Mrs Han Writing Task 2 Group Assignments
Mrs Han Writing Task 2 Group Assignments
Topic 6: Many young people who leave school hold a negative attitude towards
learning. Why does this happen? What could be done?
SYNONYMS/SUBTITUTES:
young people = youngsters = teenagers = juveniles = adolescents
negative = adverse = gloomy = unfavorable = pessimistic
attitude = approach = belief = opinion = point of view = view
OUTLINE
Body 1: Causes:
- The school curriculum is usually too demanding: Attending lectures, complete a large
number of assignments and group project >> Against learning.
- Learning a lot of unnecessary subjects >> High school education might be considered a
waste of time.
Body 2: Measures:
- Make the lessons more interesting: Use videos, clips,...>> Attract learners' attention.
- Cut down on unnecessary subjects: Just provide knowledge that learners need >>
students will see the real benefits of education.
FULL WRITING:
In recent years, there are many students who hold a pessimistic attitude towards learning
after leaving school. This issue is caused by some reasons and I think it should be tackled
by some effective solutions.
Primarily, there are several reasons why youngsters who leave school dislike learning.
The first one is that the school curriculum is usually too demanding. The students'
learning program is always very heavy, therefore they might be exhausted and stressed
because of a large number of assignments and group projects. As a result, they are against
learning. Secondly, learning too many unnecessary subjects at school can make students
feel bored and do not want to study. These subjects often do not provide any advantages
for their future and students cannot apply these knowledge into earning money in their
further life. As a result, this leads to the feeling of wasting time in high school.
Luckily, some steps can be taken immediately to address these problems. Firstly,
educators should make the lessons more interesting by providing visual aids such as
videos, clips, slides, and the like. This method can successfully attract learners' attention
and school boys and girls would have more motivation to learn. Secondly, unnecessary
lessons should be cut down to reduce the pressure on students to study. Teenagers would
really see the benefits of education if they are only provided knowledge that they can
apply in their future career. Therefore, they will study more seriously.
In conclusion, adolescents tend to have negative belief towards learning after leaving
school because of some understandable reasons, and solutions should be produced soon
to tackle this issue.
WORD COUNT: 268 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/TOPIC-RELATED WORDS:
- apply sth to sth: put sth to some special use
- visual aids: items of illustrative matter, such as film, slide or model, designed to
supplement written or spoken information so that it can be understood more easily
- cut down on sth: reduce the amount of sth or of doing sth
- attract sb's attention: make sb notice sb or sth
By Luu Thi Hong Lien 10E2
Topic 7: Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and
commercial perspectives. What are the causes? And what will be effects on
society?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES:
pressure = compel = press = constrain = burden = tension
children = youngsters = the young = young generation
causes = reasons = roots
effect = result = consequence = outcome = influence
perspectives = viewpoint = outlook = terms
OUTLINE:
Causes:
+ The mounting competitiveness of the job market accompanied by parental over-
expectation>> parents expect too much from their children
+Social media with inappropriate information may harm the young’s innocent
childhood
Effects:
+Youngsters become overstressed>> take revenge on society >>commit crimes >>
affect the safety of citizen
+ The next generation: >>may become victims of the wrongdoers
>>easily affected by the elders’ behavior
>> become next committers
FULL WRITING:
With the endlessly rising demands in life, family, school and society often expect too
much from the child. While it is important to outshine in schools, social activities and
other aspects of life, those children should be shielded from pressures by struggling to
balance their lives. Reasons for this phenomenon and solutions needed to be adopted to
tackle the issues.
It is a matter of fact that children are coerced into pressures and responsibilities stems
from several reasons. The primary cause is the mounting competitiveness of the job
market accompanied by parental over-expectation. The organisation’s demand for a
qualified workforce boombard mind of parents that children have to be successful at
schools, especially the ones who are born with talents or in famous families, and results
in the trend of youngsters today taking studying as an obligation. In addition, the
appearance of social media at such a young age may dispossess the junior a carefree and
innocent childhood as they are likely to be dragged into a chaotic influx of inappropriate
information.
As a result of being under enormous pressure, children may have to suffer from a number
of detrimental psychological and physical consequences. And when they are overloaded,
they are likely to take revenge on society-the root of their whole issues. As someone is
overstressed, they might commit some social crimes such as taking drugs, racing, and the
like. Therefore, the young will have more and more wrongdoings, which can seriously
affect the safety of citizens.Moreover, the upnext generations may also be the victim of
these disadvantageous behaviors or become the next committers as they are easily
affected by elders actions and imitate them.
