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There's a nice illustration of this ship here. Parsecboy (talk) 18:55, 10 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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This review is transcluded from Talk:French ironclad Amiral Duperré/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: CPA-5 (talk · contribs) 12:02, 8 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one soon. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 12:02, 8 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Update: I don't really have the time to continue this. 'Cause of our lockdown, school and real life issues I won't be that much online for a week or longer. :/ Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 22:29, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • No problem, I'll see if I can get someone to take it over. We're in a similar boat here - working from home if we can, schools are all closed, etc. Stay safe over there! Parsecboy (talk) 11:51, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a look at this later today. Harrias talk 12:13, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Harrias, much appreciated. Parsecboy (talk) 12:52, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Design
  • "..which was installed aboard Amiral Duperré.[1] Amiral Duperré provided the basis.." Avoid the repetition of "Amiral Duperre" if possible.
    • Done
  • "The center 340 0m gun.." Typo.
    • Fixed
Service history
  • Could you clarify in the article that Ajaccio is on Corsica.
    • Good idea
  • Why include the part about Theodore Ropp's suggestion that it happened in 1890? The Naval Annual was published in 1889; the fact that it reported on it at that stage means that it could not have happened in 1890. At best, Ropp is referring to a different incident, at worst, he is just plain wrong, surely? This doesn't seem to be a case where either could plausibly be correct, and we have to provide balance.
    • That's a good point - when I was writing the article, I had looked at Ropp first, and then just modified it with Brassey's account later.
References
  • All formatted appropriately and consistently, to reliable sources.
Images
Infobox

Overall, there's not much wrong with this one, nice work. Harrias talk 10:19, 19 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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