Fragments
Fragments
complete sentence. Sentence fragments are usually missing a subject or verb, or they do
not express a complete thought. While it may be punctuated to look like a complete
sentence, a fragment cannot stand on its own.
Distinguishing Features
Here are the distinguishing features of a sentence fragment:
1. It is missing a subject
o Example: Ran to the store faster than a rabbit. (Who ran?)
3. It is a leftover phrase
o Example: For better or worse. (What is better or worse? What is it modifying?)
4. It is an abandoned clause
o Example: When my mother married my father. (What happened when “my
mother married my father?”)
5. It is a misuse of “such as, for example, especially,” etc.
o Example: Such as, my brother was practicing martial arts. (It is unclear; did
something happen when my brother was practicing martial arts?)
o Incorrect: Loves to lie around in the sun all day. (A subject is missing. Who loves
to lie around?)
o Correct: My roommate loves to lie around in the sun all day.
o Incorrect: Joe to train every day. (A verb is missing. Also, “to train” is the wrong
verb form. Joe does what every day?)
o Correct: Joe trains every day for the marathon next month.
o Correct: Joe is training every day for the marathon next month.
3. Rewrite
Rewrite the fragment or the entire passage that contains the fragment.
o Incorrect: Our new landlord was expected to make changes. Such as fixing the
plumbing, installing a new washer, and replacing the security gate. Has not done
any of it yet and weeks have passed.
o Correct: Our new landlord was expected to make changes, such as fixing the
plumbing, installing a new washer, and replacing the security gate lock. Weeks
have passed, and he still has not done any of it yet.
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Exercise:
Turn the following fragments into complete sentences:
Fragment Sentence: That time of wonder and amazement.
Revision: That was a time of wonder and amazement.
Fragment Sentence: Clothes and shoes scattered around the room.
Revision: Clothes and shoes were scattered around the room.
Fragment Sentence: The elected official for our district unpopular.
Revision: The elected official for our district was unpopular.
Fragment Sentence: Was running down the lane and into the forest.
Revision: The moose was running down the lane and into the forest.