BBC Translation Cda
BBC Translation Cda
Bandar Al-Hejin
Lancaster University and Institute of Public Administration, Saudi Arabia
This paper argues for closer interdisciplinarity between critical discourse analysis
(CDA) and translation studies (TS). There has been very little CDA investigat-
ing discursive representations by news organisations across linguistic, political
and cultural boundaries. Similarly researchers in TS have pointed out that the
sensitive role news translation plays in discursive phenomena such as globalisa-
tion and political discourse remains largely underestimated. To address this gap,
three methodological models are proposed for linking the dialectical-relational
approach to CDA (Fairclough 1992, 1995, 2003) with text-based approaches
in TS. A mini-case study will illustrate such links by analysing talks by Saudi
women translated by BBC News into Standard Arabic and English. Findings
reveal substantial transformations which cannot be dismissed as inevitable con-
straints of the news genre or translation, but are more likely to reflect prevailing
narratives of Muslim women being 'submissive' and oppressed'.
1. Introduction
Concerns have been raised in the field of Translation Studies (TS) that the sensi-
tive role international news translation plays in discursive processes such as glo-
balisation, conflict and political discourse remains largely underestimated (Bielsa
2009:4, Prez-Gonzlez 2012:171, Schaffner 2004:120). Similarly in the field of
Critical Discourse Analysis (CDA) there have been very few studies investigating
the language of news organisations across linguistic, political and cultural bound-
aries (Palmer 2009:186). Considering that important aspects of hnguistic analysis
such as pragmatic and sociocultural meanings are mostly language specific, one
Some of the theoretical and methodological links between the fields of CDA and
TS have been touched on in previous studies (Baumgarten 2007, Calzada-Prez
2007, Elbadri 2010, Kang 2007, Knowles & Malmkjr 1989, Kuo & Nakamura
2005, Munday 2007, Oik 2002, Schaffner 2004, Valden 2007). In this section I will
make some of those links explicit and try to elaborate others. It should be noted
that the discussion will be limited to only one of several CDA approaches. Other
approaches may have their own potential links with TS, for example at the dis-
course-historical (Reisigl & Wodak 2001), sociosemantic (van Leeuwen 1996), so-
ciocognitive (van Dijk 1988, van Dijk & Kintsch 1983) or corpus linguistic (Hardt-
Mautner 1995) levels. Such links can hopefully be explored elsewhere. Also, what
follows will not review various approaches to TS in any comprehensive way but
merely those which share common ground with Fairclough's approach to CDA.
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Examples of translation strategies such as these (there are many more) should il-
lustrate the point that CDA needs to draw on TS theories when tackling translated
texts (Schflher 2004:138).
Turning to the field of TS, Schaffner (2004:133) points out that before the
1970s translation had largely been defined in linguistic terms as the semantic
transfer of meaning from one language to another. A much broader understand-
ing of translation developed thereafier based on functionalist approaches which
recognise that translated texts are produced to fulfil certain functions or skopos
(Vermeer 1987). Functionalist approaches adopt "a prospective attitude to transla-
tion, as opposed to the retrospective attitude adopted in theories which focus on
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prescriptions derived from the source text" (Schaffner 2009:117). This division
between retrospective and prospective approaches to TS is also evident in the two
major schools of thought that developed in Europe since the 1970s (Snell-Hornby
1988:11-26). The first is bersetzungswissenschaft [translatology] which was initi-
ated by the Leipzig School and considers TS a subdiscipline of Applied Linguistics.
It relies on linguistic analysis viewing itself as an exact science that focuses on the
concept of equivalence, which basically refers to the extent to which the TL text
reflects the SL text. The notion of equivalence has been controversial for at least
two reasons. One is that its various definitions have been difficult to apply in prac-
tice especially within the confines of traditional linguistic theory (Snell-Hornby
1988:22), although more recent approaches to equivalence based on systemic
functional linguistics such as Baker (1992) and House (1997) have been more rig-
orous and empirical while acknowledging the relativity of the concept itself. The
second reason seems to be a general reaction against a counterproductive preoc-
cupation with equivalence in TS. Schaffner (2004:136) claims that "the notion of
equivalence' is almost a 'dirty' word now", which reflects a further shift away from
a prescriptive and retrospective view of translation towards a more descriptive and
prospective one that also recognises the cultural and ideological processes involved.
