’s ox for ________ rupees.
a) Fifty b) Hundred
c) One hundred fifty d) Two hundred
2) Under Sahu’s care the ox because __________
a) tall b) strong
c) weak d) happy
3) ________ understood his responsibility as a sarpanch.
a) Algu b) The old aunt
c) Jumman d) None of these
4) Jumman declared that Algu should pay the price of ______ to Algu.
a) cat b) dog
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 5) ___________ resides in the Panch Parmeshwar.
a) Devil b) Man
c) Woman d) God

3.4 Summary:
The story ‘Panch Parameshwar is about the holy panchayat system in a village.
In a village the holy panchayat system brings justice to anybody irrespective of his
caste, religion, region, age, relationship etc. Law is after all law and it gives justice to
everybody. If one is guilty, the holy panchayat will punish him. The holy panchayat
is but a village system of judiciary. Its decision is binding upon both parties.
Jumman Shaikh and Algu Chowdhry were two close friends in a village. They
were partners in farming. They would also do some works together. They were really
good friends and had deep trust upon each other. When Jumman had some work
outside, he would make Algu to care for his house. Similarly when Algu had some
work outside he would make Jumman to look after his house, Infact, they belonged
to different religions but they had developed good bond of friendship between each
other.
Jumman and Algu were close friends since their childhood. They took lessons of
life from the father of Jumman, Jumraati. Jumraati gave them knowledge. He taught
them good lessons of life. Jumraati was a strict tutor. He was respected all around the
village. Although Algu was respected for his money, Jumman was respected for his
knowledge.
Jumman Shaikh had an old aunt. She had some property. Jumman was the only
close relative of that old woman. He pretends that he is her true caretaker. The old
aunt looks upon him as a true caretaker and transfers all her property to Jumman. As
soon as the stamp papers are made, Jumman and his wife start to give bad treatment
to the old aunt.The old aunt repents for her transfer of property. She gets bad quality
food. She has to eat stale food. She feels very sorry for her negligence by Jumman.
One day she talks to Jumman about her bad treatment from him and his wife. But
Jumman doesn’t listen to her difficulties. On the other hand he threatens her to go to
anybody and complain against him. He known that all villagers respect him and
nobody has any guts to complain against him. So he tells his aunt to go anywhere and
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complain against him. Upon this the old aunt meets all villagers in the village and
tries to seek support for her. She thinks that some villagers will support her and
advise her nephew to give her good treatment. However, all in vain! Nobody helps
her. Even Some villagers poke fun at her, they blame her that even at such an old age
the old woman is hungry for money and property. They laugh at her sarcastically.
At last the old aunt meets Algu. She requests Algu to attend Panchayat’s
meeting for solving her problem, Algu says that he will attend the meeting but he
will not talk anything in the meeting. He further says that Jumman is his close friend
and it is not good on his part to go against Jumman. However, the old woman
admonishes him to take the side of justice and for justice’s sake not to think of
friendship.
One day the panchayat gathers under one tree in the village. In that panchayat
Algu is the sarpanch or head of the panchayat. The old woman tells Algu that he
should take the side of justice. He should not think of friendship while coming to a
decision. Jumman thinks that Algu is his close friend and definitely he will give
decision from his side. The old woman tells that she has transferred her property
three years back to Jumman. Jumman has promised her to provide food and clothes
till her death However, now he doesn’t provide her enough food and clothes. Now
she is but a helpless widow at such an old age. She even can’t knock the door of the
court of law. She further talks to the panchayat to punish her if she is in the wrong or
punish her nephew if he is in the wrong. She is ready to follow the decision of the
court. She advises Jumman to select his men as members of panchayat. But Jumman
refuses to do so. Upon this the aunt argues that she wants Algu as a sarpanch even if
he is Jumman’s friend. Everebody is a friend of Jumman. Algu has to take the side of
law. The case is discussed in the panchayat under the leadership of Algu. Jumman
was quite sure that he would win the case. He argues that he has always given good
treatment to his aunt. He also says that the value of the property is very low and
hence he is unable to provide monthly allowance to his aunt. As a sarpanch, Algu
announces that Jumman must pay monthly allowance to the aunt. If he doesn’t pay
then the land will be returned to the aunt. Jumman is shocked to listen to this
judgement from the mouth of Algu. He can’t believe that we close friend will take
the side of justice at the cost of friendship. Here only one see the break up between
Algu and Jumman’s friendship. Truth takes the side of justice and the aunt gets
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 Jumman thinks that Algu has proved himself to be disloyal and treacherous as a
friend. He feels to be humiliated, In return to this insult, he wants to take revenge of
Algu.
By coincidence, Jumman gets a chance to take revenge of Algu. Algu had two
well-grown up, sturdy and strong oxen. Unifortunately one day Algu’s one ox dies.
After that Algu decides to sell the other ox. The trader, Samjhu Sahu purchases the
ox. He makes the ox to carry heavy luggage. He provides him little food and fodder
and makes him to work hand. Slowly and steadily the ox becomes weak. One day
while carrying luggage the ox dies on the way. Sahu thinks that Algu has cheated
him by selling an ill ox. When Algu asks for the price of the ox Sahu blames Algu
that he has sold a sick ox to him and deceived him. He will not pay to him any price
of the ox. Algu requests the villages to call a panchayat. The meeting is called. Sahu
selects Jumman as a sarpanch of this meeting. Algu’s another friend Misra knows
that Algu will now face trouble because Jumman is the sarpanch now and he will
take revenge for Algu’s judgement over old aunt’s property and punishment to
Jumman.
At the end of the story we learn that Panch is God. He is a parameshwar. The
word of panch is but the word of God. His judgement is God’s judgement. He
doesn’t take the side of any person but believes in justice. Jumman earlier decides to
punish his friend, Algu but when he is given the responsibility as a sarpanch, his
attitude gets totally changed. Like God he believes in truth and justice. As a
responsible sarpanch he declares that Sahu is at fault and he must pay the price of ox
to Algu. Only because Sahu has made the ox to work hard and beyond his capacity
he is responsible for the death of the ox. And hence he must pay to Algu. Here
Jumman says that for sarpanch nobody is a friend or a foe but for him proper
decision is more important. After all what counts more is justice and not friendship
or enemity.

3.5 Terms to Remember:

dealings : work or business related to farming
Hajj : the Hajj, an Islamic pilgrimage to Mecca, the most holy city of the Muslims
to look after : to take care of someone or something

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concurrence : the fact of two or more events or circumstances happening or existing
at the same time
diligence : careful and persistent work or effort
acquiring : to get, buy or obtain (an asset or object) for oneself
yield : give way to arguments, demands, or pressure
destined : bound for a certain destination
coaxed : persuade (someone) gradually or gently to do something
pampered : to give someone special treatment, making that person as comfortable as
possible
indulged : allow oneself to follow one’s will
interfere : to come into opposition
bickering : argue about petty and trivial matters
antagonize : to make hostile or unfriendly
grudge : a strong feeling of anger and dislike for a person who you feel has treated
you badly
supplication : the action of asking or begging for something earnestly or humbly
admonish : to caution, advise, or counsel against something
insinuating : suggest or hint (something bad) in an indirect and unpleasant way
designated : appointed to a specified office or post
hostile : showing or feeling opposition or dislike; unfriendly
allowance : the amount of something that is permitted, especially within a set of
regulations or for a specified purpose
mental tussle : a vigorous struggle or scuffle, typically in order to obtain or achieve
something
annul : declare invalid
crookedness : the inclination or practice of misleading others through lies or trickery
calamities : an event causing great and often sudden damage or distress; a disaster

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intimacy : close familiarity or friendship
avenging : to take vengeance or exact satisfaction for
Pachchain breed : stock of animals having a distinctive appearance, typically
developed
rebuke : express sharp disapproval or criticism of (someone) because of their
behaviour or actions
propitious : giving or indicating a good chance of success; favourable
fodder : 1. Food, especially dried hay or straw, for cattle and other livestock
emancipate : to free from restraint, control, or the power of another
wailing : feel deep sorrow for; lament
hullabaloo : a very noisy and confused situation
pacify : to bring or restore to a state of peace or tranquility, quiet; calm
qualms : an uneasy feeling of doubt, worry, or fear, especially about one’s own
conduct; a misgiving
ensconced : establish or settle (someone) in a comfortable, safe place
brazenly : acting or done in a very open and shocking way without shame or
embarrassment
penetrating : to pierce or pass into or through
prejudice : preconceived opinion that is not based on reason or actual experience
contaminate : make (something) impure by exposure to or addition of a poisonous or
polluting substance
rankled : to continue to cause keen irritation or bitter resentment within the mind; be
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3.6 Answers to check your progress.
Section – I (3.3.1)
A.
1) Jumman and Algu were partners in farming and they trusted each other.
2) The name of Jumman’s father is Jumraati.
3) Jumman got property from the old aunt.
4) The old aunt decided to call panchayat.
5) Nobody listened to the problem of the old aunt.
6) Finally the old aunt met Algu.
7) Algu told that he was unable to give justice to the old aunt because he was a
good friend of Jumman.
B.
1) Hajj
2) Jumman
3) Jumraati
4) The old aunt
5) all
Section – II (3.3.2)
A.
1) The panchayat was held under a tree.
2) Jumman had promised to provide give food and clothes to the old aunt till
her death.
3) The old aunt complains that Jumman doesn’t give her enough food and
clothes.
4) The old aunt accepts Algu Chowdhry as a sarpanch.
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B.
1) a monthly allowance
2) Alau
3) Jumman and Algu
4) Algu
5) Jumman
Section – III (3.3.3)
A.
1) Good deed takes a long time to come to success.
2) Jumman got opportunity of taking revenge of Algu.
3) After the panchayat Algu’s ox died.
4) The trader Samjhu Sahu purchased Algu’s second ox.
5) Sahu carried oil and salt from the market.
6) Jumman was the sarpanch for Algu’spanchayat.
7) Jumman told Sahu, the trader to pay the price of ox to Algu.
B.
1) one hundred fifty
2) weak
3) Jumman
4) ox
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3.7 Exercise:
A) Answer the following questions in 3 to 4 sentences each:
1) How Algu and Jumman were good friends?
Ans. Algu and Jumman were very close friends. They were partners in farming.
Some of their dealings were also done jointly. They trusted each other. When
Jumman had gone to Hajj tour at that time, he had left his house under Algu’s care
and when Algu would go out he used to leave his house under Jumman’s care.
2) What was the complaint of the old aunt against Jumman?
Ans. Jumman Shaikh had an old aunt. She had no other relative except Jumman.
She had transferred her property to Jumman. In the beginning Jumman’s wife took
good care of the old aunt. However later on she started to neglect her. And hence the
aunt decided to complain against Jumman for providing her some money so that she
will be able to maintain her livelihood.
3) How did Samjhu Sahu treat his new ox?
Ans. Samjhu Sahu, the trader, bought Algu’s ox. He made the ox to work hard.
Everyday Sahu would make three to four trips with the help of this ox. However he
would not care to give food and water to the ox properly. He would provide dry
fodder to it. As a result very soon the ox got emaciated.
4) What was Jumman’s reaction to Algu’s judgement?
Ans. As a panch Algu gives his judgement in the old aunt. Jumman case Algu tells
that Jumman must give a monthly allowance to his old aunt otherwise he should give
back the old aunt’s property. Jumman was shocked to listen to this judgement. He
thought that his own friend had stabbed him in the back. He thought that Algu had
betrayed his friendship so he decided to take revenge of Algu at a proper time.
5) What was the complaint of Sahu against Algu after the death of ox?
Ans. Algu had sold his ox to Sahu. Sahu didnot take care of the ox. He made the ox
to work hard. As a result the ox died. When Algu asked for the payment of ox Sahu
and his wife would abuse Algu. Sahu would say that Algu had sold his weak ox and
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6) What decision did Jumman give in the Algu-Sahu case?
Ans. As a panch in Algu. Sahu case Jumman announces his judgement. He advises
Sahu to pay the price of the ox. He further tells that when the ox was bought by
Sahu, it was in a good condition. The ox died only because Sahu forced the ox to
work hard and he did not feed it properly. So he must pay the price of the ox.
7) Why does the writer call sarpanch as a parameshwar?
Ans. The writer says that panch is but God or parameshwar. The panch doesn’t
consider friendship or material relationship while giving judgement. He gives justice
without any prejudice. And hence the panch is no more different than God.
B) Write short notes on the following in 7 to 8 sentences each:
1) The friendship between Jumman and Algu.
2) Jumraati – the father of Jumman
3) The decision of panchayat in Khalajaan (the old aunt) case.
4) Jumman’s judgement in Samjhu Sahu and Algu case.

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 Module 4
A) Kabuliwala
Rabindranath Tagore

4.0 Objectives

4.1 Introduction

4.2 Presentation of subject matter

4.2.1 Section I

4.2.2 Section II

4.2.3 Section III

4.3 Terms to remember

4.4 Summary

4.5 Key to self assessment questions

4.6 Exercise

4.7 Writing Activity

4.8 Reference for further study

4.0 Objectives:
After studying this unit the students will understand :
• the human values through the text
• about the village and child life.
• the importance of family life among the students

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4.1 Introduction:
Rabindranath Tagore was one of the most celebrated Indian poets of the 20th
century. He has eight novels, four novellas, 100 short stories, and collection of
poems, essays, travelogues, dramas and thousands of songs to his credit. His works
are frequently noted for their rhythmic optimistic and lyrical nature. He was the first
Indian poet to win The Novel Prize for literature in 1913. He, who travelled more
than thirty countries, opposed Imperialism and supported Indian Nationalist. He
started his career as a short story writer in 1877. Though he was not recognised for
years as a short story writer, he became the first Bengali writer who elevated the
short story to a serious art form. Some of his stories received strong criticism.
Contemporary life in rural and urban Bengali and deceptively simple subjects of
commoners are reflected in his short stories. His notable short stories include
Kabuliwala, Hungry Stone, The Wife’s Letter, Woman Unknown and The Runaway.
They receive high regard in the literary world.
The present story deals with the relationship between a father and a daughter
and a mother and a daughter. The main characters are the narrator, his daughter Mini,
Mini’s mother and Kabuliwala. It also searches the bonds of friendship, affection and
parting which transcends the borders of race, religion and language. The end of the
story is very touching and moves the hearts of the many readers.

4.2 Presentation of the Subject Matter:

4.2.1 Section-I:
The Text:
My five years’ old daughter Mini can’t live without chattering. I really believe
that in all her life she has not wasted a minute in silence. Her mother is often vexed
at this, and would stop her prattle, but I would not. To see Mini quiet is unnatural,
and I can’t bear it long. And so my own talk with her is always lively.
One morning for instance, when I was in the midst of the seventeenth chapter of
my new novel, my little Mine stole into the room, and putting her hand into mine,
said, “Father! Ramdayal the doorkeeper calls a crow a krow! He doesn’t know
anything, does he ?”

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 Before I could explain to her the differences of language in this world, she was
embarked on the full tide of another subject. “What do you think, Father? Bhola says
there is an elephant in the clouds, blowing water out of his trunk, and that is why it
rains!”
And then, darting off a new, while I sat still making ready some reply to this last
saying, “Father! What relation is Mother to you?”
“My dear little sister in the law!” I murmured involuntarily to myself, but a
grave face contrived to answer. “Go and play with Bhola, Mini! I am busy!”
The window of my room overlooks the road. The child had seated herself at my
feet near my table, and was playing softly, drumming on her knees. I was hard at
work on my seventeenth chapter, where Protrap Singh, the hero, had just caught
Kanchanlata, the heroine, in his arms, and was about to escape with her by the third
story window of the castle, when all of a sudden Mini left her play, and ran to the
window, crying, “A Kabuliwala ! a Kabuliwala !” Sure enough in the street below
was a Kabuliwala, passing slowly along. He wore the loose soiled clothing of his
people, with a tall turban, there was a bag on his back, and he carried boxes of grapes
in his hand.
I can’t tell what were my daughter’s feelings at the sight of this man, but she
began to call him loudly. “Ah!” I thought, “he will come in, and my seventeenth
chapter will never be finished!” At which exact moment the Kabuliwallah turned,
and looked up at the child. When she saw this, overcome by terror, she fled to her
mother’s protection, and disappeared. She had a blind belief that inside the bag,
which the big man carried, there were perhaps two or three other children like
herself. The pedlar meanwhile entered my doorway, and greeted me with a smiling
face.
So precarious was the position of my hero and my heroine that my first impulse
was to stop and buy something, since the man had been called. I made some small
purchases, and a conversation began about Abdurrahman the Russians, the English,
and the Frontier Policy.
As he was about to leave, he asked, “And where is the little girl, sir?”
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 She stood by my chair, and looked at the Kabuliwala and his bag. He offered her
nuts and raisins, but she would not be tempted, and only clung the closer to me, with
all her doubts increased. This was their first meeting.
One morning, however, not many days later, as I was leaving the house, I was
startled to find Mini, seated on a bench near the door, laughing and talking, with the
great Kabuliwala at her feet. In all her life, it appeared; my small daughter had never
found so patient a listener, save her father. And already the corner of her little sari
was stuffed with almonds and raisins, the gift of her visitor, “Why did you give her
those?” I said, and taking out an eight anna bit, I handed it to him. The man accepted
the money without demur, and slipped it into his pocket.
Skimming and Scanning questions 4.2.1
Q.I Answer the following questions in a word, a phrase or a sentences.
1. What is the age of the Mini?
2. What is the name of the doorkeeper?
3. Who does blow water out of trunk?
4. What is the relation of narrator with Mini?
5. Who did come outside the house?
6. Which chapter was writer writing of his new novel?
7. Who is the hero of narrator’s novel?
8. Who is the heroine of narrator’s novel?
4.2.2 Section-II :
The Text :
Alas , on my return an hour later, I found the unfortunate coin had made twice
its own worth of trouble! For the Kabuliwala had given it to Mini, and her mother
catching sight of the bright round object, had pounced on the child with: “where did
you get that eight-anna bit?”
“The Kabuliwala gave it to me ,” said Mini cheerfully.
“The Kabuliwala gave it to you!” cried her mother much shocked. “Oh, Mini!
How could you take it from him?”
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 I entering at the moment, saved her from impending disaster, and proceeded to
make my own inquiries.
It was not the first or second time, I found, that the two had met. The
Kabuliwallah had overcome the child’s first terror by a judicious bribery of nuts and
almonds, and the two were now great friends.
They had many quaint jokes, which afforded them much amusement. Seated in
front of him, looking down on his gigantic frame in all her tiny dignity, Mini would
ripple her face with laughter and begin: O Kabuliwallah, Kabuliwallah, what have
you got in your bag?”
And he would reply, in the nasal accents of the mountaineer: “An elephant!”
Not much cause for merriment, perhaps; but how they both enjoyed the witticism!
And for me, this child’s talk with a grown-up man had always in it something
strangely fascinating.
Then Kabuliwallah, not to be behindhand, would take his turn: “Well, little one,
and when are you going to the father-in-law’s house?”
Now most small Bengali maidens have heard long ago about the father-in-law’s
house; but we, being a little new fangled, had kept these things from our child, and
Mini at this question must have been a trifle bewildered. But she would not show it,
and ready tact replied: “Are you going there?”
Amongst men of the Kabuliwallh’s class, however, it is well known that the
words father in law’s house have a double meaning. It is a euphemism for jail, the
place where we are well cared for, at no expense to ourselves. In this sense would the
sturdy pedlar take my daughter’s question? “Ah,” he would say, shaking his fist at an
invisible policeman, “ I will thrash my father-in-law’s!” Hearing this, and picturing
the poor discomfited relative, Mini would go off into peals of laughter, in which her
formidable friend would join.
These were autumn mornings, the very time of year when kings of old went
forth to conquest; and I, never steering from little corner in Calcutta, would let my
mind wander over the whole world. At the very name of another country, my heart
would go out to it, and at the sight of a foreigner in the streets, I would fall to
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home, with his cottage in its setting, and the free and independent life of far away
wilds.
Perhaps the scenes of travel conjure themselves up before me, and pass and
repass in my imagination all more vividly, because I lead such a vegetable existence,
that a call to travel would fall upon me like a thunderbolt.
In the presence of this Kabuliwallah, I was immediately transported to the foot
of arid mountain peaks, with narrow little defiles twisting in and out amongst their
towering heights. I could see the string of camels bearing the merchandise, and the
company of turbaned merchants, carrying some of their queer old firearms, and some
of their spears, journeying downward towards the plains. I could see –but at some
such point Mini’s mother would intervene, imploring me to “beware of that man.”
Skimming and Scanning questions 4.2.2
Q.I Answer the following questions in a word, a phrase or a sentences.
1. What did Kabuliwala give to Mini?
2. Who is the friend of Kabuliwala?
3. What does Mini wants to know?
4. What does the father-in-law’s house mean?
5. What is the advice of Mini’s father?
4.2.3 Section-III :
The Text :
Mini’s mother is unfortunately a very timid lady. Whatever she hears a noise in
the street, or sees people coming towards the house, she always jumps to the
conclusion that they are either thieves, or drunkards, or snakes, or tigers, or malaria
or cockroaches, or caterpillers, or an English sailor. Even after all these years of
experience, she is not able to overcome her terror. So she was full of doubts about
the Kabuliwallah, and used to beg me to keep a watchful eye on him.
I tried to laugh her fear gently away, but she would turn around on me seriously,
and ask me solemn questions.
Were children never kidnapped?

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 Was it, then, not true that there was slavery in Kabul?
Was it so very absurd this big man should be able to carry off a tiny child?
I urged that, though not impossible, it was highly improbable. But this was not
enough, and her dread persisted. As it was impossible, however, it did not seem right
to forbid the man the house, and the intimacy went on unchecked.
Once a year in the middle of January Rahmun, the Kabuliwallah, was in the
habit of returning to his country, and as the time approached he would be very busy,
going from house to house collecting his debts. This year, however, he could always
find time to come and see Mini. It would have seemed to an outsider that there was
some conspiracy between the two, for when he could not come in the morning, he
would appear in the evening.
Even to me it was a little startling now and then, in the corner of a dark room,
suddenly to surprise this tall, loose-garmented, much be bagged man; but when Mini
would run in smiling, with her, “O! Kabuliwallah! Kabuliwallah!” and the two
friends, so far apart in age would subside into their laughter and their old jokes, I felt
reassured.
One morning, a few days before he had made up his mind to go, I was
correcting my proof sheets in my study. It was chilly weather. Through the window
the rays of the sun touched my feet, and the slight warmth was very welcome. It was
almost eight o’clock, and the early pedestrians were returning home, with their heads
covered. All at once, I heard an uproar in the street, and, looking out, saw Rahmun
being led away bound between two policemen, and behind them a crowd of curious
boys. There were blood-stains on the clothes of the Kabuliwallah, and one of the
policemen carried a knife.
Hurrying out, I stopped them, and enquired what it all meant. Partly from one,
partly from another, I gathered that a certain neighbour had owed the peddler
something for a Rampuri shawl, but had falsely denied having bought it, and that in
the course of the quarrel, Rehmun had struck him. Now in the heat of his excitement,
the prisoner began calling him enemy all sorts of names, when suddenly in a
verandah of my house appeared my little Mini, with her usual exclamation: “O
Kabuliwallah! Kabuliwallah!” Rahmun’s face lighted up as he turned to her. He had
no bag under his arm today, so she could not discuss the elephant with him. She at
once therefore proceeded to the next question: “ Are you going to the father-in-law’s
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house?” Rahmun laughed and said: “ Just where I am going, little one !” Then seeing
that the reply did not amuse the child, he held up his fettered hands. “Ali” he said, “ I
would have thrashed that old father-in-law, but my hands are bound!”
On a charge of murderous assault, Rahmum was sentenced to some year’s
imprisonment.
Time passed away, and he was not remembered. The accustomed work in the
accustomed place was ours, and the thought of the once free mountaineer spending
his years in prison seldom or never occurred to us. Even my light-hearted Mini, I am
ashamed to say, forgot her old friend. New companions filled her life. As she grew
older, she spent more of her time with girls. So much time indeed did she spend with
them that she came no more, as she used to do, to her father’s room. I was scarcely
on speaking terms with her.
Years had passed away. It was once more autumn and we had made
arrangements for our Mini’s marriage. It was to take place during the Puja Holidays.
With Durga returning to Kailas, the light of our home also was to depart to her
husband’s house, and leave her father’s in the shadow.
The morning was bright. After the rains, there was a sense of ablution in the air,
and the sun rays looked like pure gold. So bright were they that they gave a beautiful
radiance even to the sordid brick walls of our Calcutta lanes. Since early dawn to day
the wedding-pipes had been sounding, and at each beat my own heart throbbed. The
wail of the tune, Bhairavi, seemed to intensify my pain at approaching separation.
My Mini was to be married to-night.
From early morning noise and bustle had pervaded the house. In the courtyard
the canopy had to slung on its bamboo poles; the chandeliers with their tinkling
sound must be hung in each room and verandah. There was no end of hurry and
excitement. I was sitting in my study, looking through the accounts, when some one
entered, saluting respectfully, and stood before me. It was Rahmun the Kabuliwallah.
At first I did not recognize him. He had no bag, nor the long hair, nor the same
vigour that he used to have. But he smiled, and I knew him again.
“when did you come, Rahmun?” I asked him.
“Last evening,” he said, “ I was released from jail.”

