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Student Name : JASDEEP KAUR

Exam Name : COMM_ENG 1
Exam Type : SPOKEN Exam Date : 2025-06-06
Total Score : 50 Achieved Score : 19

Question : Did you ever have to adapt to a sudden

change in plans or circumstances? How did you handle Score : 4/10
it??

Answer :

We are handled to a plan with the help of plans to make with the near and dear ones..

Suggestion :

The response contains several grammatical mistakes. The phrase 'We are handled to a plan' is
incorrect; it should be 'We were handed a plan'. Additionally, the phrase 'with the help of plans
to make with the near and dear ones' is unclear and awkwardly structured. It could be rephrased
for clarity. A better structure would be to express how you adapted to the change in plans more
directly. Consider providing a specific example of the change and how you managed it.
Here's the suggested answer : ""We were handed a plan to make arrangements with our near and
dear ones."".

Question : You are supposed to report to office at the first day of work, but
Score : 3/10
due to high traffic you get delayed. What do you do??

Answer :

We are requested to the office owner. We are late in the traffic so we cannot come in the time in
the office..
Suggestion :

The response contains several grammatical mistakes that need to be addressed. Here are the
identified errors:

Grammatical Mistakes:
1. 'We are requested to the office owner.' - This is incorrect. It should be 'We should inform the
office owner.' or 'We are to inform the office owner.'
2. 'We are late in the traffic' - This should be 'We are stuck in traffic.'
3. 'so we cannot come in the time in the office.' - This should be 'so we cannot arrive on time at
the office.'

To improve the answer, the student could have included a suggestion on how they would
communicate their delay, such as calling or sending a message to the office owner.
Here's the suggested answer : ""We should inform the office owner. We are stuck in traffic, so
we cannot arrive on time at the office."".

Question : Tell me about your family. You could mention what your parents do,
Score :
how many members are there in your family, where do you stay etcetera. Think
4/10
carefully, take your time and answer the question.?

Answer :

My family is too big. We are living in a house of only 5 members. My mother is also innocent
and as well as she cares for me a lot. My father loves me a lot and we are a spot in every field of
stock. So my family is the world's best family for me..
Suggestion :

The response contains several grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Here are the
identified issues:

Grammatical Mistakes:
1. 'My family is too big.' - This contradicts the next sentence. Consider rephrasing for clarity.
2. 'We are living in a house of only 5 members.' - Should be 'There are only 5 members in my
family.'
3. 'My mother is also innocent and as well as she cares for me a lot.' - Awkward structure.
Should be 'My mother is very caring and innocent.'
4. 'we are a spot in every field of stock.' - This phrase is unclear. Consider rephrasing to convey
the intended meaning.

Spelling Mistakes:
None identified.

To improve the answer, the student could have included more details about each family
member's profession or interests, and perhaps shared a memorable family experience.
Here's the suggested answer : ""My family is small, consisting of only 5 members. My mother is
very caring and innocent. My father loves me a lot, and we excel in various areas together.
Therefore, my family is the best family in the world to me."".

Question : "Hi! What do you want to do this weekend?" Answer

to your friend's text message. You should: - Be friendly - Give a Score : 4/10
couple of options?

Answer :

In this weekend, I enjoy a lot with my near and dear ones. In the other words, my family is also
close to my heart and I enjoy with my family in the separate places. Nowadays, we are living in
the 21st century and nowadays, starting summer days, we are going to outside places..
Suggestion :

Your response contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Here are the
identified mistakes:

Grammatical Mistakes:
1. 'In this weekend' should be 'This weekend'.
2. 'I enjoy a lot with my near and dear ones' should be 'I enjoy spending time with my loved
ones'.
3. 'In the other words' should be 'In other words'.
4. 'I enjoy with my family in the separate places' should be 'I enjoy spending time with my
family in different places'.
5. 'Nowadays, we are living in the 21st century' is redundant; you can simply say 'We are living
in the 21st century'.
6. 'nowadays, starting summer days, we are going to outside places' should be 'As summer
approaches, we are going to outdoor places'.

To improve your answer, you could have included specific activities you plan to do with your
family or mentioned particular places you intend to visit.
Here's the suggested answer : ""This weekend, I enjoy spending time with my loved ones. In
other words, my family is very close to my heart, and I enjoy spending time with my family in
different places. We are living in the 21st century, and as summer approaches, we are going to
outdoor places."".

Question : Talk about yourself and your educational

Score : 4/10
qualification.?

Answer :

It's just Deepak. I live in Vilaspur, Gujarat near city Govindgarh. I am very innocent girl and I
am also cooperative with near and dear ones and also strange persons. Talking about my
qualification, I pursuing in final Bachelor Education of Computer and this is very interesting
study for me. I really enhance my knowledge with the help of this education..
Suggestion :

The response contains several grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Here are the
identified errors:

Grammatical Mistakes:
1. 'I am very innocent girl' should be 'I am a very innocent girl'.
2. 'I am also cooperative with near and dear ones and also strange persons' should be 'I am also
cooperative with my near and dear ones as well as with strangers'.
3. 'I pursuing in final Bachelor Education of Computer' should be 'I am pursuing a Bachelor's
degree in Computer Education'.
4. 'this is very interesting study for me' should be 'this is a very interesting subject for me'.
5. 'I really enhance my knowledge with the help of this education' should be 'I am really
enhancing my knowledge through this education'.

Spelling Mistakes:
None identified.
Here's the suggested answer : ""It's just Deepak. I live in Vilaspur, Gujarat, near the city of
Govindgarh. I am a very innocent girl, and I am also cooperative with my near and dear ones as
well as with strangers. Talking about my qualification, I am pursuing a Bachelor's degree in
Computer Education, and this is a very interesting subject for me. I am really enhancing my
knowledge through this education."".