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This letter summarizes a patient's medication regimen. The patient, Mr. Erwin Morrison, was prescribed amoxicillin for a lower respiratory infection, to be taken three times daily for 7 days. He was also prescribed Drixine for nasal blockage for a short period of time. The letter notes that the patient has not been compliant with taking Lipitor regularly. It provides instructions to follow the medication schedule and contact the doctor if any side effects occur.

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This letter summarizes a patient's medication regimen. The patient, Mr. Erwin Morrison, was prescribed amoxicillin for a lower respiratory infection, to be taken three times daily for 7 days. He was also prescribed Drixine for nasal blockage for a short period of time. The letter notes that the patient has not been compliant with taking Lipitor regularly. It provides instructions to follow the medication schedule and contact the doctor if any side effects occur.

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Ticket Id: 111593

21 January 2015

Mr. Erwin Morrison


200 Garden Rd Newtown

Dear Mr. Morrison,

I am writing this letter to inform regarding your medication regimen. You need to follow doctor’s Commented [SS1]: the
instructions which are given for your medicines.

Today, your wife came at pharmacy to collect medicines on behalf of you. Amoxicillin is an antibiotic Commented [SS2]: to the
which is prescribed for lower respiratory infection and it should be taken 500 mg three times a day for 7 Commented [SS3]: the
days approximately. There are some side effects related to this medicine such as diarrhea and white Commented [SS4]: your
coated tongue or sore and it is advised to report when they are experienced. Commented [SS5]: tract infections
Commented [SS6]: a
Drixine has been provided to treat nasal blockage and it is used for short period of time. It can cause nasal Commented [SS7]: if you experience any of these
side effects.
damage in long-term use and can reverse the medical condition. Cortisol may be prescribed if symptoms
Commented [SS8]: should be
persist. Lipitor needs to be taken regularly as your wife has reported regarding non-compliant to this
Commented [SS9]: a
medicine.
Commented [SS10]: non-compliance

I would appreciate if you follow the medicine’s instructions and adhere with your medication chart. Saline Commented [SS11]: would
nasal spray can be used instead of Drixine to relief from nasal congestion. In addition, expired medicines Commented [SS12]: to
should be discarded. If you have any questions, please call me anytime. Commented [SS13]: relieve

Yours sincerely,
Vishwa Ranjan

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Comments Although this letter presented the information in a logical manner,
several grammatical and structural errors were observed, which hindered
effective communication. Further improvements are needed.
Estimated Grade C+
Advice 1. Focus on improving grammar skills.
2. Try to construct more linguistically coherent sentences.
3. Thoroughly improve your letter to avoid obvious errors.
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