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 The words struck harsh upon my ears. I had never before talked with one who
had wounded his fellow, and my heart shrank within itself, when I realized this, for I
felt that the day would have been better- omened had he not turned up.
“There are ceremonies going on,” I said, “ and I am busy. Could you perhaps
come another day?”
Skimming and Scanning questions 4.2.3
Q.I Answer the following questions in a word, a phrase or a sentences.
1. What was in Kabul according to Mini’s mother?
2. What is the name of Kabuliwala?
3. What was the charge on Rahmun?
4. When was Mini’s marriage is fixed?
5. Which tune is being played?
6. What did Mini’s father ask Rahmun?
4.2.4 Section-IV :
The Text :
At once he turned to go; but as he reached the door he hesitated, and said: “May
I not see the little one, sir, for a moment?” It was his belief that Mini was still the
same. He had pictured her running to him as she used, calling “O Kabuliwallah!
Kabuliwallah!” He had imagined too that they would laugh and talk together, just as
of old. In fact, in memory of former days he had brought, carefully wrapped up in
paper, a few almonds and raisins and grapes, obtained somehow from a countryman,
for his own little fund was dispersed.
I said again: "There is a ceremony in the house, and you will not be able to see
any one to today"
The man’s face fell. He looked wistfully at me for a moment, said “ Good
morning,” and went out. I felt a little sorry, and would have called him back, but I
found he was returning of his own accord. He came close up to me holding out his
offering and said: “I brought these few things, sir, for the little one. Will you give
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 I took them and was going to pay him, but he caught my hand and said: “You
are very kind, sir! Keep me in your recollection. Do not offer me money!—you have
a little girl, I too have one like her in my own home. I think of her, and bring fruits to
your child, not to make a profit for myself.”
Saying this, he put his hand inside his big loose robe, and brought out a small
and dirty piece of paper. With great care he unfolded this, and smoothed it out with
both hands on my table. It bore the impression of a little band. Not a photograph. Not
drawing. The impression of an ink-smeared hand laid flat on the paper. This touch of
his own little daughter had been always on his heart, as he had come year after year
to Calcutta, to sell his wares in the streets.
Tears came to my eyes. I forgot that he was a poor Kabuli fruit-seller, while I
was—but no, what was I more than he? He also was a father. That impression of the
hand of his little Parbati in her distant mountain home reminded me of my own little
Mini.
I sent for Mini immediately from the inner apartment. Many difficulties were
raised, but I would not listen. Clad in the red silk of her wedding-day, with sandal
paste on her forehead, and adorned as a young bride, Mini came, and stood bashfully
before me.
The Kabuliwallah looked a little staggered at the apparition. He could not revive
their old friendship. At last he smiled and said: “Little one, are you going to your
father-in-law’s house?”
But Mini now understood the meaning of the word “father-in-law,” and she
could not reply to him as of old. She flushed up at the question, and stood before him
with her bride-like face turned down.
I remembered the day when the Kabuliwallah and my Mini had first met, and I
felt sad. When she had gone, Rahmun heaved a deep sigh, and sat down on the floor.
The idea had suddenly come to him that his daughter too must have grown in this
long time, and that he would have to make friends with her anew. Assuredly he
would not find her, as he used to know her. And besides, what might not have
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 The marriage-pipes sounded, and the mild autumn sun steamed round us. But
Rahmun sat in the little Calcutta lane, and saw before him the barren mountains of
Afghanistan.
I took out a bank-note, and gave it to him, saying: “Go back to your own
daughter, Rahmun, in your country, and may the happiness of your meeting bring
good fortune to my child!”
Having made this present, I had curtail some of the festivities. I could not have
the electric lights I had intended, nor the military band, and the ladies of the house
were despondent at it. But to me the wedding feast was all the brighter for the
thought that in a distant land a long-lost father met again with his only child.

Skimming and Scanning questions 4.2.4

A) Answer the following questions in a word, a phrase or a sentences.
1. What is the wish of Rahmun?
2. What did Rahmun bring in the paper?
3. What is the profession of Rahmun?
4. What is the name of Rahmun’s daughter?
5. How many years did Rahmun live in the jail?
B) Rewrite the following sentences choosing the correct alternative from those
given with them and complete the sentences.
1. The word father-in-law has other meaning for the Kabuliwala. It was.......... .
a. the wife's home in Afganistan
b. the prison officer
c. the distant, harsh relative
d. the father-in-law of Mini
2. The crumpled paper in the pocket of the Kabuliwala contained............. .
a. a photograph of his daughter
b. the photograph of Mini

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d. the handprint of his little daughter
3. The father of Mini was a considerate man but her mother was............ .
a. a hot-headed woman b. afraid of many things
c. traditional minded d. skillful cook
4. The narrator gave Kabuliwala a bank note. As a result.......... .
a. he had to cancel the marriage of Mini
b. he had to cancel some of the marriage festivities
c. he had to take loan from the bank
d. he had to postpone the publication of his novel
5. On seeing Mini in her marriage costume the Kabuliwala was............ .
a. stunned b. frightened
c. worried d. displeased
6. The theme of "Kabuliwala" is..............
a. marriage of Mini b. humanity of common men
c. fear of Mini's mother d. height of the mountains
C) Vocabulary Exercises:
A. Complete the following table supplying correct forms of words where
possible.
Noun Verb Adjective adverb
-- To know Knowledgeable Knowledgeably
difference differ -- Differently
conversation -- Conversational Conversationally
protection protect protective --
-- explain Explaining/explainable Explainably

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4.3 Terms to Remember :
Chatter (v) : talk rapidly and continuously
Contrive (v) : to scheme
Precarious (adj). : uncertain
Raisins (n) : dried grapes
Demur (n) : objection
Judicious (adj) : wise
Quaint (adj) : attractive, unusual
Dignity (n) : nobility
Ripple (n) : movement
Merriment (n) : enjoyment
Witticism (n) : amusement
Behindhand (adj) : late
Euphemism (n) : mild term
Thrash (v) : hit repeatedly
Discomfit (v) : make uneasy
Glens (n) : deep, narrow valley
Vividly (adv) : clearly
Defile (v) : make dirty
Fetter (v) : restrain with chain
Merchandise (n) : goods for
Implore (v) : to ask something with great emotion
Persist (v.) : continue firmly
Subside (v.) : make less loud
Curious (adj.) : inquisitive
Bustle (n) : noisy activity
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Pervade (v) : spread through
Ablution (n) : purification,showering
Slung (n) : device for throwing stone
Chandeliers (n). : branched support, hanging from the ceiling
Tinkle (v) : to make light ringing sound
Shrink (v) : become smaller
Wistfully (adv) : showing sadness
Recollection (n) : remembrance
Ware (n) : goods for sale
Adorn (v) : make beautiful
Apparition (n) : image
Revive (v) : to make strong, bring to life
Despondent ( adj) : having lost hope

4.4 Summary:
The story the ‘Kabuliwala’ is narrated by the father of a five-year-old Mini. The
talkative and innocent Mini and Rahamat, a hawker of dry fruits from Kabul, are the
central characters of the story.
One morning Mini saw a Kabuliwala through her window and called out to him.
He was a tall, untidily dressed man with a turban on his head and a bag slung over
his shoulder. As soon as the Kabuliwala drew close the house, Mini ran and vanished
inside. Her father bought some dry fruits and chatted with him and came to know of
him and his family at Kabul. Then he called Mini and introduced her to Rahamat, the
Kabuliwala so that she would shed her fear of the Kabuliwala. Rahamat gave Mini
some dry fruits from his bag.
Later Mini’s father found that his daughter and Kabuliwala had struck up a
happy relationship, and the two of them met practically every day. The Kabuliwala

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was a patient listener to Mini’s tittle-tattle and also gave her loads of nuts and raisins.
The Kabuliwala entertained Mini with stories of his motherland.
Mini’s mother, Rama, was against the growing companionship between her
daughter and the Kabuliwala and feared he would kidnap Mini one day and sell her
off as a slave.
All of a sudden disaster struck the Kabuliwala. He was arrested and sentenced to
several years of incarceration for stabbing one of his customers who owed him
money. After his release from the jail, the Kabuliwala went to Mini’s house to meet
her. However, He found that Mini had grown up, and it was her wedding day.
Mini’s father was not happy to see the Kabuliwala on that day and considered it
inauspicious to let him see Mini. He persuaded the Kabuliwala to go away. Before
going away, the Kabuliwala left a few grapes and raisins for Mini. He then showed
Mini’s father a tatty piece of paper with a charcoal print of a tiny hand. It was his
daughter’s. Filled with pity for the Kabuliwala, Mini’s father called Mini. When the
Kabuliwala saw Mini in her bridal dress, he was surprised to find a young woman he
could not recognise. Mini was embarrassed when she thought of their long-forgotten
companionship and shied away. The Kabuliwala found it extremely difficult to
reconcile with the reality. Seeing the predicament of the Kabuliwala, Mini’s father
offered him enough money to return to Kabul to join up with his daughter. Even
though he had to cut down some of the wedding celebrations, he was contented with
his humanistic gesture to a distressed fat.

4.5 Key to self assessment questions :

4.2.1 - Section-I :
1. 5
2. Ramdayal
3. Elephant
4. Father
5. Kabuliwala
6. 17
7. Protrap Singh Kanchanlata

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4.2.2 - Section II :
1. A coin of eight anna
2. Mini
3. She wants to know what is in the bag of Kabuliwala
4. The jail
5. Beware of that man
4.2.3 Section III :
1. Slave
2. Rahmun
3. Charge of murder
4. During Puja holidays
5. Bhairavi
6. To come another day
4.2.4 Section IV :
1. To see Mini’s face
2. a few almonds and raisins and grapes
3. Fruit seller
4. Parbati
5. Eight
B) 1. b. the prison officer
2. d. the handprint of his little daughter
3. b. afraid of many things
4. b. he had to cancel some of the marriage festivities
5. a. stunned
6. b. humanity of common men

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C) Knowledge
Different
Converse
Protectively
Explanation

4.6 Exercise:
Q. I. Answer the following questions in 3 or 4 sentences.
1. When did Mini overcome her fear of the Kabuliwala?
Ans.: Mini shouted "Kabuliwala! Kabuliwala!" and when he looked in her direction
she darted to her mother in fear, because she believed that the man carries 2-3
children in his big bag. But soon things changed. The writer does not tell how it
happened, but one day he saw Mini laughing and talking to the Kabuliwala and
enjoying the time with him. Surely she had overcome her fear and the dry fruits and
raisins that he gave her did the trick.
2. Why was Mimi's mother full of suspicion about the Kabuliwala?
Ans. : Mini's mother was a very timid woman who imagines that thieves, tigers,
elephants, snakes and drunkards would trouble them any moment. In her eyes the
Kabuliwala was a danger to her daughter because she like Mini, had heard stories
about such people carrying away the children. She felt that the Kabuliwala would do
the same with Mini and one day would steal away her daughter. In short, she
believed that he was not a good man to put faith in and one of these days he would
kidnap her girl and take her to Kabul to be sold as a slave.
3. Why did Mini's mother not like the act of her daughter accepting gifts from
the Kabuliwala?
Ans.: Mini and the Kabuliwala were friends, intimate friends and out of friendly
feelings he gave her dry fruits and raisins. He gave her these gifts because he
remembered his own Parbati on looking at Mini, but he had never- said so. Naturally
Mini's mother felt that if Mini accepts, gifts from him, he would steal away from
them, as the stories were in the air. No wonder, the eight-anna coin created a row
between Mini and her mother and she shouted at Mini for accepting the coin.

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4. Why did the Kabuliwala stab the customer?
Ans. : The Kabuliwala was a pedlar selling various items brought from Kabul. One
of the neighbours of the narrator had purchased a Rampur shawl from him,
promising to pay later, but then declined the very fact that he purchased the thing
from him. This, naturally, started a quarrel between the customer and the Kabuliwala.
The quarrel led to scuffle and in the scuffle, hot-headed Kabuliwala stabbed him with
his knife, injuring him seriously.
5. Why could the narrator not recognize the Kabuliwala at first? .
Ans.: The Kabuliwala was arrested by the police for the assault on his customer and
was sent to prison for some years. Naturally his visits to the house of the narrator
stopped and he slowly forgot the man totally. Even Mini forgot him, he tells us, as
she grew into womanhood and spent much of her time with girls of her age. When he
returned to the house of the narrator completing the punishment, the narrator did not
recognize him, because he had gone out of his mind. He did recognize him when he
smiled, but not before that.
6. Why was the narrator annoyed with the Kabuliwala?
Ans. : The Kabuliwala came to the house of the narrator to meet Mini, but the day
was auspicious for Mini because she was going to get married that day. The narrator
felt that the Kabuliwala, coming on such an auspicious day, is an ill men. So he
asked the Kabuliwala to go away and come on some other day. He turned to go but
again returned with the request to see Mini and this annoyed the narrator. The
annoyance, however, did not last long and he called her out, against the wishes of the
ladies.
7. How was Rahmun hurt by the narrator?
Ans. : The Kabuliwala came to the house of the narrator to meet Mini, but the day
was auspicious for Mini because she was going to get married that day. The narrator
felt that the Kabuliwala coming on such an auspicious day is an ill men. So he asked
the Kabuliwala to go away and come on some other day. The poor fellow had come
to see Mini and his daughter in little Mini. Naturally, he felt hurt by the curt reply of
the narrator but could not say so and tolerated it meekly.
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Ans. : The Kabuliwala was doing business quite smoothly for years, it seems, from
the description given in the story. He sold a number of things and there were people
who bought things from him on promise to pay later. But the quarrel with one
customer, who flatly denied having bought a Rampuri shawl, gave a turn to his life.
He stabbed the customer in anger and had to pay for it by spending many years in
jail. When he came out and came to see Mini, he became aware that like Mini his
daughter too had grown to womanhood and the very thought shocked him. Had he
not stabbed the man things might have gone on as they were before it.
9. Why was the Kabuliwala shocked when he saw Mini in her wedding robes?
Ans. : The Kabuliwala came to see Mini after he was released from the jail. Many
years had passed and still he was under the impression that Mini was still a little one.
When he actually saw Mini in her wedding costume, ready to go to her son-in-law's
house, he became acutely aware of his the fact that even his daughter Parbati must
have been grown up like Mini. That was a great shock for the poor man. He sat down
on the floor thinking of his daughter, whom he had no contact for years.
Q.II. Write notes on the following in 7 to 8 sentences.
1. Kabuliwala :
Ans. : The Kabuliwala was a Pathan from Afghanistan, doing business as a pedlar in
Kolkata. He sold dry fruits, raisins and other items like shawls to people and earned
his living. Every year he went to his land in January to meet the members of his
family. He had a daughter of the same age as Mini and that was what attracted him to
her. He made friends with her and spend some time in her company nearly every day.
He was a tall, big man wearing lose garments and a big turban on his head. He
carried a big bag on his back in which he kept his selling things. From what we read
about him, he did not seem to be one of those who steal little children as Mini's
mother believed. On the contrary, he was attached to Mini because she reminded him
of his daughter, whose hand impression he always carried in his pocket, close to his
heart. That proves that he loved his daughter and even Mini who was of her age.
2. Mini :
Ans. : We meet Mini in two different roles : the little, bold, chatterbox who forms
intimate friendship with the Kabuliwala and the shy, grown up girl of marriageable
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protection because she believed, thanks to her mother and other women, that the
Kabuliwala always carried a couple of little children in his bag. But soon she
overcame this fear. The dry fruits and raisins did the trick and she talked frankly and
freely with the Kabuliwala. As the narrator tells us, the jokes they made were stale
and of ten repeated. But the two enjoyed them, one such joke being related to the
word father-in-law.
Before she met the Kabuliwala the narrator tells us that she never could keep
quiet and asked question after question and she had good rapport with her father. But
that rapport came to an end when she grew and began to spend most of her time-with
girlfriends. The grown up Mini that the Kabuliwala saw was quite a different person
from the one he knew. But it was this grown up girl that made him aware of the fact
that even his daughter must have grown up like Mini. Thus, Mini's role in the story
bares significance in both her aspects.
3. The theme of love in "Kabuliwala"
Ans. : "Kabuliwala" is a story of the intimate relationship between a little girl named
Mini and an aging Pathan, the Kabuliwala. The most symbolic aspect is 'love'. The
narrator loved his daughter and gave her full freedom to talk to him. Mini's mother,
the traditional minded person that she was, was obviously worried about her
relationship with the Kabuliwala and that was out of love. But the love that existed
between the little girl and a stranger, the Kabuliwala is the core of the story.

4.7 Writing Activity:

1. Write a note on the relationship between you and your parents.
2. Interview your mother about the family relationship.
3. Write a note on urban and rural family that you have experienced.

4.8 Reference for further Study:

1. Tagore, Rabindranath. Collected Stories. New Delhi: G. B. D. Books. 2012.
Print.
2. https://www.britannica.com/biography/Rabindranath-Tagore
3. https://www.culturalindia.net/indian-art/painters/rabindranath-tagore.html

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 B) Offering in the Temple
Desika Vinayakam Pillai
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction
4.2 Poem
4.3 Terms to Remember
4.4 Summary
4.5 Skimming and scanning questions
4.6 Key to Self-assessment questions
4.7 Exercises

4.0 Objectives :
After studying this unit students will understand:
• Importance of human values.
• He relation of man and God.

4.1 Introduction :
Desika Vinayakam Pillai (1876-1954. was born in the Southern district of Tamil
Nadu in a village called Theroor. He adopted simple living and high thinking as his
guiding principal. He was a great follower of Gandhi and wore khadi and used to
spin the charkha. He was deeply concerned with the uplift of the downtrodden. He
was honoured with Kavimani and was commemorated on an Indian Postage stamp.
He wrote many songs for children and his poems are lessons for them who learn
Tamil in schools around the world. His masterpieces include Asiya Jothi,Nanji Nattu,
Manmiyam and the translation of the work ‘Omar Khayyam’. He occupies a special
place in Tamil literature.
In the present poem, the poet states firmly that the existence of God one can feel
within one’s heart and not in the world outside. And if one can find Him within
oneself, His appearance can be seen everywhere.

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4.2 Poem :
I saw the entire temple:
I climbed up the spires as well.
My friends! Despite my search
I saw the Lord nowhere.

I saw the holy tank; the street

Where the chariot moves.
Me poor! I did not see the treasure
Of one’s hard times.

There were sculpted figures;

Painting wrought beautifully.
My friend! Yet I found nowhere
The Lord wonderful.

Gold was there; jewels too.

Scented garlands many.
But my father, my Lord,
Him I saw nowhere.

They burnt joss sticks;

Lights were then waved.
My friend! I did not see there
The helper in times of need.

I saw the city of Tillai;

And the dance hall famous.
But my eyes did not gain
Him who can melt even stone.

My friend! It is no use
Worshipping lovely things
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 To roam as it will.

He is within the heart!

Understand this for sure.
If you could see him within
You would meet him in the temple too.
Kovil Valipadu, 1938 Translated by Prema Nandakumar

4.3 Terms to Remember:

Entire (adj) : whole
Spire(n) : structure on the top of the temple
Chariot (n) : stately, triumphal carriage
Sculpted(adj) : carved
Wrought (v) : made fashioned, beaten out shaped by hammering
Joss sticks(n) : incense stick
Wave (adj) : moving from side to side
Helper(n) : a person who gives assistance
Gain (n) : obtain, secure
Roam(v) : travel aimlessly,unsystematically
Worship(v) : show reverence and adoration for

4.4 Summary:
The poem "Offering in the Temple" highlights the fact that God is present but
we cannot see Him even if we search the temples, the spires, the prayers, the streets
over which the chariots move, sculptures and paintings. Such search is futile unless
one sees God within one's heart. The poet tells how he failed to find; God even after
his long and tenacious search. He failed because he did not find it in his heart. That is
the abode of God, he states. The theme of the poem can be stated as: The dwelling

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place of God is the heart of man and He lives in every man's heart. Unless one finds
God in one's heart, he will not be able to see Him anywhere else, however one tries.
The question whether God exists or not is being discussed for ages and still it is
undecided. Various ways and means have-been applied to find God or at least to seek
His presence. The poet gives a long list of the places he looked for the Divine
presence. Some of them are the temple, the spires, the prayers, the streets. over which
the chariot moved and sculptures and paintings. But wherever he searched, he failed
to find God/ the Divine. Is it the fact then that the God does not exist? The poet gives
the answer to the question in the last part of the poem. He points out that God is
present in everybody's heart. If one can see Him in the heart one can find God even
in temples.

4.5 Skimming and Scanning questions:

A) Rewrite the following sentences choosing the correct alternative from those
given with them and complete the sentences.
1. The poem is titled "Offering in the Temple" because......
a. that is our civilization
b. that is our tradition
c. that is not the right way of worshiping God
d. that is not very popular form of worshiping God
2. You will find God in temple, says the poet, if..............
a. you look carefully for it
b. you can see God in your heart
c. you are a true devotee of God
d. you are conscious of 'God's existence
3. Though the poet searched God everywhere, he could find Him---------
a. in the temple b. nowhere
c. on the spires d. in the street
4. The poet found many scented--------

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 a. garlands b.jewels
c. gold d. sculpted figures
5. People burnt -----------to worship God.
a. joss sticks b. scented papers
c. camphor d. lamps
6. ---------can melt even stone.
a. Friend b. Tillai
c. God d. The eyes of the poet
7. According to the poet worshipping lovely things is -----------------
a. fruitful b. useful
c. useless d. gainful
8. God is within our----------
a. reach b. heart
c. temples d. lovely things
B) Answer the following question in one sentence each.
1. Did the poet find God in the temple?
2. What is the poet searching for?
3. Where did the poet not find treasure?
4. How was the painting?
5. How is the Lord?
6. What did the poet not see in times of need?
7. Where is the famous dance hall?
8. What is useless according to the poet?
9. Where is the God according to the poet?
10. When can one see God in the temple according to the poet?
11. Why did the poet call himself poor?
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C) Vocabulary Exercises:
A. Give synonyms of the following :
1. entire
2. search
3. famous
4. roam
5. meet
6. gain
7. treasure

4.6 Key to self assessment questions

A) 1. c. that is not the right way of worshiping God
2. b. you can see God in your heart
3. b. nowhere
4. a. garlands
5. a. joss sticks
6. c. God
7. c. useless
8. b. heart
B) 1. The poet did not find God in the temple.
2. The poet is searching for God.
3. In sculptures and paintings.
4. The painting was beautifully wrought.
5. The Lord is wonderful.
6. The poet did not see the helper in times of need.
7. The famous dance hall is in the city named Tillai.
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 8. According to the poet, it is useless to worship the lovely things.
9. According to the poet, the God is within the hearts of human beings.
10. One can see God in the temple only when he sees God within him.
11. The poet called himself poor because he did not see the treasure of one’s
hand.
C)
1. full, total
2. hunt, look
3. reputed, popular
4. stray, wander
5. encounter
6. increase, addition
7. value, prize, wealth

4.7 Exercises:
1. Answer the following questions in 3 or 4 sentences.
1. How is it possible to see God within us and inside the temple?
Ans: The poet Desika Pillai, firmly states that the existence of God one can feel
within one’s heart and not in the world outside. It is not possible to find the existence
of God inside the temple.
2. Where did the poet try to find God? Did he succeed in it?
Ans: The poet tried to find God in various ways. He searched at the entire temple,
holy tank, the street, sculpted figure, a city Tillai etc. He did not become succeed in
finding the God.
3. Why could the poet not find God?
Ans: The poet could not find the God wherever he went in search of Him. There
were painted sculpted figures, joss sticks, lights and worshipping of lovely things but
it was no use. According to the poet, God is within the heart of human being.

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4. How is it possible to see God within us and inside the temple?
Ans. : The poem "Offering in the Temple" by Desika Pillai speaks about the
existence of God. The poet believes that God exists, but cannot be seen in outward
display of devotion like sculptures, paintings, incense burning, singing prayers and
such things. But one can see God within one's own heart and if he/she is able to find
God within, he/she will see it even in temple, because God is everywhere,
omnipotent (all powerful. and omnipresent)
5. Where did the poet try to find God? With what success?
Ans. : The poet was looking for God in various places. He went through the temple
and its spires, the holy tank, the roads through which the chariot moved, the.
sculptures, paintings, gold, jewels, scented garlands, incense sticks and sacred lights
but God was nowhere to be seen. Even in the famous dance hall in Tillai the God
was not found.
6. Why could the, poet not find-God?.
Ans.: The poet looked for God in various places including the temple, the spires,
the prayers, the streets over which the chariot moved and sculptures and paintings.
But wherever he searched, he failed to find God, because unless one finds God in
one's heart one is not going to find it at any other places, he concludes. That is the
theme of the poem "Offering in the Temple".
2. Write notes on the following in 7 to 9 sentences.
1. The Presence of the Divine
Ans.: The question whether God exists or not is being discussed for ages and still
it is undecided. Various ways and means have-been applied to find God or at least to
seek His presence. The poet gives a long list of the places he looked for the Divine
presence. Some of them are the temple, the spires, the prayers, the streets. over which
the chariot moved and sculptures and paintings. But wherever he searched, he failed
to find God/ the Divine. Is it the fact then that the God does not exist? The poet gives
the answer to the question in the last part of the poem. He points out that God is
present in everybody's heart. If one can see Him in the heart one can find God even
in temples.

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2. The theme of the poem “Offering in the Temple”
Ans.: The poem "Offering in the Temple" highlights the fact that God is present but
we cannot see Him even if we search the temples, the spires, the prayers, the streets
over which the chariots move, sculptures and paintings. Such search is futile unless
one sees God within one's heart. The poet tells how he failed to find; God even after
his long and tenacious search. He failed because he did not find it in his heart. That is
the abode of God, he states. The theme of the poem can be stated as: The dwelling
place of God is the heart of man and He lives in every man's heart. Unless one finds
God in one's heart, he will not be able to see Him anywhere else, however one tries.
3. Explain “God is within us”
Ans.: The theme of the poem “Offering in the Temple” is the presence of God in this
universe. If you look for God around you, you will not find Him, till you find Him in
your own heart, says the poet. It in this respect the statement “God is within-us”
comes. A person's heart or mind is the; dwelling place, the abode of God, the poet
states. We will not be able to see God anywhere else unless we find Him in our
hearts. And this is not going to happen by giving offerings in the temple. All you
need is faith, belief in the presence of God within you, he states. The God resides
within us, but unfortunately we look for Him outside, he regrets.
4. The title “Offering in the Temple”
Ans. : The title “Offering in the Temple”, we think is a bit confusing at the outset,
because the poet, during the entire poem, makes no offering to any god in any
temple. The poem is simple; and presents no problems for the readers and yet the
title baffles us. The poem talks about the various places the poet visited in search of
God and his failure to find him. Well, actually a person searches God most of the
times when he/she has to appeal, demand or seek something from the God. And that
probably is the thing that the title suggests. The person looking for god was hoping to
win His favours by offering him something. Even the incense burned and the joss
sticks and lights waved are a part of that offering and it is in this sense that the title
can be seen.

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 C) The Felling of the Banyan Tree
Dilip Chitre
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction
4.2 Poem
4.3 Terms to Remember
4.4 Summary
4.5 Skimming and scanning questions
4.6 Key to Self-assessment questions
4.7 Exercises

4.0 Objectives
Student will understand
• the importance of environment
• relation of man and nature

4.1 Introduction:
Dilip Chitre was born in Baroda. He wrote poems in Marathi and English. He is
one of the major post modern poets in Marathi literature. He depicted the village and
cultural life of Marathi people through his poems that left a great impact of the
development of Marathi literature in particular and Indian literature in general.
His literary works are celebrated with national and international awards like
Sahitya Akadamy for his Marathi Poetry. His translation works of Saint Tukaram’s
Abhangs is known as his greatest literary works.
To learn his poems becomes a journey to culture and traditions through his
images. The present poem The Felling of the Banyan Tree is published in his work
Travelling in a Cage in 1980.

