SHS - SLM CNF - MELC4 and 5
SHS - SLM CNF - MELC4 and 5
Creative Nonfiction
Module 4
Creative Non-Fiction
Module 4
TARGET
In the previous lesson, you were provided with the different elements that a
factual / nonfictional work should have like plot, characters,
characterization, point – of – view, angle, setting and atmosphere, symbols
and symbolisms, irony, figures of speech. Dialogue, scene and other
elements that can be used in every literary convention.
This module will provide the processes of writing which leads to the making
of a draft using any of the literary conventions.
1. Engage in writing a short piece using any literary convention (in this
module Travelogue) applying the pointers in writing.
2. Employ properly the use of the nonfictional elements making it
different from the fictional elements.
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Module Process of Writing
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Figure 1 shows the different pointers when writing any specific work may
that be technical, or creative. This is called the Writing Process.
In Module 1, you have learned about writing and the different non – factual
elements that you can use when you are about to write any of the literary
conventions.
JUMPSTART
Activity 1: Let’s Go with the Process
Direction: Read the three stages that involves writing. Go over with the
process.
This becomes true when one has to write about the travels that he would
like to share with readers. As a writer, you cannot just write immediately
your ideas you must have to organize everything from the beginning until
the end of your writing
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Pre – Writing Stage is the preliminary or preparatory phase in which the
writer explores and select possible topics, subjects and themes.
During the Writing Stage setting out of an elucidation of the details and
ideas perceived to be relevant to the topic and theme of the written work.
Direction: Choose your answer from the given choices. Use a separate sheet
for your answer.
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Discover
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relevant to the topic and theme and develop
them.
When writing, you must write freely and try to find the best way to
communicate your ideas.
When putting all your generated ideas into paragraph, you should
start by presenting the text topic using a question, an appropriate
quote, or a simple description
that would lead you to the discussion. Then from text topic we have the
thesis statement wherein you are going to tell your
reader the significance of the narrative under
discussion which is usually a single sentence near
the beginning of your narrative offering a
way to understand it.
In presenting the content or the body, paragraph
should present one idea or aspect of the general
topic and begin with a topic sentence that will orient
THESIS
the reader to what follows within the paragraph.
STATEMENT
Provide as much as possible
supporting sentences by means of using
examples, explanations, facts (trivia), opinions. Short statement
Remember that in this part of the process, you usually one sentence
should not be too harsh on yourself and do not that summarizes the
focus on fine nuances in meaning at this main point or claim
point. and is developed,
Example, in a travelogue, the body should supported and
focus on what you wanted to show regarding explained in the text by
the place. Make sure that when you are means of examples and
presenting details it should be supported evidences
enough that the readers will be able to
understand it. Theme of what you are writing (https://www,dictio
should also be developed in this stage. It must nary,com/browse/t
be felt all throughout the writing process and hesis-statement)
it must not confuse the readers.
Make sure that what you reflected in your
introduction and body will be totally in toto TOPIC
reflected in the end part of your narrative, it SENTENCE
should have a different way to present
Sentence that introduces
everything. You may end it with a question or
a paragraph by
better a challenge for the readers.
presenting that one topic
that will be the focus of
Post – Writing Stage this is the phase when that paragraph
inconsistencies that you have written in the
draft is being carefully checked and corrected (academicanswers.w
in terms of its content and mechanics. aldenu.edu/faq/)
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In this stage, the written text is shared with other audience, can be
another learner (peer) or a teacher. Your peer (another learner) will
read your narrative if there is a sense. Since there is a re – reading
that will happen, your peer will eliminate fluff (unnecessary or
redundant details). Not only the fluffs will be eliminated or checked,
even spellings, vocabulary grammar are critically looked by another
peer paying attention to content organization and mechanics leading
Revision is a process of going back through your whole draft there will be
adding in, taking out, moving around, and polishing certain parts of draft.
you to focus on the bigger picture of your draft (revision) and on the
finer details, making sure every word contributes precise meaning to
your writing subject.
master and strengthen the basic concepts you have learned from this
lesson.
