The Passive Voice - April
The Passive Voice - April
We discussed the Active and Passive Voice with the more advanced students
and some Optimise groups (3 and 4) and some one-to-one students at York School
of English in April 2022.
In general, the active voice makes your writing stronger, more direct, and, you
guessed it, more active. The subject is something, or it does the action of the verb
in the sentence. With the passive voice, the subject is acted upon by some other
performer of the verb. (In case you weren’t paying attention, the previous two
sentences use the type of voice they describe.)
But the passive voice is not incorrect. In fact, there are times when it can come in
handy. Read on to learn how to form the active and passive voices, when using the
passive voice is a good idea, and how to avoid confusing it with similar forms.
While tense is all about time references, voice describes whether the grammatical
subject of a clause performs or receives the action of the verb. Here’s the formula
for the active voice: [subject]+[verb (performed by the subject)]+[optional object]
That last little bit—“by Chester”—is a prepositional phrase that tells you who the
performer of the action is. But even though Chester is the one doing the kicking,
he’s no longer the grammatical subject. A passive voice construction can even drop
him from the sentence entirely:
That said, there are times when the passive voice does a better job of presenting an
idea, especially in certain formal, professional, and legal discussions. Here are
three common uses of the passive voice:
2 Scientific contexts
Who places the rat into the maze? Scientists, duh. But that’s less important than the
experiment they’re conducting. Therefore, passive voice.
3 When you want to emphasize an action itself and the doer of the action is
irrelevant or distracting:
How many people can remember off the top of their heads who swears in
presidents? Clearly the occasion of swearing in the commander in chief is the thing
to emphasize here. In each of the above contexts, the action itself—or the person or
thing receiving the action—is the part that matters. That means the performer of
the action can appear in a prepositional phrase or be absent from the sentence
altogether.
The above examples show some formal uses of the passive voice, but some writers
take advantage of the shift in emphasis it provides for other reasons. Here are
moments when the passive voice is a stylistic decision that suits the author’s
writing goals.
1 Avoid getting blamed There are times when you want to get away with
something without making it crystal-clear who’s at fault. The classic example:
Who made them? Is anyone taking responsibility? What’s the solution here? One
political scientist dubbed this structure the “past exonerative” because it’s meant to
exonerate a speaker from whatever foul they may have committed. In other words,
drop the subject, get off the hook.
“[He] pressed them so cordially to dine at Barton Park every day till they were
better settled at home that, though his entreaties were carried to a point of
perseverance beyond civility, they could not give offense.” —Jane Austen, Sense
and Sensibility
“Mr. Middleton pushed his invitations beyond the point of politeness and into
pushiness, but he still meant well.”
In cases like this, the passive voice allows for more polite phrasing, even if it’s also
a little less clear.
3 Make your reader pay more attention to the something
This is like the president getting sworn in: the thing that gets the action of the verb
is more important than the people performing the action.
“That treasure lying in its bed of coral, and the corpse of the commander floating
sideways on the bridge, were evoked by historians as an emblem of the city
drowned in memories.” —Gabriel García Márquez, Love in the Time of Cholera
Here, you could invert the sentence to say “Historians evoked that treasure (and so
on).” But that would take the focus away from that oh-so-intriguing treasure and
the corpse. And since the historians are less important here, the author makes the
choice to stress the key idea of the sentence through the passive voice.
Here’s another famous example that puts the emphasis on what happens to the
subject, instead of on what the subject is doing:
“We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that
they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among
these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.” —The Declaration of
Independence, 1776
“All men” (and these days, women, too) get boosted to the front of the phrase
because their equality and rights are the focus. It makes sense that a statement
declaring independence would focus on the people who get that independence,
after all.
The above examples lean toward the literary side of things, but don’t forget that
there are times when the passive voice is useful and necessary in daily life. In each
of the sentences below, the passive voice is natural and clear. Rewriting these
sentences in the active voice renders them sterile, awkward, or syntactically
contorted. Passive: Bob Dylan was injured in a motorcycle accident. Active: A
motorcycle accident injured Bob Dylan. Passive: Elvis is rumored to be
alive. Active: People rumor Elvis to be alive. Passive: Don’t be
fooled! Active: Don’t allow anything to fool you!