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4.2 Poem:
My father told the tenants to leave
Who lived on the houses surrounding our house on the hill
One by one the structures were demolished
Only our own house remained and the trees
Trees are sacred my grandmother used to say
Felling them is a crime but he massacred them all
The sheoga, the oudumber, the neem were all cut down
But the huge banyan tree stood like a problem
Whose roots lay deeper than all our lives
My father ordered it to be removed
The banyan tree was three times as tall as our house
Its trunk had a circumference of fifty feet
Its scraggy aerial roots fell to the ground
From thirty feet or more so first they cut the branches
Sawing them off for seven days and the heap was huge
Insects and birds began to leave the tree
And then they came to its massive trunk
Fifty men with axes chopped and chopped
The great tree revealed its rings of two hundred years
We watched in terror and fascination this slaughter
As a raw mythology revealed to us its age
Soon afterwards we left Baroda for Bombay
Where there are no trees except the one
Which grows and seethes in one’s dreams, its aerial roots
Looking for the ground to strike.

4.3 Terms to Remember:

Tenants : people who live on rent
Sacred : holy

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Felling : cutting
Massacred : cut down
Scraggly : thin
Aerial roots : roots growing in the air
Seethes : extremely excited

4.4 Summary:
Through his poem, ‘The Felling of the Banyan Tree,’ Dilip Chitre has expressed
his concern over ecology and his grave concern for nature. The poem, “The Felling
of Banyan Tree” is a silent protest against the disregard for moral values on which
our traditions were built upon and which are now considered as ‘age old values’.
Chitre has expressed his resentment through the poem in which he speaks of his
father’s decision to ask the tenants living in the surroundings of his house, to
evacuate and the structures to be demolished just keeping their house intact, and of
course the trees though temporarily. Though the poet’s grandmother said that ‘trees
are sacred and felling them is a crime,’ the poet’s father paid no heed to the religious
sentiments of the poets grandmother and brought down all the trees. The legends that
surround these trees are, these trees are considered extremely relevant and holy in
Hinduism. Cutting tress is considered a sinful act as they are worshipped according
to the Holy Scriptures. Even now also in our society, the ‘raw mythology’ stands
excessively relevant. Thus the poet tries to emphasize on the religious sentiments of
the old folks like his grandmother.
The aerial roots of the trees drooping from above in an effort to touch the
ground proves the existence of the tree through decades and years. The poet
witnessed the massacre of the tree which he calls ‘slaughter’ with great horror, and
then leaving for Bombay soon which was quite different from Baroda in respect of
the growth of trees. There are no trees in Bombay except the one which is carried by
him from Baroda in his faded dreams. The memory of the Banyan tree in his own
garden flashes in his mind and he personifies the tree by saying that this is the tree
that grows in one’s dreams (i.e in poet’s dreams) and says that it boils (seethes) in
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 The poet lays utmost stresses on the age old customs, and expresses his concern,
anguish and resentment for mistreating and disregarding the moral values of our
traditions through his verses in his poem, “The Felling of Banyan Tree”.

4.5 Skimming and Scanning questions :

A) Rewrite the following sentences choosing the correct alternative from those
given below them and complete the sentences.
1. The tenants were asked to leave because........... .
a. they did not give their rent regularly
b. they were reluctant to increase the rent
c. the father wanted to destroy the buildings
d. the buildings were to be renovated
2. The grandmother used to say that.......... .
a. trees are sacred and felling them is a crime .
b. trees are green and felling them is a crime
c. trees are sacred though felling them is simple
d. trees are sacred and felling them is a cruel act
3. The huge banyan tree was a problem because....... .
a. it had entered the speaker's building
b. it was huge and. wide
c. it was partly in other's property
d. it posed the danger to the roof if it feel on it
4. ............ people were working on the tree for several days.
a. Fifteen b. Fifty c. Fifty-five d. Fifty plus
5. The age of the banyan trees was....... .
a. less than two hundred years b. exactly two hundred years
c. more than two hundred years d. around two hundred years
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6. In Bombay, the speaker says, there are trees............ .
a. in man's dreams b. big gardens
c. selected places d. on both sides of the roads
B) Answer the following questions in a word, a phrase or a sentence.
1. Who lived in the houses surrounding the speaker’s house on the hill?
2. What were demolished one by one?
3. Who used to say “Trees are sacred”?
4. Why did the poet’s father ask the tenants to leave?
5. How many days did they take to cut its branches?
6. How was Bombay different from Baroda?
7. What was the circumference of the trunk of the banyan tree?
8. What is the speciality of a banyan tree?
9. What was the height of the banyan tree?
10. How many people chopped the massive trunk?
11. Who said that feeling trees is a crime?
12. Which of the following is not word used in the poem to describe the cutting
of the Bunyan tree: kill, massacre, chop, demolish, fell, saw off, cut.
13. Why does the poet use verbs like massacre and chop?
14. What tells us the age of a tree?
C) Vocabulary Exercises.
Complete the following table filling in the gaps where possible.
Noun Verb Adjective Adverb
-- to ring ringing ringingly
scrag scrag scraggy --
fascination fascinate -- fascinatingly

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4.6 Key to self assessment questions:
Section I:
A) 1. c. the father wanted to destroy the buildings
2. a. trees are sacred and felling them is a crime .
3. b. it was huge and. wide
4. b. Fifty
5. b. exactly two hundred years
6. a. in man's dreams
B)
1. Tenants.
2. Structures.
3. Grandmother
4. He wished to demolish the houses.
5. Seven.
6. There were no trees in Bombay; they were only in dreams.
7. Fifty feet.
8. Its scraggy aerial roots.
9. Thirty plus feet.
10. Fifty.
11. Grandmother.
12. Demolish.
13. To suggest that felling a tree is as serious a crime as murder.
14. The rings on the trunk.
C) Vocabulary Exercises.
ring
scraggly
fascinating

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4.7 Exercises:
Q .1. Answer the following questions in 3 or 4 sentences.
1. What was a crime according to the poet's grandmother?
Ans.: The poet’s grandmother seems to be a god-fearing woman. ; She often used to
say that trees like sheoga, oudumbar, and neem; were sacred and so it was a crime to
cut them down. Her approach to trees is thus religious and she thought in terms of sin
and virtue: However, her objection went a begging and her son, the poet's father cut
down all of them including the Banyan tree, thus grieving his mother.
2. Why did the Banyan tree stand like a problem?
Ans.: The Banyan tree was very huge in size and height. As the poet tells us it stood
three times taller than their house. Its roots, he says, had gone deep in the soil. The
main stem, that is,; the trunk of the tree had a circumference of fifty feet and its
scraggly aerial roots fell to the ground from thirty feet or more. From all this
description the poet highlights the fact that killing this particular tree was a pains
taking and long lasting joy. The poem is about this job.
3. Describe in brief the cutting of the Banyan tree.
Ans. : The father of the poet gave orders to cut down the Banyan tree. Fifty people
with axes were engaged for this work. First they cut off the aerial roots arid the
branches. This took them seven days. Then the attacked the stem/trunk. They
chopped and chopped the massive trunk for days and finally the tree was on the ;
ground. A huge pile of wood was made on the ground. The poet: says that even then
the work was not over, because the roots had to be uprooted and then only, the work
would be over.
4. What was done before the felling of the Banyan tree?
Ans: The poet’s father lived in Baroda. There he had a big area where there were
many houses. He lived in one of them and the other houses were given on rent. One
day he asked the tenants to vacate their houses near the house of the poet’s father
where he lived with his family. All these houses were on a hill. Then all these
structures were demolished one by one before the operation of felling trees began.
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5. How does the poem "The Felling of a Bunyan Tree" comment on the
modem man's search for roots?
Ans. : The Banyan tree in the poem "The Felling of a Banyan Tree" symbolizes the
loss of ecological relationship between man and nature. People living in cities like
Baroda and Mumbai have become cruelly practical. Now we rarely find big trees in
big cities as the land is occupied by concrete buildings and asphalt roads. Why the
father of the poet gave orders to cut all the trees around the house and demolish the
houses is anybody's guess. But that speaks of the selfishness and recklessness of man
and his destruction of nature, of the ecological balance.
6. How did the felling of the Banyan tree affect the life on it?
Ans. : The father of the poet gave orders to cut down all the trees including the huge
Banyan tree. This was bound to affect the life that depended on these trees. For
example there were nests of birds on the tree. There might be eggs laid in them. But
as the branches were cut off, the birds became shelterless and had to leave their
habitation and go in search of other shelter. What was true about the birds was also
true about other creatures and animals like insects and monkeys. They lost their
shelter and had to go away in search of a new one.
7. What is Dilip Chitre's approach to the felling of trees?
Ans. : The poem “The Felling of the Banyan Tree” tells how his father took the
decision to demolish the houses and cut down all trees in his plot. The poet
especially describes the process of cutting down the Banyan tree. The way he
describes makes us aware that he did not like the act and looked at it as a sin. He
believed, like his grandmother, that trees are sacred and felling them is a crime, a
crime that is taking place every day around us. He is opposed to this and that is why
he uses words like massacre, chop to underline his opposition. The last couplet
brings to our mind his feeling more powerfully.
Q.II. Write notes on the following in 7 to 8 sentences.
1. The Banyan tree :
Ans.: The poet Dilip Chitre has given a detailed description of the Banyan tree. It
was a huge problem with its deep roots. The tree was three times taller than the house
he lived in. The scraggy f aerial roots fell to the ground. It means they were on the
way to turn the stem of the tree. The circumference of the trunk is fifty feet
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and the branches has spread so wide that the choppers took seven: days to cut them
off. Fifty men were chopping the massive trunk we are told. The tree revealed it age
through the rings in the trunk and it was more than 200 years.
2. Reactions of different characters to the Felling of the Banyan tree:
Ans. : Dilip Chitre records the reactions of the people in the house to the decision of
cutting down the trees, especially the Banyan tree. The father decided to demolish
the structures and fell all trees in his plot. He took the decision because he wanted to
sell it and cleaning it would bring better price, he felt. The grandmother was
opposed to it, though her opposition made no impact. She said that trees are sacred
and felling them is a massacre and a crime against God. The poet too did not like the
felling, though he could not oppose his father, because he was too small. But from
the last couplet one can see that the fact always remained in his mind and troubled
him.
3. The message of the poem “The Felling of the Banyan Tree”: Chitre's
feelings about felling trees :
Ans.: Chitre's poem “The Felling of the Banyan Tree” is an eye opener for the
readers. When we read it, we become immediately aware of his opposition to the
felling of trees. The words like ‘kill’ and ‘massacre’ indicate that he looks at it as a
crime- as serious a crime as murdering a human being. Murdering a man is easy, but
murdering a tree is not easy. It takes long time and hard work. The poet echoes the
view of his grandmother who said that trees are sacred and we don’t kill sacred
things. He agrees with her that felling a tree is a crime. The message of the poem is
crystal clear: “Save trees. Don’t kill them. Don’t commit that crime.”

4.8 Reference for further Study:

1) An Anthology of Marathi Poetry (1945–1965) (Editor), Nirmala-Sadanand,
Mumbai, 1968

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 Module 5
A) Business Correspondence

Contents :
5.0 Objectives
5.1 Introduction
5.2 I Structure of Business letter.
Self- check progress-I
II Types of Business letter
Self - check progress-II
III Mass Communication Circular letter
Self - check progress-III
IV Social Communication letters to maintain Good will
Self- check progress - IV
5.3 key to self-check exercises
5.4 Summary
5.5 Exercises

5.0. Objectives:
After studying this unit, you will be able to :
• learn the use of English for business Correspondence
• learn the polite use of English in the business correspondence.
• learn the Business letters.
• learn the circular letters.
• learn communication letters to maintain Good will

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5.1 Introduction:
Communication through exchange of letters is known as correspondence we
communicate our feelings, thoughts, etc. to our friends and relatives through letters
that may be called personal correspondence. A businessman also writes and receives
letters day to-day transactions, which may be called business correspondence.
Business correspondence means the exchange of information in a written format for
the process of business activities. A business letter is a form of communication. It is
written by an authorized person or an organization. Business correspondence takes
place between organizations or between the customers and the organization.
Now-a-days business operations are not restricted to any locality, state or nation.
Today production takes place in one area but consumption takes place everywhere.
Since the businessman as well as customers live in far off places they don’t have
sufficient time to contact each other personally. Thus, there arises the need for
writing letters. Now the importance of letters has increased because of vast
expansion of business, increase in demand as well as supply of goods. The
importance of business correspondence are- Maintaining a proper relationship, serves
as evidence, Create and maintain goodwill, Inexpensive and convenient, Formal
communication, Independent of interpersonal skill, help in expansion of business
Business letters are the most formal method of communication following
specific formats. They are addressed to a particular person or organization, a good
business letter follows the seven C’s of communication. They are- 1) Letter of
Inquiry; 2) Letter of Claim/Complaints; 3) Letter of Application; 4) Letter of
Approval/Dismissal; 5) Letter of Recommendations; 6) Letter of Promise.
Modernization has led to the usage of new means of business correspondence
such as E-mail or Fax.

5.2
I Structure of Business letter:
A business letter has a distinctive structure and appearance. It distinguishes the
structure, layout and form which are well established by convention and practice.
Each of the parts has a specific style, position and function. A letter is usually an
organization’s first visual contact with another organization or person. So it makes an
important impression.
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 An official letter looks different from a personal letter and from other types of
business document. The structure of a business letter has a number of elements or
parts. The seven elements that normally appear in every letter are fixed location on
the sheet. The main parts of the letter are heading, date, inside address, salutation,
body of the letter, complimentary close and typical signature. In addition to these,
some other details are included in some letters are : your reference number, our
reference number, attention line, subject line, identification marks, enclosures. Let us
now briefly discuss about the different elements/parts of business letter. The essential
parts of a business letters are as follows:
i) Heading: The heading of a business letter usually contains the name and
postal address of the business, E-mail address, Web-site address, Telephone
Numbers, Fax number, Trade Mark or Logo of the business (if any). The heading is
normally printed or typed in the middle of the page.
ii) Date: The date is normally written on the right side corner after the heading
as the day, month and year. Dates are written in various ways. Some examples are
like in British practice, 28th February, 2017 or in American practice, February 28,
2017; or Modern practice is 28-02-2017.
iii) Reference Number: Reference number is also an important part of the letter.
And it should be properly placed. It indicates letter number and the department from
where the letter is being sent and the year. It helps in future reference. This reference
number is given on the left hand corner after the heading. Some companies include
both, Our Ref. No, and Your Ref. No. in their letter. For example, we can write
reference number as AB/FA Dept. 20016/25.
iv) Inside Address: Inside address contains the name and address of the
company or the firm or a person to whom the letter is to be sent or who receives the
letter. It also contains the full name/designation and business address of the person.
This is written on the left hand side of the sheet below the reference number. Letters
should be addressed to the responsible head e.g., The Secretary, the Principal, the
Chairman, the Manager, etc.
v) Subject: It is a statement in brief, that indicates the matter to which the letter
relates. It attracts the attention of the receiver immediately and helps him to know
quickly what the letter is about. An indication of the subject of the letter may quicken
its disposal. Usually it is typed and double-spaced between the salutation and the first
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line of the body of letter. The word ‘subject’ is followed by a colon and then the
matter is indicated. It is like the title of a report indicating the contents. For example:
Subject: Your order No. C 317/8 dated 12th March 2016.
Subject: Enquiry about Samsung Television.
Subject: Fire Insurance Policy.
vi) Salutation: This is placed below the inside address. It is usually followed by
a comma (,). The choice of salutation would depend upon your relationship with the
receiver and the form of inside-address. If you are addressing an organization
(company, society, association, club, agency) you use for example: Dear Sirs/ Dear
Madam – for addressing a firm or company. Sir/Madam – for official and formal
correspondence. If you are addressing the officer by name you may use any of these
– Dear Rajesh/Dear Rajeshwari – (Informal), Dear Shri Rampal/Dear Smt. Seema –
(Formal), My Dear Shri Raghvendra/ My Dear Smt. Shubhangi –(Semi-formal). The
circulars sent for sales promotion or for promotion of data from a large population
have salutations such as ‘Dear Customer’, ‘Dear Reader’, ‘Dear Subscriber’, ‘Dear
Member’ etc.
vii) Body of the letter: This comes after salutation. The body contains the
message of the letter. It is generally made up of three parts
(a) Opening Part – It is the introductory part of the letter. It is an introductory
statement specifying the nature of the business or the occasion for writing the letter.
In this part, attention of the reader should be drawn to the previous correspondence,
if any. For example – with reference to your letter No. 360 dated 12th March 2016, I
would like to draw your attention towards the new brand of Sedan Car.
(b) Main Part – This part usually contains the subject matter of the letter. It
should be precise and written towards in clear words – the message that you are
conveying along with essential details.
(c) Concluding Part – It contains a statement of the sender’s intentions, hopes
or expectations concerning the next step to be taken. Further, the sender should
always look forward to getting a positive response. The concluding remarks indicate
what action you wish the addressee to take. At the end, terms like – Thanking you,
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 vii) Complementary Close: It is a formal and a polite way of ending a letter. It
must be in accordance with the salutation. The first letter of the first word of a
complementary close is written in capitals and a comma is put at the end of the last
word. For example:
Salutation Complementary close
i) Dear Sir/Madam Yours faithfully, or Your truly
ii) Dear Mr. Raj Yours sincerely,
iii) My Dear Akbar Yours very sincerely, (express very informal relations)
iv) Dear Customer Yours sincerely,
Some organizations write ‘Sincerely’ or ‘Faithfully’ first and put ‘yours’ later.
ix) Signature: It is written in ink, immediately below the complementary close.
As for as possible, the signature should be legible. The name of the writer should be
typed immediately below the signature. The writer’s designation/division/
department is given below the typed name. For example:
Yours faithfully,
For M/S Acron Electricals
(Signature)
SUNIL KUMAR
Partner
xi) Enclosures: If the documents attached are important, they are specifyied.
This is required when some documents like cheque, draft, bills, receipts, lists,
invoices etc. are attached with the letter. These enclosures are listed one by one in
serial numbers. For example :
Encl. : i) Demand Draft No A 32926 dated 21 November, 2016
ii) The list of goods received
iii) A cheque for Rs. One Thousand dtt. Feb. 27, 2016 (Cheque No …)
towards payment for goods supplied.
xii) Identification Mark: These are the initials of the typist, and they appear just
above the ‘Enclosure’, if any. This is required when the writer wants to add
something, which is not included in the body of the letter. It is expressed as P.S. For
example :
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 P.S. – In our office, we provide two years warranty.
xiii) Copy Circulation: This is required when copies of the letter are also sent to
persons apart of the addressee. It is done as C.C. For example :
C.C. i) The Chairman, Electric Supply Corporation
ii) The Director, Hiranyakishi Foundation
iii) The Secretary, Sarvodaya Education Society
Self Check Progress-I
i) Explain the essential parts of a Business Letter with the help of a specimen.
ii) What is meant by business correspondence?
iii) Write a brief note on the various types of business Letters.

II Types of Business Letters:

Business letter are written for the fulfillment of several purposes. The purpose
may be to enquiry about a product to know its price and quality, availability, etc.
This purpose is served if you write a letter of enquiry to the suppliers. After receiving
a letter the supplier may send you details about the product as per your query. If
satisfied, you may give order for supply of goods as per your requirement. After
receiving the items, if you find that the product is defective or damaged, you may
lodge a complaint. These are the few instances in which business correspondence
takes place. Let us learn the details about some important business letters.
i) Business Enquiry Letter:
A letter of ‘enquiry’ is written to seek information from other organizations.
Sometimes prospective buyers want to know the details of the goods which they
want to buy, like quality, price, mode of delivery and payment, etc. They may also
ask for a sample. The letter written to seller with one or more of the above purposes
is known as enquiry letter. Each enquiry letter should be drafted keeping points in
view are - 1) Indicate the nature of enquiry at the beginning 2) State reason for the
enquiry 3) Clearly state what information you are seeking 4) Close with a statement
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A Specimen Letter of Enquiry:
Bharat Trading Company
415, B Madhav Road,
Sadashiv Peth, Pune – 5
Tel. – (020)23241053 E-mail : btc_2005@gmail.com
__________________________________________________________________
Ref. BTC/W/ 2016/211 Date : 15th Dec, 2016
Sales Manager,
Titan Quartz,
Sona Towers,71,
Miller Road,
Mumbai – 52.
Subject: Enquiry about the price of watches.
Dear Sir,
We are dealing in retail trade of wrist watches. We would be interested in
selling your products, Bharat Trading Company through our retail showroom.
We understand that TATA has introduced new types of world class Titan
Quartz Watches. We shall appreciate detailed information about each of the Titan
Quartz Watches along with the illustrated catalogue and price-list. We also want to
know about the guarantee for each of the quartz watches.
Could you, therefore, send us your quotations and let us know the terms and
conditions of the payments.
We hope that this enquiry of ours will receive your prompt and best
attention.
Thanking you,
Yours faithfully,
For Bharat Trading CO.
Sd/-
(R. Somanath)

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Reply:
After receiving the letter of enquiry from a perspective buyer, the sellers supply
the relevant information by a reply letter which is called a quotation letter.
TITAN QUARTZ
Sona Towers. 71, Miller Road,
Bangaluru – 560052
__________________________________________________________________
Ref. SL/F 2016/12 Date : 4th Jan, 2017
M/s Bharat Trading Company,
415, B, Madhav Road,Sadashiv Peth, Pune – 5.
Subject: Your letter No. BTC/W 2016/211 dated December 15, 2016
Dear sir,
Thank you for your enquiry of 15th December 2016…., for Titan Quartz
Watches. We are happy to learn about your interest in world class quartz watches.
We would be glad to meet your requirement of selling our watches in your retail
showroom.
Our quotations are given in the price-list enclosed. We have introduced an
international collection of over 350 fine quartz watches pricing Rs. 380 onwards.
With Titan Quartz, the customer has the Tata assurance of many years of faultless
performance. Every Titan Quartz Watch is guaranteed for two years. Our after
sales network offers service with speed and economy.
We are confident that you will find price competitive and our terms and
conditions reasonable. We look forward to meeting your requirement will have our
prompt and careful attention.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
For Titan Quartz
Sd/-
(Des Gupta)
Sales Manager.
Encl : Price List & Terms and Conditions.

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ii) Letters of Complaint:
In any business, there will be some mistakes and mishaps. You may not get
the goods and services as you had expected and ordered. If thing go wrong on your
order, you have to inform the suppliers about the problem and see that the faults are
correcting and adjustments are made. When a buyer discovers any mistake or
discrepancy, he brings it to the notice of the supplier by writing a complaint letter.
The following is a specimen complaint letter :
Ferguson College Pune
FC Road, Deccan
Pune – 5
________________________________________________________________
Ref. FCP/Lib/25/20016 Date : 2nd January, 2016.
M/s Trinity Books Sellers,
M. G. Road, Delhi – 110005.
Subject: Regarding damaged books supplied.
Dear Sirs,
Thank you very much for the dispatched of 150 books for which we had
placed with you an order in our letter dated 25th November 2015.
But, on opening the package, it is found that two copies of ‘Personnel
Management’ and four copies of ‘Tempest’ are damaged. These books are so badly
damaged that they are of no use to us.
We request you, therefore, to replace them immediately or send us credit
note for the account of six books. We shall return these damaged copies on hearing
from you.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
Rajaram Savekar
Librarian Ferguson College, Pune.

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Reply:
Trinity Book Stores
M. G. Road, New Delhi – 5
__________________________________________________________________
Ref. TBS/ Sell/251/2016 Date : 07th January, 2016.
The Librarian,
Ferguson College, Pune
FC Road, Deccan, Pune – 5
Subject : Damaged books.
Reference : Your letter No. FCP/Lib/25/20016dated 2nd January, 2016.
Dear Sir,
We are sorry to learn from your letter of 2nd January 2016 that some of the
books supplied to you were damaged when they reached you.
We regret that you should have a cause to complain about the damaged
books. We have already sent the replacement by a parcel post this morning. We
hope the steps we are taking for improving the packing will ensure the safe arrival
of all your orders in future.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
N. Swamy
Proprietor, M/s Trinity Book Stores.

Self Check Progress : II

i) Subhash Textile Co, Ltd. Ichalkaranji is interested in buying twenty water
coolers to be placed in different parts of the office and factory for use of
employees. Write a letter of enquiry to be sent to six firms inviting quotations
for the water-coolers.
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iii) Assume that 12 room-heaters out of 50 have been received by your firm in
damaged condition from Jupiter Electricals Appliances Co. Ltd., 26 Park Street,
Kolkata. As the Manager of your firm, write a complaint letter to the supplier,
seeking replacement for the damaged goods. Imagine necessary details.
iv) As Sales Manager of Jupiter Company, draft a reply offering replacement.
III Mass Communications: Circular Letters
When a businessman has to communicate a formal message to a number of
customers, shareholders, suppliers, business friends, employees etc., he sends it
through circular letters. It conveys the message about certain fundamental changes in
the structure and policy of the business organization. It circulates the same message
to all the receivers. Its subject-matter is of common interest to all the customers and
other business associates. It is cyclostyled or printed on large scale because the same
message is transmitted to several receivers. Circular letters are advantageous
especially because it saves time and money. A large number of circular letters can be
dispatched in a day.
Circular are also called Acknowledgement Letters. It must have an attractive
style, effective language, appropriate meaningful and catchy words suitable tone and
‘you’ attitude. A circular letter introduces a new product or service. It contains a
common message. Circular letters are sent out on the occasions - 1. Change in
Address. 2. Opening of New Departments, Shops, Branches and Expansion of
Premises. 3. Introducing a New Product. 4. Announcing Rise or Reduction in Prices.
5. Announcing the Agency Obtained. 6. Announcing Retirement or Death of Partner.
7. Admission of a New Partner. 8. Change in Constitution of the Firm.
Let us now have a look at some of these letters.
i) A Circular Letter Informing Change in Address :
SHRI MARUTI-SUZUKI AUTO LTD.
Old PB Road, Near Hotel Opal Kolhapur – 5
January 12, 2016.
Dear Customers,
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 shifting to the following address :
Maruti-Suzuki Auto Ltd.,
Plot No. 1206, Shiroli M.I.D.C.,
New Highway, Kolhapur – 10
At our new premises, we have a specious accommodation and all the
necessary facilities to serve our customers. We look forward to your next visit to
us at the earliest convenient time.
Please ensure that all your correspondence is sent to our new address. Our
new Phone No. are (0230) 2462757/8/9.
Thanks.
Your faithfully,
M. K. Desai
Manager
Maruti Suzuki Ltd.

ii) Circular Letter Informing Opening a New Branch:

NAYANA ELECTRONICS
5, Vidyanagar, Vinayak road,
Mumbai – 58
Date : 28th July, 2016.
Gentlemen,
We are pleased to inform you that we are opening a new branch of
wholesale electronics store on 15th August, 2016. The name and address of the new
branch is given below :
NAYANTARA ELECTRONICS
7, Vijaya Bazar,
Ferguson Road, Deccan, Pune – 20.
At this new branch, all our well-known goods and services will be available.
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at the counter. We have also arranged customer’s waiting room and show room at
this branch. Our branch manager Mr. S. K. Desai and his assistants eagerly await
your visit. They will be very happy to receive you at the counter.
For Nayana Electronics,
S. K. Desai
Manager.

iii) Circular Letter Announcing the Retirement of a Partner :

PATEL, PRASAD AND CO.
Babubhai Bhulabhai Road, Mumbai – 15
20th Feb, 2017.
Dear Sir/Madam,
We regret to inform you that Mr. J. N. Patel, an active and valued partner of
this firm is retiring due to old age. Mr. Patel had been working with us for last
twenty-five years and he is quite familiar to our customers. His pleasant, courteous
and friendly nature had made him popular. But, in resent past, his family doctor
has asked him to take complete rest due to his ill-health. However, he will be
associated with our firm in an advisory capacity.
Though Mr. Patel has retired, the firm will continue to do business under
the same old name. His son Mr. Harshad Patel will sign as the Manager Partner.
He is a young man with innovative. He will be filling the vacancy created by his
father. We request you to extend your usual patronage to us.
Yours faithfully,
P. L. Prasad
Managing Partner
Patel, Prasad and Co.

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iv) A Circular Letter Informing Increase in Price :
RAJ ELECTRICALS AND CO.
Shop No 16, Chhatrapati Shahu Cloth Market,
Laxmipuri, Kolhapur
10th June, 2016.
Gentlemen,
We are thankful to your performance for our electrical goods. As you know
we always keep on improving the quality for our products and our services. Now
we have been striving to give you better and still better models of LED Bulbs and
Tubes. You will be glad to know that for the increase in production and quality
control, we have improved latest technology. This has resulted in marginal
increase in our prices ranging 10% to 15% on the items shown in the enclosed
price-list.
We are confident that this marginal increase in prices will not affect our
business relationship.
We look forward to your continued patronage.
Thanking you.
Sincerely yours,
Mr. Raj Shaha
Manager,
Raj Electricals and Co.

Self Check Progress : III

i) Draft a circular letter announcing expansion of business and opening of a new
branch at Pune Aundh. Imagine all the necessary details.
ii) Write a circular letter announcing retirement of the Founder Partner Mr. J. R.
Ghatage who is the old partner of Messrs. Ghatage Patil and Company,
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iii) Force Motors, Pune has decided to shift the Main Sales department from Udyam
Nagar to Shiroli MIDC Industrial Area. Draft a circular letter announcing
shifting of the location. Imagine necessary details.
iv) M/s. Bharat Enterprises announces the death of a partner, Mr. J. M. Patel – who
was one of the founder partners of the form. Draft a circular letter announcing
death of this partner.

IV Social Communication Letters to Maintain Good Will:

Businessmen have to write a number of letters relating to their own and
organization’s social life. Most persons are members of professional organizations of
fraternities; as office-bearers or committee members. They have to write letters to
fulfil social obligations which may not be directly related to your professional work.
Nonetheless, writing such letters is essential to maintain smooth and cordial
relationship with their counterparts in other organizations and also with employees of
their own organization. Letters of congratulations, thanks and appreciation; of
recommendation, introduction, inviting; of sympathy, regret and condolence; are
some kinds of social correspondence.
The public letters are also called social letters. The Public Relations Department
works to build goodwill. The public letters are addressed to business associates,
colleagues, and friends. Let us study some of these types.
i) Letters of Congratulations:
The letter below is example of honesty felt joy in another’s success. The letter
addressed to a customer who gets elected as a President of Mumbai Chember of
Commerce.
GANESH SOFTWARE
M. G. Road, Ganpati Peth,
Andheri West, Mumbai – 88
28th July, 2017.
Dear Mr. Bose,
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Mumbai Chamber of Commerce. Congratulations on this splendid recognition of
your ability. It shows the high esteem in which your fellow businessmen hold you.
From our close relationship with you for almost twenty years, my
colleagues and I know how well suited you are for this important work. We are
sure your term of office will be one of the great values to the business community.
Thanking you.
Sincerely yours,
R. Prasad
For Ganesh Software,
C.E.O.
A congratulatory letter need not contain the word “Congratulation.” It can
convey the message by its tone and the manner in which it takes note of the
achievement.
Reply:
29th July, 2017.
Dear Mr. Prasad,
Thank you very much for your good wishes. The kind thoughts of
friendslike you would help me in discharging my duties efficiently in my new
position. I hope I would be able to meet the expectations of the new assignment
and maintain the high standard of professional excellence established by my
predecessors.
With kind regards,
Yours sincerely,
L. P. Bose.

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ii) Invitations :
22nd June, 2016.
Dear Shri Kumar,
Could you please give us the pleasure of your company at lunch on Sunday
th
27 January, 2016, at 1 p.m.?
We have arranged it at Volga on Clive Road. I have asked a few other
common friends to join.
Please do reply or just confirm on the phone your acceptance.
With best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
Sumant Singh

Acceptance:
25th Jan, 2016.
Dear Shri Singh,

Many thanks for your invitation to lunch. I shall be happy to have it with
you on 27th January. I look forward to meeting you and other friends.
With best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
D. Kumar.

Regret:
25th Jan, 2016.
Dear Mr. Singh,
Thank you very much for your invitation to lunch on 27th January. I am
afraid I would not be able to make it as I shall be out of town on that date for
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 I know I am going to miss the delicious food of Volga and the warmth of
your company. I hope I can look forward to some such occasion I future.
With best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
D. Kumar.

iii) Letter of Thanks:

When someone has rendered a service or participated as a guest in a programme,
then courtesy requires that a “thank you” letter should be sent immediately after the
event. The following is a specimen :
20th Aug, 2016.
Dear Dr. Thakur,
I write on behalf of Dr. Ghali College, Gadhinglaj, to express our sincere
appreciation of your time and trouble in participating in our Workshop on
“Challenges before Super Power India” on last Friday. The fact that you have
changed your other appointments to be with us, speaks highly of your commitment
to the education and training of young people.
We do hope you will honour us with your presence again at similar
programmes.
With best regards,
Your sincerely;
Shri. M. A. Patil
Coordinator

iii) Letter of Appreciation:

Everyone likes to receive a letter of ‘appreciation’. Such letters do a great deal
for the spirit of understanding. Letters of Appreciation should be written with
genuine and sincere feelings. They are similar to “Thank You” letters.

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 Mohite Textiles ltd.
D-2 MIDC Shiroli,
Kolhapur -12
15th Dec, 2016.
Dear Mr. Shastri,
Thank you very much for the excellent exposition of the subject of Training
the Office People, during the fifteen-day course you gave. We have gained much
that will be useful to us in our career. Above all, we appreciate the patience and the
skill with which you ensured that each participant went through some practical
experience.
We once again highly appreciate for your professional services and the
good will you have earned for our organization. Among the things, we carry back
with us is the remembrance of your interesting and informative lectures.
We look forward to meeting you soon.
With warm regards,
Yours sincerely,
R. Y. Shinde
Manager
For Mohite Textiles.

iv) Letter of Condolence and Sympathy:

Letters of condolence express one’s sympathy with the relatives of the
deceased. These letters are to be written soon after misfortune of any kind or the sad
news of the death of a person. The letter of condolence should be short and simple. It
may include a suitable tribute, or a few words of praise for the person whose death
has occurred. It is addressed to an employee or to another businessman or business
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a) Letter of Condolence on the death of an Employee
22nd Feb, 2016.
Dear Smt. Khandelwal,
It is with great grief and shock that I learnt about the passing away of your
husband. We know that he had been ailing for some time but none could imagine
that he would suddenly leave for heavenly abode.
My feelings of grief and anguish are shared by my colleagues and all those
who knew him. They join me in conveying to you our heartfelt condolence. We
pray to God to grant you fortitude to bear the irreparable loss.
Please accept our deepest sympathies for the death of a fine man. May God
rest his soul in peace.
I am here enclosing a copy of the Condolence Resolution passed by the
Employee’s Union of the Company.
With kind regards,
Yours sincerely,
Shantanu Dutta.

Reply:
26th Feb, 2016.
Dear Shri Dutta,
Thank you for your letter conveying your sympathy at the loss of my
husband. It gives me some comfort to know that so many of you share my grief
and stand by me and my family in this hour of sorrow.
With kind regards,
Yours sincerely,
(Smt.) Deepa Khandelwal.

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b) Letter of Sympathy:
27th Aug, 2016.
Dear Mr. D’Souza,
I was very sorry to learn that you had to be hospitalized yesterday. I do hope
that you will be feeling better by the time you get this note.
An active person like you will be impatient to get back to normal activity,
but I am sure you will also realize the importance of complete rest until you get
back your strength.
My best wishes for your speedy recovery. We are all with you in this hour
of need.
With kind regard,
Sincerely yours,
B. M. Sihna

Self Check Progress- IV

i) The Chief Accountant of your firm lost his son in an accident. Write a letter of
condolence to be sent to him as the owner of the firm.
ii) A senior Salesman of your company has had a bad accident at Sangali while on
a sale visit, and has been hospitalized there. Write a letter assuring him of all
care of himself and attention to his family’s needs.

5.3 Key to self-check Progress.

Self check I
I) The essential parts of a Business letter with the help of a specimen
Q. Write a letter to book hotel accommodation for the guests of your company.
You are the manager of Aradhana Auto-mobile company Ichalkaranji. You can
reserve accommodation for your guests for business correspondence.
1) Use letter format /letter pad/Name of the company

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 letter ARADHANA AUTO MOBILE COMPANY ICHALKARANJI
format 416115.
Outword No.216.2018-19 Date.10/12/2018.
Address The Manager,
Hotel Rajadoot,
Ichalkaranji.
Subject Sub : Regarding to book hotel accommodation

Salutation Sir,
Main Kindly reserve a VIP suite for our guests for 2 days from 2nd Jan,
body 2018 to 3rd Jan, 2018. The suites is being booked for Mr. and
Mrs. Hirachand Bargale, who will arrive at the hotel 2th Jan at 8
am and will stay until 4th morning. You are requested to charge
our account with you for the expenses and the room charges.
Closing With regards,
Yours faithfully,
Manager,
HR.
Aradhana Automobiles.
Ichalakaranji.

II) Business Correspondence means the exchange information in a written format

for the process of business activities Business Correspondence Communication
through exchange of letter is know as correspondence.
Business correspondence can take place between organizations, within
organizations or between the customers and the organization. The correspondence
refers to the written communication between persons.
A business correspondence has number of importance. Its most important
feature is to ease of reaching and communicating with different parties. It is not
always possible to meet persons, face to face. A business correspondence helps to
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The five most common types of business correspondence
1) Internal correspondence
2) External correspondence
3) Sales correspondence
4) Personalized correspondence
5) Circulars
There are many standard types of business letters
1) Sales Letters
2) Order Letters
3) Complaint Letters
4) Adjustment Letters
5) Inquiry Letters
6) Follow - Up Letters
7) Letters Of Recommendation
8) Acknowledgement letters.
III) Types of business letters
Business letters are written for the fulfillment of several purposes. The purpose
may be to enquire about a product to know its price and quality, availability etc.
This purpose is served if you write a letter of enquiry to the suppliers. After
receiving a letter the supplier may send you details about the product as per your
query. If satisfied, you may give order for supply of goods as per you requirement.
After receiving the items, if you find that the product is defective or damaged, you
may lodge a complaint. These are the few instances in which business
correspondence takes place.
The tern ‘business letters’ refers to any written communication that begins with
a salutation and with a signature and whose contents are professional in nature.
Historically business letters were sent via postal mail or courier, although the internet

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is rapidly changing the way business communicate . There are many standard types
of business letters.
a) Sales letters :
These letters include strong calls to action, detail the benefit to the reader of
taking the action.
b) Order letters :
These letters must contain specific information such as model number, name of
the product, the tuanitily desired and expected price.
c) Complaint letters :
A buyer discovers any mistake or discrepancy, he brings it to the notice of the
supplier by writing a complaint letter.
d) Adjustment letters :
An adjustment letter is normally sent in response to a claim or complaint
e) Inquiry letters :
Inquiry letters ask a question or elicit information form the recipient.
f) Follw-up letters :
Follw-up letters are usually sent after some type of initial communication. These
letters are a combination thank you note and sales letter.
g) Letters of recommendation :
This type of letter is usually from a previous employer or professor, and it
descries the sender’s relationship with and opinion of the job seeker.
h) Acknowledgment letters :
Acknowledgment letters act as simple receipts.
i) Cover letters :
Cover letters usually accompany a package report or other merchandise. These
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j) Letters of Resignation:
An employee plans to leave his job. A letter of resignation is usually sent to his
manager.
Self check Progress-II
I)

SUBHASH TEXTILE CO.LTD. Industrial estate,

Ichalkaranji, Dist. Kolhapur
__________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 210/2018-19 Date : 1st Jan, 2019.
The manager,
M/S Riya Arya Aqua Industries,
25, MIDC Kagal Hatkanangale,
Kagal - 416117.
Sub: Inquiry about Riya Arya Aqua water co
Sir,
Our company is one of the leading company in Ichalkaranji. We would like
to purchase twenty water coolers to be set up in various parts of our office.
Therefore, we request you send documents regarding the available models, features
and prize list and ablige.
with regards.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
(A.B.Sharma )
Chief officer purchere

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II)

M/S RIYA ARYA AQUA INDUSTRIES

25, MIDC, Kagal-Hatakanagale, Kagal - 416117
Phone No.
_________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 87/2018-19 Date : 15th Jan, 2019

The Manager,
Subhash Textile Co.Ltd.,
Ichalkaranji - 416 115.
Sub: Your letter of Inquiry
Sir,
Thank you very much for your letter of inquiry in our water cooler.
We have five different models of water colores. we are sending the
documents regarding the models, features and prize list. Thank you once again to
show interest in our products.
With regards.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
A.Y.Patil
Supply Dept.
Encl.

1) Quotation of models
2) Prize list.

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III)

YASH ELECTRICALS
9/63, Shivaji Peth, Pune
Phone No. 0230-24830210
__________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 416/2018-19 Date : 1st Feb, 2019
The Manager,
Jupiter Electricals Appliances Co.Ltd.,
26, Park Strect, Kolkata.
Sub: Regarding damaged goods supplied.
Sir,
Thank you very much for the dispatch 50 room heaters for which we had placed
with you an order dated 30/12/2018.
But, on opening the package, it is found that 12 room heaters are damaged. These
heaters are so badly damaged that they are of no use to us.
We request you to replace them or send us credit note for the account. We shall
return these damaged heaters.
With regards.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
Anil Shaha

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IV) A reply Offering replacement.

Jupiter Electrical Appliances Co. Ltd.

26, Park Strect, Kolkata
Phone No. 0230-2485422
__________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 213/2018-19 Date : 8th Feb, 2019

The Manager,
Yash Electricals,
9/63, Shivaji Peth,
Pune.
Sub: Damaged Goods
Ref. Your outword No. 416/2018-19 dt.01/02/2019
Sir,
We are sorry to learn from your letter of 1st Feb, 2019 that some room
heaters supplied to you were damaged.
We regret that you should have a cause to complain about the damaged
heaters. We have allready sent the replacement by a parcel post this morning. we
hope the steps we are taking for improving the packing will ensure the safe arrival
of all your order in future.
With regards.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
Raju Sharma
Sales Manager

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Self Cheek III)
I)

Popular Automobile
MIDC, Shirol, Dist.Kolhapur.
Phone No. 02304-992262
__________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 210/2018-19 Date : 23rd March, 2019

Circular
To : All the parties/Companies/Customers
We are pleased to inform you that we are opening a new branch on 1st
April, 2019. The name and address of the new branch is given below.
Address :
Shri Popular Automobile,
8/716, Aradhana Complex,
Aundh, Pune - Phone No. 020-2551312.
Our all well-know goods and services will be available.
With regards.
For, Popular Automobile
Sd/-
P. S. Patil
Manager

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II)

Ghatage Patil and Co.

Shivaji Nagar, Kolhapur.

Pin. No. 416007 Ph.No.0231-232040

__________________________________________________________________

Outword No. 217/2018-19 Date : 30th March, 2019

Circular
To : All the parties/Companies/Customers

We regret to inform you that the founder partner Mr.J.R.Ghatage is retiring

on 31/01/2019. He had been working with us for last 30 years. His pleasant,
courteous and friendly nature had made him very popular. However he will be
associated with our firm in all advisory capacity.

The firm will continue to do business under the same old name. His son
Hasmukh Ghatage will sign as the manager. We request you to extend your usual
patronage to us.

With regards.

Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
S.R.Mohite
Managing Partner

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III)

Force Motors Pune

9/31, Udyam Nagar, Kolhapur.
Phone No. 0231-248523
_________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 313/2018-19 Date : 15th March, 2019

Circular
To : All the parties/Companies/Customers

We are pleased to inform you that from 1st April, 2019. We are shifting to
the following address.
Address
Force Motors, Pune
416, MIDC, Shiroli, Kolhapur.
Ph.No.0231-2651314
We look forward to your next visit to us at the earliest convenient time.
With regards.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
M.R.Patil
Manager
Force Motors

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IV)

M/s. Bharat Enterprises

13, MIDC, Kagal - Hatakanangale, Kagal.
Phone No. 0230-445421
_________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 228/2018-19 Date : 13th Jan, 2019

Circular
To : All the parties/Companies/Customers

We regret to inform you the sad demise of Mr.J.M.Patel who was one of
the founder partners of our firm.
He has guided us from first day of our company. His valuable guidance to
develop this firm. The firm can never forget his contribution. We express our
deep regret.
With regards.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
Shri Patel
Manager

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IV) Self Check
I)

Kiran Gas Agencies

8/6, Sambhaji Chowk, Ichalkaranji
Phone No.0230-2483521
_________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 317/2018-19 Date : 15th March, 2019

Mr.M.A.Patil,
The Chief Accountant,
Kiran Gas Agencies,
Ichalkaranji.

Sir,
Today, I heard very sad news about your son has passed away in a
accident. I pray to for rest of his son in heaven.
He is a very kind son. He loves everyone. He supports in every critical
matter. So, it is our great loss. Now you cure everyone in your family.
We always with you!
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
Manager
Kiran Gas Agencies

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II)

Raj Electrical Sales and Service Company

Shivaji Road, Kolhapur.
Phone No. 0231-248321
_________________________________________________________________
Outword No. 125/2018-19 Date : 9th May, 2019

Mr.S.A.Patil,
Kagal.

Sir,
I was very sorry to learn that you had to be hospitalized due to accident at
Sangali. I do hope that you will be feeling better by the time you get this note. An
active person like you will be impatient to get back to normal activity.
Accept my best wishes for your speedy recovery. we are all with you in
this hour of need.
with regards.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
H.B.Shaha

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5.4 Summary:
In this unit you learnt how to write business correspondence letters. There are
two types of letters , personal or informal letters and business or formal letters. We
communicate our feelings and thoughts to our friends and relatives through letters is
called personal or informal letters. A businessman also writes and receives letters in
day-to-day transactions which is called business letter. Business letters are the most
formal methods of communication and follow specific formats. You have studied
some letters of business letters, mass communication letters and social
communication letters.

5.5 Exercises:
i) Write a letter of Congratulations to Dr. R. S. Patil who was a Production
Manager and has been promoted to the Post of Managing Director of the Godrej
Food India Company.
ii) Draft a circular letter announcing expansion of business and opening of a new
branch at Gadhinglaj. Imagine all the necessary details.

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 B) Why Does The Child Cry?
Mulk Raj Anand

Contents
5.0 Objectives
5.1 Introduction
5.2 Text 1
5.2.1 section I
Check your progress I
5.2.2 section II
Check your progress II
5.3 Summary
5.4 Terms to Remember
5.5 Answers to check your Progress
5.6 Exercises
5.7 Writing Activities

5.0 Objectives :
After Studying this unit you will be able to
• how the innocent victims suffer most in absurd war.
• understand hunger, mother out of sight, lack of caressing and disregard make
children cry.
• know help, support and psychological backing need the small boy.
• know the impact war on villages.

5.1 Introduction:
Mulk Raj Anand (1905-2004) -is an Indian writer in English. He was notable
for his depiction of the lives of the poorest castes in tradition Indian society. He is

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admired for his novels and short-stories, which have noted for their perspective
insight into the lives of the oppressed and their analyses of impoverishment,
exploitation and misfortune. Anand has published nearly forty books – fiction, non-
fiction. He was a recipient of the civilian honour of the Padma Bhushanin 1966 and
he also won Sahitya Akademi Award for his novel Morning Face (1968) in 1971. He
is also the winner of the International Peace Prize.
Anand’s Best Indian Short Stories Vol. I was edited by Khushavant Singh. The
stories from this nine year tenure as editor of the The Illustrated Weekly of India,
“Why Does the Child Cry?” is one of the best short stories. This story is no exception
yet it is like no other story. Although narrated from the third person’s perspective,
the protagonist of the story is seven-year old of Abdul Latif who lives with his
parents in a village in Bengal. It is a terribly sad heartbreaking story about senseless
cruelty and how the innocent victims suffer most in absurd wars. Abdul was not
mentally bright but he is very agile physically. He is all over the village and
everybody loves him. He loves hunting birds and fishing with his friend Ali. One day
Abdul comes home and finds his house is destroyed, he runs through the village and
everywhere there are dead bodies. He has no understanding of the religious wars that
were tearing apart the subcontinent. He begins to runs through the village in a panic
when he sees a tank, looking for his friend Ali who always helped him. The scenes
he sees are depicted with great passion and

5.2 Text I : Section I

Abdul Latif, the potter’s son was called Late Latif by everyone. The fact was
that, at 11, he had the energy of a seven-year-old and could not walk quickly enough
from home to school. Of course what he lacked by way of physical vitality he made
up in mental agility. This lack had sharpened his curiosity about birds, which he
wanted to catch and bring home as pets. So he lingered on the way from anywhere.
But as he could seldom catch one these birds, he was always late. And then his other
passion was to go fishing being a long business, he was frequently delayed.
On the day when they sang the Bangala Desh song of Tagore at the end of the
school hours, Abdul Late Latif lingered in the school premises to write down the
words, so that he could remember the whole poem by heart. He had the same feelings
about the paddy-fields and the Padma and the fisherman’s cries, as the poet had. But
he had not found words of his own to explain to his father and mother why he had

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stolen a papaiya from Jalal’s garden; and how he had been nearly drowned in the
river when his companion gave him a ducking; and how Ali had saved him. His
waywardness had been dubbed as a kind of idiocy by his father, though his mother
excused the slow crawl home of Abdul Late Latif, in spite of the anxiety she felt
when he did not turn up until hours after hours the other boys.
As he hoped to recite to his mother the words of the Bangala Desh poem, he felt
he had an ability today. Having copied the song, he salaamed his master, Ilias,
solemnly and fairly ran towards home, a mile away. Even if they had opened a
school in the Nadi Nagar hamlet of fishermen, where his father and mother made
clay pots, he would still have preferred to walk to and back from school in the big
village Rangpur, because Master Ilias recited new poems during every period, while
there was no poetry in his native place except the fishermen’s song, Hia, Hia, as they
pulled the boats upstream.
“My Golden Bangala Desh …..” The word “golden” seemed to lift the broken-
down huts of Nadi Nagar in his mind and give them charm which he had never felt
before. And he was reconciled to the idea of reaching home sooner or later.
Meanwhile he decided, as usual, to drift towards the Padma to catch fish for the
even meal. He sighted his friend Ali, the son of fisherman Zain-ul-Abdin, already
proceeding towards a side figures and much despised by everyone except, by Abdul
Late Latif.
“Oh Ali” Abdul shouted.
Ali did not stop.
“Oh Ali-i-i-i!” Abdul prolonged his shout after taking a deep breath.
Ali did not stop but began to run, taking cover behind the trunks of fallen trees
on the track leading to the lagoon off the Padma.
In a panic of not knowing why his friend was evading him, Abdul began to run
and chase Ali. He was soon out of breath, because his tubby little frame had never
put in so much exertion. He stopped and shrieked : “Ali Ali ...e…ee! Oh Alee!”
As Ali did not heed his call, Abdul looked hard at the dissolving figure of his
school fellow and felt angry with frustration. That his friend, who usually waited at
home to go fishing with him in exchange for the gram which he, Abdul, gave him,
ignored him was something unusual. Abdul was sure that Ali had heard his call. He
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even thought the fellow had turned round to look at him. But then the fisherboy had
deliberately run away and was hiding somewhere. Perhaps he had stolen sweets from
his mother’s box and wanted to eat them alone. Abdul nearly wanted to cry.
He sat down on the stump of a tamarind tree which had been freshly cut down.
He saw Ali ahead, jumping out from behind one felled banana tree after another.
But why had all the trees in the grove by lagoon been felled?
He craned his neck to look beyond the felled plantain trees to keep Ali within
sight even though his friend had not stopped. The boy was still hopping from behind
one shelter to another.
As soon as he had breathed, Abdul felt he would go and catch Ali.
Suddenly, he had the feeling that he was like one of his father’s empty pitchers,
which had cracked. He could not even make a sound. He remembered his father’s
words : “My son, you are as yet unbroken clay. We can fill you with empty words
and you will remain intact. As soon as we fill you with water, you will begin to
leak.”
This reminded him that he had been asked to come direct from school and take
the donkey with the loaded pitchers to Rangpur to Bania Mukhia’s shop. Not to be
able to catch fish–because Ali has deserted him–and to go back home to do the
chores for his father irked Abdul. In his empty mind arose the verse which his
mother always repeated after each fairy story :
Why does a child cry?
Oh why, oh child, dost thou cry?
Oh why does the ant bite me?
Oh why, oh why, ant, dost thou bite me?
Koot! Koot! Koot!
Mother was funny. She was illiterate. But she had told him more stories than
Master Ilias had taught him poems.
“She does not know what she is saying,” he acknowledged, “but she burrburrs
like the water flowing in the mainstream of the Padma. She says it is a good thing to
have no sense of why and how and what–but rely on Allah Mian!”

