Fragments
Fragments
Underline the statement in each item that you think is not a complete
sentence. Then read the explanations below.
1. After the shopping mall opened. Several local stores went out of business.
2. The nursing student poked my arm four times. Trying to take a blood
sample. I was beginning to feel like a pincushion.
3. Some young people are learning old-fashioned dances. Such as the waltz,
polka, and Lindy.
4. The manager always wears a suit and tie to the office. Then takes off his
jacket and tie by ten o’clock.
Solution…
⮚ 1. After the shopping mall opened. Several
local stores went out of business.
⮚ After the shopping mall opened is not a
complete sentence.
⮚ The writer does not follow through and
complete the thought by telling us what
happened after the shopping mall opened.
Correct the fragment by adding it to the
sentence that follows it.
Solution…
The nursing student poked my arm four times.
Trying to take a blood sample. I was beginning
to feel like a pincushion.
• Trying to take a blood sample is not a
complete sentence.
• The word group lacks both a subject and a
verb, and it does not express a complete
thought. Correct the fragment by adding it to
the sentence that precedes it.
Solution…
Some young people are learning old-fashioned
dances. Such as the waltz, polka, and Lindy.
• Such as the waltz, polka, and Lindy is not a
complete sentence.
• Again, the word group lacks a subject and a
verb, and it does not express a complete
thought. Correct the fragment by adding it to
the sentence that precedes it.
Solution…
• The manager always wears a suit and tie to
the office. Then takes off his jacket and tie by
ten o’clock.
• Then takes off his jacket and tie by ten o’clock
is not a complete sentence.
• The word group lacks a subject. Correct the
fragment by adding the subject he.
Fragments
• A sentence must have two characteristics:
• 1. It must have a subject and a verb;
2. it must have independence or
completeness.
• 3. After the children washed the family car. They had a water
fight with the wet sponges.
• 4. Please hang up the damp towel. That you just threw on the
floor.
-ING AND TO FRAGMENTS
-ING AND TO FRAGMENTS
• Cliff sat by the telephone for hours. Hoping
that Lisa would call.
• 4. The film class saw every Dustin Hoffman film. Including his
first one, The Graduate.
• MISSING-SUBJECT FRAGMENTS
• The telephone caller kept asking questions.
But did not identify herself.
• The telephone caller kept asking questions
but did not identify herself.
• The telephone caller kept asking questions.
She did not identify herself.
• The children dug a large hole in the grass. And
then tried to fill it with water.
• The children dug a large hole in the grass and
then tried to fill it with water.
• The children dug a large hole in the grass.
Then, they tried to fill it with water.
Practice 4
Underline the missing-subject fragment in each of the following
items. Then correct it on the lines below, using one of the two
methods given above.
• 1. Our instructor seems strict. But is actually friendly and
helpful.
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