To conclude, children today are being pushed beyond their limits to achieve academic,
social and professional success, and this has unfathomable negative consequences.
Parents and teachers should find the hidden talent of a child, not try to make them
something they are not meant to be.
WORD COUNT: 324 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/TOPIC-RELATED WORDS:
Viable: capable of working successfully; feasible.
Coerce: persuade: (an unwilling person) to do something by using force or threats
Escalate: increase rapidly.
Competitiveness: The quality of being as good as or better than others of a
comparable nature
Deprive: deny (a person or place) the possession or use of something.
Drastic: Likely to have a strong or far-reaching effect; radical and extreme
Penetrate: succeed in forcing a way into or through (a thing)
Inaccessible: unable to be reached
Restriction: a limiting condition or measure, especially a legal one.
By Do Thao Linh 10E2
Topic 8: It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing
to study science subject. What are the causes? And what will be effects on
society?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES
A shortage of=a lack of
Old-fashioned = behind the times
Study science subjects = major in science
Students = learners
Capacity = ability
Insufficient = inadequate
Serious conditions = illnesses = life-threatening conditions = disaster health
OUTLINE
Body 1: Reasons:
- the traditional male preserve
+ not dismiss old-fashioned ideas that girls should not study science
=> an insufficient number of students feating in science
=> university of science should abolish selection procedures based on
gender
- lack of job opportunities for graduates in science majors
+ increase in unemployment rate
=> more likely to choose other fields to study such as business,
management...because of the capacity to find a job and job prospects
Body 2: Effects
- shortage of workers in scientific fields, especially trained professionals to find
solutions to some problems such as natural sources, climate change, global
warming
- lack of qualified researchers to search for cures for serious illnesses
FULL WRITING
Nowadays, it is true that there is a shortage of students opting for science subjects as their
major. While some reasons can be identified, this trend also causes unfavourable impacts
on society.
There are several reasons why science courses don’t appeal much to many young
learners. Firstly, many schools and colleges are behind the times that they still keep the
traditional male preserve. In fact, they have been so slow to dismiss old-fashioned ideas
that girls should not study science. This results in an insufficient number of students
featuring in science as it is apparently following these sexist attitudes. Hence, it is
time for university science faculties to abolish selection procedures based on gender.
Secondly, lack of job opportunities for graduates in science majors has also played an
important role. To clarify, there has been an increase in the unemployment rate in many
countries in people who major in science. As a result, students are more likely to choose
other fields to study such as business or management because of its capacity to find a job.
There will be serious effects on society if more students do not choose to study science
subjects. One result will be a shortage of workers in scientific fields, especially trained
professionals to find solutions to urgent problems, such as climate change and global
warming. They also contribute to the researches of alternative energy sources and
sustainable development of society. Another result is that a lack of qualified researchers
to search for a cure for serious conditions, for instance, the increase in infectious illnesses
like Covid-19, as more people live.
In conclusion, some causes of this problem can be identified, and the serious effects on
society must not be underestimated.
WORD COUNT: 284 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/TOPIC-RELATED WORDS
Behind the times: refer to a person who is old-fashioned and has not a certain
modern customs, beliefs, or behaviors
Dismiss old-fashioned ideas: to decide that old-fashioned ideas are not important
and not worth considering anymore
Sexist attitudes: beliefs that women should be treated unfairly because of their
gender
A traditional male preserve: to be exclusively reserved for men
To opt for: to choose to take a particular course
Selection procedures based on gender: the act of choosing someone according to
their gender
Job prospects: the chances of being successful and having more opportunities at
work
Capacity: an ability to do something
Sustainable development: economic development that is achieved without
depleting natural resources
Alternative energy sources: refer to any energy source that is an alternative to
fossil fuel
An infectious illness: an illness that spread quickly from one person to another
By Nguyen Thi Linh 10E2
Topic 9: International travel can make people prejudiced rather than broad
minded. Why people fail to benefit when they travel? What we can do to
improve their understanding of the countries they visit?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES:
international = global = universal = cosmopolitan
travel = tour = excursion
benefit = profit = advance
improve = develop
understanding = awareness = knowledge = insight
country = nation
OUTLINE
Body 1: Reasons
- The gap in cultures
+ What is consider a speciality in one nation may not hold any value for foreign visitors
>> It is a behavior of a barbarian if doing/eating these…
>> Culture shocks
- Stereotyping
+ Its source is media portrayal of certain nations, places and people
>> Negative opinions without really getting to know the local people
Body 2: Solutions
- Tour guides should tell visitors about the local values to make them respect rather than
look down on it
- Local people should have awareness about this phenomenom and some policies about
the cost over cuisine, transport, and the like should be published.
