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Jake Leschyshyn

I've listed this article for peer review because it might be a GAN in the future. Copyediting was recently done to this article as a head start, and I will continue doing more work on this article. It is nowhere ready for a GAN but I do appreciate feedback on how I can improve this article more and maybe consider doing a GAN for it at some point.

Thanks, The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 04:45, 15 November 2024 (UTC)

Comments by XR228

@The Cadillac Ranger: Honestly, just write a somewhat in-depth summary about all of the seasons he played. It need not be more than one or two sentences. Something like "Leschyshyn accumulated X goals and Y assists for Z points" for every season would work. Also add sections about international play and personal life (if applicable). XR228 (talk) 03:59, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger and now that I take a closer look at the article, I see that's mostly been done. So I guess just elaborate. What other important things happened to him during the season? What important/milestone goals or assists did he get? XR228 (talk) 04:05, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

XR228, I just added some stuff to the professional section. Your thoughts? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 20:27, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Good. Keep expanding on that. Also don't use "G" and "A" for goals and assists—look at Jaden Schwartz as an example. XR228 (talk) 23:57, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

XR228, I will do so, and I was also just adding sections about his professional career. I also added more stuff to the article as well, mostly about his time with the Rangers/Wolfpack. Thoughts? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 05:21, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Just fixed some minor stuff. Good work so far. XR228 (talk) 05:34, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Also maybe expand the major junior section. XR228 (talk) 17:41, 29 November 2024 (UTC)

XR228, Any other recommendations to the article? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 19:39, 2 December 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Not really, just write an in-depth summary of all seasons played and you should be good. XR228 (talk) 23:02, 2 December 2024 (UTC)

XR228 I know the Chicago Wolves (AHL) might need to be mentioned. Which section would be a good spot to mention about what he did with the Wolves? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 07:38, 4 December 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: the Vegas Golden Knights section. Firs5 of change the years in the title to 2018–2023. Then, after the part about him being sent to Regina but before his NHL debut, create a new paragraph which talks about his time with the Wolves, as the Wolves were the AHL affiliate of the VGK. XR228 (talk) 21:26, 4 December 2024 (UTC)

Hi XR288 I am continuing to work on the Vegas Golden Knights section, but I was also expanding the lead section as well. I also added a section about his debut with the Chicago Wolves and mentioned how he scored the first goal in Henderson Silver Knights history. Thoughts? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 23:53, 6 December 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Good. Keep expanding on that. Mention stats and such. XR228 (talk) 00:57, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

XR228, I have continued expanding that section even more. I also started working on the section about the Silver Knights. Thoughts? The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 05:52, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Good. Now write more about what he did with the Silver Knights (apart from goals/assists/points). Also expand on what he actually did with the Golden Knights themselves. XR228 (talk) 06:07, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

XR228, I've been adding more stuff about what he did with both the Silver Knights and Golden Knights. I noticed you were editing as well. Anything else? I might request one more round of copyediting once I'm finished with the suggestions from the peer review. The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 19:33, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Honestly, I think the article is in a pretty good shape. Look at Joey Daccord as an example; he has played a similar amount of hockey as Leschyshyn has, but I got his article to GA—I think that can eventually happen here as well. Good work. XR228 (talk) 19:41, 7 December 2024 (UTC)

Hi XR228, I have added an international play section about his time at the U17. I will add more possible edits and then once I do, I will go ahead and request copyediting. Thank you so much for your help. The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 22:56, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

@The Cadillac Ranger: Thanks for adding that. XR228 (talk) 23:45, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

Absolutely. I will add any edits that are necessary and then after that, I will request copyediting. The Cadillac Ranger (talk) 01:34, 13 December 2024 (UTC)