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 And her complaint against his father was that he had not brought her a mat to
say five prayers all these years, nor taught her the suras of the Koran. Father said he
was no need for prayers to Allah Mian. Why could not she pray to him?
As he had been brooding by himself, sitting on the stump of the tamarind tree,
he saw the bulk of the tree further down, in a pit, and discovered a monstrous army
tank, by the side which were two dead soldiers.
He got up and ran away.
“Ma!” His soul cried out. “Ma!”
He felt like a top spinning.
And yet he was moving towards Nadi Nagar. There were some uprises of
rubbish dump of the peasant’s manure, heaped up to put into the harvest. A startled
peacock shrieked and flew, heavy-bottomed, up from a pit, from one empty paddy-
field to another.
The evening light was enveloping the fields, making the cacti hedges like horny
ghosts.
Self Check your Progress : I
Check your progress I
Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct alternative from
the ones given below them.
1) Abdul Latif was called ____________
a) Ali b) potter’s boy
c) Late Latif d) fisherman’s boy
2) Ali had stolen ___________ from his mothers box, thought Abdul
a) Fish b) sweets c) gram d) banana
3) Abdul Latif was always late to return house because __________
a) he like to watch the birds
b) he goes to catch fish
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 d) he complets his homework at school
4) Abdul’s father was _______________
a) Potter
b) Coolie
c) Fisherman
d) A school teacher
5) Abdul Latifs best friend was
a) Ali
b) Mother
c) Illyas
d) None of these
6) Abdul Latif is called Late Latift because ______________
a) His physical progress was very slow
b) He was often to late reach his school
c) He was late to reach his house after school
d) He took extra time to do any act.
7) The nonsense song that Abdul’s mother song ended with _______
a) La la la la
b) Why does a child cry?
c) Amar Sonar Bangle
d) Koot! Koot! Koot!

Text II : Section :II

Abdul explored the mound of Nadi Nagar, with its straggling fishermen’s
houses, for the evening lights. There seemed to be no lights today. Perhaps it was
early, though the fishermen, who had their food before dark to go for night fishing,
did burn their hurricane lamps before twilight.
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 Suddenly, he felt that the approach road crescent around Nadi Nagar seemed
eerie. There were deep pits where the cart grooves had been. And … Oh, there was
another giant tank, with its gun pointing to the sky, while some corpses lay scattered
about.
“Ma!” Abdul cried spontaneously. As he plunged into Karim’s potato patch, to
skirt round possible jinns of the spirits of dead soldiers and reach home. He was like
a ball of tall fire, only made of straw. He felt he would soon burn out, fall and die.
His father’s potteryard was a clearing which the family had annexed from the
edge of mosque by the grave of a Pir.
“Ma!” the boy called as though the aura of the Pir’s ghost was preventing him
from crossing the field.
“If only Ali had not run away!”
And, for comfort, he called out to the she donkey : “Oh Begum! Begum
Donkey! Are you ready loaded with the pitchers?”
The momentum of fear of the ghosts carried him up the plinth of his father’s
yard.
“Horror!”
All the pitches lay broken. And, underneath the heap of baked clay, lay Begum,
ashen white, with mouth open, the teeth jutting out.
“Ma… Ya Allah!” Abdul’s hoarse throat cried out. And he stumbled and fell on
the heap of broken pitchers.
For a moment he was stunned, his breath came and went quickly. His head
swam. He felt he had bruised his knees on the edge of the hard baked clay. His
mouth was open but no sound came from the jaws. His throat was parched. His body
was covered with sweat. And this liquid mixed with his tears. He lay inert, as though
to silence his shrieking nerves.
His head was raised towards the straw hut above the plinth, which was his
home, the cottage had caved in.
He heaved himself up and made an effort to go and look for his father and
mother, crying hysterically : “Ma? Ma? Where are you?”

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 There was nothing inside the hole…..
Only the hookah of his father stood near the doorstep, looking like a
questionmark.
Abdul tried to lift the fallen straw wall. He could not do so. He lay flat and
burrowed into the gaping hole, calling : “Ma!” At the same time he was frightened
that he might touch her dead body suddenly and the jinn of her spirit might come and
catch him for comfort and he might be whisked off by the angel Gabriel to keep her
company.
There was nothing inside the hole.
He explored the dark floor of the house with a sweep of his arms, anxious to
find the dead bodies and yet crazed by fear and whinning a protected whine :
“Why does a child cry?”
There was nothing for it but to stop and shout.
“Ma!”
Hoping that the more resourceful father might turn up, he at last cried out :
“Papa?”
There was no answer.
Only the muggy warmth of the space under the caved in straw roof filled his
nostrils, mixed with the smell of his own sweat and wet earth.
He crawled out slowly, feeling that he had hurt himself on the face and hands in
rubbing with the straw. As he emerged on to the plinth, he lay sweating and dazed
and empty like the “unbaked pitcher” his father and always called him. Only, now he
was not cracked but broken.
“Where had they gone? Oh where?” he cried out without words. “And where am
I to go?”
Lying there on the level ground, he listened for any sounds that there might be.
Even of gunfire. Or the gyrating wheels of tanks, or of the Fauji Officers shouting
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 Peering into the half light, he saw that the huts on the mound of Nadi Nagar had
all caved in. and only the silence spoke back, charged with the eerie soundless
shrieks of jinns and bhoots of the spirits of the dead.
Master Ilias had told the boys that the Faujis were razing villages to the ground.
“Ma!” the shriek came out of his stomach, up his throat and fell with a thud on the
darkness. And there was emptiness again.
A beetle whind far away, almost with the sound of a machine-gun firing away in
a cantonment. The sound came from the riverside.
“Ali…he might be there fishing!”
Abdul did notpause to think. If his mother and father were not there and other
villagers had fled, the only person who might help him was Ali. He had seen his
friend alive, running towards the Padma. He would go and look for him. And he
must hang on to his friend now that he was…he did not wish to pronounce the word
to himself, and yet the word came up to his head : “Orphan.” But to mitigate the
terror of the word, he thought : “Perhaps Ali is also an orphan.”
After the resolve to go and look for Ali, there was task of lifting himself up and
going, past the Pir’s tomb, to the Padma.
“Ma!” he cried for help.
His limbs were inert, as though he had died. And yet he heard his own
breathing.
“I am alive,” he told himself under his breath.
“Why does a child cry?” his mother’s nonsense verse came back to him. “Why
does the ant bite me?”
And he heaved himself, weak-kneed, but with his torso uplifted towards the star
Venus, which had risen above the Padma. Curiously, the light of the bright star put
faith in him to go through the dark. He felt for the gram in his pocket. There were
some remnants of the monkey-nuts from the morning.
“I will give Ali the nuts… and he will be my friend.”
Not quite sure, he, however, found enough strength in his legs to begin walking.
The need to escape from the jinns helped him run a few steps at a time. He

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remembered the time Ali had saved him from drowning. “Ali,” he cried out as he
reached the banana grove. “Ali, wait for me! My friend, wait!”
And he felt a tremor go through him at the thought that he would put his arm
around Ali’s waist–as they had always done when they came back from truancy and
had each other’s support in spite of the fear of a beating from their parents.
“Ali!” he called out into the dark.
Check your progress II
Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct alternative from
the ones given below.
1) According to Abdul’s father, he is as yet ___________
a) Unbaked clay
b) School boy
c) Master
d) Potter
2) Fauji’s were razing ____________ to the ground
a) Villagers b) People
b) Army d) Villages
3) Ali had saved Abdul from _____________
a) river b) drowning
c) War d) beating
4) Abdul Latif called his mother _____________
a) Ma b) Mammy c) Mother d) Aai

5) Ali found that all the huts in ____________ razed to the ground
a) Nandipur
b) Nardi Nagar
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5.3 Summary:
The protagonist of the story is seven year old Abdul Latif who lives with his
parents in a village Nadi Nagar in Bengal . It is a terribly sad heartbreaking story
absout senseless cruelty and how the innocent victims suffer most in absurd wars.
Abdul was not mentally bright but he is very agile physically. He is all over the
village and everybody loves him. He loves hunting birds and fishing with his friend
Ali. One day Abdul comes home and finds his house is destroyed, he runs through
the village and everywhere there are dead bodies. He hes no understanding of the
religious wars that were tearing apart the subcontinent. He begins to run through the
village in a panic when he sees a tank, looking for his friend Ali, who always helped
him. The little of the story, Why does a chil cry? catches our attention. There are
many reasons can be suggested such as disregard lack of caressing hunger and
mother out of sight. Abdul, the protagonist of the story cry for these reasons.

5.4 Terms to Remember:

vitality (N) : energy and enthusiasm.
linger on (V) : to stay alive but become weaker.
companion (N) : a person who shares in someone’s work.
idiocy (N) : very stupid behavior.
reconcile to (V) : (usually passive) to make people become friends again after an
argument or a disagreement.
duffer (N) :a person who is unable to do anything well.
irk (V) :to annoy; to harass sb.
gyrate (V) : to rotate
cantonment (N) : a military camp.
mitigate (V) : to make something less harmful or serious,
torso (N) : a main part of the body not including the head, arms or legs.
orphan (N) : a child whose parents are dead.
truancy (N) : the practice of staying away from the school without permission.
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5.5. Answers to check your progress

I) Section-I
1- a late latif
2- b sweets
3- a he likes to watch the birds
4- a potter
5- a Ali
6- a his physical progress was very slow
7- d koot!koot!koot!
II) Section-II
1- a Unbaked
2- b Villages
3- c drowning
4- d Ma
5- e Nandi Nagar

5.6 Exercises:
A) Answer the following questions in one word/sentence/phrase each.
1) What did Ali lack?
2) Which song did they sing at the end of school hours?
3) Which verse arose in the mind of Abdul?
4) What was the complaint of mother?
5) What did he tell himself under his breath?
B) Answer the following questions in 3 to 4 sentence each.
1) Why did Abdul walk quickly?
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3) Why does the child cry?
C) Write short notes on the following in 7 to 8 sentences each.
1) Abdul Latif’s childhood
2) Effect of religious war on village.
3) Ali : an orphan.
D) Vocabulary Exercises:
1) Complete the following table and make your sentences using the words in the
table.
Noun Verb Adjective Adverb
Curiosity --- --- ---
--- Frustrate --- ---
--- --- Monstrous ---
--- --- --- Spontaneously

11) Give antonyms of the following words.

Friend, charm, literate, alive, sense

5.7 Writing Actixities:

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 Module 6
A) Telephone Communication

Index:
6 A.0 Objectives
6 A.1 Introduction
6 A.2 Content
6 A.2.1 Sub-content I
Self-check exercises
6 A.2.2 Sub-content II
Self-check exercises
6 A.2.3 Sub-content III
Self-check exercises
6 A.2.4 Sub-content IV
Self-check exercises
6 A.3 Key to self-check exercises
6 A.4 Summary
6 A.5 Exercises

6 A.0 Objectives:
After studying this unit you will be able to-

understand the use of spoken English in telephone communication

understand formal type of telephone communication used in business
interactions

learn some basic telephonic interactions

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6 A.1 Introduction:
In the previous Unit you learnt the nature of business communication. Various
means are used in business for communication; some are oral while some others are
written. Telephone Communication is an oral form of communication and is very
popular as well as effective means for communication in the business world.
Telephone communication or telecommunication refers to the practice of
communication over a telephone. Telephone communication first came into existence
in 1876 when Alexander Graham Bell invented it. Numerous developments have
taken place since then. It has revolutionized the business world considerably. With
increasing amount of business being done over the telephone and its use in 24 hour
professional call centres, it becomes imperative to have effective telephone
communication.
The purpose of the unit is to make students familiar with the spoken English
used in telephone communication. Telephone communication is both, formal as well
as informal but, the present unit focuses on the formal type. In modern business
establishments, the receptionist, the switch-board operator, the Office-assistant are
required to talk to people on telephone. Telephonic communication is used to give
information, make enquiries, give messages, fix appointments, book a hotel room or
a train/ bus/ plane ticket, to deal with complaints etc. Telephonic communication
needs to be clear and precise to be effective. Effective communication results in
productive relationships and can yield better customer service and sale. We shall see
some basic telephonic interactions and the necessary spoken expressions.

6 A.2 Content:
6 A.2.1 Opening a Telephonic Conversation:
A business phone call begins with an introduction. Here are some common
expressions used while introducing oneself on the telephone:
“Hello, this is ------- . ”
“Good morning, ------- here.”
“This is ------ speaking.”
“Could I speak to ------ please?”

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 While calling in a business context, you should show politeness by using words
like:
‘could’, ‘would’, ‘can’, ‘may’
e.g. “Could you connect me to Laura, please?”
“Would it be possible to hold the meeting on Friday?”
“May I have your phone number, please?”
“Could you spell it for me?”
Also, note that while requesting or asking for help or information, you should
use:
‘please’, ‘thank you’, ‘thank you very much’ etc.
e.g.
“Thank you very much, Suresh.”
“Could you repeat that please?”
One of the most important things to remember during a phone call is to maintain
a polite and friendly tone. Usually in business calls the language used is formal
spoken English. However, some informal expressions may be used provided the tone
is polite and friendly as in:
“Hang on for a moment, I’ll put you through.”
“Okay, bye”
"Thanks”
“Cheers”
“No problem”
After introduction, sometimes you need to give additional information like
where you are speaking from or on whose behalf you are speaking:
“I’m calling from Pune”
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Study the following responses from the receiver to the caller:
“Hello, Alka Patil here”.
“Modern Textiles, Good Morning. How may I help you?”
“Yes. Hold on the line please.”
“May I know who’s speaking please?”
“I’ll just put you through.”
Self-check I
i) Give appropriate expressions for the following purposes:
a) Introduce yourself and ask for a particular person
b) Ask the caller to hold on giving reason
c) Tell the caller that the particular person is out of station
d) Ask for the name and phone number of the caller
ii) Complete the following telephonic conversation using appropriate
expressions:
Receptionist: Kumar Computers. Good Morning.
Desai : Good Morning, Desai here. I’d like -------------------------.
Receptionist: I’ll get through to Mr. Deshmukh who looks after sales.
Desai : ------------------.
Receptionist: ----------------------- please Mr. Desai. Here you are.
Deshmukh : Deshmukh here. --------------------- I help you?
Desai : I’m interested in your exchange offer for old washing machines.
Deshmukh: I’m sorry Mr. Desai, the offer was---------------.
Desai : Oh, I’m sorry.
Deshmukh : It’s all right. ------------- your telephone number? ------------know if
the offer is extended.
Desai : My------------ . Thanks a lot.

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 Deshmukh: Thank you for ----------.
Desai : Bye
6 A.2.2 Giving a Negative Reply Politely and Responding to Queries:
Sometimes the person wanted is not available or the caller has dialed a wrong
number. In such cases you need to give a negative reply. But, it should not sound
rude. You can use expressions like:
I’m afraid ------- is busy at the moment, can I take a message?
I’m sorry; Suvarna is out of station today.
Sorry, you may have dialed the wrong number.
I’m afraid the line is busy at the moment. Could you call back later please?
Self check II
I) Give appropriate expressions for the following situations:
i) As a switch-board operator, tell the caller that you’ll connect him to the
person wanted. Imagine the names and other details.
ii) As a receptionist at Hindustan Paints, ask the caller for the message to be
given to the officer.
II) Sanket: Hello, this is Sanket Raje speaking.
Komal : Universal Computer Solutions, Good--------------------. How--------------
-you?
Sanket : Can I----------------Mr. Rawat? He had asked---------------him.
Komal : I’m-----------------------meeting.
Sanket : When will he be free?
Komal : ------------------------------by 4 pm. May I ask him to---------------?
Sanket : Yes,--------------.
Komal : May I---------------------------number please?
Sanket : It’s------------------------.
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 Sanket : Yes,-------------
Komal : Bye.
If a person speaks fast or in a low voice or there is some problem in
communication then the other person should get the things clarified and ask for
repeating the point.
I’m afraid I can’t hear you very well.
Could you repeat that please?
Would you mind speaking up a bit please?
6 A.2.3 Taking or Giving Messages and Making Enquiries:
A receptionist or office assistant is often required to take or give messages
during a telephonic call. A telephone call can also be used to make enquiries and get
necessary information. e.g. You may call the Bus station to enquire about the timings
of buses on a particular route, availability of reservation etc. You may contact your
College or University to get information about a particular course, its fees, admission
process etc. The following expressions are useful in such circumstances:
Can I have your name and number please?
Can I have a message please?
Could you please ask _______to call me back?
Could you spell that for me please?
Can I just check the phone number please?
Study the following example:
Neha : Hello it’s Neha here. Can I speak to Ms. Pradhan please?
Rupali : Phoenix Sales. Good morning Neha.
Neha : Can I talk to Mrs Pradhan please?
Rupali : I’m afraid she’s busy at the moment. Can I take a message?
Neha : Yes, please. I met Mrs Pradhan last month. She asked me to phone her
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ask her to call me?
Rupali: Sure. Could you give me your number please?
Neha: It’s 09944558825.
Rupali: That’s fine. I’ll ask her to ring you when she’s free.
Neha: Thanks, Bye.
Example 2: Making enquiries:
Priya: Hello, Priya Mehta here.
Mona: Model College. Good morning Priya.
Priya: I’d like to join the Fashion Designing Course in your college. Could you
guide me about the details?
Mona: Yes, sure. It’s a certificate course of one year duration and is recognized
by the UGC.
You can apply for the course online. The details regarding fees, syllabus and
schedule are available on the college website.
Priya: Could you give the site address please?
Mona: Sure. It’s www.modelcollege.edu.in
Priya: Thank you so much.
Mona: My pleasure, goodbye.
In the same manner you can also inquire about hotel booking, train/ bus/ plane
ticket booking and the like.
Self check III
i) Write a telephonic conversation between Rekha and Roopa. Use the following
points: booking a hotel room, type of room, rate, facilities, duration of stay etc.
ii) Complete the following telephonic conversation:
Sanjay: Hello, is it Kesari Travels?
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 Sanjay: I’m interested in your-------------tour. Could you tell me about it please?
K.T. : Yes, sure, Mr. ------- ?
Sanjay: Sanjay, Sanjay Pathak.
K.T. : The cost per person for 15-day Europe Premium Tour is Rs.-----------.
Sanjay: Oh, I see. When is the -------------?
K.T. : It starts from Jan. 15, 2017.
Sanjay: Then please book two tickets for me.
K.T. : ---------------- Sanjay, the booking for the --------- tour is full. But, let me
see .., two seats are available for the next tour scheduled for----------------.
Sanjay: ------------. I shall------------------------amount by RTGS tomorrow itself.
K.T. : In that case you are entitled for a discount of Rs.---------- per seat. The --
-------are available on our website. Thank you for-----------.
Sanjay: --------------.
6 A.2.4 Dealing with angry callers on telephone:
As a receptionist or an office assistant, you may have to encounter angry callers
and deal with their complaints. In such situations you should not lose your calm.
Whenever you are dealing with clients over the phone, remain positive and do all
that you can to satisfy them, empathize with them when necessary.
Read the following carefully:
Robert: Hello, this is Robert from Karad.
Rakesh: Sage Publications, Delhi. Good morning, Robert. How may I help you?
Robert: My college hasn’t received the International journals in English
Literature and Social Sciences. It is two months now since paying the
subscription. It’s very shocking and not at all expected from a reputed
Publication like yours.
Rakesh: I’m sorry to hear that Robert. Could you please give me your
subscriber number?
Robert: Just a moment. Here you are. It’s 54628/2017-18

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 Rakesh: Please hold on for a moment. Let me check.. Yes. We have received
your subscription. The journals have already been dispatched on Jan 7,
2017 to Modern College, Delhi. It is surprising you haven’t received them.
Robert: Excuse me, it should have been Model College and not Modern
College. How could you be so negligent?
Rakesh: I am extremely sorry, Robert. Be assured you will soon receive the
next issue and we shall reschedule your subscription from February
onwards for two years.
Robert: Thanks a lot.
Self check IV
You have bought a new mobile handset which has suddenly stopped
functioning. Write a telephonic conversation between you and the dealer who
supplied the same to you.

6 A.3 Key to self check exercises:

Self check I
i) a) “Hello, Radha Sane here. Could I speak to Rekha Pathak please?”
b) “Hold on for a moment please, Ms. Ratna is on another call.”
c) “ I’m sorry, Mr. Patil is out of station today.”
d) “ Sure, I’ll inform Priya Mam. May I know your name and phone number
please?”
ii) Receptionist: Kumar Computers. Good Morning.
Desai : Good Morning, Desai here. I’d like to speak to the Sales Manager.
Receptionist: I’ll get through to Mr. Deshmukh who looks after sales.
Desai : Please connect me to him.
Receptionist: Just a minute please Mr. Desai. Here you are.
Deshmukh : Deshmukh here. How can I help you?
Desai : I’m interested in your exchange offer for old washing machines.
Deshmukh: I’m sorry Mr. Desai, the offer was only for Diwali festival.
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 Desai : Oh, I’m sorry.
Deshmukh : It’s all right. Will you give me your telephone number? I will let
you know if the offer is extended.
Desai : My number is 9543216780. Thanks a lot.
Deshmukh: Thank you for calling Mr. Desai
Desai : Bye
Self check II
I i) “Hold on please for a moment, I’ll put you through to Ms. Sejal. Here you
are.
ii) “Hindustan Paints, Karad. Good morning, I’m sorry Rahul, Mr. Mehta is
out of station.
Do you have any message for him?”
iii) “Yes, Please tell him that I had called and would like to discuss with him
our new project at my office on 15th December at 10.00 a m.”
II
Sanket : Hello, this is Sanket Raje speaking.
Komal : Universal Computer Solutions, Good morning Sir. How can I help
you?
Sanket : Can I speak to Mr. Rawat? He had asked me to call him.
Komal : I’m sorry sir, Mr Rawat is in a meeting.
Sanket : When will he be free?
Komal : I believe he should be free by 4 pm. May I ask him to ring you up?
Sanket : Yes, please do.
Komal : May I have your mobile number please?
Sanket : It’s 9482562506
Komal : 9482562506 Have I got it right?
Sanket : Yes, thanks a lot

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Self check III
i) Rekha: Hello, is it hotel Paradise Executive? I’m Rekha Kulkarni from
Kolhapur.
Rupa: Yes Good morning mam. What can I do for you?
Rekha: I want to book a Royal Suite in your hotel for three days.
Rupa: Sure mam. When are you planning to visit?
Rekha: From 6th to 8th May 2018. By the way, please tell me about the rates of
the suite.
Rupa: Mam the Royal Suite costs Rs 3000/- per day.
Rekha: It has an AC I believe.
Rupa: Yes mam. The Royal Suite is among our premium facilities and has AC.
Rekha: What are the other facilities?
Rupa: Mam you shall have a TV, a study, spacious queen size bed, best
furnishing, tapestries, carpets in the entire suite, bath tub, 24 – hour hot
water, refrigerator, wardrobe, room service, safety locker and many more.
You’ll also have complimentary breakfast. Mam, experience once and you
will enjoy a majestic stay.
Rekha: Thanks. But are the rates inclusive of all taxes?
Rupa: Mam you’ll have to pay 18% more towards GST. That’s all.
Rekha: Alright, then book me a Royal Suite from 6th to 8th May 2018.
ii) Sanjay: Hello, is it Kesari Travels?
K.T. : Yes, how may I help you?
Sanjay : I’m interested in your Europe tour. Could you tell me about it please?
K.T. : Yes, sure, Mr.- … May I know your name please?
Sanjay : Sanjay, Sanjay Pathak.
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 Sanjay : Oh, I see. When is the tour scheduled?
K.T. : It starts from Jan. 15, 2017.
Sanjay :Then please book two tickets for me.
K.T. : I’m sorry Sanjay, the booking for the Europe Premium January tour is
full. But, let me see .., two seats are available for the next tour scheduled
for March 2017.
Sanjay : Okay, then book me two seats for March tour. I shall pay the amount
by RTGS tomorrow itself.
K.T. : In that case you are entitled for a discount of Rs.5000/- per seat. The
details are available on our website. Thank you for calling.
Sanjay : Bye.
Self check IV
Suman: Hello, this is Suman from Karad.
Dealer: A One Mobile Shoppe, Karad. Good Morning, how may I help you?
Suman: What kind of mobile have you given me? It’s not working at all. Two
days ago I purchased a phone for my son for Rs 17000/- and today it is just
not working.
Dealer: I’m extremely sorry madam. Will you please give me the details?
Suman: It is Samsung S5 new mobile and the bill no is 2658. I purchased it the
day before yesterday, that is 17th September.
Dealer: Don’t worry madam, please bring it to our Shoppe and we’ll see what
the matter is.
Suman: No, no. I don’t want such defective phone. You either give me a new
piece or give back my money.
Dealer: Please madam, listen to me. I believe it’s some minor problem. As it is
in the warranty period, I shall surely replace it if is defective.
Suman: Thanks.
Dealer: My pleasure, madam.

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6 A.4 Summary:
In this unit you have studied the nature of telephonic communication in business
situations. You have learnt how to open a conversation, respond to enquiries, take
and give messages and deal with angry callers. You have learnt that polite
expressions are necessary in such conversations. This type of communication is
formal in nature but sometimes informal expressions are also used. Knowledge of
this type of spoken English is very important for effective business interactions.

6 A.5 Exercises:
i) Write a short conversation between Anita and Latika regarding getting an
appointment with Ms. Pradnya Kulkarni. Imagine the details like timing, work
etc.
ii) Write a conversation between Latika, the office assistant and Ms. Pradnya
Kulkarni wherein Latika gives her Anita”s message regarding an appointment.
iii) Write a conversation between Sejal and a receptionist at a hospital asking for an
ambulance. Imagine the details.
iv) Write a telephonic conversation between Manoj of National Stationers and
Mehta Publishers, Pune complaining about the dispatch of their order. Imagine
the problem and other details.

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 B) The Necklace
Guy de Maupassant

Index:
6 B.0 Objectives
6 B.1 Introduction
6 B.2 Content
6 B.2.1 Sub-content I
Self-check exercises
6 B.2.2 Sub-content II
Self-check exercises
6 B.2.3 Sub-content III
Self-check exercises
6 B.2.4 Sub-content IV
Self-check exercises
6 B.3 Key to self-check exercises
6 B.4 Vocabulary Exercises
6 B.5 Summary
6 B.6 Exercises
6 B.7 Writing Activity
6 B.8 Suggested Reading:

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6 B.0 Objectives:
After studying this story you will be able to:

understand how life is fickle

understand how love for false pride or glory ruins our life

understand use of irony or surprise ending for effective story writing

get a glimpse of the life of three different classes of society- upper, middle
and lower

6 B.1 Introduction:
Henri Rene Guy de Maupassant (5th Aug, 1850- 6th July, 1893), a French writer,
is remembered as a master of the short story form. A representative of the naturalist
and realist school of writers, he depicted human lives and social forces in
disillusioned and often pessimistic terms. His works include some 300 short stories,
six novels, three travel books and one volume of verse. Economy of style and
efficient, effortless outcomes and clever plots mark his works. The twist ending is a
hallmark of Maupassant’s style.
“The Necklace” was first published on 17th February 1884 in the French
newspaper Le Gaulois. The story beautifully presents the theme of dichotomy of
reality versus appearance. It displays the stark reality that love for false pride,
ostentation and material wealth lead to misery while highlighting the benefits of a
generous down to earth personality.

