Extended Personification
Extended Personification
The relaxed waves lapped at the side of the boat. The sea was calm and
welcoming as we adjusted the sail. It caught a lazy gust of wind that
moved us Northwards. More waves greeted the bow as we travelled,
delivering cheerful flecks of water over those on board.
The relaxed waves lapped at the side of the boat. The sea
was calm and welcoming as we adjusted the sail. It caught
a lazy gust of wind that moved us Northwards. More
waves greeted the bow as we travelled, delivering cheerful
flecks of water over those on board.
Pen to Paper
Now, rewrite the extract, changing all of the adjectives that are used in the
personification so that they appear negative and hostile.
Useful feelings:
horrified hostile dismayed
terrified irritated sorrowful
nervous aggravated agonised
scared agitated suffering
petrified hateful regretful
hysterical resentful disillusioned
anxious exasperated despairing
panicked frustrated guilty
Help Box: