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1. INTRODUCTION
Writing is one of the most important language capabilities that students need to acquire.
Pratiwi (2012) stated that using written language is the best approach to convey ideas, feelings,
and impressions. By writing activities, it actually helps students to convey their opinions. Huy
(2015) said that writing could also help students in support reading text effectively and help
them to express their ideas. Furthermore, writing plays an important role in life.
to Irawati (2015), when compared to other language abilities that one might acquire, writing is
regarded as the most difficult and difficult language talent to learn. Many students complain
that they cannot write because writing is challenging because, according to Adas and Bakir
(2013), Writing can be one of the most challenging things in the English language to master
because what is written must be relevant and connected to the topic being discussed. In addition
to that, we have to be familiar with the many components writing, such as vocabulary, syntax,
and conjunctions. Students have trouble producing descriptive texts, especially with grammar.
As stated Jayanti (2019) students still need help in writing because they need more words in
their vocabulary.
One of the texts that should write is descriptive text. Noprianto (2017) said descriptive
text is a form of writing that is applied by the writer whenever he or she wants to describe how
something seems, smells, feels, acts, tastes, and sounds. Josephine S.M. Wulandari, and
Widyati, U. (2007), The objective of the descriptive text is to communicate, and it does so by
describing a specific person, place, or thing. The descriptive text has a generic structure; first,
identification introduces where or who the subject is being described. Second, the descriptive
text also describes qualities and characteristics of the supporting part of the paragraph, which
describe in detail to assist the reader in seeing and feeling the subject.
(2008:60), students’ difficulties in writing descriptive text are problems with grammar,
punctuation and lexical choice. They result a negative impact on the content and the general
understanding of a text. In addition, the students got problems in using “Have” and “Has”. For
example, in descriptive text have is to be for the plural, and has is to be for the singular.
However, most of the students are still difficult to differentiate the both. It makes them have
difficulties in lexical choice and use of relational verbs to describe person, place and something.
Based on the explanation above, students have difficulties in writing descriptive text. First, the
students get problems in using appropriate grammar to make good sentences. In addition, the
students get difficult in using generic structure to organize their ideas in written form. Then,
the students do not understand the use of simple present tense such as “have” and “has” to
describe specific topic in writing activity. For example, in descriptive text have is to be for the
plural, and has is to be for the singular. However, most of the students are still difficult to
Preliminary study was conducted by interviewing one of the teachers of English at MTS
Al-Amalul Khair Palembang. The teacher said that the descriptive text is taught to the eighth
grade students in the second semester at MTS Al-Amalul Khair Palembang academic year
2023/2024. In addition, the teacher said that the students often faced difficulties with
vocabulary which was still limited, using grammar which was still incorrect. Some students
possess limited vocabulary and poor understanding of grammar. (Conducted an interview with
the eighth grade English teacher (Mrs. Nova) by asking several some questions related to the
title of my research. Asking whether the subject matter of my research is being studied by eight
grade students at Smp Al-Amalul Khair Palembang and asking permission if I can conduct
First, a study conducted by Annisa on Smp Darrusalam Medan. Showed that the students found
difficulties to use punctuation and capitalization in writing descriptive. The students’ felt
difficult in using grammar lack of vocabulary and mechanics. Another research conducted by
Duha on Smp 2 Telukdalam. The result of data analysis showed that: the students’ difficulties
syntactical language, spelling, and other students’ difficulties in writing descriptive text:
capitalization, finding and organizing ideas. And third research conducted by Rianto on Smp
Brawijaya Smart School (BSS) Malang. Showed that the major difficulty faced by the students
Based on explanation above, the researcher was interested to analyze the difficulty
faced by the students when writing descriptive text. Therefore, the researcher conducted a
CASE STUDY OF EIGHTH GRADES” at the eight grade of MTS Al-Amalul Khair
Based on the background, the research problem is: What are the students Difficulties in
grade students' difficulties in writing descriptive text at Mts Al-Amalul Khair Palembang.
1. Theoretically Contribution
The study's ultimate purpose is to provide further information and knowledge to readers,
particularly English Department students and lecturers who are interested in reading this article.
2. Practically Contribution
This study will is expected to be used as one of the consideration in the teaching and learning
process.
The researcher expects that this study will provide new insight into the difficulties in writing
The researcher expects that this study will be helpful as a guide for future researchers
interested in learning more about the difficulties students’ in writing descriptive text, as well
2. LITERATUR RIVIEW
2.1 Writing
Writing is one way of expressing themselves where students can express their ideas,
feelings, thoughts, even arguments and knowledge into a piece of paper filled with writing
Nurfidoh & Kareviati (2021). Writing is a process of expressing ideas or thoughts in the form
of written words which will provide information for those who read them Damayanti (2022).
Even so, writing is a skill that is not easy to master, especially if you write in a foreign language
Students consider writing in English to be difficult because they are worried about using
punctuation, spelling, pronunciation, grammar, vocabulary, structure, and other factors that
influence it Irine & Misrita (2020). This also makes writing in English sometimes difficult for
students. To make good writing, there are 4 (four) steps that must be considered, namely
planning, drafting, editing, and final version Ismayanti & Kholiq (2020). In the planning step,
students decide what they want to write by taking into account the purpose of writing, the target
audience, as well as the content and structure of the writing. In drafting, they write down the
ideas that come up roughly. In the editing step, they edit the ideas into better paragraphs or
writings. Then in the final version, they can finalize their writing from all aspects until it
becomes good writing and is ready to be read. The students find it difficult to come up with
ideas when they write. Most of them write sentences that are not precise because of their lack
of knowledge about grammar. Some students can't even finish their writing because they run
out of time due to lack of vocabulary and ideas that must be poured (Yoandita, 2018). To write
well, students need to have ability, effort, and a strong desire. Students must also under-stand
in advance the type of text they will write Duha (2022). According to the 2006 BNSP, there
are five types of English text that are taught in schools (especially at the junior high school
level), namely descriptive, narrative, procedure, recount, and report. What will be discussed in
According Pohan (2018) there are five stages of the writing process:
a. Pre-writing
Choose a topic, define your audience and intent, brainstorm ideas, and organize content.
b. Drafting
Write down your thoughts in sentences and chapters. Compose the first draft of the piece using
into action.
c. Revising
Edit the text. You are making improvements that will enhance your writing.
d. Proofreading
At this point, finish the editing by searching for grammatical, spelling, capitalization and
punctuation errors.
e. Publishing
The final stage is to publish as you know how to show your writing to an audience. You should
cakes or others. According to Huges (2008), writing has at least five components. They are as
follows:
1) Content The content of the writing should be clear to the readers so that the readers can
understand the message that is conveyed from the content. To have good content the writing,
2) Organization in writing includes coherence (all ideas have to be weld, in the right order, and
clear), order of importance (arranging and building the ideas to give a strong ending in a
paragraph), general to specific or specific to general (arranging the topic sentence to make a
general statement followed by a series of supporting sentence with specific, details, examples,
and facts. On the other hand, specific to general is contrary to general to specific), chronological
order (the paragraphs are organized chronologically, events and details are arranged in the order
in which they occurred, usually moving from the first to the last), and spatial pattern (telling
3) Grammar is the placement of grammatical form and syntactic patterns. Grammar refers to
the system of rules and principles that govern the structure and formation of sentences in a
language. It encompasses various elements such as syntax (word order), morphology (word
4) Vocabulary One of the requirements of good writing always depends on the effective use of
words. Vocabulary refers to the collection of words and phrases that a person knows and uses
in their language. It includes both common words and specialized terminology related to
specific fields or domains. A rich and diverse vocabulary allows writers to express themselves
precisely and effectively, choosing the most suitable words to convey their ideas accurately.
Developing vocabulary skills involves learning new words, understanding their meanings, and
appropriately. The use of favorable mechanics in writing will make the readers easy to
understand the conveyed ideas or the messages that are stated in writing.
