Globalization - Critique (Peer Review)
Globalization - Critique (Peer Review)
Introduction
My critique is going to focus on the article, “Globalization: The Super Story” by Thomas
contributor to the New York Times. He works hard to give unbiased opinions on cultural,
political and economic issues. This article is among the many works published by Friedman.
(This seems irrelevant) In his introduction, the author states that he is a big believer of the Super
Story. He defines globalization as a system that cannot explain everything but can explain and
connect more things in more places on more days than anything else. He terms globalization as a
lens, a super- story. Generally, in this article, Friedman seems to be telling us that globalization
indeed is a trend which comes in replacement of the cold war. This paper is going to focus on
how far the author proved to us that indeed globalization comes as a replacement of the cold war.
Summary
In his article, Friedman says that globalization is the unstoppable integration of markets,
transport and communication systems to a level that has never been seen before. It enables
people as well as corporations to reach around the world in a way that has never been seen
before. He differentiates globalization from the cold war in three major ways. First, he says that
the overarching feature in the cold war was division whereas the over overarching feature of
globalization is integration. He says that globalization has made the world an interwoven place.
According to him, globalization is characterized by the web. Friedman points out the way power
is structured brings out the difference between globalization and the cold war. He says that in the
cold war, the system was built around nation states. According to him, the cold war was basically
a confrontation between states, states trying to balance out each other and trying to align with
each other. In contrast, he says that globalization is built around three balances, the traditional
balance of power between nation states, the balance between nation-states and global markets
and the last one as the balance between individuals and the nation states.
In the traditional balance, the author says that the U.S. is the sole superpower while the
other nations come in as subordinates to the superpower. According to him, shifting balance
between the superpower and the other nations or even between the two the other nation is key to
the stability of the system. he describes the global markets in the second power balance as having
a huge number of investors who move money around the world by only a click of the mouse. He
says the attitudes and actions of this investors have huge impacts on nation states which could go
as far as triggering the downfall of governments. In the third balance, Friedman says that
globalization has given power to people to influence both markets and nation states. It has made
it possible for people to act on a world stage directly without the mediation of their states.
This action on a global stage has individuals who are super-empowered such as Osama
bin Laden and Jody Williams. He terms the battle between Osama and the U.S. as that between a
understanding the interaction between the supermarkets, the states, and the super-empowered
individuals is key to understanding what globalization is. He says that most of the super-
Analysis
Reading through Friedman’s article, I can say that he well supported his points all
through the article. In the introduction he stated that he is a big believer of super story, he
supports this in the article at the point he introduces to us superpower nations, the supermarkets,
and the super-empowered individuals. He clearly highlighted the major differences between
globalization and the cold war. Something else that was clear to me was the explanation
surrounding the three balances of globalization. All this was done in a systematic way such that
even a small kid can follow through the article and have a glimpse of what it is about. I liked the
way he used the difference between the cold war and globalization to introduce to us the three
balance in globalization which ended up picking the rest of the article. This article was first
published in his book, Longitudes, and Attitudes. I feel that the audience was appropriate since
he is a high sort author and a foreign affairs columnist in the New York Times. This offers him a
perfect avenue for his article to reach his audience. He clearly puts it that he wants to highlight
some o the key thing differences between globalization and the cold war that he had previously
Response
In my introduction, I stated that I am going to look into whether the author satisfactorily
proved to us that globalization is a replacement of the cold war. This was well explained in the
article by the author bringing us the main differences between the cold war and globalization. He
proves to us that indeed globalization has its own rules and pressures that are and still would
affect everyone, every country, and all the companies in either a direct way or indirectly. In his
conclusion, he says “you would never understand the globalization system or the front page of a
morning paper or 9/11 unless you see each as a complex interaction between all the three actors,
the supermarkets, the states, and the super-empowered individuals.” (Friedman). Globalization
has also been referred to as a system composed of several parts that interconnect, “If a system
such as globalization is complex when it is composed of many parts that interconnect in intricate
ways then what counts is the number, nature and frequency of the interconnections, their growth
Conclusion
This article was one worth reading. Friedman well explained the concept of globalization
and I liked the fact that he tried to bring in some history by bringing in the idea of the cold war
and at the end of it he was able to clearly illustrate to us the indeed globalization is a trend to
watch. I think this is an appropriate article as he says, globalization literally affects everyone on
an individual level, on an organizational level as well as on the state level. I would say that
ignoring anything is at one's own peril. To me, it gives me a sense of being a human being in the
world.
References
Friedman, Thomas L. Longitudes and attitudes: Exploring the world after September 11. Farrar,
make the flow of your ideas a little wonky, but that can easily be worked out. In all honesty, I did
not take away the same message from this article that you did. When reading his article, I
couldn’t help but sense and underlying tone of negative feelings. He seemed to imply that
globalization has shaped the world as we know it today into what it is, whether for better or for
worse. I would argue that he believes it is for the worst, and you actually quoted a sentence that
supports that thought (I’ve underlined and highlighted this quote in green). If we are strictly
assessing whether or not you’ve substantiated your claim that the author has done what you said
he has done, I would say you’ve done an okay job. The only thing I would suggest is to make
your ideas flow a little better and support them with another quote or two. Perhaps dig a little bit
into Friedman and his politics/other literature as well, there is a lot to be said about his views on
the Middle East. He has posted a lot of content about that region of the world, and that may or