FULL WRITING
Nowadays, it is undeniable that international tourism has brought a lot of benefits.
Unfortunately, sometimes, international travel may create tension rather than
understanding between people from different cultures. In my essay, I will discuss about
the reasons why this situation is caused and suggest some solutions.
Firstly, I will delve into the causes of this situation. The most important reason why some
are opposed to international tourism is the gap in cultures. What is considered a speciality
in one nation may not hold any value for outcomers. As an illustration, in Arab countries,
women are required to wear a burka or unrevealing clothes, and western women, not
realizing the importance of being fully clad, may develop an aversion as to why women
in these countries are treated the way they are. Or Indians generally do not eat beef
because cows are considered sacred animals in Hinduism so when they come to nations
where cows are common source of meat for food requirements they would have offensive
feelings toward local citizens. As a result, it may create a cultural shock to these people.
In addition, stereotyping is another significant cause of prejudice among tourists. The
source of stereotyping is media portrayal of certain countries, places and people which is
why tourists have preconceived negative opinions about these places and people when
they arrive.
Secondly, I will suggest some solutions to deal with this problem. First of all, tourists
have to make full use of the Internet to search for information about their destination of
interest. In addition, tour guides also play a vital role in telling foreigners about the local
values to make them respect rather than look down on it. Besides, some policies about the
stable cost over cuisine, transport and burgle prevention for the security should be
published to meet all the visitors’ demands.
In conclusion, I really affirm that international tourism does have a downside to it but
many steps shoulde be addressed to lessen the negative effects.
WORD COUNT: 318 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY?TOPIC-RELATED WORDS:
tension: a feeling of fear or anger between 2 groups of people who do not trust
each other
delve into something: search in order to find a thing or information
outcomer = foreigner = stranger
unrevealing = not expose
clad = dressed (people)/covered (things)
aversion: a feeling of strong dislike or of not wishing to do sth
portrayal: the way that sb/sth is described or represented in a painting, movie,
book or other artistic work
downside = disadvantage
By Nguyen Bao Ngan 10E2
Topic 10: Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their
country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change neagative attitudes?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES
believe = admit = conclude
international = global = universal = cosmopolitan
tourism = travel
bad thing = negative point = disadvantage = downside
country = nation
attitude = perspective = point of view
OUTLINE:
1st para: Reasons
- More visitors = Increased pollution
+ Tourists throw garbage, not care for environment
+ A growing demand for transport -> Decrease the air quality at the tourist destination.
- Disease outbreak
-> Past cases of virus spread
Example: Ebola from Africa to other countries -> Death
2nd para: Solutions
- Instruct tourists not to litter
- Health inspection at airports -> Quarantine infected tourists -> Make locals feel safer
FULL WRITING:
Nowadays, travelling to destinations all over the world welcomes a growing number of
foreign visitors every year. However, many people living in these places are finding this
development particularly unpleasant. In this essay, I will examine the reasons behind this
opinion and suggest some ways to change that view towards international tourism.
Firstly, there are some main reasons why local residents often argued foreign visitors as a
cause of serious problem in their country. The arrival of foreign visitors often goes along
with an increased level of pollution. Many tourists throw rubbish into the surroundings
irresponsibly, which contributes to air, water, and soil contamination. Also, there might
be a growing demand for transport that will lead to a decrease in the air quality at the
tourist destination. To illustrate, Sam Son beach in Vietnam became full of garbarge after
the foreign tourists leave each summer. In addition, international tourism increases the
chances of spreading infectious diseases into the local community. Viruses such as Ebola
and H5N1 can become a threat to the locals if an infected traveler visits their country. An
example of this is the recent SARS-COV-2 outbreak that infected travellers carried the
virus from China to a number of other countries, causing a significant number of
casualties.
