Rita Didi

Version 1.0 9th November 2019.

by Vineet Nanavati
nanavativineet@gmail.com
 Fade in :
1. INT - Day, Corporate Office Canteen

The focus is on a woman’s moving lips which has a small birthmark

on the upper right.

Camera zooms out and the moving lips slowly turn into a smile and
then to full fledged laughter exposing the face of a beautiful
young girl.

Her friends around her are laughing too as Rita has just cracked a
joke. She looks at Ishaan as if asking for validation. Ishaan
smiles and gives a soft nod. She smiles back.

Match Cut To :

2. INT - Day, Corporate Office Lift

Rita and Ishaan are in a lift. The lift door opens and Ishaan’s
boss enters.

Ishaan : Good Afternoon, Sir!

Boss : Good Afternoon Ishaan. Client meeting ke like ready ho aap?
Ishaan : Haanji Sir, main aapko presentation kab dikha sakta hu?
Boss : Mujhe mail kardo, main dekh lunga.

Elevator door open, Boss nods to Ishaan and leaves the elevator.

Rita : <mischievous eyes> Good job Star Employee <and slaps his
butt>
Ishaan : <startled and slightly embarrassed > Ritaaaaaaa…. Tum bhi
na.

The elevator door opens. Both leave holding hands.

 Cut To :

3. Blank Screen

Title : Rita Didi

Cut To :

4. EXT - Day, Temple Steps

Rita in Salwar Kameez with a jhola is climbing down the temple

stairs with a Tilak on her forehead and a smile on her face.
She sits on the lower stairs and is putting on her sandals.

A homeless boy around 7 years old comes and stands in front of her
and looks at her while she is putting on her sandals. Rita stares
back. She does an eyebrow raise as if playfully asking what he
wants.

Boy : Rita Didi, chocolate chahiye.

Rita : Main kya du aapko chocolate?
Boy : Kyunki Didi class test mein mujhe 4th rank aaya.
Rita : Toh?
Boy : <a little upset, a little angry> Aisa mat kart Didi, aapne
vaada kiya tha.
Rita : <fake serious expression> Mujhe toh vaisa kucch yaad nahi
hai.
Boy : Thik hai Didi. <Upset. Turns around to leave.>
Rita : <Pulls a big chocolate bar from her jhola.> Ye lo Mukul.

Mukul’s eyes widen, he grabs the bar of chocolate, gives Rita a

small peck on the cheek, turns around and runs away.

Ishaan is shown standing nearby watching everything.

Ishaan : <smiles> Aur mera chocolate?

Rita : Nahhh. It’s only for people who make me happy.
Ishaan : Accha?
Rita : Haanji, aap mujhe khush karo toh aapko bhi chocolate
milegi.

Ishaan leans in and kisses her. A passionate kiss. After the kiss,
Rita puts a chocolate in his shirt pocket and hugs her tight.
Ishaan hugs her back.

Cut To :

5. INT - Day, Office

Sharan is Ishaan’s new junior. Sharan and Ishaan are sitting

together. Rita is sitting opposite them. Rita and Ishaan greet him
and welcome him to the company.

Rita : I shall be right back.

Rita gets up to use the washroom.

Sharan : Bhai Ishaan, kya maal hai yaar.

Ishaan : Pata hai mereko. Raatko thakti bhi nahi hai. Thaka deti
hai poora. Abhi tak mera sujha hua hai.

Sharan and Ishaan both smirk. Rita comes back.

Rita : Hey boys, what are you laughing about?

Ishaan : Kucch nahi Rita. Sharan ek Biswa ka video dikha raha tha.
Rita : Accha, much bhi link bhej dena. <sits down and begins
working on her computer>

Sharan and Ishaan both smile at each other. Sharan winks.

Cut To :

6. EXT - Day, Temple Steps

Rita, Ishaan, Mukul and Mukul’s Elder Brother(around 17 years old)

are paying carrom. Rita and Ishaan are one team. Mukul and Mayank
are another. Mukul wins the match.

Mukul : Kya Didi, aapko firse hara diya.

Rita : Beta, maine aapko jitne diya. Warna mujhe koi hara nahi
sakta.
Mayank : <smiles> Mukul, aise baat nahi karte Didi se.
Mukul : Hamaare mein Chalta hai. Didi meri best friend hai. <High
fives Rita>.
Ishaan : <smiles> Thoda carrom bhi sikha do apni best friend ko.
Unki wajah se main saatvi game haar gaya.
Rita : <Looks at Ishaan> Accha beta, simple home shot khela jaata
nahi Sir se aur much blame kar rahe hai.
Ishaan : Madam, woh toh bass…..
Rita : Haan ab koi bahaana nikaalenge. Main nahi hoti toh kya hota
inka. <puts an expression of being tired>.
Ishaan : <smiles> Sachme…. Aap nahi hoti toh kya hota mera.
Rita : <Blushes and looks down> Ishaaaaaaan!!!
 Match Cut To :
7. INT - Evening, Bed

Ishaan and Rita are having sex. Rita is having an orgasm.

Rita : Ishaaaaaan!!! <making orgasmic sounds>

After sex, she stays still. SMiles at IShaan and gets up to leave.
Ishaan lights a cigarette.
Rita : Ishaan, shaadi ke baare mein kya socha hai.
Ishaan : Rita, bass agle mahine mere parents aa rahe hai Kolhapur
se tabhi milwaata hu. Tabhi hi shaadi ki baat karenge.
Rita : Accha. Main unse milne ke liye ready hu.
Ishaan : I am sure they will love you.

Rita smiles and leaves. Ishaan gets up from his bed and turns on
the monitor screen that was facing the bed. It’s a live video chat
with 4 people. One of them is Sharan.

