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This letter summarizes the discharge of 81-year-old Ms. Gertrude Barlow following a right total knee replacement surgery. She lives alone and has a history of aortic valve replacement and pacemaker implantation in 2010 along with osteoarthritis since 2011. She is being discharged home with homecare assistance and her mobility has gradually improved with rehabilitation. She has been prescribed various medications and has a follow-up appointment scheduled with Dr. Chase in 2 weeks to further assess her recovery, including repeating bloodwork.

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Practice-Tests Correction: Estimated Grade C+

This letter summarizes the discharge of 81-year-old Ms. Gertrude Barlow following a right total knee replacement surgery. She lives alone and has a history of aortic valve replacement and pacemaker implantation in 2010 along with osteoarthritis since 2011. She is being discharged home with homecare assistance and her mobility has gradually improved with rehabilitation. She has been prescribed various medications and has a follow-up appointment scheduled with Dr. Chase in 2 weeks to further assess her recovery, including repeating bloodwork.

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Ticket Id: 26083

Dr. Tim Chase

Private Practice

9 Nelson Road

Twickenham

TW2 7BB.

21/03/17

Dear Dr. Chase,

Re: Ms. Gertrude Barlow, Age: 81 Years

Thank you for seeing this patient who had recently undergone a right total knee replacement surgery on Commented [S1]: underwent
25/02/17.She is being discharged home today to follow up at your private practice. Commented [S2]: and will

Ms. Barlow is a widow and lives alone. She had an aortic vulve replacement and pacemaker in 2010. Commented [S3]: valve
Moreover, she has been suffering from osteoarthritis since 2011. Therefore, she is on paracetamol and Commented [S4]: surgery
warfarin.

Approximately 25 days ago, she returned to post operative ward with good vital signs after the knee Commented [S5]: the
replacement operation. Her mobility had increased gradually. Commented [S6]: -

Two weeks ago, she was admitted to rehab for further improvement of her mobility. From the next day,
she exhibited further gradual improvement with the usage of frame, trial Stick, pool and gentle exercise. Commented [S7]: stick

Upon today’s review, she is ready for discharge with homecare assistance. Her wound has been exposed
and she can take shower with the help of a frame. Her discharge medication includes warfarin, feratab, Commented [S8]: medications
paracetamol and oxycodone. An appointment has been scheduled to rehab within 2 weeks. Commented [S9]: include
Commented [S10]: Feratab
She has been advised to consult with you after 1 week. It would be greatly appreciated if you could further
Commented [S11]: for the
investigate the patient, particularly for a repeat FBE and INR to follow up.
Commented [S12]: in

Should their be any quearies, please do not hesitate to contact me. Commented [S13]: an
Commented [S14]: there
Yours sincerely, Commented [S15]: queries

Doctor.

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Comments Although this letter presented the information in a
logical manner, several grammatical and spelling
errors were observed, which somewhat hindered
effective communication.
Estimated Grade C+
Advice 1. Be as concise as possible.
2. Focus on improving grammar skills.
3. Spelling mistakes are completely unacceptable.
4. Try to construct more linguistically coherent
sentences.
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