Secondly, there are a range of solutions that can be taken to improve the situation. One
measure would be that the government should continue campaigns to raise the awareness
of tourists when they pay a visit to a new land. Travellers should be encouraged to put
waste into the right place or to use public transport if possible. Besides, governments
should continue to conduct thorough health inspection at international airports and
borders. This would certainly guarantee that infected visitors should be quarantined to
halt the spread of the disease.
In conclusion, the inhospitable feeling that the local people have for international tourists
can be explained in many ways. However, in my opinion, the government’s involvement
is essential to change the negative attitude by taking the above suggestions.
WORD COUNT: 312 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/TOPIC-RELATED WORDS:
infectious: able to be passed from one person, animal, or plant to another
casualty: death by an incident
quarantine: keep a sick person in a separate place
halt: stop sth; bring sth to a stop
By Nguyen Bao Ngan 10E2
Topic 11: In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported
food rather than food produced locally.Why people buy imported food? What
could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES
- Imported – exotic – foreign.
- Locally – nearby- provinvially- sectionally.
- Encourage- boost- inspire.
OUTLINE:
Body 1: Reasons:
- People, especially youngsters want to try something new and different >> ignore
local and familiar food to buy others from other countries to enjoy new experience.
- It is believed that food produced in more developed countries have higher qualities
compared to local ones.
Body 2: Measures:
- allows business to update the process of producing food with high quality for
customers.
- offer consumers sufficient information of their products: running advertisements; make
people know about their labels in the market.
- Invest more money in food industry
FULL WRITING
Nowadays, there is a tendency of people decide to by exotic food instead of local food.
There are some factors leading to this, and method should be taken to promote people to
buy food of their home market.
Primarily, there are some reasonable causes for this trend. The first one is that people,
especially the young one want to try something new and different. To be more specific,
they often seek for products from other countries and ignore familiar food from local
areas. Therefore, they can enjoy more new experiences from overseas food.
Secondly, it is believe that all the food that produced in more developed countries such as
American or UK has higher qualities compared to local ones. For example, many people
often decide to choose imported food as a present to give the others instead of domestic
one. However, there is a large number of solutions for this problems. Firstly, it is
necessary to offer cusumers sufficient information of their products. Food companies in a
country can do this by running advertisement on the Internet or another official media. As
a result, more and more people will know about their labels in the market. Secondly, the
government should invest more money in food industry, so that business can update the
process of producing food with high quality for customers. If they can guarantee the
quality of the food, the buyer will know their brand more and thereby attract more
customers.
In conclusion, there are various reasons why people often choose exotic products.
Therefore, appopriate steps should be taken to deal with this matter.
WORD COUNT: 265 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/ TOPIC RELATED WORDS
Seek for: tìm kiếm
Run advertisements: chạy quảng cáo
Invest in: đầu tư vào
Guarantee: bảo đảm
By Luu Thi Hong Lien 10E2
Topic 12: There is a general increase in antisocial behaviors and lack of respect
for others. What are the causes and solutions?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES
a general increase
antisocial behaviors: behaviors which are verbally or physically harmful to other
people, animals or property.
lack of respect for
impairment (n) the state of having a physical or mental condition that means that
part of your body or brain does not work correctly
entice (v): persuade sb to do sth by offering them
a dysfunctional family: family which has conflict, misbehavior,... continuously
family-related issues: issues which are related to the family
lack of parental care and control = lack of parental guidance
condone sth (v) accept behaviors which are morally wrong or treat it as if it were
not serious
delinquency juvenile: crimes that are committed by teenagers
prognostic (a): connected with the process of making a judgement about how
something is likely to develop in the future
correlate (v): to show that there is a close connection between two or more facts,
figures, etc.
try = endeavor to do sth
OUTLINE
Causes:
- Due to family-related issues: live in a dysfunctional family
+ Poor parental discipline and supervision.
+ Family conflict between parents or between parents and children.
+ Family history of problem behaviour.
+ Parental involvement/attitudes condoning problem behaviour
- Due to personal factors
+ watch movies including violence and toxic thoughts => imitate their actions
behaves impulsively, thoughtlessly jeopardizing the safety of self or others
be always likely to resort to violence whenever meeting the problems.
+ be enticed by peers to engage in social issues.
eg: delinquency juvenile: shoplifting, fighting, borrowing money without
intention to pay back,...
Solutions:
- on the nuclear-family level, parents must not underestimate the significance of
their guidance for children.