Reactions to pure descriptivism, however, have led to the incorporation of
self-reflexivity and an attention to hegemonic narratives in TS, both of which
play key roles in CDA. Brownlie (2009:78) points out that the descriptive tradi-
tion has been criticised for its positivistic assumption that researchers are able
to adopt an objective stance in their analysis of other people's translations. This
led to the development of what she refers to as "Critical Descriptive Translation
Studies" by researchers such as Hermans (1999) who emphasise the importance of
self-reflexivity in interpretation. Another reaction to descriptivism is "committed
approaches" which Brownlie describes as "a politically motivated revival of pre-
scriptive approaches towards translation, based on the recognition of unfair power
differentials in and between cultures and languages" (p. 79). She classifies commit-
ted approaches into those which are explicitly committed to a particular political
cause, such as Venuti's (1995) promotion of foreignisation to resist neocapitalist
values, and those which recognise translation "as an activist and interventionist
activity per se" (p. 80, emphasis in original) such as Baker's (2006) exposition of
selective appropriation by the Middle East Media Research Institute or her advo-
cacy of activist translators who "distance themselves from organisations that are
actively involved in unethical or suspect agendas..." (Baker 2009:238).
The second major school of thought is based on Manipulation Theory (MT)
which considers TS a subdiscipline of Comparative Literature. As its name sug-
gests, MT assumes that translations are actually "rewrites" in which translators
"manipulate the originals they work with to some extent usually to make them fit
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in with the dominant, or one of the dominant ideological and poetological cur-
rents of their time" (Lefevere 1992:8). Hatim and Mason (1997:119) distinguish
between two related but analytically distinct issues of ideology. One is the ideology
of translating, that is the extent to which translators mediate SL texts. The other
is the translation of ideology, that is "what happens to ideologies when they are
translated". While previous work by Hermans, Bassnett and Lefevere has focused
on the first issue, Hatim and Mason point out that significant progress in critical
linguistics and CDA has provided a better understanding of the translation of ide-
ology by elucidating the way discourse shapes and is shaped by ideology.
Aside from an interest in ideological manipulation, MT shares other com-
mon denominators with CDA because it constitutes an approach to translation
that is "descriptive, target-oriented,/uci/ona/ and systemic, and [has] an interest
in the norms and constraints that govern the production and reception of transla-
tion..." (Hermans 1985:10 fn., emphasis added). This shows clear parallels with
CDA since "production and reception" form essential components of discursive
practices; and what Hermans refers to as "norms" and "constraints" are typically
subsumed under orders of discourse. These constraints governing translation are
elaborated by Lefevere (1992) who classifies them as follows: (1) Language refers
to inherent linguistics difference between the SL and TL. (2) Patronage refers to
the status of the translator as well as ideological and economic factors affecting
the person or institution commissioning the translation (p. 16). (3) Poetics refers
to two components: "one is the inventory of literary devices, genres, motifs, proto-
typical characters and situations and symbols; the other a concept of what the role
of literature [translation] is, or should be in the social system" (p. 26). Lefevere and
Bassnett (1990: xi) state that "all rewritings, whatever their intention, reflect a cer-
tain ideology and a poetics and as such manipulate literature to function in a given
society in a given way". (4) Universe of discourse refers to the knowledge, objects,
customs and beliefs of a given culture at a given time. This includes "a cultural
script' [which] could be defined as the accepted pattern of behaviour expected of
people who fill certain roles in a certain culture." (p. 89). Like Fairclough, Lefevere
explicitly draws on Foucault in his understanding of power in patronage "not just,
or even primarily, as a repressive force" but also one that produces widely accepted
knowledge and discourse (p. 15).
