Draft 4 Through The Lens
Draft 4 Through The Lens
Written by
Annie Foley
Alex Block
FADE IN:
MONDAY (NORMAL) *
He reaches for his tie, where a sticky note reads, “Place tie
here”.
JAMES
Locked the door at 5pm.
James settles onto the couch in his PJs, reaching for the
remote. A sticky note marks its designated spot. He turns on *
the TV to his favorite show and quickly dozes off.
TUESDAY (NORMAL) *
The morning sun peers through the window. James, still in his
PJs, wakes up on the couch.
James checks the pill container and takes his TUESDAY pills.
JAMES
Locked door at 5:02pm.
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The morning sun peers through the window onto James, sleeping
on the couch in his PJs. He wakes up.
James takes his weekly pill container and tries to take his
WEDNESDAY pill. However, the Wednesday slot is empty! The
entire container is empty.
JAMES
(over recording) *
Emily swung by this morning to *
uh... she needed something. *
James approaches his window and finds his camera missing from *
it’s spot. He looks around but can’t find it. *
James takes his video camera off the table and returns to the *
window. *
James jolts awake on the couch. He’s confused why he’s in PJs
instead of his dress clothes.
James finds his weekly pill container empty. His pill bottle
is also missing from its designated spot. On the table, he *
finds a VHS tape with “EMILY STOLEN?!” scrawled on it. *
JAMES
Hi, Emily. I was just wondering—
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EMILY (O.C.)
STOP HARASSING ME! THE WEDDING’S *
ALMOST OVER! SO, I’LL BE THERE *
TONIGHT TO SORT IT OUT! *
JAMES
Am I missing something? I need to
set up a camera.
SURVEILLANCE FOOTAGE:
EMILY *
Cool it still works, but I don’t *
need to take 24 pictures a second. *
Emily sets the video camera down on the table. James walks in *
frame, wearing his PJs. He presents his polaroid camera for *
Emily to admire.
JAMES
I have this other camera, but it’s *
not for sale. This camera means a *
lot to me. It holds moments I wish *
to remember. *
EMILY
It’s perfect. Please! I need this *
to pay rent! The landlord will not *
give me more time. *
JAMES
I don’t know, Emily. *
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EMILY *
I know that you need to give it to *
me. Please. *
EMILY
(angrily)
Here! Take your damn camera and *
stop calling me!
JAMES
I knew you took it! You probably *
took my pills too! You steal your *
other camera too?! *
EMILY
I broke my camera. That’s why I *
borrowed yours. I didn’t steal *
anything. *
JAMES *
Then, explain this! *
With Emily in front of the TV, James hits play on the remote. *
Emily looks at the TV to find VHS footage of her fumbling *
with her keys and leaving her apartment. *
JAMES *
(grumbles) *
Dangnabit, technology. *
EMILY
You’ve been taking video taping me *
this me this whole time?! *
JAMES
Yes, and I will go to the police if *
you don’t fess up!
EMILY
(furious)
I should be the one reporting you!
Give me that footage! *
Emily hurries to the VCR and ejects the tape. She turns to *
run out, but James blocks her path. They fight over the VHS *
tape. Emily smashes the VHS tape into James. THUNK! James *
lies on the couch dead.
Emily stands frozen, the broken tape slipping from her hands. *
She waits for him to get up, but the corpse doesn’t move.
Her breath catches as her gaze flicks around the room. Her
anger ebbs, replaced by a creeping sense of dread.
EMILY (CONT’D)
(quiet, trembling)
No... no, I didn’t mean to...
FADE OUT.