According to Khasanah (2019) a text has the aim of describing something, such as an
animal, a thing or a person. The purpose of writing descriptive prose is to convey the writer's
experience. In general, descriptive writing focusses on defining a given place, a certain place,
people, occurrence, object or location. It attempts to activate the five senses of the reader to
invoke the sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and feel of the subject of the text. In addition, Siburian
(2013) the descriptive text is a paragraph that is described as a set of sentences that are closely
connected in thought and serve a commentary function that is often used to explain what a
person looks like and behaves like, what a position looks like, and what an object looks like.
In the descriptive text, students should arrange their thoughts objectively and interact
with others in depth as they wish to identify persons, locations or objects. Because of that the
researcher choose a descriptive text. In the first year of junior high school, especially in the
second semester, students learn how to read descriptive text. But the researcher thinks that they
The basic structure of the descriptive text consists of identity and definition. Identification
is about presenting the topic or object to be described, while the definition is a short description
of who or what the subject is. Wardani and Waris (2014) said that if you are prompted to
a. Identification
In the first paragraph of this section, the aims to define anything that will be represented or
depicted. Identification is an important term to familiarize the reader with a person, place, thing,
or idea we have previously discussed before discussing the characteristics of that thing.
b. Description
This section, which begins in the second paragraph and continues on from there, discusses a
topic that you had already introduced to the reader in the first paragraph.
aspects used when someone writes text in English. Language features help writers not
experience difficulties making sentences using tenses, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs in the
form of paragraphs. Descriptive text usually has several specific features. According to Husna
(2017), the descriptive text uses adjectives, adverbs, and comparisons to help describe
something and also uses students' five senses - how it feels, smells, looks, sounds and tastes.
According to Jayanti (2019), the language features of the descriptive text focus on simple
present tense, action verbs and adjectives. According to Knapp (2005), the grammatical
The simple present tense is the tense that is most often used to describe something clearly.
possible using the simple present tense. The simple present tense is also used when an event is
ongoing or recurring and describes something that usually happens for example: cooking,
The Simple Past is an expression of stating that something began and ended at a certain
point in the past (Anjarani & Indahwati, 2019). Simple past tense is a verb tense that refers to
previous actions or habits that have already been done in the past, for example: took, made,
Examples:
Relational verbs are verbs used to help clarify the main verb. Relational verbs classify
and describe a phenomenon’s appearance, attributes, and pieces or functions (is, are, has, have).
Examples:
2) Elephants do not have wings, but they have two big ears.
d. Mental Verbs
Mental verbs are commonly employed to communicate emotions. Mental verbs can be
used to describe feeling in the description. According to Pascual et al. (2008), mental verbs
frequently function as the main verb in a complex sentence that contains a subordinate
Examples:
e. Action verbs
Action verbs state that the subject is doing an action or something is happening or
performing by someone in the text. Compared to other types of words, action verbs are also
Examples:
f. Adjectives
(2019), adjectives are frequently referred to as modifying a noun or pronoun. Adjectives can
be used to describe word since it conveys information about the characteristics of something
Examples:
3) Lily loves her own hair, because she has curvy hair.
g. Adverbs
description. According to Bowers (1975), adverbs such as rapidly, slowly, tragically, etc., are
Examples:
The table below provides one type of descriptive text: a place description. This section
provides a descriptive text included with the analysis of its generic structure:
Title “Wakatobi”
Descriptive There are a lot of reasons why Wakatobi is consider to be the best diving
location ever. First, due to the dry climate and uplifted limestone, Wakatobi
diving's reefs are distinct from others in the area. This indicates that
Wakatobi has particularly clean surroundings because there isn't much
soil erosion. Second, Wakatobi reefs are protected, and fishing is strictly
prohibited because the area is a national park. These beautiful reefs are
supported and preserved by the nearby fishing villages, who receive a fair
part of the profits made by Wakatobi dive tourism in exchange for
implementing more sustainable practices, such as keeping significant coral
lengths undeveloped. Third, compared to the two most well-known diving
locations in the Caribbean Sea, which have only 50 species each, and the
other 300 species in the red sea, Wakatobi is positioned at the center of the
world's coral reef triangle, with 942 fish species and750 coral reef species
from a total of 850 worldwide collections.