Explore
Enrichment Activity 1: Looking at the pictures below what would be the
topic that you can derive from and can be use in writing a narrative. Use a
separate sheet for your answer.
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Figure 1 Figure 2
Figure 3 Figure 4
Figure 5 Figure 6
Assessment1: Use a separate sheet for your answer. Write the correct word
from the choices inside the box.
Text topic
Outline Supporting Sentence
1. What do you call the sentence that introduces the paragraph which
will be the focus of the writing? Topic Sentence
2. What serves as the blueprint of the writer on how a written output will
look like? Outline topic
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3. What should a writer do when he is in the drafting stage of writing?
Organize and develop ideas
4. What should be presented when generating your ideas into
paragraph?Text Topic
5. What do you call the sentence in a paragraph that provides facts,
opinions to the topic sentence? Supporting Sentence
Example: Banaue Rice Terraces a man’s love at his finest hard work.
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Figure 3: Room for cliffs, Hanging Coffins
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Deepen
At this point, prepare a table that will serve as your guide for you in writing
a narrative about the unforgettable travel that you had and at the same time
it has something to do with the changes that you have made for your life. As
much as possible there should be photos that will support all your details.
Use a separate sheet for doing this. The rubric on the next page will be used
in assessing your output.
Place Event
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Title
1. When you had the travel for the first time in that particular what did
you feel?
2. Why is it that travel is very significant to you? What were the places
you’ve visited and what have you notice from those places?
3. How did you find the place? Are there any significant moment that
happened during the time you are there? Cite in your narrative textual
evidences and photographs.
4. In what way that you can promote the place to other tourists who
wanted to see and feel also the place?
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RUBRIC FOR WRITING A TRAVELOGUE
CRITERIA BEST (5) FAIR (3) POOR (2) TOTA
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I. Content Contains Contains 1 or 2 Contains 3 or
appropriate inappropriate more
and relevant and irrelevant inappropriate
pictures/phot pictures/photo and irrelevant
os of our s of our barrio pictures/photo
barrio as a as a scenic s of our barrio
scenic spot. spot. as a scenic
spot.
II. Organization The travelogue The travelogue The travelogue
has excellent has appropriate confused the
and very and organized intended
wellorganized formatting of audience due to
formatting of information. unorganized
information. formatting of
materials and
information.
III. Creativity There is an There is an There is no
excellent admirable coordination in
arrangement of arrangement of the
arts and arts and arrangement of
designs of designs of arts and
photos/pictur photos/picture designs of
es. s. photos/picture
s.
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V. Grammar and Contains Contains 1 or Contains 3 or
Mechanics complete 2incomplete more incomplete
sentence. - sentences. - sentences. -
Appendix A
Place Event
Teacher’s Camp (Romulo Hall) Home during the Congress
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Public Market Bought some souvenirs like bulol for
friends and loved ones
Mall Spotted some views like the Baguio
cathedral and the University of
Cordillera
Burnham park Went around to see what is on the
park while devouring banana cue
for snacks
Center Park Had a half – body massage
Session Road Had a night walk a visit to bar to
have a short drinking spree
Mines View Park, Wright Park, Visited with the family during the
Bencab Museum, Diplomat Hotel, second visit
Laperal House
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Museum; and, upon the insistence of my seven – year – old brat, haunted
buildings like the Diplomat Hotel and Laperal House.
Even if I visited some of the Baguio spots more than once, I
have not grown tired of them. Every Baguio experience, to me, is always
unique and memorable.
blic Market
made lake
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MODUEL 5
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Creative Non-Fiction
Module 5
Target
Creative nonfiction can be described as a hybrid genre that pulls in
elements of fiction (literary techniques), the writer’s perspective, and
factual information. It is a concept that offers great flexibility and
freedom, while adhering to the basic tenets of nonfiction writing. In
creative nonfiction, writers can be poetic and journalistic simultaneously.
