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This article has been developed by many editors. I am requesting if there should be anything wrong in this article and if it qualifies as a FA article. thanks Good friend100 18:45, 4 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • References come after puncuation, [5]. should be .[5]
  • Move, merge, expand the one sentence paragraphs, this will make people object per criteria 1a. of FA criteria, "well-written"
  • The See Also section comes before the references sections
  • Remove the redlinked article under "See Also" - the point of the section is to link to articles that exist.
  • Expand the lead to two paragraphs, per WP:LEAD. You can split the info from the first paragraph add a bit etc
  • Have an in-line reference for each paragraph
  • Don't wikilink solo years, example - 1934
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 100 meters, use 100 meters, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 100 meters.[?]
  • Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”, etc.
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
  • Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb.[?] M3tal H3ad 03:44, 10 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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