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 Sample essay 1
Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than
before?
In the history of mankind, possibly no century witnessed more progress in
technology than the 20th century did. People have become increasingly interested
in assessing the correlation between technological development and leisure time.
As far as I am concerned, people's leisure time has been shrinking as a result of
the tremendous advance in modern technology.
Admittedly, thanks to modern technology, people can thus spend less time on
compulsory activities (e.g., working), but it should also be noted that other non-
compulsory activities have come to consume a larger proportion of people's after-
work life, such as education. If leisure refers to the time spent in non-compulsory
activities, people's leisure time has in fact contracted. The growing concern on
education has increased the likelihood that people are willing to give up their
leisure lives for educational opportunities. This trend is attributed mainly to
competition and fears of job loss, causing people to turn to on-the-job training
and education for secured employment. Another incentive is the increasing
flexibility of educational institutions. Worthwhile knowledge can be passed on
from one generation of workers to another in different forms of education, such
as televised teaching and online courses. It comes at the cost of their leisure time.
People's leisure lives are continuously eroded also because of the ubiquity of
modern technological tools (e.g., computers with Internet access and
telecommunications equipment). It is noteworthy that people now take fewer and
shorter vacations following the increase in the number of technology-based
activities. For example, cell phones and laptops make people accessible to their
superiors wherever they go and wherever they are. People are more stressed than
any generation before. Meanwhile, people now have to engage in more everyday
processes than ever before, such as shopping, food ordering, and so on. It seems
that the time budget is burdened because more time should be invested in
activities that were previously ignored or unnoticed.
While posing a threat on people's leisure lives, technologies might on other
occasions, give workers more flexibility in controlling their work and more
quality time after work. A traditional work week has been cut, as the amount of
manual work continues to decline because of automation. The availability of

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various means of transport has released working people from lengthy commutes.
The line between work and private life is much more blurred, with many workers
shopping, checking private emails and reading newspapers online even when
working.
From what has been discussed, one understands that the development of
technology has tremendous impacts on people's daily lives, although the exact
Impacts are not conclusive. When the proliferation of new technologies, such as
computers, allows people to manage their own working time and accommodate
family needs and lifestyle choices, it has locked them in a struggle to cope with
more tasks in daily lives.
Synonym list:
shrink = decline = diminish = contract
compulsory = required
after-work life = personal life
pass on…to = hand on = transfer
ubiquity = prevalence
commute = the journey between home and place of work
proliferation = increase = mushrooming
accommodate = give room for

Sample essay 2
Earlier technological development brought more changes to the life of
ordinary people than recent technological development does. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, people are now enjoying one of the greatest technological boom
times in human history. Although there is a consensus that social changes
coincide normally with technological advances, it is a contentious issue whether
the earlier technology (e. g., machines, cars, aeroplanes) impacts on people's lives
to a larger extent than does the recent technology (e. g., Internet, computers). In
my opinion, the recent improvements in technology have more far-reaching
consequences.

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While the invention of automobiles was a landmark in the technological
evolution of humankind, the widespread use of computers and
telecommunications technology has dramatically reshaped the nature of society.
One might have benefited a lot from one's improved ability to move rapidly from
one place to another because of the availability of automobiles, yet this benefit
has been discounted because of the advent of the Internet. With Internet access,
the world has become accessible to people and one can perform many tasks at
home (e. g., grocery shopping) and let their fingers do the walking.
Lifestyles are changed by recent technologies in equal measure. Before
computers and the Internet were created, most working people struggled with a
lack of leisure time and the balance between family life and work life. They were
fully occupied by employment and various chores, such as shopping. With the
Internet, they are now able to spend much less time on those routine, dull
activities and lead active leisure lives.
Modern technologies also account for the evolution of people's perception of
society. People tend to develop, modify and repurpose technology for their own
use. Interdepence, previously a core virtue of many societies. is now undermined.
Cell phones allow people to insulate their private interactions from the culture
around them and to create their own micro-cultures. The mobility given by
modern transport meanwhile, allures them to leave their place of birth and work
and live elsewhere. Cultural norms are subject to modification and the
communal lifestyle is going out of fashion.
In conclusion, whether one likes it or not, technology will continue to evolve,
with the resulting changes impacting the lifestyles and cultural norms
continuously. While the earlier technology had enhanced the quality of life and
generated revenue for people, the recent technology has made them lead a
different lifestyle from previous generations.
Synonym list:
landmark = turning point = watershed event
humankind = mankind
reshape = reform = restructure = remodel
discount = impair
dull = tedious = monotonous = dreary

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norm = custom = normal ways of behaving
communal = collective