Source: britishcourse.com
In learning writing descriptive text, the students should use appropriate structure of
descriptive text which helps them in arranging the words and sentences to make good paragraph
text are problems with grammar, punctuation and lexical choice. They result a negative impact
on the content and the general understanding of a text. In addition, the students got problems
in using “Have” and “Has”. For example, in descriptive text have is to be for the plural, and
has is to be for the singular. However, most of the students are still difficult to differentiate the
both. It makes them have difficulties in lexical choice and use of relational verbs to describe
Based on the explanation above, students have difficulties in writing descriptive text.
First, the students get problems in using appropriate grammar to make good sentences. In
addition, the students get difficult in using generic structure to organize their ideas in written
form. Then, the students do not understand the use of simple present tense such as “have” and
“has” to describe specific topic in writing activity. For example, in descriptive text have is to
be for the plural, and has is to be for the singular. However, most of the students are still
To support this research, The researcher takes three previous studies as inspiration and
The first previous study by Annisa (2022), entitled “Student’s Difficulties on Writing
overview of students' difficulties in writing descriptive text through linguistic problems. The
writer employed observation, interview, and documentation to collect the data. The data
analyzed by using Mile and and Huberman’s (1984) which covered from data reduction, data
interpretation, and drawing a conclusion. The results show students found difficulties to use
punctuation and capitalization in writing descriptive. The students’ felt difficult in using
grammar lack of vocabulary and mechanics. In addition, the practice of writing essays also
makes students skilled in writing. With practice, students will know the difficulties they face
in writing to know the quality of their writing. The studies above have the same focus, namely
the study of students' difficulties in writing descriptive text, the difference is that this research
problems.
The second study by Duha (2022), entitled “Students’ Difficulties in Writing Descriptive
Text” aimed to find out the students’ difficulties and causes of the students’ difficulties in
writing descriptive text at eighth grade of SMP Negeri 2 Telukdalam. This research use
qualitative method. The data were collected by documentation, interview, and observation. The
result of this research showed that (1) the students’ difficulties in writing descriptive text
consist of difficulties in generic features, textual language, syntactical language, spelling, and
other students’ difficulties in writing descriptive text: capitalization, finding and organizing
ideas; (2) the causes of the students’ difficulties in writing descriptive text were because of
psychological problems: less motivation, less practice of writing, less interested in learning
English, less confidence, and having poor thought that English and writing difficult; linguistic
problems: lack of grammar and vocabulary mastery; and cognitive problems: lack of
learning was also one of the causes of the students’ difficulties in writing descriptive text. Based
on the finding, it is concluded that the students at the eighth grade of SMP Negeri 2 Telukdalam
have difficulties in writing descriptive text. It is suggested that writing descriptive text should
be learned and taught intensively. Same as the first study, the studies above have the same
focus, namely the study of students' difficulties in writing descriptive text. The difference is
that in this study, researchers also looked for causes of the students' difficulties in writing
descriptive text.
