Artistic Presentation of A Creative Nonfiction Work: 4. Remarks, Criticisms, or Observations Are Forms of Comments
Artistic Presentation of A Creative Nonfiction Work: 4. Remarks, Criticisms, or Observations Are Forms of Comments
I. LEARNING SKILLS
Competencies: Write an artistic presentation summarizing, analyzing, and commenting on a chosen creative
nonfictional text representing a particular type or form.
Specific Objectives
At the end of the lesson, you are able to:
1. read closely a creative nonfiction work and come up with a summary, analysis, and comments; and
2. create an artistic presentation of the summary and analysis of a creative nonfiction work.
Artistic Presentation
of a Creative Nonfiction Work
Textual Analysis - a methodology that involves understanding language,
symbols, and/or pictures present in texts to gain information regarding how
–the literary appearance or people make sense of and communicate life and life experiences. Visual,
performance and staging of a written, or spoken messages provide cues to ways through which
creative nonfiction work communication may be understood.
Your main goal is to make a creative presentation of your selected work of a specific creative
nonfiction form. You may choose from among the various creative nonfiction works available online, in
magazines, or in books. Here are some pointers to get you started.
1. Read the work thoroughly. You may do a second or third reading of the piece if you think you are
still missing some aspects of the text worth focusing on.
2. First, focus on content. What is the work about? Then move on to “What is the writer telling you?”
3. When you are done reading for content, you can start analyzing the writer’s technique. What
creative nonfiction form was used by the writer? Why do you think the writer chose this form over
other forms? Would it have made a difference if it was a reflective essay, or a travelogue, or a
biography?
4. From technique, move on to the writer’s style. What creative storytelling techniques were used by
the writer? How did he or she hook up the reader in the beginning part of the piece? Was it sufficiently
sustained? How did the writer cap the work? Was it an effective conclusion?
5. Finally, talk about the work’s overall impression. How did the work make you feel? What do you
think was the writer’s purpose in writing the piece? Do you think the work was able to fulfil that
purpose?
III. ACTIVITIES
Practice Task 2: Read the selection and answer the questions that follow.
Urban Gardening
My mother, Tranquilin, persuaded me to plant vegetables- pechay, kangkong, tomato, bell pepper, even
cabbage- on our rooftop for there was no available place in our 40 square lot where our two-story house is
erected. I was so stubborn that I did not attend to her suggestion. I think that I could still eat my favorite
vegetables even I disobeyed her. She said that it would help me ease my boredom, to not lay on my bed,
watching my favorite movies in Netflix and to stay productive while I am robbed with my freedom to go to the
mall and eat the succulent Bunch of Lunch at my favorite pizza house in this time of pandemic.
I did not want that my loving mother be disappointed with me so I listened to her suggestion. I have with
me my garden soil, pots of different sizes, assorted seeds and seedlings. I begin to plant vegetables while I
hum my favorite song, “Stand up for love”.
I hope people would pause and think about the consequences of this CoVID scare. Is the pandemic
telling us to stop from our usual hectic schedules and care for more important things rather than spending hour
in front of the computers and rubbing elbows with faceless crowd just to be rich and famous? The pace of life
has become so wild and complicated that people have not noticed that there are other things to which money
or fame does not matter.
I pity for these people who do not notice the sprouting of a flower of a kankong or a squash. I pity them
that they will forget to appreciate the richness of the soil. I pity them that they will brush aside the joy of
strolling along the boulevard, seeing the wonders and grandeur of Mount Mayon, Mount Iriga or Mount
Bulusan. I pity them that they will forget the love of their parents, the concerns of their siblings and the value
of camaraderie.
I pray that this will not happen. I dream of someday being in a position to entice people to take a break
and relax for a hard day’s work in schools, in the market or at the office, without worrying if they’re going to get
high grades or fail in their subjects, to rake profits or not, or to be promoted or laid-off not. I would like to reach
as many people so that they have something worthwhile to work on or to stop and reflect. This may not be
easy, but I started working on it since the time my mother told me to plant trees.
It is not too late. I will be just like them. I will not fear because I plant the seeds of concern and love for
the environment. I know that I can breathe because I care.
5. If you will write about the same message but from a different perspective or angle, how will you write
it?
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Practice Task 3: Thoroughly read the following selection. Complete the table by supplying necessary responses.
Use the pointers/guide provided in the discussion in accomplishing this task.
CoVID-19 and Me
I have been to me for six months now. Though it was not my choice, I literally have stuck myself at home
and reflect. Lockdown, social distancing, hygiene, face mask and shield have been the words of the day. The
scenario was not known to me until I found out that it was and is for real. I was excited to going back to my senior
high school friends on June 2020 but it went ppffffft. August 24 was again an anticipated day to be the start of
classes but President Rodrigo Duterte stated otherwise. The opening of classes was again rescheduled on
October 5.
Concepcion Pequeña National High School will not be my home beginning October 5. There is no going
back to school for now. The place looks like a ghost town until vaccine for CoVID-19 is known or available.
Classes will be modular. I cannot see my classmate face-to-face. I will be confronted by lessons with no
teacher who will explain to me the directions, processes and intricacies of learning. Though my parents may
facilitate my learning but there is no substitute for my dear teachers who fortify my knowledge, skills and character 2
and who understand my inadequacies of not knowing the minute details of my learning.
This pandemic, the CoVID-19, has brought the new normal of teaching, of learning but I am afraid that a
student like me will maximize education although the absence of physical interaction between students and
teachers minimizes the opportunity of honing one’s talent and intelligence, of building character, of integral
development.
Though I am techie, I am still for a face-to-face encounter with truths, beliefs, philosophy and logic with my
teachers and fellow students. With them, I become learned. With them, I actualize myself as a student and as a
human being who is capable of becoming a better individual in a community of learners.
Now it’s time to summarize, analyze, and leave some comments.
Title
Summary
Technique
Writing Style
Overall Impression
IV. ASSESSMENT
2. Select a text that falls under this chosen form. You may look from online sources, newspapers,
magazines, books, and the like. Cite your source(s) in your output.
3. Read closely and come up with a summary, conduct an analysis, and provide comments. Use the
pointers presented in coming up with your analysis.
4. Write an outline of your presentation of the creative nonfiction of your choice following the format:
a. Title
b. Summary
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c. Analysis
d. General Comments
e. Recommendations
5. Employ creativity in presenting your output so that both content and appearance would be aesthetically
pleasing. For this, you may present through a booklet, brochure, portfolio, audio-visual presentation,
video, and the like.
Reference: De Guzman, Joyce T., Creative Nonfiction Quarter 2 – Module 2: Analyze and Present a Creative Nonfiction. DepEd, ROV.
Quality Assured by: ANNE E. MANCIA, Assistant Principal II for Academics, Sorsogon NHS
CLEOFE D. ARIOLA, EPS, Sorsogon City