In your previous lesson, you are done with writing a draft of a short
piece using the literary conventions of genre.
This module will let you evaluate other’s drafts based on:
1. Clarity of idea
2. Appropriate choice of literary element
3. Appropriate use of the element
4. Effective combination of the idea and the chosen literary element
After going through this module, you are expected to:
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Revise the draft of a short piece using any of the literary
conventions of a genre (e.g. plot for narrative piece)
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statement and a cross (X) if you do not agree. Leave the After the Module
Study column for you will answer it in the later part of this module.
Before the After the
Module Statement Module
Study Study
1. Accuracy is the same with clarity.
2. It’s okay to make readers work through the
implications of what you’re saying.
3. The longer the sentence is, the more complex it is
to understand its meaning.
4. To make a thought simpler, provide examples to
the readers.
5. When examples are fun and topical, readers pay
more attention.
6. Writers of creative nonfiction base their stories on
real events.
7. Extensive research is needed so as not to
compromise the truthfulness of the events.
8. To emphasize critical moments, writers slow down
or speed up the pace of the story.
9. The most commonly used point of view for creative
nonfiction is second person.
10. An engaging dialogue grant characters a degree of
individuality.
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How can we
achieve clarity of
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ideas?
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Simple Sentences
You use plain phrasing.
You use fewer ideas per sentence.
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reading it. So, the longer the sentence, the more details you hold in your
head at once. That makes understanding a complex point even harder.
Don't be mean to your readers. Make it effortless to read your words.
Beware rephrasing
When authors restate a point, they point it out:
“In other words…”
“That is to say…”
“Put another way…”
These are often red flags: the point that came before needed to be rephrased
to be understood.
Instead, delete the rephrasing and reword the original statement to be
selfevident: use plain wording and use fewer ideas per sentence.
If simplification can't achieve the necessary clarity, it's time to provide
examples.
Provide examples
Providing examples is another tool for improving clarity. Examples make
abstract statements specific. Your brain best remembers things this way. A
few tips for providing examples:
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The subjects in this genre usually center on events of
personal significance to the writer. For this reason, narrative
nonfiction commonly exhibits elements of narrative reflection—
writers provide their thoughts and views on the events and
experiences that have colored their lives. Writers may also
comment on the manner in which these experiences and people
have influenced other aspects of their lives. In such cases, works
of narrative nonfiction resemble the nonfiction genres of memoir
or the personal essay because they serve as a platform for the
writer’s personal views and opinions.
c. Characterization
Similar to characters in a fiction narrative, characters in a
work of nonfiction can be dynamic and undergo meaningful
growth and change. The author may recall a memory of a person
and use personal perception to further develop the character.
The flexibility of the narrative nonfiction genre allows the writer
to fictionalize or blur certain elements of a character or event.
Because a writer doesn’t know the full and truthful motives or
thoughts of a person, this genre gives license for writers to
develop and fictionalize certain features of an actual person.
Writers may use engaging dialogue to make characters
distinct from one another and grant them a degree of
individuality. Narrative nonfiction allows the writer to develop a
particular conflict (such as character versus society) for
characters that may simplify or not precisely portray the person’s
actual life.
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d. Plot
The plot of a narrative nonfiction work may follow the
structure of a fictional novel, starting with the element of
exposition and moving on to rising action, climax, falling action,
and resolution. This narrative structure allows the writer to bring
cohesion and resolution to real-life events that may not have been
so clearly defined.
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remains until migration ceases. In the second, a gas giant can migrate
through a disk of planetismals (minute planets). This results in mean
motion resonances with the gas giant sweeping through the disk of
planetismals, causing material to be either scattered out of the system
or captured into these resonances.
b. Extra-solar planet systems can be formed in two ways: the first is
when a terrestrial mass planet forms in the inner disk, while a gas
giant forms beyond the snow line, causing the terrestrial planet to
be captured in a mean motion resonance during the inward
migration of the gas giant where it remains until migration ceases.