6 B.2 Content:
6 B.2.1
She was one of those pretty and charming girls born, as though fate had
blundered over her, into a family of artisans. She had no marriage portion, no
expectations, no means of getting known, understood, loved, and wedded by a man
of wealth and distinction; and she let herself be married off to a little clerk in the
Ministry of Education. Her tastes were simple because she had never been able to
afford any other, but she was as unhappy as though she had married beneath her; for
women have no caste or class, their beauty, grace, and charm serving them for birth
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are their only mark of rank, and put the slum girl on a level with the highest lady in
the land.
She suffered endlessly, feeling herself born for every delicacy and luxury. She
suffered from the poorness of her house, from its mean walls, worn chairs, and ugly
curtains. All these things, of which other women of her class would not even have
been aware, tormented and insulted her. The sight of the little Breton girl who came
to do the work in her little house aroused heart-broken regrets and hopeless dreams
in her mind. She imagined silent antechambers, heavy with Oriental tapestries, lit by
torches in lofty bronze sockets, with two tall footmen in knee-breeches sleeping in
large arm-chairs, overcome by the heavy warmth of the stove. She imagined vast
saloons hung with antique silks, exquisite pieces of furniture supporting priceless
ornaments, and small, charming, perfumed rooms, created just for little parties of
intimate friends, men who were famous and sought after, whose homage roused
every other woman's envious longings.
When she sat down for dinner at the round table covered with a three-days-old
cloth, opposite her husband, who took the cover off the soup-tureen, exclaiming
delightedly: "Aha! Scotch broth! What could be better?" she imagined delicate
meals, gleaming silver, tapestries peopling the walls with folk of a past age and
strange birds in faery forests; she imagined delicate food served in marvellous dishes,
murmured gallantries, listened to with an inscrutable smile as one trifled with the
rosy flesh of trout or wings of asparagus chicken.
She had no clothes, no jewels, nothing. And these were the only things she
loved; she felt that she was made for them. She had longed so eagerly to charm, to be
desired, to be wildly attractive and sought after.
She had a rich friend, an old school friend whom she refused to visit, because
she suffered so keenly when she returned home. She would weep whole days, with
grief, regret, despair, and misery.
Notes and Glossary:
elegance (n): beauty in movement, appearance or manners
nimbleness (n): quickness
antechamber (n): a small room used as entryway or reception area to a larger
room
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normally hung on walls
knee-breeches (n): an apron like garment held on by a belt, tied around the
waist up to the knees
saloon (n): (outdated) living room in a house
tureen (n): a broad deep serving dish used for serving soup or stew
Scotch broth (n: a filling soup with barley, meat, and root vegetables,
originating in Scotland
inscrutable (adj): difficult to interpret or comprehend
trout (n): any of several species of fish closely related to salmon
asparagus (n): a fern like plant whose young shoots are eaten as vegetable
Self check I
I. Answer the following questions in one word / phrase/ sentence each:
1) Where did Monsieur Loisel work?
2) How was Mathilde Loisel?
3) What did Mathilde love most?
4) Why did Mathilde refuse to visit her school friend?
II. Rewrite the following choosing the correct alternative:
1) Madame Loisel’s first name was _________.
i) Jeanne ii) Mathilde
iii) Seine iv) Ramponneau
2) Monsieur Loisel was a___________ in the Ministry of Education.
i) Minister ii) Officer
iii) Clerk iv) Secretary
6 B.2.2
One evening her husband came home with an exultant air, holding a large
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 "Here's something for you," he said.
Swiftly she tore the paper and drew out a printed card on which were these
words:
"The Minister of Education and Madame Ramponneau request the pleasure of
the company of Monsieur and Madame Loisel at the Ministry on the evening of
Monday, January the 18th."
Instead of being delighted, as her-husband hoped, she flung the invitation
petulantly across the table, murmuring:
"What do you want me to do with this?"
"Why, darling, I thought you'd be pleased. You never go out, and this is a great
occasion. I had tremendous trouble to get it. Everyone wants one; it's very select, and
very few go to the clerks. You'll see all the really big people there."
She looked at him out of furious eyes, and said impatiently: "And what do you
suppose I am to wear at such an affair?"
He had not thought about it; he stammered:
"Why, the dress you go to the theatre in. It looks very nice, to me...."
He stopped, stupefied and utterly at a loss when he saw that his wife was
beginning to cry. Two large tears ran slowly down from the corners of her eyes
towards the corners of her mouth.
"What's the matter with you? What's the matter with you?" he faltered.
But with a violent effort she overcame her grief and replied in a calm voice,
wiping her wet cheeks:
"Nothing. Only I haven't a dress and so I can't go to this party. Give your
invitation to some friend of yours whose wife will be turned out better than I shall."
He was heart-broken.
"Look here, Mathilde," he persisted. :What would be the cost of a suitable dress,
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She thought for several seconds, reckoning up prices and also wondering for how
large a sum she could ask without bringing upon herself an immediate refusal and an
exclamation of horror from the careful-minded clerk.
At last she replied with some hesitation:
"I don't know exactly, but I think I could do it on four hundred francs."
He grew slightly pale, for this was exactly the amount he had been saving for a
gun, intending to get a little shooting next summer on the plain of Nanterre with
some friends who went lark-shooting there on Sundays.
Nevertheless he said: "Very well. I'll give you four hundred francs. But try and
get a really nice dress with the money."
The day of the party drew near, and Madame Loisel seemed sad, uneasy and
anxious. Her dress was ready, however. One evening her husband said to her:
"What's the matter with you? You've been very odd for the last three days."
"I'm utterly miserable at not having any jewels, not a single stone, to wear," she
replied. "I shall look absolutely no one. I would almost rather not go to the party."
"Wear flowers," he said. "They're very smart at this time of the year. For ten
francs you could get two or three gorgeous roses."
She was not convinced.
"No . . . there's nothing so humiliating as looking poor in the middle of a lot of
rich women."
"How stupid you are!" exclaimed her husband. "Go and see Madame Forestier
and ask her to lend you some jewels. You know her quite well enough for that."
She uttered a cry of delight.
"That's true. I never thought of it."
Next day she went to see her friend and told her her trouble.
Madame Forestier went to her dressing-table, took up a large box, brought it to
Madame Loisel, opened it, and said:
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 First she saw some bracelets, then a pearl necklace, then a Venetian cross in
gold and gems, of exquisite workmanship. She tried the effect of the jewels before
the mirror, hesitating, unable to make up her mind to leave them, to give them up.
She kept on asking:
"Haven't you anything else?"
"Yes. Look for yourself. I don't know what you would like best."
Suddenly she discovered, in a black satin case, a superb diamond necklace; her
heart began to beat covetousIy. Her hands trembled as she lifted it. She fastened it
round her neck, upon her high dress, and remained in ecstasy at sight of herself.
Then, with hesitation, she asked in anguish:
"Could you lend me this, just this alone?"
"Yes, of course."
Notes and Glossary:
Monsieur (n): a title conferred on an adult male usually when the name is
unknown
petulantly (adv): in a manner expressing irritation or annoyance
Francs (n): former currency of France, Belgium and Luxembourg
covetously (adv): greedily
Self check II
I. Answer the following questions in one word / phrase/ sentence each:
1) Who was Madame Ramponneau?
2) What were Mathilde and Loisel invited for?
3) How much did the ball-dress cost?
4) What was in the black satin case?
5) What had Monsieur Loisel saved four hundred Francs for?
II. Rewrite the following choosing the correct alternative:
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 i) neighbour ii) sister
iii) friend iv) mother
2) Loisel had saved four hundred francs to buy a ___________.
i) watch ii) car
iii) ring iv) gun
3) Loisel wished to go to Nanterre for ________.
i) bird-watching ii) fishing
iii) lark-shooting iv) holidaying
6 B.2.3
She flung herself on her friend's breast, embraced her frenziedly, and went away
with her treasure. The day of the party arrived. Madame Loisel was a success. She
was the prettiest woman present, elegant, graceful, smiling, and quite above herself
with happiness. All the men stared at her, inquired her name, and asked to be
introduced to her. All the Under-Secretaries of State were eager to waltz with her.
The Minister noticed her.
She danced madly, ecstatically, drunk with pleasure, with no thought for
anything, in the triumph of her beauty, in the pride of her success, in a cloud of
happiness made up of this universal homage and admiration, of the desires she had
aroused, of the completeness of a victory so dear to her feminine heart.
She left about four o'clock in the morning. Since midnight her husband had been
dozing in a deserted little room, in company with three other men whose wives were
having a good time. He threw over her shoulders the garments he had brought for
them to go home in, modest everyday clothes, whose poverty clashed with the beauty
of the ball-dress. She was conscious of this and was anxious to hurry away, so that
she should not be noticed by the other women putting on their costly furs.
Loisel restrained her.
"Wait a little. You'll catch cold in the open. I'm going to fetch a cab."
But she did not listen to him and rapidly descended the staircase. When they
were out in the street they could not find a cab; they began to look for one, shouting
at the drivers whom they saw passing in the distance.
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 They walked down towards the Seine, desperate and shivering. At last they
found on the quay one of those old night prowling carriages which are only to be
seen in Paris after dark, as though they were ashamed of their shabbiness in the
daylight.
It brought them to their door in the Rue des Martyrs, and sadly they walked up
to their own apartment. It was the end, for her. As for him, he was thinking that he
must be at the office at ten.
She took off the garments in which she had wrapped her shoulders, so as to see
herself in all her glory before the mirror. But suddenly she uttered a cry. The
necklace was no longer round her neck!
"What's the matter with you?" asked her husband, already half undressed.
She turned towards him in the utmost distress.
"I . . . I . . . I've no longer got Madame Forestier's necklace. . . ."
He started with astonishment.
"What! . . . Impossible!"
They searched in the folds of her dress, in the folds of the coat, in the pockets,
everywhere. They could not find it.
"Are you sure that you still had it on when you came away from the ball?" he
asked.
"Yes, I touched it in the hall at the Ministry."
"But if you had lost it in the street, we should have heard it fall."
"Yes. Probably we should. Did you take the number of the cab?"
"No. You didn't notice it, did you?"
"No."
They stared at one another, dumbfounded. At last Loisel put on his clothes
again.
"I'll go over all the ground we walked," he said, "and see if I can't find it."
And he went out. She remained in her evening clothes, lacking strength to get
into bed, huddled on a chair, without volition or power of thought.
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 Her husband returned about seven. He had found nothing.
He went to the police station, to the newspapers, to offer a reward, to the cab
companies, everywhere that a ray of hope impelled him.
She waited all day long, in the same state of bewilderment at this fearful
catastrophe.
Loisel came home at night, his face lined and pale; he had discovered nothing.
"You must write to your friend," he said, "and tell her that you've broken the
clasp of her necklace and are getting it mended. That will give us time to look about
us."
She wrote at his dictation.
By the end of a week they had lost all hope.
Loisel, who had aged five years, declared:
"We must see about replacing the diamonds."
Next day they took the box which had held the necklace and went to the
jewellers whose name was inside. He consulted his books.
"It was not I who sold this necklace, Madame; I must have merely supplied the
clasp."
Then they went from jeweller to jeweller, searching for another necklace like the
first, consulting their memories, both ill with remorse and anguish of mind.
In a shop at the Palais-Royal they found a string of diamonds which seemed to
them exactly like the one they were looking for. It was worth forty thousand francs.
They were allowed to have it for thirty-six thousand.
They begged the jeweller not to sell it for three days. And they arranged matters
on the understanding that it would be taken back for thirty-four thousand francs, if
the first one were found before the end of February.
Loisel possessed eighteen thousand francs left to him by his father. He intended
to borrow the rest.
He did borrow it, getting a thousand from one man, five hundred from another,
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agreements, did business with usurers and the whole tribe of money-lenders. He
mortgaged the whole remaining years of his existence, risked his signature without
even knowing it he could honour it, and, appalled at the agonising face of the future,
at the black misery about to fall upon him, at the prospect of every possible physical
privation and moral torture, he went to get the new necklace and put down upon the
jeweller's counter thirty-six thousand francs.
Notes and Glossary:
frenziedly (adv): a hurried wild activity
Waltz (n): a dance in which a couple moves in a regular series of three steps;
also: the music used for this dance
cab (n): a taxi
volition (n): a conscious choice or decision
bewilderment (n): a confusing or perplexing situation
catastrophe (n): a disaster beyond expectation
Louis (n): gold coins used from the time of Louis XIII in France
Usurer (n): a person who lends money, charges interest particularly at an illegal
exorbitant rate
appalled (adj): shocked/ horrified by something unpleasant
privation (n): state of being very poor and lacking basic necessities of life
Self check III
I. Answer the following questions in one word / phrase/ sentence each:
1) What was the price of the diamond necklace?
2) What did the Under-Secretaries at the ball wish for?
3) How much had Loisel’s father left for him?
II. Rewrite the following choosing the correct alternative:
1) The Loisels found a diamond necklace exactly like the lost one in a shop at
__________.
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2) Mathide Loisel left the party at about ______ in the morning.
i) four ii) five
iii) six iv) seven
3) Loisel had to attend office at ______in the morning.
i) nine ii) ten
iii) eight iv) eleven
4) Mathilde selected a _______ necklace from Madame Forestier’s jewels.
i) gold ii) pearl
iii) diamond iv) platinum
6 B.2.4
When Madame Loisel took back the necklace to Madame Forestier, the latter
said to her in a chilly voice:
"You ought to have brought it back sooner; I might have needed it."
She did not, as her friend had feared, open the case. If she had noticed the
substitution, what would she have thought? What would she have said? Would she
not have taken her for a thief?
Madame Loisel came to know the ghastly life of abject poverty. From the very
first she played her part heroically. This fearful debt must be paid off. She would pay
it. The servant was dismissed. They changed their flat; they took a garret under the
roof.
She came to know the heavy work of the house, the hateful duties of the kitchen.
She washed the plates, wearing out her pink nails on the coarse pottery and the
bottoms of pans. She washed the dirty linen, the shirts and dish-cloths, and hung
them out to dry on a string; every morning she took the dustbin down into the street
and carried up the water, stopping on each landing to get her breath. And, clad like a
poor woman, she went to the fruiterer, to the grocer, to the butcher, a basket on her
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Every month notes had to be paid off, others renewed, time gained. Her husband
worked in the evenings at putting straight a merchant's accounts, and often at night
he did copying at two pence-halfpenny a page. And this life lasted ten years. At the
end of ten years everything was paid off, everything, the usurer's charges and the
accumulation of superimposed interest.
Madame Loisel looked old now. She had become like all the other strong, hard,
coarse women of poor households. Her hair was badly done, her skirts were awry,
her hands were red. She spoke in a shrill voice, and the water slopped all over the
floor when she scrubbed it. But sometimes, when her husband was at the office, she
sat down by the window and thought of that evening long ago, of the ball at which
she had been so beautiful and so much admired.
What would have happened if she had never lost those jewels. Who knows?
Who knows? How strange life is, how fickle! How little is needed to ruin or to save!
One Sunday, as she had gone for a walk along the Champs-Elysees to freshen
herself after the labours of the week, she caught sight suddenly of a woman who was
taking a child out for a walk. It was Madame Forestier, still young, still beautiful,
still attractive.
Madame Loisel was conscious of some emotion. Should she speak to her? Yes,
certainly. And now that she had paid, she would tell her all. Why not?
She went up to her.
"Good morning, Jeanne."
The other did not recognise her, and was surprised at being thus familiarly
addressed by a poor woman.
"But . . . Madame . . ." she stammered. "I don't know . . . you must be making a
mistake."
"No . . . I am Mathilde Loisel."
Her friend uttered a cry.
"Oh! . . . my poor Mathilde, how you have changed! . . ."
"Yes, I've had some hard times since I saw you last; and many sorrows . . . and
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 "On my account! . . . How was that?"
"You remember the diamond necklace you lent me for the ball at the Ministry?"
"Yes. Well?"
"Well, I lost it."
"How could you? Why, you brought it back."
"I brought you another one just like it. And for the last ten years we have been
paying for it. You realise it wasn't easy for us; we had no money. . . . Well, it's paid
for at last, and I'm glad indeed."
Madame Forestier had halted.
"You say you bought a diamond necklace to replace mine?"
"Yes. You hadn't noticed it? They were very much alike."
And she smiled in proud and innocent happiness.
Madame Forestier, deeply moved, took her two hands.
"Oh, my poor Mathilde! But mine was imitation. It was worth at the very most
five hundred francs! . . . "
Notes and Glossary:
1) abject (adj): showing after hopelessness
2) garret (n): an attic or semi-finished room just beneath the roof of a house
3) awry (adj): crooked/ distorted, turned or twisted to one side
Self check IV
I. Answer the following questions in one word / phrase/ sentence each:
1) Why does Mathilde Loisel want to rush out after the ball?
2) How long did it take for the Loisels to pay off their debts?
3) How does Loisel’s husband help in the time of poverty?
II. Rewrite the following choosing the correct alternative:
1) The actual worth of the lost necklace was as about ________ Francs.
i) five hundred ii) four hundred
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2) Sometimes, in her poverty, Mathilde would remember the __________ and
feel sad.
i) diamond necklace ii) ball
iii) childhood friend iv) old house
3) One Sunday, poor Mathilde had gone for a walk along __________.
i) Champ – Elysees ii) Siene
iii) Palais – Royal iv) Rue des Martyrs
4) It took __________ years for the Loisels to make up for the lost necklace.
i) five ii) ten
iii) eight iv) six
6 B.3 Key to self check exercises:
Self check I
I. 1) Monsieur Loisel worked in the Ministry of Education.
2) Mathilde Loisel was a pretty and charming girl.
3) Mathilde loved clothes and jewels most.
4) Mathilde refused to visit her school friend because her richness made her
ashamed of her own poverty.
II. 1) Mathilde
2) Clerk
Self check II
I. 1) Madame Ramponneau was the wife of the Minister of Education.
2) Mathilde and Loisel were invited for a dance party.
3) The ball-dress cost 400 Francs.
4) A superb diamond necklace was in the black satin case.
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II. 1) friend
2) gun
3) lark-shooting
Self check III
I. 1) The price of the diamond necklace was forty thousand Francs.
2) The Under-Secretaries at the ball wished to waltz with Mathilde Loisel.
3) Loisel’s father had left him eighteen thousand Francs.
II. 1) Palais-Royal
2) four
3) ten
4) diamond
Self check IV
I. 1) Mathilde Loisel wanted to rush out after the ball because she did not want
to be noticed by the other women putting on their costly furs.
2) It took ten years for the Loisels to pay off their debts.
3) Loisel’s husband worked in the evenings correcting a merchant’s accounts
and did copying at two pence – half penny a page at night.
II. 1) four hundred
2) the ball
3) Champ – Elysees
4) ten
6 B.4 Vocabulary Exercises
Vocabulary Exercises:
a) Noun Verb Adjective Adverb
1) --- --- charming ---

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3) grief --- --- ---
4) pleasure --- --- ---
5) --- convince --- ---
6) --- --- --- ecstatically

b) Give synonyms for the following words:

1) astonishment
2) shabby
3) ashamed
4) garments
5) admiration
c) Give antonyms for the following words:
1) happiness
2) descend
3) ashamed
4) costly
5) pale
6 B.5 Summary:
Maupassant’s story “The Necklace” presents the stark contrast between reality
and appearance. The story unfolds the sad reality that love for false pride, affluence,
material wealth leads to misery. Hence, it is necessary to be very down to earth in life
and not run after things that are beyond us and actually unnecessary. In the story,
Monsieur Loisel is a modest clerk and leads a simple life. He loves his pretty wife
very much and wishes to make her happy. Mathilde Loisel however, is unhappy as
she thinks she deserves to lead a life of luxury of the upper class and dreams of it. On
getting a chance to attend a ball at the Ministry, she gets a ball dress and borrows a
diamond necklace from her rich friend. She enjoys the ball and impresses all. But
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later on she loses the necklace. She replaces the necklace by spending thirty six
thousand Francs and for the next ten years leads a life of utter poverty. Later on, her
rich friend fails to recognize her due to her degraded personality. Loisel tells her that
the condition was a result of the cost incurred on replacing the lost necklace. Loisel
is shocked when she learns that it was a piece of imitation. She realizes her folly.
6 B.6 Exercises:
I. Answer the following in about 3-4 sentences each:
1) Why was Madame Loisel unhappy?
2) What was there in Madame Forestier’s large box?
3) What work did Madame Loisel have to do at home to make up for the lost
necklace?
4) Describe Madame Loisel’s appearance after ten years of hard domestic
work.
5) What happened at Champ-Elysees?
II. Write short notes on the following in about 8-10 Sentences each:
1) Madame Loisel
2) Monsieur Loisel
3) The Ball Party
4) The moral of the story “The Necklace”
6 B.7 Writing Activity:
Attempt to narrate the story from Mathilde Loisel’s point of view.
6 B.8 Suggested Reading:
Read Maupassant’s “Simon’s Papa” and O Henry’s “The Last Leaf”.



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 Module 7
A) English for Specific Purposes

Index :
7.0 Objectives
7.1 Introduction
7.2 I) English for Advertising.
i) Task - 1
II) English for Report Writing.
i) Task - 2
III) English for Writing e-mail.
i) Task - 3
7.3 Answers to check your progress
7.4 Exercise

7.0 Objectives:
After studying this module, the students will be able to :

learn the use of vocabulary in advertisements.

understand and use the English language used in writing reports.

learn and use vocabulary in writing e-mails.

7.1 Introduction:
We all learn English with a purpose to be able to communicate through English.
In our education system, English has occupied the status of compulsory subject from
the first standard. Some of us learn English for educational purposes. Some of us
want to be teachers, engineers, pharmacists, doctors, lawyers, businessmen, writers
and government officers. Therefore, we have to learn and master the kind of
Englishes i.e. different varieties of English like Technical English, Scientific English,
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English for medical profession, Law and Engineering profession as well as English
for Commerce etc.
We need a special kind of English in different disciplines or occupations. In
order to meet the specific needs of the learners, we need ESP i.e. English for Special
purposes. ESP concentrates on the use of `specific` language in terms of vocabulary
and grammar. It is taught with a view to develop communicative competence in
specific disciplines. ESP is, thus, learner-centered activity.
English for Specific Purposes (ESP)
From the early 1960' s English for specific purpose has become one of the most
important areas of teaching English. We learn English in order to carry out day-to-
day communication. Besides the students learn the limited `specific` English which
is essential for doing a job or chosen occupation. Keeping this objective in mind
many colleges and universities across India offer undergraduate as well as post-
graduate courses in English. Thus ESP attempt to address specific purposes of
learning English. ESP provides platform to develop linguistic abilities in order to
equip students to do a particular kind of a job.
ESP is a very vast area of interest and therefore it is impossible to deal with all
its aspects. Hence we are going to concentrate in this unit on the use of English in
Commerce field. Again this area is also vast and we will limit our discussion to some
of the important areas in this field.

7.2.1 English for Advertising

Advertisement is a form of communication intended to promote the sale of
product or service. One of the powerful tools of advertising is language. However,
the language which we use in day-today- communication is different from the
language used in advertising. For business organisations to be successful, they have
to use English language effectively so as to impress the consumers and persuade
them to buy their products. So in advertisement emotive words are used to attract the
attention of the consumers. Advertisement writing is not an individual activity. It
involves group of creative and imaginative writers , who use many language devices.
Thus, the language of advertisements has special characteristics which distinguished
it from general English. Some of the characteristics and devices used in the language
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i) Use of Adjectives : Adjectives are used to describe the striking features of
products. The most commonly and widely used adjectives are fresh, good, new,
gentle, creamy, silky, delicious, beautiful, ideal, excellent, unforgettable, eternal,
great, wonderful, real, rich, bright, big, modern. natural, strong, safe, save etc.
ii) Catchy words / phrases: Catchy words/ phrases are used to arrest the attention
of the consumers. e.g. An Idea can change your life.
iii) Use of short sentences : The short sentences are often used for the headline or
slogan to capture the attention of the consumers, e. g. `coke adds life`, `Intel
inside’ `India`s best biscuits` , `the ultimate Choice` etc.
iv) Use of simple present tense : Verbs are used in simple present tense to imply a
universal timelessness. The most common verbs used for this purpose are : be,
make, get, give, have, see, buy, come, go, know, keep, look, need, love, use,
feel, like, choose, take, start, taste etc.
e.g. I`m a Khaitan fan.
Your son is sure to rise if fed on pure Sunshine.
v) Use of Imperatives : The imperative sentence persuades somebody to do
something. Advertises use conversation wherein interrogatives and imperatives
are used. It creates a lively atmosphere. It gives the impression of real life
situation because all ads aim at persuading consumers to do action.
e.g. `Get that Pepsi Feeling.’
Take years off your feet. (footwear)
Don’ t leave home without it. (Express card)
Buy now.
Bring out the champion in you. (Nestle Milo)
vi) Use of figures of speech : In ads, figures of speech are widely used with a view
to impress the quality of the product. The commonly used figures of speech are
simile, metaphor, personification, alliteration, parallelism, pun etc.
e.g. Just tasty, tender, tiny garden peas. (Alliteration)
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 Sealed tight to remain bright. (parallelism)
Light as mist , soft as spring. (simile)
Satin is the way it feels. (Metaphor)
Dancing designs that dazzle. (personification)
vii) Use of Humour : Some new words are coined to add an element of humour in
ads that would attract the attention of the consumers.
eg. Utterly butterly delicious (butter)
Limcomaniac (soft drink)
Ambiqueen (Sarees).
No icy - plasticky smell (water jugs)
viii) Familiar Language : Use of second person pronoun to address an audience.
eg. How do you bite a mosquito? (insecticide)
HYUNDAI : Always there for you. (car)
Recharge Your Emotions. (Essel world)
ix) Emotive Language: One has to consider the emotive power of the words
while writing ads. It appeals to the emotions of the consumers and associates
their feelings and trust of the product.
eg. Boost is the secret of my energy.
I`m a Complan Boy.
My perfect morning begins with Loksatta.
x) The Art of Rule Breaking : In advertising, there is a strong appeal and
attraction in its language. Therefore, to bring novelty, every attempt is made to
break established rules about spellings, grammar or use prefixes or suffixes. It
makes the ad striking.
eg. The word, `quality` is `Kwality` (spelling)
The word. `Idea`` is `Idea`.
In the ad of ` 7-Up` cold drink the use of word `Uncola` (prefix)

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xi) Code mixing features: Here words in two languages are mixed.
e.g. Thanda Thanda Cool Cool (Navratan oil)
Yeh Dil Mange More (Pepsi)
Taste Bhi, Health Bhi (Maggie),
xii) Rhyme : Rhyme introduces musical quality in the advertising message.
e.g. Dip, dip, dip
If you want it stronger
Dip a little longer.
Dip, dip, dip. (tea bags)
Sharp perspectives.
Insightful views.
Truthful news. (end-rhyme) (Loksatta)
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 In the advertisement given above the ‘Logo’ has been given along with a
`Tagline.` It attracts the attention of the customers. The `Headline` is given in bold
type with capital letters. It appeals to the mind of the consumers. The `Body Copy`
provides other details. It states the important special features of the burger.

In the advertisement given above the ‘Logo’ clearly indicates the brand name
`SONY` along with its `Tagline` `make believe`. It catches the attention of the
customers. The `Headline` displays special brand name of the product. It appeals to
the mind of the consumers. The `Body Copy` here states important qualities of the
SONY TV making use of different phrases. It arouses the curiosity of the customers
and persuades to buy the new product.
i) Task 1 :
1) Collect advertisements of the following products of different brands and
note the headlines used in it. Washing soap, Motorbike, Cold drink,
Biscuits, Tooth-Paste, Cell-phone.
2) Prepare slogans for the following products: Air-cooler, Digital Camera,
Television, Detergent Powder, Refrigerator.
II) English for Report Writing:
A report is a major form of professional communication. It facilitates decision-
making and promotes the growth of an organization. A report conveys information
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about starting a new project or assessing the progress of on-going projects.
Therefore, a report must be factual, economical and clear. One need to have the
knowledge of writing and learning, the scientific process of investigation, analysis
and presentation. So a professional report is a formal communication written for a
specific purpose, conveying authentic information in a completely impartial and
objective manner and contains recommendations.
A business report is a written document that provides information and
sometimes analysis to assist a business in making informed decisions. The main
purpose of a business report is to make data that is relevant to the company, such as
information regarding efficiency, competition, or procedures, easily available to
everyone in the company. The report needs to make this data easy for the reader to
understand. The best way to do that is to have clearly defined sections with labels
and headings.
Informational reports provide factual information and do not include any
analysis or recommendations.
There are many examples of informational reports:
• Financial reports include cash flow statements, balance sheets, or the annual
financial report required for publicly traded corporations, so stockholders can
see how the company is fairing financially.
• Business management reports include reports about labour expenses, web
traffic, or customer satisfaction survey responses.
• Compliance information reports. In these reports, a company demonstrates it is
complying with required regulations, for instance those regarding financial
management.
• Present research from a study: This report generally summarizes a research
study that has information or findings that is relevant to the business.
• Situational reports are generally written to a supervisor regarding a business
situation, including what it was, how it was handled, and how it impacted the
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Parts of a Business Report :
Title :
Report must have a title indicating the subject of the study. Like other titles
these titles are in the form of a phrase and not a sentence but like other titles they are
not short. They can be long because they include place and period with the subject.
For example ‘Report on decline in the sale of bikes in Maharashtra between January
and June 2018.
Reference :
Details of who assigned the task, on what date and how appointment was made
(that is by a resolution at a meeting or by a letter or an office order).
Introduction :
The introduction sets the stage for what is included in the report. It highlights
the major topics that arc covered and provides background information on why the
data in the report was collected.
Body :
The body of the report describes the problem, the data that was collected, how
the data was collected, and discusses the major findings. The body may be broken
into subsections, with subheadings that highlight the specific point to be covered in
that subsection. This structuring will make the report easier to read and understand.
Conclusion :
The conclusion explains how the data described in the body of the document
may be interpreted or what conclusions may be drawn. The conclusion often suggests
how to use the data to improve some aspect of the business or recommends
additional research.
Reference :
The references section lists the resources used to research or collect the data for
the report. References provide proof for your points and enable readers to review the
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Appendix :
The appendix is optional and may include additional technical information that
is not necessary to the explanation provided in the body and conclusion but supports
the findings, such as charts or pictures, or additional research not cited in the body
but relevant to the discussion.
• Reports should be concise and factual. Opinions should be given in the
`conclusions` section. However, these opinions should be based on facts
presented in the `findings`.
• Use simple tense (usually the present simple) to express facts.
Use the imperative form (Discuss the possibility ..., Give priority ..., etc.) in the
`recommendations` section as these apply to the company as a whole.
SPECIMEN REPORT
15th June, 2018.
The Managing Director,
XYZ Paints Ltd.
Sub. : Report on Working of Nagpur Branch
In accordance with your instruction by telephone, on 4th June, 2018, I visited the
Nagpur Branch for a surprise inspection last week. I observed the working of the
branch office for three days and also inspected the office and the records. I am sorry
to report that the branch office is run in a most unsatisfactory manner.
When I reached the branch office on 10th June at 10.15 a.m., which is 15
minutes after opening time, I found that there were only one peon and two clerks.
Taking me for a client, they informed me that office work starts only at 11.00 a.m.
The manager, Mr. R. S. Tyagi arrived at 11.30 a.m. Mr. Tyagi who himself is not
punctual is unable to maintain any discipline among the staff.
The stock register and the account books have not been properly maintained for
the last three months. It also appears that office stationery and small articles are
freely used and taken away by the staff. The general indiscipline, if not controlled at
once, is likely to result in heavy losses. Already there is loss of business since many

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of our clients have turned to our competitors owing to the poor service rendered by
our branch office.
Since the situation is quite bad, it will be necessary to take drastic steps to
restore discipline in the branch office. I recommend that Mr. Tyagi should be brought
to the H.O. and kept in a subordinate position. Mr. M. K. Ayyar, Assistant Manager
of Pune branch has proved himself quite able; he may be promoted as Manager and
posted at Nagpur.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
Secretary
The Managing Director,
Madhuri Glazed Tiles, (Pvt.) Ltd.
Pune.
Sub: Report on Decline of Sales of Tiles
Dear Sir,
In accordance with your instructions given to me through letter MGT/11 dated
st
1 June, 2018 1 have enquired fully into the causes of the decline in the company’s
business in the last two years till May 2018, and submit my report as follows.
Several new companies have put out glazed tiles in the market. Some of the
companies have introduced artistically designed tiles in a variety of colours. Most of
the companies manufacture square tiles in four sizes and rectangular tiles in two
sizes. We have limited our production of tiles to six standard colours without design,
and to only two sizes.
Tiles are used extensively in kitchens of homes and hotels but the demand is for
designed tiles, and for sizes other than those we make. Hence, while the market for
tiles has gone up, we have not been able to keep our share of the business.

Recommendations :
1. An experienced designer should be appointed to create new designs for our tiles.
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3. Some of the more popular sizes and shapes should be introduced.
4. An intensive advertising and sales campaign should be launched in order to win
back the lost market.
5. Follow-up correspondence should be maintained with all former customers in
order to regain and build up old contacts.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
Secretary
i) Task 2 :
1) The Principal of a college has appointed a committee of two teachers and
three students to suggest new directions in which students’ co-curricular
activities can be developed. Write the committee’s report.
2) As the librarian of your college, you have been asked by the Principal to
suggest reorganization of the college library so as to make the maximum
use of space and facilities available. Prepare the report recommending
computerization of the library's catalogues and lending system.
III) English for Writing E-mail:
Today electronic mail (e-mail) has become a very important tool to carry out
business communication. E-mail is the fastest way of communication because of its
high speed, its ability to reach many people at distance places at a time Besides we
can attach important files along with the message. It is quick, effective and
economical since you can store and refer back to the points of information. It saves
time, money and massive paperwork. Nowadays all type of business organisations,
small and big, are using e-mail communication. It has become an integral part of
corporate communication.
Basic requirements of e-mail:
• A computer with internet connectivity
• E- mail account
• Password protected e - mail Id:
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prof_shinde@rediffmail. com
• Recipient`s e- mail Id
There are two broad types of e-mails
1) Informal e-mails 2) Formal e-mails.
Now let us discuss the format of these two.

1) Informal e- mails :
Informal e-mails are addressed to the friends and relatives. You can send e-
mails to your friends and relatives on various occasions such as :
• inviting them for birthday party or a wedding ceremony.
• accepting or refusing invitation.
• thanking or congratulating someone.
• expressing grief for someone`s death
• Regretting for misbehaviour or loss of things.
In Informal e-mails the following abbreviations are used largely.
U you
BTW by the way
Re with reference to
ASAP as soon as possible
WbW with best wishes
FYI for your information
CUL8R see you later
GM good morning
gr8 great
b. d. birthday

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 m am
bet between
The above given examples are a few samples of abbreviations. Here it is not
possible to give all the examples because the list is exhaustive. However, remember
that these types of abbreviations are used in personal e-mails. You cannot use them
while writing formal e-mails.

Now study the following examples of informal e-mails:

To: aratip @ gmail.com

CC : .........................
Subject : Invitation
Hi Arati,
It`s my b.d. tomorrow. Party arranged at my home, bet 6 to 9 p.m. All our
friends will be there. U do come. We`ll have gr8 fun!
Yours,
Archana

To: parchana74@yahoo.com
Subject: Saying Sorry
Hi Archana,
It was very nice of u to invite me for ur b.d. party. But I`m very sorry 2 tell
u that I`m out of station 2morrow in connection with office work. Really
sorry. I hope u will understand me. BTW wish u happy b.d.
Yours,
Arati

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2) Formal e-mails:
Formal e-mail is different from informal e-mail in its language. Formal e-mail is
a means of official communication. In formal e-mail, you have to maintain the
quality and standard of language. To maintain quality and standard of the e-mail, it is
essential to follow certain etiquettes while sending e-mails.
E-mail etiquettes:
i) Meaningful subject line :
The subject line of your e-mail is a significant factor that attracts the attention of
a recipient. So the subject of your e-mail should be written in precise and catchy
manner. For example :
Subject: Urgent meeting
Subject: Important attachment
ii) Proof-read :
While drafting e-mail, be careful about the message regarding the punctuation,
spelling, grammar, etc. Before to `send`, accomplish the proof-reading, correct it if
necessary and then send it.
iii) Maintain formal situations :
Distinguish formal and informal e-mails. Keep your formal approach while
drafting formal e-mails. Keep your formal e-mails short and clear. Avoid using
abbreviations like -
He’s, He’d, etc.
iv) Be a good correspondent:
Check your e-mails regularly and reply them promptly. This is the act of
courtesy and it encourages others to reply.
v) Make one point per e-mail :
Emphasize only one point or message per e-mail. If you put many subjects, the
recipient becomes unable to focus on your message. However, if necessary, you give
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vi) Avoid using abbreviations :
Business communication is always formal. You have to maintain formal
approach. So do not use any kind of abbreviations.
vii) Give identification for quick response :
Give your name, designation and other important information so that your
recipient will find it easier to respond you quickly.
Now study the following formal e-mail :
Writing Complaint:
To: msiddharth08@gmail.com
CC : ..............................
Subject : Supply of Books
Librarian,
Chh. Shau Institute of Science,
Sangli.
Dear Sir,
I have a complaint about the reference books in Chemistry, Physics and
Electronics ordered on 12th of this month. We were interested in reference books, but
you have sent text books related to the above mentioned subjects.
Please replace these books as early as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Vikrant Kshirsagar
i) Task 3 :
1) Write an e-mail of complaint to Rohit Computers as your recently bought
Pen-drive is not working properly.
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7.3 Answers to check your progress :
i) Answers to check your progress
1) Washing Soap : Continuous Protection from Germs.
Motorbike : Kya Speed Hai !
Cold-drink : Taste the Thunder
Biscuits : Indias Best Biscuits
Tooth-paste : No Cavities
Cell-Phone : New Age Cell-Phone
2) Air-cooler : Cool Comfort in Summer !
Digital Camera : Go Digital Connect to the Future
Television : A World Class Range
Detergent - Powder : Chamko Jaisa Koi Nahi !
Refrigerators : Thanda Karke Khaao

ii) Answers to check your progress

1)
To,
The Principal,
S. B. Khade Mahavidyalaya,
Koparde,
Sub: Report regarding students` co-curricular activities
Dear Sir,
As per your letter dated 1st Aug, 2019, a committee comprising two teachers and
three students was formed under my chairmanship. The committee was assigned the
duty of suggesting new directions in order to enhance and ensure the participation of
students in co-curricular activities.

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The members of the committee were as under :
1. Prof. Dr. M.T. Hajare
2. Prof. Mrs. S. K. Patil
3. Miss. Prachi Patil
4. Mr. Omkar Deshmukh
5. Mr. Harish Gosavi
The members of the committee had exhaustive discussion sessions with the
teachers and the students of the college. They also talked to the principals, the
teachers and the students in adjoining colleges. After these discussion sessions the
committee marked the following observations.
The college has been conducting the co-curricular activities like essay writing,
debating and elocution competitions, organising lectures of experts and noted
speakers etc. But a very few students participate in them. Most of the students remain
aloof because all these activities are conducted on traditional methods.
So the committee members are of the view that the students should be given real
life experience which will enhance their interest in the type of work they hope to do
in the future. After much deliberations, the committee suggests that the following
steps can be taken to ensure students participation in co-curricular actives.
1) Quiz competitions or brainstorming sessions be arranged in the college.
2) Short-term courses like Spoken English, Journalism, MSCIT, Soft Skills etc. be
arranged in the college.
3) The college should sign MOU's with the industries and other services agencies
like banks, public libraries, local-self bodies and NGO's like Rotary and Lions
Club and visits to them be arranged. It will ensure the direct interaction with the
working people.
4) The students who participate and win in these competitions be felicitated in the
Annual Prize Distribution Function with a cash prize and certificate of merits.
We, the members of the committee, hope that these measures will certainly
encourage the students to participate actively in the co-curricular activities conducted
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Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
Sd/-
Dr. M.T. Hasare
(Chairman)
2)
To,
The Principal,
S. B. Khade Mahavidyalaya,
Koparde,
Sub: Report regarding maximising the use of space and facilities in the library
Dear Sir,
In response to your letter dated 1st August, 2019, I formed the committee of four
members- one teacher, one non teaching staff member and one student under my
chairmanship in order to suggest reorganization of the college library.
The members of the committee had long discussion sessions and they came out
with the following recommendations. I humbly put them before you.
1) Presently we have arranged the book cases in a parallel lines and there is a very
little place to move. We suggest that the bookcases be arranged in a square
manner with a lot of space between them. The students, therefore, will get an
easy access to the books and they can utilize the space in the middle for study.
2) There is no counter in the library. It becomes problematic to issue books when
lots of students come for lending books. So a posh counter be raised in the
library for lending facilities.
3) There is a small space provided both for the boys students and girls students for
reading newspapers and periodicals. The committee suggests that the
newspapers and periodicals be kept in their respective rooms i.e. Boys room and
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4) The computer section are housed in one corner of the library. The students who
use computers always disturb the working of the library. Therefore, a separate
room be provided for the computer section.
5) The lending system is traditional. For quick and smooth service, the
computerization of library catalogues and lending system be taken up
immediately.
We hope that you will seriously take these recommendation on your mind and
necessary action will be initiated by you soon.
Thanking you.
Yours faithfully,
sd/-
Mrs. Savita S. Badkatte
(Librarian)

iii) Answers to check your progress :

1)
To : rohitcomputers_303@gmail. com
CC : ....................................
Subject: Pen-drive
Rohit Computers,
Mahadwar Road,
Kolhapur.
Dear Sir,
I have bought a pen-drive from you in the last week. I am sorry to inform
you that it is not working properly since last two days. So I request you to
replace this as early as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Nikhil Patil

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2)
To : jatharlg2000@indiatimes.com
CC : _________
Subject : Invitation
Sir,
It gives me gr8 pleasure 2 invite you for my Wedding Anniversary Party to
be held on 18th of this month. The party will b held bet 6 to 9 in the
evening. Do come with the members of your family and grace the occasion.
No presents please.
Yours sincerely,
Jay Ghadge

7.4 Exercises :
1) Write an advertisement for a washing machine and describe its features with the
use of various adjectives.
2) Write an advertisement copy for a refrigerator and describe its features with the
use of various adjectives.
3) Write advertisements for an imaginary product (ready-made clothes, soap,
detergent, etc.) using essential-verb phrases to make appeal to the buyers.
4) There has been remarkable decline in the sale of sports goods manufactured by a
company. The Marketing Manager has been asked to report with
recommendations for stopping the decline. Prepare the report.
5) The results of a college have been very poor for the last five years. The
managing Committee of the Society which runs the college has asked the
Principal to make a recommendation report for improving the results. Write the
report including a brief statement of the finance required.
6) Write an e-mail of complaint to Mehta Book Sellers Kolhapur about missing
pages in purchased book.
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 B) I Thank You God
Index:
7.0 Objectives
7.1 Introduction
7.2 Text
7.3 Terms to Remember
7.4 Summary
7.5 Skimming and scanning questions
7.6 Key to check Comprehension questions
7.7 Exercises
7.8 Writing activity
7.9 Suggestions for further reading

7.0 Objectives:
After reading this unit, the students will understand:
• The term Negritudes
• How the Whites exploited the Blacks exploitation of the Blacks by the whites.
• the Blacks take pride in their being born black.
• how black people suffered due to the policy of slavery and racial segregation.
• the positive side of the blacks.

7.1 Introduction:
Benard Dadie (1916-2019) belongs to Ivory Coast. He worked for the French
government in Dakar, Senegal, and returned to his homeland in 1947 and took active
part in the movement for Independence. His writing is influenced by his experiences
of colonialism. He is the Champion of Humanism who values the equality and
independence of Africans. His poem ``I Thank You God`` is truely an anthem for
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suffered because of exploitation and racial discrimination. But he does it in a satirical
way, and prophesies victory to the blacks.

7.2 Poem :
I Thank You God
I thank you God for creating me black,
For making of me
Porter of all sorrows,
Setting on my head
The World.
I were the Centaur's hide
And I have carried the World since the first morning

White is a colour for special occasions

Black is the colour for everyday
And I have carried the World since the first evening.

I am glad,
of the shape of my head
Made to carry the World,
Content
What the shape of my nose
That must snuff every wind of World
Pleased
With the shape of my legs
Ready to run all the heats of the World.

I thank you God for creating me black

For making of me
Porter of all sorrows.

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 Thirty-six swords have pierced my heart.
Thirty-six fires have burnt my body.
And my blood on all calvaries has reddened the snow,
And my blood at every dawn has reddened all nature.

Still I am
Glad to carry the World,
Glad of my short arms
of my long arms
of the thickness of my lips.

I thank you God for creating me black.

White is a colour for special occasions
Black the colour for every day
And I have carried the World since the dawn of time;
And my laugh over the World, through the night, creates
the Day.
God for I thank you creating me black.
7.3 Terms to Remember:
Negritude : literary movement of 1930's , 40's & 50's that began among French
speaking African and Carribean writers living in Paris as a protest against French
colonial rule and the policy of assimilation
Porter : A person who carries luggage.
Centaur : a mythical figure having a horse`s body and a man`s head.
Thirty six swords and Thirty six fires : The wounds inflicted on Jesus Christ to
torture him at the time of Cucifixion.
Calvaries : A life-size representation of Cucifixion of Jesus Christ on a piece of
raised ground; the hill outside Jerusalem which is traditionally held to be the location
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7.4 Summary :
The poet thanks God for creating him black and for making him a porter of all
sorrows. He says that he wears the Centaur`s hide and has carried the burden of the
world’ s sorrows from the beginning of the world itself. He ironically says that white
is a colour for special occasion whereas black is the colour for every day. He
expresses his happiness about the shape of his head which has enabled him to carry
the burden of the world. He is content with the shape of his nose which has enabled
him to snuff every wind of the world. He is pleased with the shape of his legs that
has enabled him to bear all the heats of the world.
Further he points out that he has suffered at the hands of the white for thirty - six
years. His blood has reddened the snow at every place of crucification, as well as all
nature at every dawn. His race has been treated inhumanly since it has come into the
world. However, he doesn't complain. On the other hand, he considers his black birth
as a matter of pride for that has given him an opportunity to serve the world. He
reiterates his happiness about his short arm and thick lips. In the end he laughs over
the world and thanks God for creating him black.

7.5 Skimming and scanning questions:

A) Answer the following questions in one word / phrase or sentence only:
1) What does the poet celebrate in the poem?
2) To whom does Dadie compare the Blacks?
3) What does 'first morning' refer to?
4) What burden does the black man carry on his head?
5) What do 'night' and 'day' represent in the poem ?
B) Rewrite the following sentences by choosing the correct alternative:
1) Centaur is a mythical figure with a man's head and _____ body.
a) elephant's b) lion's c) horse's d) zebra's
2) 'Porter of all sorrows' refers to _____.
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 c) the white man d) the black man
3) ________ is the colour for special occasions.
a) Black b) Grey c) Red d) White
4) The 'first morning' and 'first evening' refer to the creation of ______.
a) world b) Africa c) Black man d) hell
5) 'Thirty-six words and thirty-six fires' refer to the ___________ of Christ'.
a) birth, b) struggle c) crucifixion d) work.
6) The poem 'I Thank You God' celebrates _______.
a) being white b) being black
c) African slavery d) African Independence
C) Vocabulary Exercises :
A) Complete the following table filling in the appropriate form of the given
words.
Noun Verb Adjective Adverb
--- laugh --- ---
thickness --- --- ---
--- --- colourful ---
--- please --- ---
--- --- --- creatively
B) Give synonyms of the following words :
sorrow, black, colour.
C) Give antonyms of the following words :
create, laugh, thickness

7.6 Key to self assessment questions :

A) 1) his being born as black
2) Jesus Christ
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4) burden of sorrows
5) Endless suffering of the blacks
B) 1) c. horse`s
2) d. the black man
3) d. White
4) a. World
5) c. Crucifixion
6) b. being black.
C) A)
Noun Verb Adjective Adverb
laughter laugh laughing laughingly
thickness thicken thick thickly
colour colour colourful colourfully
pleasant please pleasing pleasingly
creation create creative creatively.

B) sadness, dark, paint.

C) destroy, cry, thinness.

7.7 Exercises:
A) Answer the following questions in 3 - 4 sentences each :
1) Why does the speaker thank God?
2) In what sense the poet describes himself as `porter of all sorrows`?
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 4) How does the poet express his sense injustice?
B) Write short notes on the following in about 7 to 8 sentences each:
1) Celebration of Negritude in `I Thank You God`
2) Irony in `I Thank You God`

7.8 Writing Activity :

The above poem celebrates being a black. Write a paragraph celebrating being a
girl or being an Indian.

7.9 Suggestions for further reading :

Try and read some works of African literature. Read Dalit literature and
compare it with African literature.


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 Module 8
A) War
Luigi Pirandello

Contents:
8.0 Objectives
8.1 Introduction
8.2 The Text-I
8.3 Terms to Remember
8.4 Summary
8.5 Skimming and Scanning Questions
8.6 Key to self assessment questions
8.7 Exercises.
8.8 Writing Activity

8.0 Objectives:
After studying this unit the students will be able to understand:
• the humane perspective of war
• the parents love for their children.
• Patriotism and love of country

8.1 Introduction :
Luigi Pirandello (1867 –1936) was an Italian dramatist, novelist, poet and short
story writer whose greatest contributions were his plays. He was awarded the 1934
Nobel Prize in Literature for his almost magical power to turn psychological analysis
into good theatre. Pirandello’s works include novels, hundreds of short stories, and
about 40 plays, some of which are written in Sicilian. Pirandello’s tragic farces are
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 This short story is written in the year 1918, by Luigi Pirandello is about a group
of people travelling from Rome to Sulmona, Italy. They have had to stop for the
night to await a connecting passage to the main line. While they are waiting a man
boards the carriage with his wife. The husband tells the people that his wife is upset
because their only son has been called to the front to fight in the war. The setting of
the story is First World War. The story is a discourse on the importance or lack of
importance of the war. The passengers have differing opinions over whose grief is
greater and they all have strong patriotic feelings. The parent’s love for their children
is simply greater than their love for the country. But young people naturally put love
of country above all else, and are happy to die in the battle.

