Process Essay
Process Essay
Using these 5 steps will help you to write a high-scoring process diagram
essay:
3) Write an introduction
4) Write an overview
Before we begin, here’s a model essay structure that you can use as a
guideline for all IELTS Academic Task 1 questions.
Ideally, your essay should have 4 paragraphs:
Paragraph 1 – Introduction
Paragraph 2 – Overview
All three tasks refer to the ‘main features’ of the graphic. You do not have to
write about everything. Just pick out 2 or 3 key features and you’ll have plenty
to write about.
A linear process starts and finishes at different places. It will often involve the
manufacture or creation of something, starting with the raw materials going in
at one end and the finished product coming out the other end. An example of
this can be seen in this diagram from a past IELTS process diagram question
about the manufacture of bricks.
Linear process
A cyclical process, on the other hand, is a process that goes back to the
beginning and repeats over and over again, such as the life cycle of a frog or
a butterfly.
Cyclical process
For a linear process this will usually be obvious. It may be harder to determine
for a cyclical process so it’s important that you examine the graphic carefully
to find out.
If there are a lot, it can be helpful to number them from 1 to whatever number
the final stage is.
In the life cycle graphic above, there are also three distinct stages as the frog
passes through different stages of development – egg, juvenile, adult.
5) What are the raw materials? What is produced at the end of the
process?
For other types of process, it might be more appropriate to ask the following
question.
This question is relevant for our practice IELTS process diagram question
which shows a process that creates something using a particular structure.
The end result is the production of electricity.
So, what main features stand out in our practice graphic? Here it is again.
This graphic doesn’t contain very much detail. There are only two stages to
the process:
Stage 1: Electricity is generated as the wave flows into the structure (Diagram
A).
Stage 2: Electricity is also created as the receding wave draws air back down
the column (Diagram B).
Other diagrams are more complex and you have to go through them stage by
stage to work out what’s happening and then pick out just 2 or 3 main feature
to write about.
The key features you select will be the starting point for your essay. You will
then go on to add more detail later. However, with just 20 minutes allowed for
Task 1, and a requirement of only 150 words, you won't be able to include
many details.
We’re now ready to begin writing our essay. Here’s a reminder of the 4 part
structure we’re going to use.
Paragraph 1 – Introduction
Paragraph 2 – Overview
In the introduction, you should simply paraphrase the question, that is, say the
same thing in a different way. You can do this by using synonyms and
changing the sentence structure. For example:
Question:
For example:
Paragraph 3:
The first diagram shows how the incoming wave fills a large chamber
and forces the air inside this space up the column and through the
turbine. The pressure of the air rotates the turbine which generates a
current of electricity. The process does not end there for the structure is
able to continue producing power as the sea recedes as can be seen in
the second diagram.
For the fourth and final paragraph, you do the same thing for your remaining
key features or, for this question, the second stage of the process.
Here it is again:
Stage 2: Electricity is also created as the receding wave draws air back down
the column (Diagram B).
Paragraph 4:
As the water now flows away from the structure, it draws air back down
the column and downwards through the turbine in the same direction as
the previous upward flow of air. The turbine continues to turn thus
generating even more electricity.
Here are the four paragraphs brought together to create our finished essay.