Alternatively, a gas giant can migrate through a disk of
planetismals, resulting in mean motion resonances with the gas
giant sweeping through the disk of planetismals, causing material
to be either scattered out of the system or captured into these
resonances.
2. a. The current upsurge in stakeholder dissatisfaction with the
outcomes of local government decision-making is at least partially a
consequence of the predilection against long term planning.
b. The current rise in stakeholder dissatisfaction with local
government decisions is at least partly due to the lack of long term
planning.
3. a. Just as we see the events of the novel through Jane’s eyes, we only
learn the story of Mr. Galvez and Berta through what Mr. Galvez tells
Jane, which Jane then tells the reader. As Berta’s voice is excluded, it
is easy to believe Mr. Galvez’ version.
b. Just as the events of the novel are shown to us through Jane’s eyes,
we only learn the story of Mr. Galvez and Berta through what Mr.
Galvez tells Jane and Jane tells the reader. As Berta’s voice is
excluded, Mr.
Galvez’ version is easily believed.
4. a. Measurement of scanner performance can be achieved through
examination of four criteria: resolution, bit-depth, dynamic range and
software.
b. Scanner performance can be measured by examining four criteria:
resolution, bit-depth, dynamic range and software.
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intended a program of mass murder. He substantiates this claim by
pointing out that Heydrich had submitted a proposal to Hitler before
the end of January; therefore, this must have been the time that the
Final Solution was concretely adopted.
1. People have different ways of learning. Some are better at making mental
pictures of new ideas. Others are more comfortable with writing lists of
things to memorize. Certain people can learn best when listening to music,
while others need silence to concentrate. Which of the following is the main
idea of the
passage?
A. Mental pictures help many to learn.
B. Some people prefer lists to making mental pictures.
C. To learn well you need to be comfortable.
D. Different individuals have different ways of acquiring information.
2. If you hold a piece of copper wire over the flame of a wooden match, heat
will be conducted by the copper wire to your fingers, and you will be forced
to drop the wire. You will, however, still be able to hold the match because
wood is a poor conductor of heat. Which of the following is implied in the
passage above? A. Copper is a good conductor of heat. B. Matches
should be made of copper.
C. Wood and copper conduct heat equally.
D. Wood is an excellent conductor of heat.
3. Cesar Chavez was an influential leader for farm workers. He fought for
their rights and better working conditions. Chavez led many strikes that
angered farm owners. Eventually he succeeded in getting increased wages
and better living situations for farm workers. The passage indicates that
Chavez changed lives by _____.
A. fighting for the rights of farm owners
B. helping to end the farm workers’ strikes
C. improving the conditions for farm workers
D. working on the farms every day
4. Many people own different pets. Dogs, cats, birds, and fish are common
household pets. Others’ pets are considered to be exotic animals. These
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include snakes, lizards, and hedgehogs. According to the passage, snakes
are_____.
A. found only in zoos C. uncommon pets
B. to be found in a household with dogs D. not allowed in people’s
homes
5. When cartoonist Charles M. Schulz was a boy in elementary school, other
boys teased him for being small and not very good at sports, and his art
teacher told him he had no talent for drawing. He had few friends and was
too shy to talk to a red-haired girl he admired. Later in life, Schulz used his
childhood experiences in his comic strip Peanuts: the strip’s main character,
the sad and lonely Charlie Brown, represents Schulz as a little boy. Peanuts
was unique at the time because it contained no adult characters. Readers
fell in love with Charlie Brown, and Peanuts eventually became one of the
most popular comic strips of all time. What is the main idea of the
passage? A. Peanuts was the world’s most widely read comic strip.
B. Schulz was a very famous cartoonist.
C. Schulz turned the pain of his youth into success as an adult.
D. The comic strip Peanuts featured children as its only
characters.
