Talk:John Philip Sousa Baton

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Did you know... that during change of command ceremonies of the United States Marine Band, the John Philip Sousa Baton is transferred from the outgoing to the incoming director?

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This review is transcluded from Talk:John Philip Sousa Baton/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:46, 20 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"After Sousa's death" After his death.
"United States Marine Corps" link.
"17.15-inch" approximately and then you give its length to the nearest 1/100th of an inch?!
- Removed 'approximately'. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"eagle, globe, and anchor " our article capitalises this.
"Vice President" and "Speaker of the House of Representatives" could be linked.
Do we know which White House lawn, there are articles...
- I double checked, but the source just states "White house lawn". – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Non-English sources should use the language parameter.
The baton article is not linked from the navbox at the bottom, so either it needs to be added or the navbox needs to go.
- Added in the navbox. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:53, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man – Done all, or replied above. Thanks a lot for all your GA reviews. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:08, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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