Hatim and Mason (1990) were among the first within the field of TS to argue
that translation theory needed to account for the concept of discourse, which they
broadly define in the same Foucauldian sense as Fairclough (p. 70). Their contex-
tual model of translation situates the text as the central unit of analysis which must
incorporate three dimensions: the communicative (setting and users), pragmatic
and semiotic (p. 58). This semiotic dimension calls for the translator's understand-
ing of the discourses and intertextual links that reside in the source text. Mason
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(2007:343) points out that critical linguistics (the precursor to CDA) as pioneered
by Kress and Hodge may have been overlooked to some extent by other disci-
plines, including TS, due to "excessive compartmentalization of academic disci-
plines in the western world" as well as critical linguists' own failure to connect with
other sociological theories of power and ideology such as Foucault and Bourdieu.
Nevertheless, he goes on to argue that critical linguistics did much to operation-
alise discourse as a concept in textual analysis which "has become an indispens-
able concept in translation studies of various kinds" (p. 344).
The most compelling arguments for interdisciplinary cooperation between TS
and Political Discourse Analysis (including CDA) have been made by Christina
Schaffner (2004). She lists a number of examples from EU political discourse
where aspects such as lexical choice and conceptual metaphors in translations had
contrasting effects in the British and German political and media environments
(for details see Schaffner 1997, 2003). Aside from having serious political con-
sequences, the translational choices made in the examples illustrate that "textual
features need to be linked to the social and ideological contexts of text production
and reception. In other words, [TL] texts and discourses are framed by social and
political structures and practices" (p. 131-132). This, she argues, provides impor-
tant links between TS and CDA.
Having summarised some of the common ground CDA and TS share, here I will
propose three methodological models for applying CDA to translated texts within
Fairclough's framework. It should be acknowledged that there was no "perfect fit"
when it came to finding examples of each model. Some studies analysed the texts
and paid little attention to the discursive and social practices. Others paid more
attention to TL practices than those in the SL context or vice versa. The common
feature in all the following studies, however, is that they trace textual transforma-
tions in the translation process in order to investigate the extent to which these
may be ideologically motivated.
Model 1 emphasises translation as re-writinghy conducting a textual analysis
of a translation and then analyse the discursive and sociocultural practices of the
translator operating in the target language domain (see Figure 1). Assuming that
translators, like authors, are both ideological agents and subject to orders of dis-
course that impact their work, a translation can be viewed as a text in its own right
which reflects the interests of a particular culture or group. Accordingly the dis-
cursive and social practices to be analysed in Model 1 will most likely be those of
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Social practices
Discursive practices
Source J Target
Language Mran.slation/Recontextualisa ion a lalysis Xanguage
Text ^ Text
Figure 1. Apply the analysis to the context of the target language text (adapted from Fairclough
1992: 73).
the target language and culture but may in fact belong to any culture the translator
happens to identify with.
A study by Kang (2007) analysed the transformations in news stories about
North Korea in the South Korean magazine Newsweek Hankuk Pan after being
translated from its US affiliate Newsweek. Her findings showed how various ele-
ments in the SL text were transformed to construct North Korea as "relatively
more rational, legitimate and benign" than in the English version (p. 236). Kang's
work could rightly be described as "CDA" because her analysis includes not only
the texts and social practices but the discursive practices such as the editorial roles
of the "translator", "native checker" and "top checker" (p. 226) which are often dif-
ficult to access due to institutional barriers. The study takes a prospective approach
by focusing on the texts' recontextualisation in the South Korean TL context rath-
er than the SL context in the US. This makes it a good example of the framework
in Model 1.
Model 2 emphasises translation as an intertextual chain by conducting a
comparative CDA of the texts, discursive and social practices of both the SL and
TL domains (see Figure 2). This is clearly more demanding than Model 1 but it
would be necessary when analysts need to trace the motivation behind certain
linguistic choices back to the source language and culture in order to gain a proper
understanding of their intended function and discursive impact. This is often the
case with genres such as political speeches biographies.
One example of Model 2 is a study by Banhegyi (2008) which proposes an
approach to analysing translated texts that integrates text linguistics, sociocog-
nitive theory and CDA. His study compared a French speech by the former
Canadian Prime Minister Jean Chrtien against its official English translation.