If they notice any signs of an anti-social or insolent manner in children => must
provide them with negative evaluations of these signs.
parents could educate their children about social manners by instilling a pro-
social sense in them.
albeit small, could have a strong influence on children when they mature.
- enact the laws to prevent people from having antisocial behaviors and behaving
disrespectfully towards others
The public could be afraid of the punishments and try to self-improve their
behaviours.
FULL WRITING
Over the past few years, there are a large number of individuals who have antisocial
behaviors and lack of respect to others. In this essay, I will break down the causes and
suggest solutions which could be adopted to solve the problem.
Reasons for this alarming situation vary. In some cases, people may hold an anti-social
attitude or disrespect others because they live in an environment where violence and
discrimination are the norms. Specifically, a dysfunctional family in which conflict,
misbehavior, and often child neglect or abuse on the part of individual parents occur
continuously and regularly, leading other members to accommodate such actions.
Additionally, parenting practices are highly correlated with antisocial behaviours in early
childhood and are prognostic of more serious forms of antisocial behaviours in
adolescence. Secondly, the influence of social media tends to make the situation become
worse. To clarify, most teenagers are fond of the movies which have extreme violence
and sexual content wrongfully influence them who often make a lot of efforts to imitate
the same. Moreover, easy access to these contents in smartphones through the internet is
also the cause.
A number of definite actions could be taken to mitigate the problem. On the nuclear-
family level, parents must not underestimate the significance of their guidance for
children by endeavoring to build a harmonious family. If they notice any signs of an anti-
social or insolent manner in children must provide them with negative evaluations of
these signs; subsequently, parents could educate their children about social manners by
instilling a pro-social sense in them. It seems to be albeit small, but could have a strong
influence on children when they mature. The second measure is that legal regulations
should be enacted by the national government so as to prevent people from having
antisocial behaviors and behaving disrespectfully towards others. Therefore, the public
could be afraid of the punishments and try to self-improve their behaviours.
In conclusion, antisocial and disrespectful behaviours are prevalent in many societies.
Some causes and solutions to this matter have been suggested above.
WORD COUNT: 338 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/ TOPIC RELATED WORDS
antisocial behaviors: behaviors which are verbally or physically harmful to other
people, animals or property.
a harmonious family >< a dysfunctional family
parental supervision: a parenting technique that involves looking after, or
monitoring a child's activities.
parental discipline: the process of parents who use reasonable punishments on
their child to control, train and educate the child.
deviant peer/behaviour: a peer/behaviour who/which is different from what
people consider as normal and acceptable.
(to) form bonds with sb: form the relationship with sb
By: Nguyen Phuong Lam 10E2
Topic 13: In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing
more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES
Insufficient = lack of = short of = destitute
Upsurge = more and more = increase
Care = supervision = create a caring environment
Preoccupied with = busy with
Low-income = poor
Obtain = get
Minor crimes = forgivable crimes = small crimes
Guilty = bad activities = committing crimes
Children = youth = youngsters = teens = teenagers
Adults = parents
OUTLINE
Cause:
- destitution is widespread all over the world => guilty activities such as robber, swindle
implemented by teens
+ Low-income family background => commit crimes to obtain money
- the lack of care/supervision from parents
+ Adults are preoccupied with work => less likely to create a caring environment
=> offspring receive insufficient education in terms of morality and social awareness
=> juveniles’ illegal behaviours
- social media
+ immature youngster be bombarded by negative information => imitate bad
activities
Punishments
- teenagers who commit minor crimes should be ordered to participate in community
service/psychological courses at school
+ their attitudes are changing better => the length of their sentence should be
reconsidered
- those carried out unforgivable offences ought to receive harsh punishments
+ experience custodial sentences like being put into penitentiary or prison.
FULL WRITING
Nowadays, juvenile delinquency is among complicated issues that attract social concern.
There are several undoubted reasons why the rates of crimes by teenagers are increasing
and certain specific ways to control the numbers of crimes in society.
I believe that there would be three main causes of this trend. Firstly, that destitution is
widespread all over the world is a good chance for guilty activities such as robber or
swindle, which are implemented by teens. For example, youngsters who have low-
income family backgrounds are likely to be tempted to evils in order to obtain money.
