IELTS Writing
IELTS Writing
• trend
• Key trend section
• The graph shows the number of West Indians, Indians, and Pakistanis
immigrating to the U.K. from 1940 to 1970.
• As can be seen, in general, immigration of these groups increased rapidly
over a twenty-year period. After 1960, the number of West Indian
immigrants decreased rapidly whereas the number of Indian and
Pakistani immigrants continued to rise.
• From 1940 to 1960, the number of Indian and Pakistani immigrants
increased slightly to just under 10,000 people. Then, after an initial drop,
there was a rapid increase to approximately 25,000 immigrants. Between
1965 and 1970, the number of immigrants fluctuated with an overall
upward trend.
• Similarly, the number of West Indian immigrants increased more
moderately between 1940 and 1960 to roughly 15,000 people. Then,
there was a very sharp increase over a three-year period to a peak of just
under 35,000 people. From 1960 to 1970, the number of immigrants
dropped dramatically with some fluctuations to just over 5,000 people.
• In conclusion, it is possible to speculate that immigration from India and
Pakistan may have continued to increase up to the present day, whereas
West Indian immigration may have continued to decrease.
• Relation bt
whole and part,
also part and
part
• This is a pie chart which shows the proportion of meat sold in
the supermarket. The total amount of meat sold in the
supermarket is divided into six types as follows: chicken, pork,
beef, lamb, fish and others.
• Basically, chicken has the largest proportion, which accounts for
40%, while others has the smallest percentage, at 2%.
• According to the pie chart, chicken, which is 40%, is the most
popular among the total meat sold, with pork coming next at
20%, followed by beef, making up 18%; finally come lamb, fish
and others at 15%, 5% and 2% respectively. It should be noted
that the sale of pork is half as much as that of chicken. And it is
also interesting to note that the sale of chicken is 20 times as
much as that of others.
• It can be concluded from the pie chart that chicken is the most
commonly bought meat while others is the least commonly
bought meat.
• Bar Chart: a combination of line graph and pie chart
• The bar chart shows us the result of a survey of people who are over
100 years old in four countries including China, Japan, U.S.A. and
Cuba.
• Generally speaking, the number of females aged over 100 exceeds
that of males. Japan has the highest percentage of people who are
over 100 years old while Cuba has the smallest number of people
aged over 100 among the 4 countries.
• As is illustrated in the bar chart, in China, there are more males (6 per
thousand) than females (5 per thousand) who enjoy a long lifespan,
whilst in the other three countries, there are more females than males
who enjoy a long life. It is interesting to note that the number of
Japanese females aged over 100 is six times that of Cuba while the
number of Japanese males over 100 years old is ten times that of
Cuba. It is also worth mentioning that China and U.S.A. have the same
percentage of males who are over 100 years old (6 per thousand).
• In summary, it is clear that females are more likely to enjoy a longer
lifespan than males and that developed countries have a larger
percentage of people who are over 100 years old than developing
• The table illustrates a variety of personal items and the percentage of
people in three different age groups, 15 to 30, 31 to 55 and over 55,
who lost or misplaced these items in a one-month period.
• According to the table, generally speaking, the most commonly
misplaced items were hats and books, whilst cards and watches were
misplaced the least. The percentage of people who had misplaced
items was largest for the 15-30 age group and smallest for the over
55 age group.
• The 15-30 age group misplaced hats and books the most, at 45% and
40%, respectively. Bags and cards, at 15% each, were the least
misplaced items. In comparison with the other age groups, this age
group misplaced purses/wallets, hats, books and watches the most,
while misplacing bags the least. The 31-55 age group also misplaced
hats, at 40%, and books, at 35%, the most often, while cards, at 12%,
and watches, at 18%, were misplaced the least often. Relative to the
other age groups, the 31-35 age group misplaced bags and jewellery
the most.
• The over 55 group misplaced keys, at 35%, and
books, at 33%, the most, while watches and
jewellery were misplaced the least, at 8% and 10%
respectively. Compared with the other two groups,
this group misplaced keys and cards the most, and
books, hats, jewellery and watches the least.
• The items for which the recorded figures showed
the least difference between the three age groups
were purses and wallets at 23%, 19% and 20%, and
cards at 15%, 12% and 18%.
• It can be concluded from this table that people of
different ages are likely to misplace or lose similar
personal items, but the frequency with which they