8.3 The Text:

The passengers who had left Rome by the night express had had to stop until
dawn at the small station of Fabriano in order to continue their journey by the small
old-fashioned “local” joining the main line with Sulmona.
At dawn, in a stuffy and smoky second-class carriage in which five people had
already spent the night, a bulky woman in deep mourning, was hoisted in—almost
like a shapeless bundle. Behind her—puffing and moaning, followed her husband—a
tiny man, thin and weakly, his face death-white, his eyes small and bright and
looking shy and uneasy.
Having at last taken a seat he politely thanked the passengers who had helped
his wife and who had made room for her; then he turned round to the woman trying
to pull down the collar of her coat and politely enquired:
Are you all right, dear?”
The wife, instead of answering, pulled up her collar again to her eyes, so as to
hide her face.
“Nasty world,” muttered the husband with a sad smile.
And he felt it his duty to explain to his traveling companions that the poor
woman was to be pitied for the war was taking away from her her only son, a boy of
twenty to whom both had devoted their entire life, even breaking up their home at
Sulmona to follow him to Rome where he had to go as a student, then allowing him
to volunteer for war with an assurance, however, that at least for six months he
would not be sent to the front and now, all of a sudden, receiving a wire saying that
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he was due to leave in three days’ time and asking them to go and see him off. The
woman under the big coat was twisting and wriggling, at times growling like a wild
animal, feeling certain that all those explanations would not have aroused even a
shadow of sympathy from those people who—most likely—were in the same plight
as herself. One of them, who had been listening with particular attention, said:
“You should thank God that your son is only leaving now for the front. Mine
has been sent there the first day of the war. He has already come back twice wounded
and been sent back again to the front.”
“What about me? I have two sons and three nephews at the front,” said another
passenger.
“Maybe, but in our case it is our only son,” ventured the husband.
“What difference can it make? You may spoil your only son with excessive
attentions, but you cannot love him more than you would all your other children if
you had any. Paternal love is not like bread that can be broken into pieces and split
amongst the children in equal shares. A father gives all his love to each one of his
children without discrimination, whether it be one or ten, and if I am suffering now
for my two sons, I am not suffering half for each of them but double....”
“True ... true ...” sighed the embarrassed husband, “but suppose (of course we
all hope it will never be your case) a father has two sons at the front and he loses one
of them, there is still one left to console him ... while ...”
“Yes,” answered the other, getting cross, “a son left to console him but also a
son left for whom he must survive, while in the case of the father of an only son if
the son dies the father can die too and put an end to his distress. Which of the two
positions is the worse? Don’t you see how my case would be worse than yours?”
“Nonsense,” interrupted another traveler, a fat, red-faced man with bloodshot
eyes of the palest gray. He was panting. From his bulging eyes seemed to spurt inner
violence of an uncontrolled vitality which his weakened body could hardly contain.
“Nonsense,” he repeated, trying to cover his mouth with his hand so as to hide
the two missing front teeth. “Nonsense. Do we give life to our children for our own
benefit? The other travelers stared at him in distress. The one who had had his son at
the front since the first day of the war sighed: “You are right. Our children do not
belong to us, they belong to the Country....”
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 “Bosh,” retorted the fat traveler. “Do we think of the Country when we give life
to our children? Our sons are born because ... well, because they must be born and
when they come to life they take our own life with them. This is the truth. We belong
to them but they never belong to us. And when they reach twenty they are exactly
what we were at their age. We too had a father and mother, but there were so many
other things as well ... girls, cigarettes, illusions, new ties ... and the Country, of
course, whose call we would have answered—when we were twenty—even if father
and mother had said no. Now, at our age, the love of our Country is still great, of
course, but stronger than it is the love for our children. Is there any one of us here
who wouldn’t gladly take his son’s place at the front if he could?”
There was a silence all round, everybody nodding as to approve.
“Why then,” continued the fat man, “shouldn’t we consider the feelings of our
children when they are twenty? Isn’t it natural that at their age they should consider
the love for their Country (I am speaking of decent boys, of course) even greater than
the love for us? Isn’t it natural that it should be so, as after all they must look upon us
as upon old boys who cannot move anymore and must stay at home? If Country
exists, if Country is a natural necessity like bread, of which each of us must eat in
order not to die of hunger, somebody must go to defend it. And our sons go, when
they are twenty, and they don’t want tears, because if they die, they die inflamed and
happy (I am speaking, of course, of decent boys). Now, if one dies young and happy,
without having the ugly sides of life, the boredom of it, the pettiness, the bitterness of
disillusion ... what more can we ask for him? Everyone should stop crying: everyone
should laugh, as I do ... or at least thank God—as I do—because my son, before
dying, sent me a message saying that he was dying satisfied at having ended his life
in the best way he could have wished. That is why, as you see, I do not even wear
mourning....”
He shook his light fawn coat as to show it; his livid lip over his missing teeth
was trembling, his eyes were watery and motionless, and soon after, he ended with a
shrill laugh which might well have been a sob.
“Quite so ... quite so ...” agreed the others.
The woman who, bundled in a corner under her coat, had been sitting and
listening had—for the last three months—tried to find in the words of her husband
and her friends something to console her in her deep sorrow, something that might
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show her how a mother should resign herself to send her son not even to death but to
a probable danger of life. Yet not a word had she found amongst the many which had
been said ... and her grief had been greater in seeing that nobody—as she thought—
could share her feelings. But now the words of the traveler amazed and almost
stunned her. She suddenly realized that it wasn’t the others who were wrong and
could not understand her but herself who could not rise up to the same height of
those fathers and mothers willing to resign themselves, without crying, not only to
the departure of their sons but even to their death. She lifted her head, she bent over
from her corner trying to listen with great attention to the details which the fat man
was giving to his companions about the way his son had fallen as a hero, for his King
and his Country, happy and without regrets. It seemed to her that she had stumbled
into a world she had never dreamt of, a world so far unknown to her and she was so
pleased to hear everyone joining in congratulating that brave father who could so
stoically speak of his child’s death.
Then suddenly, just as if she had heard nothing of what had been said and
almost as if waking up from a dream, she turned to the old man, asking him:
“Then ... is your son really dead?”
Everybody stared at her. The old man, too, turned to look at her, fixing his great,
bulging, horribly watery light gray eyes, deep in her face. For some little time he
tried to answer, but words failed him. He looked and looked at her, almost as if only
then—at that silly, incongruous question—he had suddenly realized at last that his
son was really dead ... gone forever ... forever. His face contracted, became horribly
distorted, then he snatched in haste a handkerchief from his pocket and, to the
amazement of everyone, broke into harrowing, heart-rending, uncontrollable sobs.

8.3 Terms to Remember:

dawn : to begin to glow, crack of day
stuffy : lacking freshness
mourning : sad, grief
hoisted : to raise on high
moaning : a low sound of pain or grief

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twisting : to turn something round
wriggling : to twist the body to and fro
growling : to grumble
aroused : to awaken, stimulate
plight : condition
front : the forepart of anything, to take a prominent position
ventured : undertaking risk, bold, daring
spoil : to be very anxious for a fight
excessive : too much, beyond what is allowed
split : to divide
discrimination : a unfair treatment of a person, see fine differences
console : to give comfort, disappointment, solace
distress : mental pain
interrupted : to stop a person while talking or working, break
bloodshot : red eyes, (of the white of the eyes)
palest : of whitish appearance
bulging : to swell out
spurt : to gush out, sudden violent rush of wind, sudden flow
vitality : vigor , strength, energy
sighed : to express tiredness by a sigh
gladly : cheerfully, happily
inflamed : to make hot, painful, angry
boredom : dullness, tedious
pettiness : smallness, littleness
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 fawn : young fallow deer, (v) crawl
livid : bluish colour
shrill : piercing
sob : to gasp noisily while crying
resign : to give up, reconcile
stunned : to bewilder , confused, to perplex
realized : to understand clearly, apprehend
departure : to go away from
regrets : to feel sorry for
stumbled : to trip, slipped
stoically : a person who accept good and bad, pleasure and pain,
unemotional
incongruous : not appropriate, not in accord
contracted : pulled together (v) written agreement
distorted : to deform, disfigure

8.4 Summary:
Luigi Pirandello’s short story ‘War’ takes place on a train that is making its way
to Sulmona. The story, which features third person narration, depicts the journey of
seven passengers in a “stuffy and smoky second class carriage”.
War is set on a train headed for Sulmona form Rome. When a married couple
boards the train, it is discovered the husband is consoling the wife because their son
has been called in to war. Others on the train reveal they are in similar situations, and
one man, whose son has passed in the war explains the parents should be proud their
sons are dying in honor.
The overriding theme in Pirandello’s work is the inescapable premise that the
existing orders that helped to provide meaning and understanding no longer apply in
the modern setting. The traditional forces that guided individuals such as
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nationalism, religious fervor the loyalty in serving one’s country or doing what
parents elders prescribed ring hollow when confronted with the horrific nature of
war, specially World War.
The story takes place in Italy, where couples are in grief because their sons are
sent to the frontline. Dismayed parents discuss about their love for their fallen son,
but a particular man brings them out of misery by glorifying youth’s determination to
serve the country and to live their to the fullest. He points out that his son was happy
to serve the country and die in the frontline. Although many parents find comfort in
his speech, one mother asks if his son died in war. A sudden realization stuck to him
that is, his son also have fallen in frontline… and he surprises the others by sobbing
in despair.
Luigi Pirandello’s war reveals the humane prospective of war often ignored in
the era of World Wars where government propaganda accentuating ultra nationalism,
adventure and other factors that glorify war.
Some travelers from Rome are obliged to spend most of the night abroad a
second class railway carriage at the station in Fabriano, waiting for the departure of
the local train that will take them the reminder of their trip to the small village of
Sulmona. At dawn, they are joined by two additional passengers.
A Large woman, “almost like a shapeless bundle”, and her tiny, thin husband.
The woman is in deep mourning and is so distressed and maladroit that she has to be
helped into the carriage by the other passengers.
Her husband, following her, thanks the people for their assistance and then tries
to look after his wife’s comfort, but she responds to his ministrations by pulling up
the collar of her coat to her eyes, hiding her face. The husband manages a sad smile
and comments that it is a nasty world. He explains this remark by saying his wife is
to be pitied because the war has separated her from their twenty two- year – old son,
“a boy of twenty two whom both had devoted their entire life”. The Son, he says, is
due to go to the front. The man remarks that this imminent departure has come as a
shock because, when they gave permission for their son’s enlistment, they were
assured that he would not go for six months. However they have just been informed
that he will depart in three days.
The man’s story does not promote too much sympathy from the others because
the war has similarly touched their lives. One of them tells the man that he and his
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wife should be grateful that their son is leaving only now. He says that his son was
sent there the first day of war. He has already come back twice wounded and been
sent back again to the front. “Someone else, joining the conversation, adds that he
has two sons and three nephews already at the front, while the passengers have
differing opinions over whose grief is grater, they all have strong patriotic feelings.

8.5 Skimming and Scanning Questions:

A) Answer the following questions in one word, phrase or sentence each.
1. Why did the passengers have to stop for the night?
2. Where were the passengers waiting for before their next journey?
3. How many passengers there were before husband and wife arrive in the
carriage?
4. Who said, ‘Nasty world’?
5. How does old man describe his son in the story?
6. What is the main theme of the short story ‘War’?
7. Where did the story ‘War’ take place?
8. Who have strong patriotic feelings?
B) Complete the following sentences by choosing best alternative.
1. The short story ‘WAR’ is set in a ............... travelling from Rome to
Sulmonia.
a) Train carriage b) ship carriage
c) private carriage d) air carriage
2. The theme of the story is ............... .
a) Parental love b) patriotism
c) Victory in war d) Sacrifice in war
3. The women in the carriage described as, .................. .
a) strong and beautiful b) small and sensible
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4. The husband tells the passengers that his wife is upset because .............. .
a) Their only son has been called to the front.
b) Their only son is suffering.
c) Their only son went away from them.
d) Their only son is no more
5. The old man explains their sorrow by saying that a parent’s love for their
children is ............... .
a) Simply greater than their love for country.
b) Simply greater than their love for universe.
c) Simply greater than their love for garden.
d)Simply greater than their love for wife.
6. 'War', a short story isset in a train carriage in Italy during ........ .
a) World War I b) World War II
c) War in Italy d) War in England
7. The poor woman's son was ........... years old.
a) 18 b) 20
c) 22 d) 25
8. The woman in the story 'War' asks the man if his son is not really ....... .
a) dead b) alive
c) ill d) worried
9. The short story 'War' written in the year....
a) 1918 b) 1919
c) 1925 d) 1929
10. One of the passenger said, “You should thank God that your son is ............ .
a) only living now for the war.
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d) only leaving now for the study.

C) Vocabulary Exercise:
a) Match the words from group A with their meanings in group B.
A B
Stuffy to feel sorry
Plight to gasp noisily while crying
Venture condition
Sob dare
Regrets lacking freshness
b) Use suffix/prefix to the following and form the new words.
haste, realize, patriot, venture, inflame
c) Change the class of the following words.
bulky, amaze, vitality, regret.
d) Give the Synonyms of the following words.
plight, resign, war, upset, mourn.
e) Give the Antonyms of the following words.
dead, haste, departure, gladly.

8.6 Key to Self Assessment questions

A) 1. To continue their journey to Sulmona
2. Waiting at the small station at Fabriano
3. There were five passengers.
4. The husband
5. Only son, a boy of twenty to whom both had devoted their entire life.
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7. In the railway compartment
8. Old man

B) 1. Train carriage
2. Patriotism
3. large and deep moaning
4. their only son has been called to the front
5. simply greater than their love for country .
6. World was I
7. 22
8. dead
9. 1918
10. only leaving now for the front

C) Vocabulary Exercise :
a) Stuffy lacking freshness
plight condition
Venture dare
sob to gasp noisily while crying
regret to feel sorry
b) Hasty, realization, patriotism, adventure ,inflammable
c) bulk, amazing
invitality, regretful
d) plight – dangerous or difficult situation
resign – voluntarily leave job

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 war – battle
upset – unhappy, sad
mourn – lament
e) dead x alive
haste x slow
departure x arrival
gladly x sadly

8.7 Exercises:
A) Answer the following questions in 3 to 4 sentences each.
1. According to writer, how does the old man explain their sorrow?
2. Why the woman in the story is upset ?
3. How does the writer describe the husband ?
4. Give different opinions of fathers regarding patriotism.
5. According to one of the passenger, what does the children do in their
twenties ?
6. What are the feelings of parents for their children ?
B) Write short notes on the following in 7 to 8 sentences each:
1. The setting of the story ‘War’.
2. Patriotic feelings of the Passengers.
3. Sketch the character of Husband.
4. Describe the bulky woman.
5. End of the short story ‘War’.

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8.8 Writing Activity :
1. Study the short story 'WAR' and describe your views of war and patriotic
feelings. Read the story carefully and try to compose such a conversation on the
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 B) To The Cuckoo
William Wordsworth

Contents
8.0 Objectives
8.1 Introduction
8.2 The Poem
8.3 Terms to Remember.
8.4 Check to your progress.
8.5 Summary.
8.6 Key to self assessment questions.
8.7 Exercises.
8.8 Reference for further study.

8.0 Objectives:
After studying this unit the students will be understand:

the importance of nature

to recall the memories of childhood.

to learn and understand Romantic Poetry.

8.1 Introduction:
William Wordsworth (1770-1850) was a major Romantic poet, based in the
Lake District, England. His poems are frequently inspired by the beauty of nature
and he is known as one of the greatest English poets of the 19th Century.
Wordsworth was born on 7 April, 1770 in Cockermouth, in Northwest England. His
father, John Wordsworth, introduced the young William to the great poetry of Milton
and Shakespeare. However, as a child, he did develop a great love of nature,
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 In 1795, he received a legacy which made him adopt literature as his profession.
He was able to publish his first collection of poems, An Evening Walk and
Descriptive Sketches. The poetical output of Wordsworth was enormous. Some of
his well known poems are : The Prelude, The Ode On Immortality, To The Cuckoo,
Lucy Gray, The Solitary Reaper, Ode To Duty etc. He wrote some lovely sonnets.
Many of his poems describe the beauty of Nature in the Lake District and lives of the
ordinary people.
The present poem, “To the Cuckoo” is a lyrical pastoral poem with elaborate
stanzaic formations. Hence, it can be called an ode to the Cuckoo bird. The poet has
directly addressed this poem to the cuckoo and expresses his love, devotion and
yearning to visually glimpse the cuckoo throughout the poem. The poet hears the
cuckoo and is in awe and wonder on the off chance that it is something more than a
winged animal. He remembers his childhood. His marvel ascends from the memory
of his youth when the cuckoo opens up the universe of creative energy to him. The
cuckoo bird is an arranged image of innocence, hope, purity and boyhood.

8.2 The Poem :

O blithe New-comer! I have heard,
I hear thee and rejoice.
O Cuckoo! shall I call thee Bird,
Or but a wandering Voice?
While I am lying on the grass
Thy twofold shout I hear;
From hill to hill it seems to pass,
At once far off, and near.
Though babbling only to the Vale
Of sunshine and of flowers,
Thou bringest unto me a tale
Of visionary hours.
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 Even yet thou art to me
No bird, but an invisible thing,
A voice, a mystery;
The same whom in my school-boy days
I listened to; that Cry
Which made me look a thousand ways
In bush, and tree, and sky.
To seek thee did I often rove
Through woods and on the green;
And thou wert still a hope, a love;
Still longed for, never seen.
And I can listen to thee yet;
Can lie upon the plain
And listen, till I do beget
That golden time again.
O blessèd Bird! the earth we pace
Again appears to be
An unsubstantial, fairy place;
That is fit home for Thee!

8.3 Terms to Remember:

blithe : merry, cheerful, happy

rejoice : delighted

thee : you

twofold shout : double sound, echo

babbling sound produced by infant

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 vale : valley

bringest : brought

visionary : memories, having vision

invisible : unable to be seen, not visible

mystery : secrete, unknown

to seek : to look for, to search

rove : to roam, wandering

beget : To produce, obtain

unsubstantial : unreal, illusive

fairy : enchantment, magical

8.4 Check to your Progress :

A) Answer the following questions in one word/phrase/sentence each.
1. Whom the poem is addressed to?
2. What is the type of the poem?
3. Why does the poet describe the cuckoo a New-comer?
4. How does the poet describe the bird?
5. Where does the poet lying when he heard the sound of the bird?
6. Why does the poet calls bird’s sound twofold?
7. What is meant by ‘Visionary Hours’?
8. How did the poet welcome the cuckoo?
B) Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct alternative given
below it.
1. The poet hears the sweet voice of cuckoo and feels —————.
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2. The song of the bird reminds the poet of his —————.
a) past age b) childhood c) present days d) future days
3. The cuckoo is not merely bird to the poet but a ——————.
a) good singer b) beautiful bird c) invisible thing d) best friend
4. The poet says, — - - - - - - - - , darling of the Spring.
a) Thrice welcome b) Twice welcome
c) Once welcome d) only welcome
5. The voice of the bird brings up to the poet a tale of —————.
a) Schoolboy b) darling c) spring d) visionary hours
6. The cuckoo is addressed as the —————.
a) darling of the season b) darling of the poet
c) darling of the nature d) darling of spring
7. The ———————— makes him glad and the earth appears to be a
fairyland.
a) vision of the boyhood b) days of school
c) days of past d) beauty of the bird
8. The bird cuckoo is symbol of —————.
a) vision b) boyhood c) hope d) voice
9. The word ‘Blithe’ means —————.
a) The cuckoo is merry and free from all worldly worries.
b) The cuckoo is merry, free and beautiful.
c) The cuckoo is very, very sweet
d) The cuckoo is free from the poet
C) Vocabulary Exercises :
1. Give the synonyms of - rejoice, mystery, fairy, vision

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3. Add prefix / suffix – voice, listen, visible, substantial
4. Use the above words in your own sentences.

8.5 Summary :
“To the Cuckoo” is a poem written by William Wordsworth. This poem is about
the Cuckoo the bird and how Wordsworth would hear them singing and imagine
where they are ? and try to find them.
However, actually, this poem is some what “Childish” in that Wordsworth
seems like a child wandering looking everywhere. It also has some suggestions that
the poem is actually about time and not the actual bird. Cuckoos were used as clocks
known as “Cuckoo Clocks” at one time. He states , “Thy twofold shout I hear” in one
stanza and “Thrice Welcome” in another , as if the Cuckoo was telling us time. He
also gives the hint with this line, “That golden time again”
“To the Cuckoo” is an eight stanza poem with four lines each. The stanzas are
rhymed as abab.
The poem is beautiful and tells about the season of Spring which is full of
happiness and bliss. We find romantic elements in this poem. Love for nature,
imagination, love of unseen or love of far of places. The poet has directly addressed
this poem to the Cuckoo and expresses his love, devotion and yearning to visually
glimpse the Cuckoo throughout the poem. The Cuckoo bird is an arranged image of
innocence, gaiety, purity and boyhood.
The poet was wandering in the valley. He heard the sweet voice of a Cuckoo. He
felt delighted. It was spring season. The valley was full of beautiful flowers. Clear
sunshine made the atmosphere in the valley serene and enjoyable.
Although, the Cuckoo was singing in the valley, it brought to his mind the
memory of his boyhood days. By listening to the song and its echo, the poet is
reminded of his past.
He again addresses the Cuckoo as the darling of the spring. The bird is invisible
to the poet. He searched for the bird in bush, tree and sky. But he did not find the
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field to discover the bird. Still he did not find. The bird had become a fine hope, a
pleasant love for the poet at the time. That hope and love drove him to look for the
bird but the bird was never seen.
“To the Cuckoo” by Wordsworth is a poem of joy and happy memories.
The poet rejoices to hear the old familiar cry of joy that passes from hill to hill.
He is back in his childhood. It was the period of joy, wonder and innocence. In those
days the song of the Cuckoo fascinated him. Even now, when he is hearing it talk to
the valley, he cannot see it. He wonders whether this is a real bird or only a
wandering voice. This wandering voice still makes him forget everything and enter
the world turns, into a fairyland, and he becomes a child once again full of joy and
wonder.

8.6 Key to Self Assessment questions

A] 1. The poem is addressed to the cuckoo.
2. It is a lyric.
3. the cuckoo arrives in the spring
4. As an invisible thing
5. The poet is lying on the grass
6. Because Cuckoos were used as clocks.
7. Because the Cuckoo brought to his mind the memories of his childhood
days.
8. By calling Cuckoo as a darling of Spring
B] 1. rejoice
2. childhood
3. invisible
4. thrice welcome
5. visionary hours
6. darling of the spring
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9. The cuckoo is merry and free form all world worries
C) Vocabulary Exercises :
1. Give the synonyms of - rejoice-great joy, mystery - secrecy, fairy - vision
2. Give antonyms of - wander x stay, stable
past x present
sunshine x sunset
3. Add prefix / suffix – voice - invoice, listen - listening, visible - invisible,
substantial – unsubstantial

8.7 Exercises:
A) Answer the following questions in 3 to 4 sentences each.
1. Why the poet is rejoiced?
2. Why does the poet call the bird as wandering voice?
3. What is meant by, ‘Blithe, New Comer’?
4. Why does the poet call cuckoo a mysterious bird?
5. What is the tone of the poet?
B) Write short notes on the following in 7 to 8 sentences each.
1. The central Idea of the poem.
2. Wordsworth’s love for nature.
3. Childhood memories of the poet.
4. Imagery in the poem
5. Nostalgic tone in the poem

8.8 Writing activity:

1. Observe the beautiful natural objects around you and describe it in your own
simple English language.

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 C) Let Me Not To The Marriage...
William Shakespeare

Contents
8.0 Objectives
8.1 Introduction
8.2 The Poem.
8.3 Terms to Remember..
8.4 Summary.
8.5 Skimming and Scanning Questions.
8.6 Key to self assessment questions
8.7 Further Reading.

8.0 Objectives
After studying this unit the students will be able to:
• understand the structure of sonnet.
• acquaint with world famous dramatist William Shakespeare.
• understand the Philosophy of love and marriage of true minds.

8.1 Introduction:
William Shakespeare (1564-1616) was the greatest English poet, playwright and
actor, widely regarded as the greatest writer in the English language. He is often
called England’s national poet and “Bard of Avon”. He wrote 38 plays, 154 sonnets,
two long poems and a few narratives other verses which are extant works. His
sonnets were published in 1609 which were the last of Shakespeare’s non-dramatic
works to be printed. His sonnets were composed in the English form of the sonnet,
that of three quatrains and final couplet. The entire collection falls into two series –
one about uncontrollable lust for a married woman of dark complexion (the “Dark
Lady”), and another about conflicted lover for a fair young man (the “Fair Youth”).

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Critics praise the Sonnets as a profound meditation on the nature of love, sexual
passion, procreation, death and time.
Shakespeare’s Sonnet 116 was first published in 1609. Its structure and form are
a typical example of the Shakespearean sonnet i.e. three quatrains, followed by a
final couplet. This is one of the most famous love sonnets. He states he should not
stand in the way of “the marriage of true minds”, and love cannot be true if it
changes for any reason. The movement of sonnet is careful, controlled, and
laborious. Ideal love is deteriorating throughout the sonnet and it continues to do so
through the couplet.

8.2 The Poem :

Sonnet No. 116
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove:
Oh, no! it is an ever-fixed mark,
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Whose worth’s unknown, although his height be taken.
Love’s not Time’s fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle’s compass come;
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.

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8.3 Terms to Remember:

Let me not : I will not be forced to admit that.

admit : accept; agree
alter : change
an ever-fixed mark : a sea mark- an object by which seamen check their direction.
the star : the Pole or North Star.
bark : Ship.
height : i.e. in. reckoning the ship’s position by the stars.
in Shakespeare’s day readers would probably understand this
Time’s fool : in terms of the fool employed in large establishments by the
nobility.
bending sickle : the sickle had a curved blade.
never writ : never written.

8.4 Summary:
Sonnet 116 is one of William Shakespeare’s most well known sonnet. It goes
on to declare that true love is no fool of rime. It never alerts. Shakespeare’s 154
sonnets were first published as an entity in 1609 and focus on the nature of love in
relationship and in relation to time.
Sonnet 116 sets out to define true love by firstly telling the reader what love is
not. It then continues on to the end couplet, the speaker (The poet) declaring that if
what he has proposed is false, his writing is futile and no man has ever experienced
love.
Sonnet 116 has fourteen lines and a rhyme scheme abab cdcd efef gg three
quatrains and a couplet.
Sonnet 116 is generally considered one of the finest love poems ever written. In
this sonnet, Shakespeare raised the theme of romantic love to the status of high
philosophy. At a time when love between man and woman was not often recognized
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most sought – after human experience.
The poem is a regular English sonnet of fourteen lines arrange in three
quatrains and a concluding couplet. It begins by using the language of the book of
common prayer marriage service to make an explicit equation of love and marriage.
It not only suggests that marriage is the proper end to love, but it also goes beyond
to make love a necessary prerequisite. Such love not change under changing
circumstances in fact, constancy is its first element. Further true love does not
depend on the presence of the beloved, but actually increase during absence.
Shakespeare establishes the context early with his famous phrase “the marriage
of true minds”, a phrase which does more than is commonly recognized. Figure of
speech suggests that true marriage is a union of minds rather than merely a license
for the coupling bodies. Shakespeare implies that true love proceeds from and unites
minds on the highest level of human activity that it is inherently mental and spiritual.
Shakespeare sonnet 116 was first published in 1609.
The poet begins by stating he should not stand in the way of the marriage of true
minds and that love cannot be true if changes for any reason true love should be
constant through any difficulties.
This sonnet presents the extreme ideal of romantic love It never changes it
never fades.
The language of sonnet 116 is extraordinary in that it frames its discussion of
the passion of love within a very restrained, very intensely disciplined rhetoric
structure. With masterful control of rhyme and variation of tone. The heavy balance
of “Love’s not times fool”, to open the third quatrain ; the declamatory “o no” to
begin the second - The speaker makes an almost legalistic argument for the eternal
passion of love and the result is that the passion seems stronger anal more urgent for
the restraint in the speaker’s tone.
The poem expresses love in ideal ; never ending , fading or faltering.

8.5 Skimming and Scanning Questions:

A) Complete the following sentences by choosing the correct alternative :
1) According to Shakespeare love is not which _________ .

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 a) faces, b) changes, c) dies, d) bends.
2) The star guides to every ____________ .
a) lover, b) minds c) ship, d) time.
3) Love bears out even to _______________ .
a) the marriage, b) the hours and weeks,
c) the fixed mark, d) the end of life.
B) Answer the following the questions in a word/phrase/sentence each.
1) What kind of marriage the poet wants to be?
2) What does the real love give in?
3) What kind of marker in the poem?
C) Vocabulary Exercises:
a) Complete the following table and make your sentences using the words in the
table :
Noun Verb Adjective Adverb
--- love loveless lovingly
beauty beautify --- beautifully
complaint complain complaining ---
creation --- creative creatively

b) Give antonyms of the following words

love, charm, true, alter

8.6 Key to check your progress:

A] 1. Changes
2. lover
3. the end of life.
B) 1. marriage of true minds

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 2. it never changes and is unshaken.
3. 3 Love is fixed mark. It never changes
C) Complete the following table and make your sentences using the words in
the table :
Noun Verb Adjective Adverb
lover love loveless lovingly
beauty beautify beautiful beautifully
complaint complain complaining complainingly
creation create creative creatively

D) Charm x unattractive
true x false
alter x constant

8.7 Exercises:
A) Answer the following questions in 3 to 4 sentences each:
1) Why does the poet say love alters when it alteration find?
2) How does Shakespeare compare the true love with other images?
B) Write short notes on the following in 7 to 8 sentences each:
1) Marriage of True Minds.
2) The theme of the sonnet.

8.8 Further Reading:

Hubler, Edward : The sense of Shakespeare's Sonnets, New York, Hill and
Wang, 196.


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