Ava Report
Ava Report
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Ava Tegels
Honors English
Mrs. Schlichtemeier
her story. She glanced at the clock—3:47 AM. Her shift had started over
eighteen hours ago, but no end was in sight. COVID had turned time into a blur
of PPE, exhaustion, and the constant beeping of ventilators. She pulled off her
fogged-up face shield and wiped her forehead, leaving behind a faint imprint of
the N95 mask that had dug into her skin. Her scrubs clung to her body, damp
with sweat from hours of running between patients. In the dim glow of the
nurses’ station, she saw Lisa, an ICU nurse, hunched over the charting
“You should take a break,” Amy said softly, though she knew how empty the
words sounded. Breaks from the chaos have become a luxury. Lisa gave a tired
smile. “I’ll rest when this is over.” Amy wanted to tell her that she had been
saying the same thing for two years now. That the “over” they had been waiting
for kept moving further away like a mirage. Instead, she reached for another
patient chart and kept going. She had another patient. She braced herself
before entering. The patient had been on high-flow oxygen for days. His wife
had called earlier, begging for updates—she wasn’t allowed in the hospital, and
video calls had become their only connection. By 6 AM, her body ached in ways
she didn’t know were possible. Her phone buzzed—a text from her mother. She
stared at the message, unable to reply. How could she explain the endless cycle
of loss, the guilt of not being able to save everyone, the fear that she might
bring the virus home? Instead, she typed: I’m okay. Love you. As the morning
shift took over, Amy finally stepped outside. The first rays of sunlight hit her
face, but she felt no warmth. She sat on a bench, closed her eyes, and let
exhaustion settle in her bones. She had another shift in six hours.
Nurses play a very important role in the healthcare profession. However, the
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environment that they work in will significantly affect the quality of work and
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their ability to perform the duties well. Working conditions range from staffing
levels and work hours to the physical environment and organization have a very
big impact on how well the job is done by nurses. Working conditions affect
productivity and efficiency in the work that nurses do positively and negatively.
While some conditions may improve their performance, other conditions can
create roadblocks that alter the nurses' effectiveness, which can lead to
Increased physical activity is a positive way to look at long hours and shifts as a
nurse. With long hours comes more activity on your feet. This increases your
health and allows for more activity and can lead to better health.
According to an article written by M. Yao (2008), when nurses work long hours
and shifts, they adopt new opportunities. Working long hours can allow time to
show what someone can do and eventually work up to a new position. It could
also allow nurses to gain respect from coworkers in the workplace and give new
opportunities for them to take someone else's spot if they quit. If a nurse is on
a shift and someone quits because they can’t withstand the long hours, the
other nurse on duty will be able to take that position and potentially gain more
pay.
Shifts, day and night, are long and exhausting. However, when working those
shifts, nurses are opening their eyes to see what their strengths and
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weaknesses are. A nurse that works long hours in the emergency room may gain
a perspective that they can handle the stress and fast-paced work of the
environment. On the other hand, the nurse may determine that the long hours
make them drowsy, and they do not work as well during the night shift
compared to a day shift. The eye-opening experiences that come with shift
work show the strengths and weaknesses that each individual has. Some
healthcare workers may respect that they have strengths and weaknesses,
while others will resent the fact that they cannot do certain things.
Nurses can have a new way of looking at life after working long hours in any
environment. After working long hours, nurses interact with new patients and
experience every day. After talking with patients and getting to know their
nurse’s own life. Helping others creates a more loving and caring side to any
person, and the nurses now know not to take life for granted.
The age of a healthcare worker or nurse can largely affect the amount of energy
and strength they have to get through the long hours of shifts. A twenty-five-
year-old nurse fresh out of school will be able to better withstand the long
amounts of time on their feet because they have stronger bones and are most
likely more in shape. On the other hand, a sixty-year-old nurse might have more
trouble getting around on a long shift because they are tired faster and their
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physical strength weakens as one gets older.