Sometimes what looks like passive voice isn’t passive voice at all. If you’re not
careful, even the most careful eye can mistake the following sentences for passive
voice.
Chester’s favorite activity is kicking. The bank robbery took place just before
closing time. There is nothing we can do about it. There were a great number of
dead leaves covering the ground.
Despite what any well-meaning English teachers may have told you, none of the
sentences above are written in the passive voice. The sentence about the leaves, in
fact, was (wrongly) presented as an example of the passive voice by none other
than Strunk and White in The Elements of Style. Here’s how to remember: using
the verb to be doesn’t automatically put a verb phrase into the passive voice. You
also need a past participle. That’s how to keep passive voice masqueraders from
fooling you.
Use the active voice if it makes your sentence sound clearer and more natural
Forming passive voice requires the verb “to be” and a past participle
The passive voice is your friend when the thing receiving an action is the important
part of the sentence—especially in scientific and legal contexts, times when the
performer of an action is unknown, or cases where the subject is distracting or
irrelevant
Give
You can choose either of the two objects to be the subject of the passive sentence.
Passive: I was given the book (by him)/ The book was given to me (by him).
Other verbs like this are: ask, offer, teach, tell, lend, promise, sell, throw.
You can also make the passive using a passive gerund or a passive infinitive in the
same place as a normal gerund or infinitive.
Use of active
The active voice is the "default" voice in English. All intransitive verbs can only be
in the active voice, and all transitive verbs usually are active voice - unless we
deliberately make them passive.
In spoken English, we almost always use active voice. It is the natural choice, more
precise and generally shorter.
In written English, active voice is usually easier and more interesting for the
reader. Passive voice can sound dull and bureaucratic, and is typical of official
writing. In the interests of "plain English" that the average person can understand,
many governments now encourage civil servants to write in the active voice.
Except on occasions when the passive voice is actually useful, the active voice is
the voice of choice.
The get-passive
For formal English and exams you should use the be-passive, but in informal
language people sometimes use the get-passive.
Forms of passive
The passive voice is not a tense itself. But for transitive verbs each tense, as well as
other verb forms such as infinitives and participles, can be produced in the passive
voice. Some of the more complicated tenses (mostly perfect continuous) are rarely
used in the passive, but they are possible.
Here are some examples of the passive voice with many of the possible forms
using the verb sing:
infinitive to be sung
participle sung
Presen am, are, is sung am, are, is being sung have, has been sung
t
Past was, were sung was, were being sung had been sung
Future will be sung will be being sung will have been sung
The table below shows example sentences in active and passive voice for the basic
tenses as well as various other verb forms, including infinitives and participles.
active passive
Present Simple How does one pronounce his How is his name pronounced?
name?
Present Perfect Kid has served dinner. Dinner has been served.
Present Perfect The police have been That house has been being
Continuous watching that house for watched for weeks.
weeks.
Past Perfect She wasn't sure how long She wasn't sure how long she'd
Continuous they'd been following her. been being followed.*
Future Simple They will hang him at dawn. He will be hanged at dawn.
Future Perfect They will have repaired your Your car will have been
car by 7pm. repaired by 7pm.
perfect infitive They seem to have taken it. It seems to have been taken.
participle I saw the cat eating it. I saw it being eaten by the cat.
Should You should have told me. I should have been told.
Exercises:
2. Her room when the roof fell in. (PAINT - past progressive)
3. Complete the sentences using the correct form of the passive voice in the
correct tense!
5. After all the flights the tourists checked in at the airport hotel.
(CANCEL)
4. Fill in the correct tense. Use passive or active according to the context.
1. When she heard that her dog (KILL), she burst into tears.
5. When she discovered that Tom (EAT) all the biscuits she got very
angry.
?
3. We deliver newspapers every day.
today at 3.30.
7. They don't teach Spanish at my school.
Spanish at my school.
8. They perform the play without an interval.
6. Use: am, is, are, was, were and a correct verb to complete the
sentences.
8. Write down the passive form of the verbs. Use the tense in brackets.
11. The fire brigade (phone) soon after the fire had broken out. (Past
tense)
13. All the fruits (eat up) by the guests. (Past tense)