Banhegyi shows how lexical choice and predicates expressing personal opinions
produced a translation that was less emotive and more focused on unity then the
French text. He concludes that these differences in the political discourse reveal
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1/ 'i,', Text 1
Text Text
Figure 2. Apply the analysis to both the source and target language contexts (adapted
from Fairclough 1992: 73)
Source
Language
Social practices Text Social practices
Translation
"A" "C"
Social practices
Discursi\ practices
Translation
"B"
Figure 3. Apply the analysis to different translation contexts of the same source text (adapted
from Fairclough 1992: 73).
the way Hitler was to be represented. Another study by Kuo and Nakamura (2005)
compared two translations of an interview with Taiwan's first lady by two ideologi-
cally opposed Taiwanese newspapers from English into Chinese. Their study illus-
trated the effectiveness of CDA tools for uncovering the ideological motivations
behind the contrasting linguistic choices and editorial transformations the two
translations were making. Chan (2007) also compared Taiwanese and mainland
Chinese translations of Hillary Clinton's memoir. Despite the Chinese publisher's
claim that theirs was a replica of the Taiwanese version, there were clear differ-
ences between the two versions, which Chan interpreted as reflecting the interests
of the PRC's ruling communist party. A final example of Model 3 by Ayyad (2012)
illustrates the efficacy of combining concepts from descriptive translation studies
and CDA. The study analysed translations of the 'Roadmap Plan' addressing the
Palestinian-Israeli conflict. This included six Arabic and four Hebrew translations
of the original English drafi by a range of stakeholders whose lexical choices, ex-
plicitation and deliberate ambiguity highlighted crucial differences in the ideo-
logical framing of the conflict.
It is important to stress that the application of any of the proposed models in
practice should allow for different permutations and extensions because the three
suggested are by no means exhaustive. The intertextual chain in Model 2 for ex-
ample may well extend into other languages and contexts depending on the avail-
able data and questions the analyst seeks to answer. The discourse boxes in dotted
lines in Figure 2 signify this potential extension of the intertextual chain. Valden
(2007) provides an example of such an analysis across three different contexts. He
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analysed lexical choices made in prominent Spanish news websites reporting the
2004 Madrid bombings by comparing them to nine American and British news
websites including CNN and BBC News, which were then compared to their re-
spective Spanish versions, BBC Mundo and CNN Espaol. These Spanish versions
consistently used the term separatist in reference to the ETA (Basque organisa-
tion) even when quoting Spanish officials who used the term terrorist. Valden
argues that text producers were "altering a communicative and informative event
to make it conform to their own political stance" (p. 115). The study, incidentally,
provides another fllustration of the importance of TS tools for contrastive CDA.
Using Baker's (1992:21-26) non-equivalence criteria, Valden was able to sub-
stantiate his claim that the problematic lexical choices were not actually the result
of linguistic, pragmatic or cultural constraints between the SL and TL (something
an ill-equipped critical discourse analyst might have taken for granted).
Some studies have found evidence that seems to downplay ideological con-
siderations when it comes to transformations of TL texts. A study that approxi-
mates Model 3 by Munday (2007) for example analysed political speeches by Latin
American leaders (Castro, Marcos and Chavez), their official translations and
translation used in the US press. He concluded that ideologies typically associ-
ated with certain governments or groups were not actually a good predictor of the
lexical choices made and argues that a translator's individual experience with lexi-
cal priming (Hoey 2005) was a more likely explanation for those choices (p. 213).
Similarly, Al-Mohannadi (2006) conducted a comparative analysis of the BBC and
CNN's translations of Osama bin Laden's first statement following the 9/11 at-
tacks. The latter's TL text displayed significant omissions and changes that could
be interpret as ideological intervention, but the types of linguistic errors made led
Al-Mohannadi to conclude that the transformations were more likely to be due
to a combination of time pressure and "linguistic incompetence" (p. 540). Non-
systematic applications of explicitation and implicitation strategies (see Section 2)
by Finish translation students' also led Puurtinen (2003) to conclude that their
apparent manipulation of the source text was primarily the result of inadequate
knowledge of the source culture rather than any particular world view. Using
think-aloud protocols during translation. Oik (2002) also found that degree-level
students seemed unaware of the prejudicial discourse communicated by some
of their lexical choices. These findings, however, merely indicate that constraints
other than ideology, such as language and lack of knowledge, must also be con-
sidered. Indeed it seems naive to expect a one-to-one correspondence between,
say, passivisation and a particular political agenda (regardless of whether it exists)
without corroborating evidence from the textual and sociopolitical contexts. This
is precisely the type of evidence CDA aims to provide.