The third study by Rianto (2017), entitled “A Case Study: Students’ Difficulties in
Writing Descriptive Text in the First-Year Students at SMP Brawijaya Smart School (BSS)
Malang” aimed to describe the difficulties and strategies used by the students in writing
descriptive text by highlighting two research problems; 1) the students’ major difficulty and 2)
the students’ strategy to solve the difficulty. This study implemented case study as the research
design and triangulation data to validate this research. The instruments are teacher’s interview
guide and students’ questionnaire which was calculated manually using frequency Likert-type
scale. The findings of this study were as follows; 1) the major difficulty faced by the students
was vocabulary mastery, and 2) The students used bilingual dictionary as the strategy to solve
vocabulary difficulty. In addition, students were preferred to often write in English in solving
tenses used difficulty, and for expressing idea the students familiar to used their own
background knowledge. Based on the result of this study, it is suggested to the students to learn
about words in English as many as they can to add their vocabularies. For the teachers, it is
suggested that they have to apply any strategy to increase students’ vocabularies. For the future
researchers, it is suggested that they may do research in term of the strategies that can be used
to increase students’ vocabulary mastery. The similarity of this study was the method that
This researcher used descriptive qualitative to find out the students' difficulties in
writing descriptive text at eighth grade of MTS Al-Amalul Khair Palembang. Creswell (2016)
defined that qualitative research is a type of research that explores and understands meaning in
number of individuals or groups of people originating from social problems. Based on Arikunto
(2016) reveals that descriptive research is research that is intended to gather information about
the status or existing symptoms, which according to what their symptoms at the time of the
research. Yin, R. K. (2014) defines a case study is a research method that involves an in-depth
context. It often utilizes multiple sources of data, such as interviews, observations, documents,
and archival records, to provide a detailed and holistic understanding of the case under study.
Participants in this research will be taken from students at MTs Al-Amalul Khair
Palembang. According to Cresswel (2012), the researcher can choose place and participants to
discover the answers of the main real problem explored in a study. Purposeful sampling
techniques will be used for participants in this research. As according to Palinkas et al., (2013),
purposeful sampling is generally utilized for qualitative research in order to identify and choose
a lot of information which is concerned with intended case. Additionally, Dornyei (2014)
emphasized purposeful sampling as a technique to find individuals who can provide rich and
varied insights into the phenomenon under investigation so as to maximize what we can learn.
Researchers will use one class from five classes in grade eight at MTs Al-Amalul Khair
Palembang. Then, researchers will use homogeneous sampling methods in this research.
(very similar) characteristics. The researcher will select eight students 4 (Male) and 4 (Female)
who have the lowest scores in writing descriptive text to participate in interviews to find
authentic information about students' difficulties in writing recount text at the eighth grade
For the purpose of data collection, the researcher will use interviews to find out the
answer to the students' difficulties in writing descriptive text at the eighth grade students of
MTs Al-Amalul Khair Palembang. Researchers will conduct interviews using qualitative
methods. According to Creswell (2012), the interview take place when researcher asks open-
ended questions the participants in general and record the participants' answers. To obtain in-
depth information, semi-structured interviews will be used in this research. According to Ahlin
(2019), semi-structured interviews are a qualitative approach to collecting data that includes a
number of survey questions that will be asked of all respondents while providing an opportunity
for more detailed inquiry into topics that arise during the researcher-respondent discussion.
According to Kallio et al., (2016), the reason for using semi-structured interviews is because
they have proven to be versatile and flexible. Therefore, it is hoped that the semi-structured
interviews that will be conducted with these students will help researchers obtain more accurate
data.
As previously stated, interviews will be used to collect data. The data will be analyzed
after being collected by the researcher in order to fulfill its intended aims. Thematic data will
need to be used in analyzing this research. According to Braun & Clarke (2006), thematic
analysis is a qualitative research method that can be used broadly across a variety of
describing, and reporting themes found in a data set. Supported by Maguire and Delahunt
(2017), thematic analysis is the process of recognizing themes in qualitative data. It can be
concluded that thematic analysis will be used in this research to determine students' difficulties
Creswell (2012), validating findings have several ways, they are triangulation, member
checking, external audit. Among these three, the researcher used member checking. Creswell
(2012) suied that member checking is making sure the points by writing or speaking by
interview. The researcher used the method because it was appropriate for this study to give
understand about this study. And then to carried out member checking, the researcher started
to ask questions with a transcript. After that, the researcher gave a conclusion of the interview
and asked the participants to confirm. Last, that participants said yes and agreed about the
transkrip. And the last, the researcher finally had the consent about the data.
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