Open Memo Writing Sample
Open Memo Writing Sample
Ms. Venti should state her claim in either New York or California
jurisdiction. First, this is a misappropriation of likeness in California.
Second, it is a violation of right to privacy in New York.
a blue backpack, and red/pink hair” Kirby v. Sega America Inc., 144 Cal.
App. 4th 47, 51 (2006). Ulala was wearing “an almost entirely orange outfit
which includes a midriff-exposing top bearing the numeral ‘5,’ a mini-skirt .
. . [and] knee-high platform boots . . . hot pink hair . . . [and] a jetpack”
Kirby, 144 Cal. App. 4th at 52. Furthermore, her “‘signature’ lyrical
expression,” used in one of songs and music videos is ‘ooh la la’” Kirby,
144 Cal. App. 4th at 51. The court found there were sufficient facts to show
that Kirby’s likeness was used in the video game.
N.Y. Civ. Rights Law § 50, right of privacy statute, states that “any
person whose name, portrait, picture or voice is used within this state for
advertising purposes or for the purposes of trade without the written
consent.” The elements of this statute are (1) the “picture or portrait”
element, (2) “it is used for advertising purposes and for purposes of trade”
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(3) “it was without written consent” § 50. This analysis assumes Ms. Venti
will satisfy all elements but the “picture” or “portrait” element. Furthermore,
N.Y. Civ. Rights Law § 51 states that “if picture . . . or portrait is used,” a
person may pursue legal action § 51.
high ponytail and has a headband with two pink balls that have silver beaded
accents.
Venti may choose either jurisdiction to file her claim because it will
be successful under New York and California law. Venti is easily
recognizable through her clothing and physical features.
Sincerely,
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Overall Structure
Uses an umbrella section before the CREACs
Each CREAC includes the parts of CREAC in order:
Conclusion, Rule, Explanation, Application,
Conclusion
Each CREAC fully explains the law before starting to
apply the law (e.g. use: CREEEAAAC rather than
CREAEAEAC)
Uses consistent order for roadmaps, topic sentences,
etc.
Uses accurate and consistent transitions for roadmaps,
topic sentences, etc.
Uses consistent legal terms of art throughout
Addresses only one main topic per paragraph
12 10.8 9.6 <8.4
Umbrella Section
Overall conclusion for the issue, plus clear roadmap of
conclusions on individual issues/elements
Umbrella rule states appropriate rule(s)
Umbrella rule quotes key language of rule(s)
No mention of client facts in umbrella rule (unless rule
paragraph requires assumptions/stipulations)
Accurate description of the rule(s)
Specific cites to authority for the rules
5 4.5 4 <3.5
Conclusion Paragraph for Each CREAC
Conclusions on element/issue/factor at hand
Clear roadmap of the subconclusions for that section
8 7.2 6.4 <5.6
Rule Paragraph for Each CREAC
Rule paragraph begins with and quotes the key
language of the rule
Accurate information about the rule
Rule focuses on the issue/element/factor
Rule paragraph describes general principles necessary
for reader to understand the main rule
No mention of client facts (unless rule paragraph
requires assumptions/stipulations)
Specific cites to authority for all rule sentences
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