The health of healthcare workers is very important. The nurse that is taking
care of an ill patient must be at full capacity health-wise, otherwise, the patient
may get the sickness of the nurse and cause the condition to worsen. Long
hours on night shifts and day shifts can weaken the nurses' immune systems.
Most commonly, the sicknesses that nurses contract are from the patients that
they care for. Without the full health of a nurse, the productivity of the work
they do will lessen because they may not be able to focus on the patient's
In the early 20th Century, there was a rise in the recognition of mental health
strains in the healthcare industry. The nursing profession began to grow rapidly
more and more disorders started to begin to show up. Disorders such as Sleep
Sleep disorders can be formed when an individual gets no sleep at all. This will
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cause them to not be able to sleep regularly or mess up the sleep schedule.
Insomnia and other sleep disorders are most commonly caused by stress,
physical distress, anxiety, depression, and many more things. Along with
nurses and healthcare workers. Those disorders are sleep Apnea, Narcolepsy,
and Restless Legs Syndrome. According to an article written by Ferri (2016), all
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of these sleep disorders have the same root problem being stress and long
hours:
The sleep alterations related to shift work have been included among the
disorder among the night shift worker population (5%–10% of the workforce). A
Greek study confirms that sleep disturbance that occurs in shift work is
discomfort,” were more severe in the nurses who worked night shifts than
environment that they are in or have been in. The main effects of maladaptation
are ineffective coping mechanisms, which can make a nurse more stressed,
nurse will not be able to do simple functions. The medical field is very
disorders are conditions that mainly affect the digestive system in the human
body. Within the digestive system, the disorder affects the stomach, intestines,
are temporary, while others will be chronic and require long-term management
to keep the nurses healthy. Another symptom of long hours is Irritable Bowel
Syndrome, which is a disorder that commonly affects the large intestine. The
problems can be sourced from long amounts of time not using the bathroom or
stress.
health nurses have on the mental health and physical health of other nurses
The findings indicate that, although mental health nurses encounter a range of
their clinical role. Issues that impact mental health nurses when managing
physical health.
performing their daily duties when they are on the clock. Nurses frequently face
high-pressure situations daily, are exposed to death, and see many different
health problems. Nurses will have trauma from hearing about or listening to
stories about patients' deaths and witnessing traumatic events. When working
emotional numbness.
The emotional toll that caring for potentially dying patients and ill patients has
a huge impact on how a nurse performs. Nurses are also sometimes exposed to
everyday thing, the nurse witnessing it may develop severe emotional stress
trying to figure out how to stop it or get it out of the clinic or hospital.
Working long hours and having rare, short breaks throughout a shift as a nurse
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will play a massive role in how well a nurse will cooperate and support their
patients. A nurse working long hours will care for many patients. With that
comes the chance for error or mistakes. When mistakes become more present,
the individual will begin to lose confidence in themselves and the work that
they do.
experienced low support and resources coming from the hospital. Without the
both patients and nurses will be exposed to viruses and illnesses. Along with
that, nurses won’t get the correct amount of training necessary for them to be
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able to correctly help the patients. This causes stress and doesn’t allow for
big one. A nurse working in a hospital will be significantly more worried about
getting to patients on time and caring for as many patients as they have. The
long hours have a big impact on nurses in a way of giving nurses worry and
The workload of nurses who are working shifts is great in a hospital setting. A
nurse will have to work with all of the patients and make sure all are feeling not
ill as well as keeping up with all of the paperwork required for each patient,
The emergencies that come along with nursing are very common. While working
emergencies that come in a day in a hospital will cause severe stress and will
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not allow for the nurse to work at the highest potential.
