Correction Oral Presentation 2431031
Correction Oral Presentation 2431031
Oral presentation: How actions of teachers and cis-gendered peers affect TNB students
Presenters: Kamryn Goldberg, Chelsea Noonoo, Tristan Goon, Elena Chen-Yun-Lin - 85%
Oral 6 or less 7 8 9 10
component- Lack of Somewhat Teammates Teams Team members
team (lOp) cohesion effective demonstrate effectively work function as a
among group delivery of good together to synchronous
members, information. communication. unit
8.5
inappropriate Teammates seem Some minor deliver a referring to
transitions to work together overlap and presentation that previous
between but there is a awkward flows across teammates work,
group lack of practice switching presenters. linking ideas
members. as a group. between Practice is across the
Team teammates. apparent. presentation.
members Transitions
seem to lack between team
awareness of members are
other sections seamless.
Lack of Practice is
practice as a clearly evident.
group.
Presentation: 16 or less 18 - 19 20 - 21 22 - 23 24 - 25
Visual Slides Slides are Slides are Slides are well- Slides are
Component generally lack somewhat effectively designed, extremely well-
(25p) visual appeal effectively designed with visually designed, with
and are text designed with visual appeal, appealing, and outstanding
heavy. some visual and minimal text include minimal visual appeal and
20 Graphics are appeal but are for the most part. text. Graphics minimal text on
used poorly somewhat text Graphics are are used each slide.
or not at all. heavy. Graphics used effectively. No Graphics are
Presentation are used appropriately. errors (spelling, used effectively
appears somewhat Minor errors formatting, etc.) to convey
disjointed appropriately. (spelling, appear on the relevant
rather than Some errors formatting, etc.) slides. information. No
unified and/or (spelling, may appear on errors (spelling,
frequent formatting, etc.) the slides. formatting, etc.)
errors appear on the appear on the
(spelling, slides. slides.
formatting,
etc.) appear
on the slides.
Discussion 6 or less 7 8 9 10
Period (lOp) Team Team members Team members Team members Team members
members invited questions encouraged encouraged fostered a
9 made little and provided discussion, discussion, dynamic
effort to responses. actively listened actively listened discussion,
encourage Responses were to questions, and to questions, and encouraged
discussion. not all clear provided clear provided clear questions,
Responses and/or insightful. and helpful responses. actively listened,
were unclear Interactions with responses. Interactions with and provided
and/or lacked the audience Interactions with the audience clear and
insight. were, for the the audience were open and sophisticated
Interactions most part, open were open and professional. responses.
with the and professional. professional. Additional
audience insights or
were not open context were
and/or provided.
professional. Interactions with
NOTE.
Your grade for the group oral presentation may be adjusted (i.e., lowered) where deemed appropriate
(e.g., if you did not contribute your fair share to the group, if you were not a respectful audience member
for other groups, etc.)
Team feedback:
Overall, your team seemed to work well together and seems to share work and the presentation fairly. You
delivered a professional presentation. In which you all seemed to speak approximately equally. Your
background was simple without being overly so and was consistent throughout. However, there were many
differences throughout your presentation. For instance, there are changes in title and content font, use and
type of referencing, approximate amount of text per slide, etc. Strive to strike a balance between too little
and too much information on your slides. For instance, on the introduction slide it would have been nice to
see and hear some discussion of the difference between the 3 terms. Make sure to review referencing. Your
reference slide only contains 2 articles, you use more than this throughout. Also, your style of citing
sources on each slide changes. In some cases, you do not include the source, in some cases you use an in-
text citation style (make sure to review; initials should not be included) and in some cases you use a full
reference (review; this is not in correct APA format). Remember, for teamwork each team member is
expected to review all work.
Individual feedback: In general, you are a good presenter and were respectful of your teammates and class
peers when they presented. During your presentation you spoke clearly and made good engagement with
the audience.