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7 W4 Sentence Structure S

The document discusses the importance of passing the IELTS examination, the advantages of taking a gap year for students, and the negative effects of excessive gaming on children. It also explores the role of museums in preserving history and education, and provides writing models for discussing pros and cons. Additionally, it emphasizes the balance between the benefits of computer skills and the potential negative impacts on young children.

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7 W4 Sentence Structure S

The document discusses the importance of passing the IELTS examination, the advantages of taking a gap year for students, and the negative effects of excessive gaming on children. It also explores the role of museums in preserving history and education, and provides writing models for discussing pros and cons. Additionally, it emphasizes the balance between the benefits of computer skills and the potential negative impacts on young children.

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Vocabulary

1.
中文 :
雅思考試合格對我來說很重要。
英文 :
1. _______It is important to pass the IELTS examination to me _____
2. _____________Passing the IELTS examination is essential._______________
3. __________Passing the IELTS examination is at the top of my agenda/schedule
/my priority ________

Learning Word :
● Agenda –(schedule) On the schedule
For example : be at the top of one’s agenda / the priority = the most important thing
for sb.
At present, the the priority of the government is the medical system.
Try to translate : 目前,人們的醫療是政府最重要的事情。
Currently, the medical system is at the top of the government's agenda.

2.
中文 :
一年休息使他们在應對學生生活中的種種挑戰時更具優勢。
英文 : a gap year gives students an advantage (edge) in terms of coping with
challenges in student life.
A gap year benefits students in terms of coping with challenges in their life.
A gap year gives them an edge in terms of ….
● Give us an edge : Advantage – Benefits / merits
have an advantage
Try to translate : 在當今社會,掌握好電腦技術會给你一種優勢。
In modern society, mastering computer skills gives us an edge in terms of living in
meta verse / having better job opportunities.

3.
中文:
但是最主要的問題是吸引兒童的電腦活動類型。這些往往是非常激烈而且相當
暴力的電子遊戲。玩家通常扮演遊戲裡的英雄,玩遊戲過多會令孩子變得以自我
為中心,並且對別人漠不關心。
英文 :
over gaming would encourage children to be more self centered and insensitive
to others .
● Encourage vs. Make
英文 :
____________________________________________

4.
中文 :
出現這種趨勢的原因可能是人們認識從中學上大學的年輕人在對世界的基本認
識和經歷上都比較有局限。
英文:
The reason may be because people believe that a young adult who passes
directly from high school to university is rather restricted in terms of general
knowledge and experience.
The reason may involve the belief (realisation/recognition) that the young who
passes directly from high school to university is rather restricted in terms of
general

v knowledge and experience

X people / human
Many people believe that -> the majority contains the belief of….
There are many believers in

Ideology :
Topic : What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be
funded?
USAGE 1 Collecting and protecting historical and artistic works is the memory
of a nation, telling us what history is like, and the "living fossil" of
history; at the same time, it can inspire the future and tell us where
we will go.
USAGE 2 It is a place for learning, allowing children and adults to explore
different fields of history, culture and art together, and allowing
them to have a lot of interaction
VS
USAGE 1 Enlightening the future by Collecting and protecting historical
learning history. and artistic works is the memory of a
nation, telling us what history is like,
and the "living fossil" of history; at
the same time, it can inspire the
future and tell us where we will go.
USAGE 2 Nourishing intelligence through It is a place for learning, allowing
cultural education children and adults to explore
different fields of history, culture and
art together, and allowing them to
have a lot of interaction

Writing Model :
Talking about the Pros and Cons of matter
Version 1 :
1. XX has improved the quality of our lives and are playing an important role in our
daily life. The benefits XX brings to us are far more than its disadvantages.
However, we cannot ignore its problem.
2. On the positive side, XX has enabled us to(1)The first advantage of XX。For
instance,(2) Description with example。Besides,(3)The second advantage of XX.
In modern society,(4)Description with example。In addition,(5)The third
advantage of XX。
3. On the negative side,(6)The first disadvantages of XX。For example,(7)
Description with example。Besides,(8)The second disadvantages of XX。
Furthermore,(9)The third disadvantages of XX
4. All in all, we cannot live without AAA for the conveniences it brings to us, but we
should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on modern life.

Version 2 :
1. What is the most important feature of a job? Some people argue as if it is the
general truth that a high salary makes a job appealing. But others, in contrast,
who give a frown of disapproval to money worship, insisting admitting that a high
wage is by no means unimportant, there are, obviously, some other reasons can
be seen in the meanwhile. Then after pondering the forenamed question on
many occasions, I have finally reached the opinion that job satisfaction is
something worthy to do and I cannot skip it. There are numerous reasons why I
hold a flinty manner, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
2. There is some element of truth in these arguments, but they ignore a deeper and
more basic fact that money is not the exclusively causal factor of work. From the
ancient times, that goes without saying, .... That does not admit of any doubt....

3.Also, it is presumptuous to judge …only to the excuse I mentioned in the above


paragraph. What is more……

4.As a whole, most of the characters that I mentioned with regard to work are also
true for being useful to society.

5.Taking into account of all the relative factors which influence and contribute to the
attitude, we may safely reach the conclusion: essential to some extent as money
importance is, job satisfaction or being useful for society is far more consequence for
an employee. If those who only acknowledge its money's inviting facade can take
into consideration the side effects it brings, then too much attention to money may
not seem sagacious.

Sample of First Paragraph :


Many adults have full-time jobs in modern times, and the proportion of their lives
spent doing such jobs is very high. Therefore, feelings about one's job reflect how an
individual feels about their lives as a whole. Because of this, job satisfaction is vital
indeed for the wellbeing of that person. (52 words)
Writing Vocab :
Topic :
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young
children. Do you agree or disagree?

Sample 1
Furthermore, teenagers are vulnerable mentally. We live in an era when
juveniles are exposed to a dazzling array of information, which contributes to the
phenomenon that a growing number of the youth cannot resist the alluring and
tantalizing information from the internet. The figures carried by the press, in all
likelihood, color the mind of the young generation or have a detrimental effect on
their perspective of the world as children tend to be more unable to distinguish right
from wrong.
Admittedly, no one could deny the merits that computers bring about. With a wealth
of technology swarm in, computers as a part of that, significantly enrich and spice
up our life. Children have more access to broaden their horizons and enjoy
knowledge information from the technology equipment. However, that could
not consist the top priority we should take into consideration now.

Sample 2
However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract
children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather
violent. The player is usually the 'hero' of the game, and too much exposure can
encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others.
Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information
or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with
other children and sharing non-virtual experiences are essential parts of a child's
development that cannot be provided by a computer.
Despite this, the benefits of computer skills to children cannot be denied. The
world will always be changing in terms of technology, and the Internet is the key
to the knowledge and information in the world today. Therefore children must learn at
an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will
need these skills throughout their studies and working lives.

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