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The following mini-case study will start with a brief description of the discursive
practices involved in the production of the biographical news stories to be ana-
lysed. Relevant social practices will be considered as they arise in the texts.
In 2005 the BBC News posted an article on its website consisting of stories by sev-
en Saudi women ages 17-27. All were students at a private college in Saudi Arabia
who had partaken in a workshop by the BBC World Service Trust in conjunction
with BBC Arabic and UNICEF. The project had already conducted similar work-
shops in Egypt, Syria and Yemen. The theme for the workshop was "Where I Am
Now and Where I Want to Be by 2015". The women produced posters with pictures
and artwork telling their stories and aspirations. Then each one gave a short talk
describing her poster. These talks were then transcribed from spoken Saudi Local
Arabic (SLA) into written Modern Standard Arabic (MSA).' The stories were first
published on the BBC Arabic website with pictures of each of the seven women
and links to their stories in MSA as well as an audio file of each woman giving
her autobiographical talk in SLA. The MSA texts were eventually translated into
English and posted on the English BBC News website. Based on this information,
we can say that the discursive practices associated with the production of these
texts most closely reflect those in Model 2 as shown in Figure 4.
Two aspects to consider in the production of these stories are who the authors
and intended audiences might be. Goffman (1981:44) provides helpful distinc-
tions regarding the different roles of text producers. The animator handwrites,
types or reads the text; the author phrases its language; and the principal is the
person represented by the text. In this case, the women start off by assuming all
three roles. They probably knew that their audio files and images were going to be
Figure 4. The intertextual/translational chain in the BBC News stories (Model 2) adapted
from Fairclough 1992: 73
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published on the BBC Arabic website. This meant instant online exposure to mil-
lions of Internet users across the Arab speaking world mostly educated young
and middle-aged readers. The rarity of Saudi women appearing in any Western^
news medium, not to mention audiovisually, must have been something the wom-
en were aware of It seems clear from the ambiance in the audio recordings and
the intimate style of the talk that there were no large audiences present. Although
presentations are normally given in MSA, all seven women seemed comfortable
using SLA throughout their talks with only occasional code-switches to MSA. It
is unclear, however, whether these stories were originally meant for publication in
BBC's English News website. An article in the Arab News newspaper covering the
workshop suggests that the women may not have had Western readers on their
mind when they gave these talks (Akeel 2005). The intertextual chain involved in
producing the women's stories from spoken SLA into written MSA and then into
English is illustrated in Figure 5. The chain involved three stages or textual trans-
formations: transcription, translation into MSA and translation into English. Stage
1 indicates the point where the women's roles as principles became distinct from
the animators and authors (translators) who would take over their representation
to both Arabic and English speaking audiences.
The following sections will discuss these transformations in detail. The story
of "Samia" will be the focus of the analysis because it presents some compelling
examples of those transformations but brief examples from the other stories will
be mentioned as well. In order to analyse and compare the content of Samia's talk
(about 6 minutes) with the MSA text, I transcribed the talk in its original SLA
form. For the benefit of readers unfamiliar with Arabic, I then retranslated that
transcription into English.^
Samia's talk (897 words) is largely organised around her poster which displays the
most important aspects ofher life. A primary discourse Samia consistently draws
on is religion. She does this explicitly by mentioning that her religion takes prior-
ity over everything else. Her mother is the second most important thing but the
reasoning behind that is also partiaOy religious as she quotes a hadith (saying by
Prophet Muhammad) about the status of mothers in Islam. The third most impor-
tant thing, marriage, is also explained by paraphrasing a hadith regarding the im-
portance of marriage in Islam. Religious discourse is also used to explain Samia's
positive outlook on being adopted: "Allah has taken from me but he has given me
a good family". Even in the context of discussing the possibility of studying abroad,
she again refers to religion as "the first thing" she uses for guidance.