6. Before giving first aid to an accident victim, you should obtain his or her
consent. Asking for consent takes a simple question. Say to the victim, “I
know first aid, and I can help until an ambulance arrives. Is that okay?”
According to the passage, it is wrong to _____.
A. use first aid on an accident victim without medical training
B. attempt to help an accident victim without permission
C. help a victim before an ambulance arrives
D. call for an ambulance instead of helping the victim
7. Dr. Ellen Ochoa is an inventor and is also the first female Hispanic
astronaut. Her inventions include technology to help robots inspect
equipment in space to maintain safety and quality control on spacecraft.
Before retiring, she logged more than 1,000 hours in space across several
space missions.
According to the passage, Dr. Ochoa is the first _____.
A. Hispanic person to travel into space C. woman to travel into space
B. inventor to travel into space D. Hispanic woman to travel into
space
8. Dogs and cats make very different types of pets. Before deciding whether to
buy or adopt a dog or a cat, prospective owners need to carefully consider
their own lifestyles and personalities. Dogs may make more affectionate
companions, but they require more care and attention. They must be taken
out several times a day and should not be left alone for more than a few
hours. Larger dogs require significant exercise to remain fit and healthy.
Cats are usually more independent in nature and interact less with their
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owners. Also, a cat can be left on its own all day, or even for several days,
as long as it has food and clean water to drink. From this passage, a
reader can conclude
A. owning a cat requires less work than owning a dog
B. people who are away from home during the day should not own a
cat
C. people who like to play with their pets should own a cat
D. owning a cat is more responsibility than owning a dog
2. 1.If you get a present that does not interest him, then your choice of a
gift is a poor one.
2. If you select something that he can enjoy or use, he will appreciate it.
3. Whatever the occasion, you should remember what a person likes when
you buy him a present. That way you can buy an appropriate gift.
4. Whenever you buy a gift, you should always consider the interests of
the receiver.
A. 1234 B. 3241 C. 3124 D. 4321
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4. We find it harder to understand ourselves.
A. 3412 B. 1342 C. 3124 D. 2134
5.
1. Allow plenty of time to get ready so that you wouldn’t be late for your
interview.
2. Before you leave the house, check whether you have a pen or an extra
personal data sheet.
3. Dress appropriately and observe proper grooming to create a good
impression.
4. To prepare for an interview, sleep early in order to be at your best, both
physically and mentally.
A. 1324 B. 2134 C. 3421 D. 4132
Direction: Choose the best paraphrase from each set of choices. Write the
CAPITAL LETTER of your answer in a separate sheet of paper.
1. Of the 138 million acres of land that Native Americans owned in 1887, 90
million acres were taken away by whites by 1932.
A. Native Americans owned 138 million acres of land in 1887,
whereas whites had only 90M acres.
B. In 1932 alone, the white settlers took 90 million acres of land that
belonged to Native Americans.
C. By 1932, Native Americans had lost almost all of their land.
D. Native Americans owned in 1932 a little more than half of the
land they had owned in 1887.
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3. Research data suggest that girls who witnessed maternal abuse may
tolerate abuse as adults more than girls who did not.
A. Women who witnessed the abuse of their mother as teens are more
likely to become abusive adults.
B. Women who observed the abuse of their mothers when they were
young are more likely to endure abuse themselves.
C. Girls who testify about maternal abuse tolerate abuse as adults
more readily.
D. Women who were abused as children are more likely to abuse their
own children.
Deepen
Directions: Use a separate sheet of paper for your answers on this activity.
a. On the left side of the column, write five (5) to six (6) of your most
favorite quotes from people you admire. Write the author’s names below
them.
b. In the adjoining column (middle), write your interpretation of the quote
and why it appeals to you.
c. If you are feeling good about it, write down why you consider it a great
quote and write your own ideas about it that are important to you in the
last column(right).
Favorite Quotes Your Own Why It Appeals to you/
Interpretation Why do you consider it
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a great quote
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
Gauge
Direction: Read and answer carefully. Use another sheet of paper for
your answers.
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