2.3 Levels of Formality
2.3 Levels of Formality
It is not possible to divide English styles nearly into formal and informal compartments. The
relationship is more like a continuum with two extremes, as on this diagrams:
very very
informal formal
For convenience, the continuum of formality can be cut up into various compartments in order to
grade various texts and styles:
A large number of factors (relating to grammar, vocabulary, style and punctuation) contribute
towards the ‘tone’ of a piece of writing. Some of the more important factors are listed (and
contrasted) below:
Formality and informality are complex matters, but for general purposes the following scale of
examples may be useful:
Below are two sets containing five sentences each. The sentences are not, however, arranged in any
order of formality. In front of each sentence is a set of empty boxes in which a number (from 1 to 5)
can be written, indicating the proper order of formality as shown in the above example. Now
organize the sets. The first one is partly done for you as a guide.
a. She told them later that she had not known about it while it was happening.
Her later verbal report indicated that at the time she was completely unaware
of what was happening
I didn’t know about it while it was happening,’ she told them later.
1
She informed them later verbally that she had not known about the event while
it was taking place.
They were informed in her subsequent verbal report that she had had no
knowledge whatever of the event at the time of its occurrence.
b. He asked whether she could come and pick the stuff up at his place.
He wondered if it was possible for her to come and collect the material at his
house.
‘Can you come and pick up the stuff at my place?’ he asked her.
His request was that, if possible, she should collect the material at his place of
residence.
She was asked if there was a possibility that she might collect the material at
his house.