To gain a better understanding of Samia's religious discourse it is necessary to
consider the social practices within which the SLA talk is embedded as suggested
in Model 2 (Figure 4). For example, a survey conducted by BBC Arabic in Egypt
asked 500 young men and women about their motivations for wanting to get mar-
ried. The most common answer (35%) among both sexes was "completing half
my religion" (BBC Arabic 2006). This intertextuality of religion and social affairs
in the respondents' answers provides an indication of the extent to which Islamic
discourse often permeates all aspects of Muslims' personal and social lives, not to
mention the significance of Samia's reference to that particular hadith regarding
marriage. Social practices specific to the Saudi culture add further complexity to
this intertextuality. Samia's very appearance with her image on the BBC website is
problematic for some Saudis who view it as a breach with Islamic tradition (many
of the readers' comments reflected that concern). Her awareness of this may be
evidenced by her affirmation of the centrality of religion in her life right from
the outset. Another function of the religious discourse may therefore have been
to pre-empt any accusations of betraying her Islamic modesty or "selling out" to
Western standards of liberation by appearing on the website. This seems to fit a
pattern of constructing herself as a Muslim woman that is both independent and
religious, a discursive combination that may break with prevailing public nar-
ratives of Muslim women both at home and abroad. Hence the final sections of
Samia's talk draw on the discourse of women's rights. She talks about the impor-
tance of gaining confidence, family support and society's awareness in improving
women's participation in society.
It is not certain whether BBC Arabic initially transcribed the talk into SLA and
then translated it into MSA (hence the question mark under Stage 1 in Figure 5).
The MSA narrative (629 words) is expressed in the first person but the text on
the webpage is accompanied by an audio link to the talk which enables readers to
listen to Samia in her own words. Some omissions appear to be a matter of style.
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which is to be expected considering the news genre formality required by the BBC,
perhaps even more so in MSA. Other changes are organisational. For example,
the author moves a section about Samia's nanny to follow a section about her step
sisters and brother, possibly because the author deemed it "inappropriate" to men-
tion the nanny before the siblings. This repositioning causes lack of cohesion in
the MSA text because it now appears as an opening sentence in an unrelated sec-
tion about studying abroad. It also meddles with the thematic prominence of the
nanny in Samia's life.
Another problematic transformation is the substitution highlighted by the un-
derlined phrases in the example (1):
(1) The third thing is marriage because u^j ^ cOoSi uls .JJI j diiJ ji^^ji ^ ji
according to religion it is like com- (original SLA)
pleting half your religion.
(my retranslation)
The third thing is marriage because
it's important for completing half jjjji. us cn-^\ LO JUS>I ^^ i) jij^ji ^ . ^ JBJ
your religion as they say.
(my retranslation) (MSA translation in BBC Arabic)
Here again, the analyst needs to step outside the text to consider the social practic-
es surrounding the MSA translation. To a Muslim audience, the ability to discern
a prophetic saying from "ordinary" discourse speaks to the person's knowledge
of their faith, especially when the hadith happens to be very well known (as ex-
plained in 4.2). By replacing the phrase "according to religion" with "as they say",
the author unwittingly constructs the principal as someone who is ignorant of her
own religion despite claiming its importance in her life. This misrepresentation re-
sults from the author/translator's domestication of a particular reference through
dereligiousisation, that is, the substitution of religious discourse with non-religious
or "secular" discourse despite the fact that MSA's linguistic and cultural resources
can readily accommodate religious meanings without compromising news genre
conventions. An acceptable alternative might have been:
(2) The third thing is marriage because in CJiij .^ji CH-^I ^-
Islam it equates to completing half of one's
religion,
(my retranslation) (my translation of the SLA into MSA)
Despite some organisational changes and the example just mentioned, the MSA
translation of Samia's talk generally succeeds in representing her the same way she
constructs herself in the SLA talk: religious, family oriented, independent minded.
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The main page starts with the subheading, "In the conservative Kingdom of Saudi
Arabia, women often struggle to get their voices heard". This frames the stories that
follow in a rather negative light despite the general optimism expressed in most of
what the seven women had to say. Samia's biographical narrative (229 words) is ex-
pressed in the first person and positioned between enlarged quotation marks giving
the false impression of it being an actual quote. The webpage provides no indication
of it being a translation from Arabic and no reference to the original on the BBC
Arabic website. Readers are basically led to believe that the author and principal
are the same person having none of the insights presented in the previous sections.
