Talk:How the Snake Lost Its Legs
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Homage within science???
[edit]"The title pays homage to Rudyard Kipling's Just So Stories, but within the strict confines of science." (Early in the intro.) I think something is missing here. It says that the Homage is within the strict confines of science. I think that homage can never be that. Is the intended meaning that the content of the book is scientifically correct? --Ettrig (talk) 10:44, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
- Indeed. I don't think any native English speaker would find this tricky but I'll reword it now for wider benefit. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:57, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 04:53, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
Comments by Dunkleosteus77
[edit]- Why is ref no. 3 a link to a google scholar search? User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Gone, guess ref 2 is sufficient context.
- The second, third, and fifth paragraphs in the Contents section needs a ref at the end
- Added.
- I think the Publication, illustrations section could just be titled Publications User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Done.
- "As a result, 'The essay, thus, works...' " little redundant User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Gone.
- I did a little copyediting so I guess that's that User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for doing that. Chiswick Chap (talk) 05:12, 13 May 2018 (UTC)