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How To Write an

IELTS Process Diagram Essay


An IELTS process diagram question can contain a wide variety of different
types of graphics. It could be a natural process such as the water cycle, a
manufacturing process or a diagram of a system.

Using these 5 steps will help you to write a high-scoring process diagram
essay:

1) Analyse the question

2) Identify the main features

3) Write an introduction

4) Write an overview

5) Write the details paragraphs

In this lesson, we’re going to work through the 5 stages step-by-step as


we answer a practice question.

Before we begin, here’s a model essay structure that you can use as a
guideline for all IELTS Academic Task 1 questions.
Ideally, your essay should have 4 paragraphs:
Paragraph 1 – Introduction

Paragraph 2 – Overview

Paragraph 3 – 1st main feature

Paragraph 4 – 2nd main feature


We now have everything we need to begin planning and writing our IELTS
process diagram essay.
Here’s our practice question:

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity


from wave power.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Generating Electricity From The Sea

Source: Official website IELTS Essentials


Step 1 – Analyse the question
The format of every Academic Task 1 question is the same, with the
instruction sentence (highlighted below) identical in every question. Here is
our practice question again.

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity


from wave power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,


and make comparisons where relevant.

Every question consists of:

• Sentence 1 – A brief description of the graphic

• Sentence 2 – The instructions

• The graphic – diagram, chart, graph, table, etc.

Sentence 2 tells you what you have to do.

You must do 3 things:

1. Select the main features.

2. Write about the main features.

3. Compare the main features.

All three tasks refer to the ‘main features’ of the graphic. You do not have to
write about everything. Just pick out 2 or 3 key features and you’ll have plenty
to write about.
Step 2 – Identify the Main Features
The graphic in IELTS process diagram questions should not be difficult to
understand. There are not usually any numbers to analyse as in other types of
question, just a diagram to interpret or, as in our practice question, two
diagrams which each show part of the process.

All you are looking for are the main features. These should be the easiest
things to spot. There will be lots of information in the graphic to help you
identify them, especially, titles, labels and captions.

Here are some useful questions to ask?

1) Is it a linear or a cyclical process?

A linear process starts and finishes at different places. It will often involve the
manufacture or creation of something, starting with the raw materials going in
at one end and the finished product coming out the other end. An example of
this can be seen in this diagram from a past IELTS process diagram question
about the manufacture of bricks.
Linear process

A cyclical process, on the other hand, is a process that goes back to the
beginning and repeats over and over again, such as the life cycle of a frog or
a butterfly.

Cyclical process

2) Where does the process start and end?


For a linear process this will usually be obvious. It may be harder to determine
for a cyclical process so it’s important that you examine the graphic carefully
to find out.

3) How many steps are there to the process?

If there are a lot, it can be helpful to number them from 1 to whatever number
the final stage is.

4) Can the process be easily broken down into stages?

In the brick-making graphic, for example, there are three stages:

a) Creating the bricks from clay

b) Manufacturing the finished product by drying and firing

c) Packaging and delivery

In the life cycle graphic above, there are also three distinct stages as the frog
passes through different stages of development – egg, juvenile, adult.

5) What are the raw materials? What is produced at the end of the
process?

These questions obviously apply only to manufacturing processes.

For other types of process, it might be more appropriate to ask the following
question.

6) What is the end result of the process?

This question is relevant for our practice IELTS process diagram question
which shows a process that creates something using a particular structure.
The end result is the production of electricity.
So, what main features stand out in our practice graphic? Here it is again.

Generating Electricity From The Sea

This graphic doesn’t contain very much detail. There are only two stages to
the process:

Stage 1: Electricity is generated as the wave flows into the structure (Diagram
A).
Stage 2: Electricity is also created as the receding wave draws air back down
the column (Diagram B).

Other diagrams are more complex and you have to go through them stage by
stage to work out what’s happening and then pick out just 2 or 3 main feature
to write about.

The key features you select will be the starting point for your essay. You will
then go on to add more detail later. However, with just 20 minutes allowed for
Task 1, and a requirement of only 150 words, you won't be able to include
many details.

We’re now ready to begin writing our essay. Here’s a reminder of the 4 part
structure we’re going to use.

Paragraph 1 – Introduction

Paragraph 2 – Overview

Paragraph 3 – 1st main feature

Paragraph 4 – 2nd main feature

Step 3 – Write an Introduction

In the introduction, you should simply paraphrase the question, that is, say the
same thing in a different way. You can do this by using synonyms and
changing the sentence structure. For example:

Question:

The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity


from wave power.
Introduction (Paragraph 1):

The two diagrams illustrate a method of creating electricity from the


force of waves using a specifically designed man-made construction.

This is all you need to do for the introduction.

Step 4 – Write an Overview (Paragraph 2)

In the second paragraph, you should give a general description of the


diagram/s or process. The detail comes later in the essay.
State the information simply using synonyms where possible. No elaborate
vocabulary or grammar structures are required, just the appropriate words and
correct verb tenses.

For example:

Overview (Paragraph 2):

The structure, consisting of a wave chamber and a tall column


containing a turbine, is erected on a steeply sloping coastal cliff or sea
wall where it is subject to the movement of the ocean waves.
Step 5 – Write the 1st Detail Paragraph

Paragraphs 3 and 4 of your IELTS process diagram essay are where


you include more detailed information. In paragraph 3, you should
explain the first key feature in more detail.
For this question, we will expand on the first stage of the process. Here it
is again:
Stage 1: Electricity is generated as the wave flows into the structure (Diagram
A).

And this is an example of what you could write:

Paragraph 3:

The first diagram shows how the incoming wave fills a large chamber
and forces the air inside this space up the column and through the
turbine. The pressure of the air rotates the turbine which generates a
current of electricity. The process does not end there for the structure is
able to continue producing power as the sea recedes as can be seen in
the second diagram.

Step 6 – Write the 2nd Detail Paragraph

For the fourth and final paragraph, you do the same thing for your remaining
key features or, for this question, the second stage of the process.

Here it is again:

Stage 2: Electricity is also created as the receding wave draws air back down
the column (Diagram B).
Here’s an example of what you could write:

Paragraph 4:

As the water now flows away from the structure, it draws air back down
the column and downwards through the turbine in the same direction as
the previous upward flow of air. The turbine continues to turn thus
generating even more electricity.

Here are the four paragraphs brought together to create our finished essay.

Finished IELTS Process Diagram Essay

This sample IELTS process diagram essay is just over the minimum word limit
so you can see that you don’t have space to include very much detail at all.
That’s why it is essential to select just a couple of main features to write
about.

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