A comparative analysis between the original SLA text and the English transla-
tion reveals substantial omissions by the translator. In mentioning the importance
of her mother for example, the aforementioned hadith about the status of mothers
in Islam is omitted as is the one about marriage. The part about consulting reli-
gion when studying abroad is deleted as well. Aside from eliding Samia's religious
identity, these exclusions omit the rationale behind some of the points she makes
which results in reasoning gaps. The author employs domestication strategies to
fill such gaps by plugging in alternative reasoning as illustrated in example (3):
Marriage is the final part. Being with someone committed, with love and
comfort. (BBC News)
The dereligiousisation of the text imposes language that may sound "normal" to
Western readers but fails to reflect Samia's ideas. Manipulation theorists such as
Lefevere (1992) might explain such transformations as the result of the constraints
a writer/translator faces when identifying with a particular Universe of Discourse
(see Section 2). He cites similar examples in his analysis of Anne Frank's re-edit-
ing of her 1944 diary prior to its publication. In one example the description of her
"pose" in the company of a boy she admired is rewritten prompting Lefevere to
make the following observation:
The "edited" pose is much more in keeping with what Anne must have seen in the
movie magazines she so avidly read. It is a very close approximation of the pose
her culture expects the young heroine (in the theatre orfilmversion of The Life of
Anne Frank, for instance) to assume. It is a Universe-of-Discourse element (one
might even say clich) consciously inserted into the text. (1992:60)
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Similarly, the BBC translator chose to insert "commitment", "love" and "comfort"
which are rather clichd terms one might find in Western personal ads (no such
meanings could be found in the original). The intended function behind this do-
mestication strategy might have been to make Samia's talk more "palatable" to a
Westernised Universe of Discourse even though it omits a significant part of her
identity and perhaps even constructs her as being somewhat superficial.
Example (4) shows how the translator omits most of the information about
Samia's brother "summarising" it as follows:
(4) And my brother like- Allah be praised- despite being busy with his life but
whatever happens he's always there for me and if I need something he's
always offering his help. But the most important thing is that a brother is
proud of his sister and that- Allah be praised- is what happens.
(my retranslation)
[My brother] protects and takes care of us.
(BBC News)
The SL text contains nothing about "protection" or being "taken care of" by her
brother. The translator's choice of words seems to construct her the same way
Muslim women are often represented in some Western media: helpless, passive
and completely dependent on men (Bari et al. 1990 cited in Reisigl and Wodak,
2001:55, Hart Dyke & James 2009:24, Jafri 1998:12, Richardson 2004:90). This
is despite the fact that Samia had much to say on issues related to Saudi women
such as the need to be more pro-active and to convince themselves about their
abilities before they could convince others. This and other insightful aspects of
Samia's identity were deemed less important in the process of selective appropria-
tion which seemed to err on the side of what was "familiar". The resulting narrative
is one that appears to represent Samia in a positive light but actually perpetuates
stereotypes of Muslim women that have no basis in the SL text.
I will conclude this section with brief examples of ideational additions from
two of the other women's autobiographical stories. The first is by "Abeer" who, in
the context of her future plans, mentions she would like to open a coffee shop and
boutique. Compare the passages in (5):
Rather than communicate that Fadya's parents are actually progressive, not to
mention the omission ofher mother's role, the BBC's translation transforms the
meaning to the opposite: that her father would only treat her equally if she were a
boy. Ironically, following the story, a Western reader commented, "Interesting that
Fadya says about her dad [...] Too bad her father can't simply treat her equally as
a young woman". Once again, the distorted translation feeds into prevailing preju-
dices, this time about Muslim men being patriarchal and sexist. As a consequence,
Fadya's father becomes vilified and the object of readers' criticism irrespective of
what she actually said.
5. Concluding remarks
Before concluding this paper, I will briefly make some remarks on what I perceive
to be an interdisciplinary gap between CDA and TS in the context of globalisa-
tion. In the introduction of her co-edited book. Globalization, political violence
and translation, Bielsa (2009) observes:
The important role played by translation in the production and circulation of
global information flows has been fundamentally neglected, and this has led to
the assumption that information can circulate unaltered across different linguistic
communities and cultures (p. 14).
