Argumentative Paragraph and Analytical Paragraph
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Juan Pablo García LeónArgumentative Paragraph
Do you think it should be an obligation to learn a language?
Brainstorming:
Important for life
Helps with your future
You can travel to others country
You can understand other language
Helps to people to understand the language
Focusing:
Important for life
Helps with your future
Helps to people to understand the language
In my opinion, I consider that learn a language is an obligation. The first
reason is that it is so important for life. For instance, if we learn a type of language, it
can help us with the job. A second reason for this is that it helps with your future. For
example, if people learn a new language, they can live in a better country. The most
important reason is that it helps to people to understand the language. As an
illustration, in my city there are many people that do not understand other language,
so if you learn a language you can help them to understand it. Therefore, those are the
reasons because I think it should be an obligation to learn a language.
Argumentative Paragraph
Do you think the educational system should be changed in Bolivia? Give reasons and examples
for your opinion.
Brainstorming:
The education is not better
Old system
Bad schools
No good infrastructure
There no breakfast nutritious
Focusing:
Old system
no good infrastructure
There no breakfast nutritious
In my opinion, the educational system should be changed in Bolivia. The
first reason for this is that children do not have a good brakfast. They should have a
nutritious breakfast. For example, I know some schools that do not any breakfast. The
second reason for this is that in the most schools there is no good infrastructure. For
instance, I saw some classes that their bathrooms and walls are bad built. The mos
important reason for this is that it has an old system. As an illustration, many children do
not learn in the best way. In conclusion, because of these reasons and evidence, I belive
that the educational system should be changed in Bolivia.
Analytical Paragraph
Comparison by similar points.
Write about the similarities of studying in a public school to studying in a private school.
Brainstorming:
Basic education
Comprehensive devolopment
Form values
Offer knowledge
Preparation for life
College preparation
Focusing:
Basic education
Form values
College preparation
The public school and private school are community schools and they
have many characteristics in common. First, both schools form values. For example, a
private school forms values like responsability and commitment. Similary, a public school
also forms values like dedication and responsability, too. Second, they also have a basic
education that teachs math and language. Likewise, a private school also has a basic
education like for example, it teachs social sciences and math, too. Finally, both schools
have a college preparation that do it through tests and career guidance. In the same way, a
public school also does it through extracurricular activities and test, too. In conclusion, as
you can see a public school and a private school offer beneficial qualities to students
because they have many similarities.
Analytical Paragraph
The advantages and disadvantages Paragraph
Brainstorming:
Advantages:
1. Learn much better
2. Interaction with partners
3. Personal solidarity
4. Motivation to students
5. Interaction with teachers
Disadvantages:
1. Cost of transportation
2. Cost of material
3. Rigid schedules
Focusing:
Advantages:
1. Learn much better
2. Interaction with teachers
3. Motivation to students
Disadavantages:
1. Cost of transportation
2. Rigid schedules
The most people take fase to face classes. It has many advantages and
drawbacks. Eventhough, there are a few disadvantages, there are a lot more advantages of
taking face to face classes. One beneficit is that you learn much better when you are in face to
face classes. Another positive point is that you have interactions with your teachers. One more
important virtue is the students achieve learning. The disadvantages of having face to face
classes, on the other hand, seem to be les significant when compared to the advantages. One
disadvantage of taking face to face classes is the cost of transportation. Another weakness is
the rigid schedules can be insufficients. In conclusion, although taking face to face classes has
a few disadvantanges, their advantages are greater and should be considered by people.