Wikipedia talk:Version 1.0 Editorial Team/Copyediting

Note: I'm willing to consider any new submission through October 15; I'm not going to have time for a lot of new work in the last 5 days. Also, in-universe concerns in articles about fiction take quite a lot of experience and judgment to handle, which means I'm not good with any of the articles currently listed below except the robotics articles, so I hope we get some volunteers to help. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 22:36, 12 October 2008 (UTC)

Requests that received copyediting
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Wikiproject Equine Well, we had hoped to get Horse to GA soon, but hit a snag with some complicated wikipolitics and a quick fail of the article. If anyone wants to check it over, we will be taking the article to WP:GAR shortly. Ealdgyth - Talk 23:07, 20 September 2008 (UTC) As at this point the article is getting a makeover; save copyediting for last. --Una Smith (talk) 20:21, 24 September 2008 (UTC) Please see further discussion at Talk:Horse/GA2. The article itself is not getting a "makeover," and some copyediting of individual sections is most certainly appropriate. We are discussing how and whether to move some sections around and there is an emerging consensus. If anyone has constructive suggestions as to how what's there can be improved, we are fine with that. Montanabw(talk) 22:35, 24 September 2008 (UTC) Ditto what Montana said. Any constructive suggestions/criticism will be helpful in our quest to take this article to GA/FA, and it is always good to have fresh eyes on an article. Dana boomer (talk) 23:16, 24 September 2008 (UTC) I think Montanabw and Dana boomer prove my point. --Una Smith (talk) 06:49, 26 September 2008 (UTC) WP:SHIPS USS Constitution Should be GA by October 20 --Brad (talk) 19:09, 19 September 2008 (UTC) WikiProject Warhammer 40,000 Warhammer 40,000, the only 0.7 article in the project. Currently C class, up for Good Article Nomination. Protonk (talk) 17:48, 7 October 2008 (UTC) Wikipedia:WikiProject Crime and Criminal Biography Lucky Luciano - without work, needs to be pulled from the version. Thanks! Wildhartlivie (talk) 03:43, 9 October 2008 (UTC) Some copyediting done, I skimmed The Five Families, checked the refs and ELs and couldn't find any sourcing to support the first two sections; handed back to Wildharlivie for help with sourcing. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 02:51, 13 October 2008 (UTC) Drew Barrymore Requested on my talk page by User:Wildhartlivie. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 03:08, 13 October 2008 (UTC)	The above is an extended discussion that has been collapsed for improved usability.

Requests that did not receive copyediting
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Wikiproject Robotics Some requests, all Start-class: Automation, Control theory, Genetic algorithm, Machine learning, Mechatronics, Navigation, Pattern recognition, Robotics. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 14:02, 15 September 2008 (UTC) WP:COMICS Iron Man, Iron Man (film), Doctor_Octopus, Brainiac (comics) (collaborating with WP:ROBO now) and also The Beano, per User:Hiding on my talk page. - Dan Dank55 (send/receive) 17:20, 18 September 2008 (UTC) Nintendogs Well, I'm trying to spruce this article up for 0.7, but I'm also working on Mario Bros. Could someone please help me with some copyediting work? Thanks. - A Link to the Past (talk) 20:19, 9 October 2008 (UTC) WP:VG The Video games project has submitted 48 article ids to date. Our weakest area has been our Good articles. A workshop page has been set up to help us coordinate our efforts. The list there is organized by rating. Any help with one or more Featured or Good articles on the list would be greatly appreciated. (Guyinblack25 talk 21:42, 10 October 2008 (UTC))	The above is an extended discussion that has been collapsed for improved usability.