Sample essay 3
Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.
What can governments do to address these problems? What can individuals
do to help?
It is known that humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems,
but we can also take steps to minimize the damages that we are causing to the
planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that
governments and individuals can take to address these problems.
Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas
emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global
warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the
human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of
waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They
could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to
use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose
‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be
encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore
reducing emissions. Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact
they have on the environment. They can take public transport rather than driving,
choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most
supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for
recycling glass, plastic paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can
help to reduce waste.
In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in
looking after the environment.
Synonym list:
minimize the damages: giảm thiểu tối đa những thiệt hại
gas emissions: việc thải khí độc
devastating(adj): nguy kịch

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contaminated (v): làm ô nhiễm, vấy bẩn
reduce air pollution: giảm thiểu ô nhiễm không khí
limit emissions: giới hạn lại việc thải khí
green taxes: thuế xanh (loại thuế áp lên những hoạt động kinh tế có hại cho môi
trường)

Sample essay 4
Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others
think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss
both views.
In this modern world, perspectives of how to keep animals are varied among
people. Some people think about caging them in zoos or forests while others think
it is illogical to limit animals’ movements. I am going to discuss these views
according to environmental, personal and economic perspectives.
Keeping some animals in zoos will protect them against predators, bad weather,
and food unavailability. Nevertheless, keeping animals free is more logical than
isolating them because if we keep animals caged, they would not be able to have
fresh air and chase other animals. Therefore, it is cruel keeping animals confined
in small spaces. It is advisable to put our efforts into keeping our creatures in their
natural habitats, in order to give them the opportunity to experience normal life.
Keeping animals is essential because some animals are in fact becoming extinct.
Although keeping these animals is costly, the profits made by keeping these
animals are substantial. Take Indian lions for example; a wide range of people
travel to India to see these animals in circuses in India. However, some people
think that governments should invest the money in improving the infrastructure
of their nations instead. Building a new electrical power station, for instance, is
more important than spending thousands of pounds to preserve certain creatures
from extinction. Lastly, keeping animals is important for study and research
whereas others think we have no right to use animals for entertainment and in
labs.
To conclude, keeping animals in zoos might have value but it is irrational to
keep these animals away from their natural habitat. The reasons are that besides
they are not vulnerable creatures, they have the right to survive independently
because of having feelings and emotions as humans.

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(289 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
cage(v): nhốt trong chuồng
food unavailability: sự khan hiếm thức ăn
confine(v): nhốt (trong một khu khép kín)
irrational(adj): vô lý

Sample essay 5
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in
every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that men and women should have the same educational
opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal
proportions of each gender in every university subject. This essay will explain the
reasons why admitting equal numbers of male and female students in every major
is impractical.
First, having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply
unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the
institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of
males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality,
many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not
be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to
attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if
fifty percent of the places needed to go to males.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be
unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should
continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their
qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities,
and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve
good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a
course, it would be wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower
grades or fewer qualifications.

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In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and
it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based
on gender.
(265 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
impractical(adj): không thực tiễn
fill courses: lấp đầy các khóa học
base sth on sth: dùng cái gì để làm nền tảng cho cái gì
merit(n): sự xứng đáng (vì khả năng hoặc thành tích tốt)

Sample essay 6
We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be
concerned with our own communities and countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as
there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe
that we should try to help as many people as possible.
On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow
citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or
disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example,
in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this
problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to
support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from
donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on
our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some
people feel that we should prioritise local charity.
At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live
beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are
much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier
to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African
countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply
by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international
charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.

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In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national
boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.
(280 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
impoverished(adj): nghèo đói
disadvantaged(adj): thiệt thòi
on our doorstep: ngay trước mắt chúng ta
prioritise(v): ưu tiên

Sample essay 7
Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
It is true that happiness is very important in people's lives, but some people have
different views about how to be happy. This essay will discuss the reasons that
make happiness difficult to understand and the things how to attain it.
There are things that can make a person happy, while others do not such as a
stable job, a beautiful house, or winning a lottery. A person will be happy with
his life if he is able to feed his family by having a permanent job. Also, if the
house is decent, he will be happy to see how comfortable life is to live in a place
with wonderful furniture and appliances. Finally, winning a huge sum of money
is a dream coming true for most people. However, others do not like to buy lottery
tickets because some people believe that once they have won the lottery, they
might put their family's life at risk, perhaps, they think somebody will try to
kidnap their kids and ask for a ransom.
On the other hand, there are simple factors in attaining happiness. For example,
when a family of five could meet the basic needs such as food, clothing and a
house, these could make a family satisfied with what they already have in life as
long as they are together. Another example is being able to pass an English
proficiency test to be qualified to become a registered nurse in Canada. Most
foreign workers would be very glad if they could pursue their career after
passing such a test.