Secondly, the lack of care, as well as supervision from parents, has also contributed to the
upsurge of young criminals. To be more clarified, adults in a large number of families are
invariably preoccupied with their work. They tend to be less likely to create a caring
environment for their kids. As a result, the youth’s offspring may probably suffer from
receiving insufficient education in terms of morality and social awareness for instance,
which so far has led juveniles to behave illegally. Thirdly, social media plays a large role
in this issue. Many immature youngsters nowadays are bombarded by negative sources of
information that they may imitate bad activities after being influenced by violence, drugs,
alcohol and the like.
Fortunately, there are a huge number of severe punishment that could be applied to young
criminals. The first solution would be that teenagers who commit minor crimes should be
ordered to participate in community service or psychological courses at school. If their
attitudes are changing better, the length of their sentence should be reconsidered. A
second penalty is that those who have carried out unforgivable offences ought to receive
harsh punishments regardless of their age. They have to experience custodial sentences
like being put into penitentiary or prison.
In conclusion, the reasons for youth crimes can be identified and this causes negative
impacts on individuals and society. Therefore, governments should take a firm stand on
this case for the better future of young generations.
WORD COUNT: 338 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/TOPIC-RELATED WORDS
Destitution: the state of being without money, food, a home, or possessions
Length of the sentence: the time when a person is put in prison
Custodial sentence: a judicial sentence, imposing a punishment consisting of
mandatory custody of the convict, either in prison or in some other closed
therapeutic or educational institution
Morality: principles concerning the distinction between right and wrong or good
and bad behaviour.
Supervision: an act or instance of directing, managing, or oversight
Preoccupied with sth: be busy with sth
Take a firm stand: to state your opinion and refuse to change it
Swindle: to get money dishonestly from someone by deceiving or cheating them
Penitentiary: a state or federal prison
By Nguyen Thi Linh+Tong Phuc Hoang Kim.
Topic 14: Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment
compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this
causes? What are solutions?
SYNONYMS/SUBSTITUTES
more and more = increasing number = increasingly = progressively = increasing in
quantity.
older people = older worker = old candidates
younger people = young candidates = younger worker
compete for the same jobs = fierce competitions in the job market
solutions = steps = measures = methods = ways = resolutions
problems = issues = matters = challenges = consequences
OUTLINE
Body 1: Problems:
- Problem 1: age discrimination >>older people >>difficulty in finding jobs.
- Problem 2: younger people adapt more easily to changes in work practices >>stress of
coping with these changes affects health of older workers.
Body 2: Solutions:
- Step 1: governments:
+ encourage employers>>change attitudes and prevent age discrimination among
older workers
+ provide free training on important job requirements, ensure that older workers
enhance skills through attending these courses
- Step 2: individuals: young colleagues help older ones>> adapt to changes in the
working environment>>gain confidence, improve their work performance.
FULL WRITING
The issue of fierce competitions in the job market between older people and the younger
ones has drawn much attention from the people of concern. Several consequences have
been resulted from this problem and they should be tackled by a number of effective
solutions from both individuals and the government.
The older generation has to face up to two main issues as competing with the young.
Firstly, due to age discrimination, older people often suffer from more disadvantages
when seeking the same positions as young candidates, even when they have similar
abilities and qualifications. As a result, a number of those people become unemployed,
which prevents them from supporting their lives or meeting basic human needs.
Secondly, it is a matter of fact that the young colleagues seem to be more creative and
adapt themselves to changes at the workplace more effortlessly than the older
can.Therefore, the old employees are often under detrimental pressure. This may lead to
both physical and psychological diseases, including heart disease and depression to the
old.
However, there is a wide range of available solutions which the government and
individuals should take to address these problems. The first step is that government
should encourage employers to change their attitudes and prevent age discrimination
among older workers. As a result, they would be given greater opportunities to find
suitable jobs and earn a living. In addition, governments should provide free training on
important job requirements and ensure that older workers can enhance their skills through
attending these courses. Moreover, if younger colleagues can help them to adapt to
changes in the working environment, older people will gain confidence and improve their
work performance.
In conclusion, there are various negative problems of increasing competitions between
the old and the young in the job market. Therefore, appropriate steps need to be taken to
tackle these problems, not only by the government but also by individuals.
WORD COUNT: 317 words
USEFUL CHUNKS/GLOSSARY/ TOPIC RELATED WORDS
age discrimination: phân biệt tuổi tác
earn a living: kiếm sống
fierce: strong, intensive, agressive, severe
depression: trầm cảm
adapt to: thích nghi với..
(By Do Thao Linh: paragraphs 1+2-Nguyen Thi Lan: paragraphs 3+4 )