Chats :
Sharan : Great job Bhai, majja aa gaya.
Ishaan : THanks <wink smiley>
Nimish : Masst maal hai yaar. Kitne time se chal raha hai?
Ishaan : EK saal se.
Sharan : Bhai mere, hamaara number kab aayega?
Ishaan : Jab tum chaaho <laugh smiley>
Sharan : Agle weekend?
Ishaan : Sure? Pehle wala plan?
Sharan : Yes.

Ishaan smirks and turns off the laptop.

 Cut To :

8. EXT - Evening, Temple Stairs

Ishaan is waiting as Rita is walking down the stairs. She waves at

him excitedly, he waves back. She puts on her sandals hurriedly.
They hug.

Ishaan : So aaj bhagwaan se kya maanga?

Rita : Main kucch maangne nahi aati hu, sirf thank you bolne aati
hu. Aaj maine thank you bola tumse milaane ke liye. I can’t wait
to spend the rest of my life with you.
Ishaan : Sheesh! Tumse shaadi karnewala koi psycho hi hoga?
Rita : Tum bhi toh ek psycho hi ho lekin tum mere psycho ho.

Ishaan smiles. Rita smiles. They kiss.

Ishaan : Aaj main tumhe ek surprise dena chaahta hu.

Rita : <smiles, thinking he will be proposing tonight.> Please
make sure it’s good.
Ishaan : Trust me, it will change your life forever.

He grabs her by the waist and leads her to a nearby building.

 Cut To :

9. INT - Evening, Foyer, Door of an apartment.

Ishaan is hugging Rita from behind. He rings the doorbell. A

smiling Sharan opens the door.

Rita : Oh hi Sharan, tum bhi yahaan pe ho. Now I am really

excited.
Sharan : You have no idea what’s going to happen to you.
Rita : I am really looking forward.

Ishaan grabs her hard from one hand and pulls out a pistol and
puts it to Rita’s head as they enter the apartment. Sharan is
laughing and also the third friend (age : 55-60) with them. Look
of shock and fear on Rita’s face as she tries to shout but words
don’t come out.

Ishaan : Welcome to your gangrape Rita.

Rita : Ishaan, please aisa mat karo. Maine tumse saccha pyaar kiya
hai. Please aisa mat karo.
Ishaan : Mujhse saccha pyaar kiya hai ab hum sabse karo.

Rita shouts and yells and ultimately gives up. Rita is unable to
move and resigns to her fate. Sharan moves forward and grabs her
dupatta and throws it to the side. He removes a knife and starts
cutting her kameez from the sleeves.

Tears run down Rita’s face.

Sharan : <smiles> Jitni bhi ladkiyaan aai hai unme se tum sabse
hot ho.
Rita : Please Sharan mujhe jaane do. Thoda toh daro bhagwaan se.

Sharan, Ishaan and the third guy start laughing.

Ishaan : Sharan thoda jaldi kar ab mujhse control nahi ho raha

hai. <he kisses her neck from behind as they slowly lead her to
the bed.>

Rita is flung on the bed, with her kameez torn from one side.
Sharan and Ishaan flip a coin to decide who goes first.

Ishaan : Heads, main jaaunga. Tails, tu jaayega.

The coin shows heads.

Sharan : Kya Ishaan Bhaiya, aapko toh pehle kitne chances mile
hai, ye time mujhe jaane do please. Merese control nahi ho raha
hai.
Ishaan : Thik hai, Bhai hai tu apna.

Sharan moves towards Rita. Ishaan points the gun to Rita’s head.
Rita is cowering in the bed, slowly trying to distance herself
from the guys. The third guy comes out with a tripod and a DSLR
and begins the setup.

Rita is crying inconsolably. She is requesting, begging, pleading.

Camera pans to show lust on the three guys’ faces.

Sharan : <he leans forward and forcefully kisses her. Rita spits
on her face. Sharan slaps her.> What a bitch. <he slaps her again>

Ishaan moves forward and holds Rita’s hand. The third guy has the
camera set up and holds Rita’s legs. Rita is struggling and trying
hard to resist. In the process, Ishaan drops the pistol on the bed
and reaches to retrieve it. In one quick motion, Rita picks it up
and shoots Sharan twice on the crotch and then point blank in the
head. Sharan drops to the side.

Ishaan clearly flummoxed by the sequence of events moves to the

side.

Ishaan : Ye kya kiya tumne.

Rita : Madarchod, ab teri baari hai.
Ishaan : <pleading> Bhagwaan ke liye mujhe jaane do.

The third guy tries to come to Ishaan’s rescue but is shot in the
eye by Rita.

Ishaan : I am really Sorry Rita, please mujhe jaane do.

Rita is now face to face with Ishaan. Rita lets out a huge cry,
like a war cry. Standing in front of Ishaan she let’s out a huge
cry like that of a wounded tiger. Ishaan is scared for his life,
he is against the wall. Rita puts the gun to his head and shoots
Ishaan. Blood splattered on the wall. Ishaan goes down. His eyes
wide open. Rita starts kicking Ishaan and kicks him till she is
tired.
 Cut To :
10. EXT - Twilight, Temple Steps.

Rita is seen exiting the building, she is wearing Sharan’s jacket

over her kameez.

Mukul comes by and looks at her.

Mukul : Didi, iss baari mujhe first rank aaya hai.

Rita : <smiles faintly at him, takes out a chocolate bar and hands
it to him, brushes his hair> Well done Mukul.
Mukul : Didi, thank you <and runs off>

Close up shot of Rita’s face and camera zooms in to show her

smile.

Cut To :
FADE OUT.