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facets of translation as (1) re-writing, (2) constituting an intertextual chain and (3)
producing multiple versions. In addition to their potential as procedural templates
for future CDA studies of translations, the models have proved helpful in classify-
ing past research despite variations in the analytical focus.
The final part of this paper presented a mini-case study of BBC News transla-
tions to demonstrate the application of the second methodological model. This
entailed an analysis of the texts and, crucially, the discursive and social practices
within which they were embedded at different stages in an intertextual chain. The
discussion of these practices has hopefully illustrated some of the benefits of CDA
when it comes to informing the interpretation of the choices translators make as
well as their potential impact on readers. It is not every day that Saudi women ap-
pear in a major Western news medium such as the BBC. It was a rare opportunity
to get an impression of these women in their own words but it was largely lost in
domestication and selective appropriation. Some transformations are obviously
unavoidable in the process of translation but the ones documented in this study
cannot be dismissed as the result of constraints imposed by language, culture or
the news genre. A foreignisation strategy might have preserved central themes
such as religion instead of replacing them with secular alternatives. As Schaffner
(2004:135) points out, foreignisation's respect for "otherness" makes it compat-
ible with CDA's agenda of engaging with marginalised groups and preventing the
perpetuation of prejudice.
The BBC data was a good example of selective appropriation which sometimes
went beyond that to include content that was basically invented. Such translation
practices are well documented in the representation of "enemy" cultures (Baker
2006:75), but the current findings suggest that they can also extend to the repre-
sentation of "Other" cultures in general. Heavy selectivity in the BBC translation
unfortunately left only a few opportunities to illustrate the lexical and syntactic
tools of CDA and TS. That type of analysis would have required more parallelism
between the source and target texts but the omissions were often too substantial to
make meaningful comparisons about linguistic aspects such as transitivity or lexi-
cal choice. Instead, the analysis focused on equivalence in ideational content and
its potential impact at the levels of discourse and society.
Proponents of functionalism, descriptive approaches and manipulation theo-
rists have argued that the notion of equivalence is Utopian and unhelpful for un-
derstanding the processes of translation. This may be true in literary translation
where the process is better viewed as one of "rewriting" rather than linguistic
transfer (Lefevere 1992). News reporting and autobiographies, however, are genres
where translators should maintain a stricter correspondence between ideational
content in the original and the target texts (Honey 2006:18). Substantiating crit-
ical claims about manipulation in any TL text also necessitates some notion of
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Notes
1. Modern Standard Arabic (MSA) is used in most forms of writing, speeches, sermons, lectures,
television and radio. Local Arabic is used in daily social interactions, commercial transactions
and informal conversations among family, friends and colleagues. MSA is fairly standardised
across all Arab countries making it comprehensible to most Arabs but local varieties such as
Saudi Local Arabic (SLA) can differ considerably in terms of lexicon, syntax and phonology.
Accordingly I refer to the conversion of the SLA text into MSA as a form of translation.
2. The vagueness of the term "West" depending on the context makes it rather problematic. It
may also feed into a false dichotomy between "Islam and the West" since many citizens in the
"West" are Muslims. For want of a better term, I use "West" to refer to the cultural heritage of
Europe and North America which is mostly liberal democratic, nominally Judeo-Christian and
secular.
3. The strategy adopted in my retranslation was to convey the SL text as literally as possible
which sometimes comes at the expense of English conventions but has the advantage of main-
taining the lexical integrity of the original. The strategy is similar to the one Baker (1992:8)
adopts in what she calls "back-translation" except that she uses it to refer to "translating the
target text back into the source language [usually English[" in order to make the analysis com-
prehensible to readers unfamiliar with the TL. To maintain reliability, my transcription and
retranslation were proofread by two Saudi postgraduate students in applied linguistics.
4. Even this explanation is questionable since the word "husband" in Egyptian Arabic is more
commonly pronounced with the consonants reversed as gozi [gDzI] rather than zogi [zagl].
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