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There are many consequences of long term exhaustion in nursing shifts. When
working shifts, they can consist of night, day, or even middle day to morning
shifts. All of these shifts will cause difficulty in sleeping patterns. When
working different shifts, there is no set sleep schedule, which messes with the
body's systems. With irregular sleeping patterns come trouble sleeping and
fatigue. Another side effect that comes with long-term exhaustion is a lack of
recovery time. When working shifts, there is always a go, go, go mentality. This
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leaves very little room to recover from no sleep or sleep deprivation the night or
day before the shift occurs. When nurses are working shifts, there is no time for
rest, which will potentially lead to burnout, increasing the risk of long-term
Depression in nursing is an issue that will impact a lot of nurses' mental health
and the quality of patient care that they provide. Nurses, due to high-stress
situations in work, long and tiring shifts, emotional strain, and witnessing
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traumatic situations, are at a higher risk for getting depression. Recognizing the
nurses' well-being and make sure that there is a safe, compassionate patient
care system.
2019. The 2019 virus strains were acute respiratory syndromes that were
spread by touch, cough, and many more things. The most common symptoms of
COVID-19 are cough, fever and chills, sore throat, and loss of taste and smell.
distance from others, and getting vaccinated regularly to keep up with the
different strains. Nurses were hugely affected by the COVID-19 pandemic, both
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professionally and personally. They were on the front of the crisis, they would
work long hours under lots of pressure while facing numerous challenges. Some
of the challenges they faced were increased workload, staff shortages, high
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stress levels, trauma, burnout, and exposure to the sickness themselves.
The sustained long hours, pressure to do great things, and the emotionally
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taxing nature of the job of nursing, eventually causes nurses to grow a feeling of
burnout. Burnout also affected many other healthcare workers. Burnout will
increased during the pandemic in 2019. Hospitals and clinics were stretched
thin on healthcare workers, especially nurses. Many of them would work longer
hours and overtime or take on other people's shifts to handle the extra number
of taking care of critically ill patients, like the ones suffering from COVID-19,
added even more stress to nurses' plates. Nurses were not only dealing with
the physical or mental demands of their work but also with the emotional toll of
and many nurses did eventually get sick. Nurses also faced the fear of
spreading the virus to their families and loved ones. This created psychological
sickness away from their families. The emotional and physical toll of the strains
also affected other relationships. Some nurses experience stress at home due
balancing home life with the life at home with their families.
the front of healthcare. These conditions put their physical health at risk, as
well as their mental health. The risks that nurses encounter are exposure to the
exhaustion, and psychological stress. Nurses, by the nature of the job, are in
contact with infected patients, giving them a higher risk of adopting COVID-19.
especially in the early stages of the pandemic, making it very difficult to stay
away from the risk. Furthermore, nurses often spent extended periods with
patients who had severe symptoms. This increases the likelihood of getting the
In the early stages of the pandemic, there was a shortage of personal protective
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equipment. Nurses often have to reuse the personal protective equipment,
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which makes the risk for exposure increasingly higher. Even when the personal
hours, leading to physical issues like skin irritation. This made it even more
Due to staff shortages and a crazy number of patients, nurses were required to
work extended shifts, which could sometimes be more than 12 hours. This
patient, all while under extreme exhaustion and physical fatigue. The pandemic
also took a toll on nurses emotionally. They were forced to witness patients
suffering and dying, often without the family present. This led to burnout,
Many faced moral distress when they had to decide which patients would
receive treatment and which wouldn't. Nurses also lived with the constant fear
friends. This was compounded by their not knowing that the virus would spread
Nurses played a crucial role during the COVID-19 pandemic. Risking their lives
daily to care for those affected by the illness. Their dedication was seen as they
by nurses, especially during the COVID-19 pandemic, have had a big impact on
extended shifts, high patient volumes, and low resources led to increased
navigate both the physical discomfort of personal protective use and the
not only compromise the health of nurses but also highlight the urgent need for
changes within the system to improve the environment, ensure better support,
these challenges shows their crucial role in healthcare and addresses these
issues to prevent long-term difficulties for their health and the quality of care
nurses provide.
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