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In conclusion, people have their own meaning of happiness and there are reasons
why certain things make them happy such as basic needs or passing an
examination test.
(286 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
attain(v): đạt được
meet the basic needs: đáp ứng nhu cầu cơ bản
be satisfied with: hài lòng về điều gì
pursue a career: theo đuổi sự nghiệp

Sample essay 8
In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between
equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can
achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of
personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or
fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the
relationship between equality and personal success?
In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same
rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve
more in this kind of society.
Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe
that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education
should be either free or affordable for all those who choose to pursue a university
degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only
children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best
learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job
market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the
prospects of others.
I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people’s
freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people
lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the
contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and

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reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who
did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity.
Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because
they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from
privileged backgrounds.
In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality
and personal success.
(260 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
egalitarian society: xã hội công bằng
free schooling: giáo dục miễn phí
learning opportunities: các cơ hội học tập
harm the prospects: làm tổn hại đến khả năng phát triển
in conflict with: xung đột, đối ngược với
demotivate(v): làm nản lòng
privileged(adj): có điều kiện, đặc quyền

Sample essay 9
Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain
people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my
opinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.
On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain.
Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of
interesting objects that many people want to see. The average visitor may become
bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content, so
museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. This
type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, and it may have
interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions.

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On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education.
The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not
previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s
exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some
museums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while other
museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentary about
the exhibition. This way, museums can play an important role in teaching people
about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.
In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an
interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can both have
fun and learn something at the same time.
(253 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
exhibit a collection: trưng bày một bộ sưu tập
put more of an emphasis: thêm sự nhấn mạnh
interactive(adj): mang tính tương tác
commentary(n): bài tường thuật

Sample essay 10
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to
a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight
after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or
continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight
after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons.
Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way,
they can become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or
start a family. In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work,
rather than continue their studies, may progress more quickly. They will have the
chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills related to their chosen
profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.

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On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their
studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For
example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having
the relevant degree. As a result, university graduates have access to more and
better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with
fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market is becoming increasingly
competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in
a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or
college will not be able to compete.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to
be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.
(271 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
face the dilemma: đối mặt với tiến thoái lưỡng nan
gain real experience: có được kinh nghiệm thực tế
academic qualifications: bằng cấp

Sample essay 11
Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by
very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should
spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that
would be a waste of money.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although
it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen,
I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved.
There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste
of money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people,
expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people
learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This
money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much
cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments
could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.

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Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve
languages that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a
means of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of
the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will
disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies
more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments
can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s
history.
In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages
to disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact
on our cultural heritage.
(258 words) Band 9
Synonym list:
preserve(v): gìn giữ
minority group: nhóm người thiểu số
cultural identity: bản sắc văn hoá
cultural heritage: di sản văn hoá

Sample essay 12
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction
is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to
job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all
workers?
In today’s life, there is a wide range of people who work under a flexible
environment, while others are exposed to stressful conditions. It is inadvisable to
proceed with any job, if the employer is not taking into account the vital paths
required in convincing their employees to continue their jobs properly. In this
essay, I am going to address the contributing factors to job satisfaction which are
in terms of working hours, salaries and graduates.
It has been essential to understand individuals’ commitments to exclude this
particular fellow from 9 to 5 working hours. For example, some people cannot be
punctual at work because they have disabled daughters or sons, who could not
be able to travel to school independently. Therefore, it is important to change the

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original time schedule to give these people flexibility. So this type of help would
give them more job contentment.
The fact that could not be denied and encourages the employee remarkably is the
reliable salaries in addition to promotions to the highly achievable workers. For
example, if a worker in a factory is able to fix a broken down one of the machines,
it is illogical not to reward this worker for his great help to the factory. Therefore,
if we award this worker, he will be grateful and more confident in his job.
Awarding and reasonable salaries are essential elements to job satisfaction.
It is essential to accommodate the right person at work in the right place
according to their degree or certificate. If an individual has graduated as an
accountant, it is unrealistic to work a job as a carpenter. One of the consequences
of that is the worker is not going to like his job because there is no sensible
relationship between this job and his main occupation.
To conclude, if every worker is able to take part in a job which suits him
financially, vocationally and academically, it could contribute to climbing the
career ladder successfully.
(327 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
flexible(adj): linh hoạt
punctual(adj): đúng giờ
job contentment: sự hài lòng trong công việc
accommodate(v): sắp đặt
sensible(adj): hợp lý, có lợi

Sample essay 13
Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contributions
to the company by giving them extra money. This practice can act as an
incentive for some but may also have a negative impact on others. To what
extent is this style of management effective? Are there better ways of
encouraging employees to work hard?
In times of high unemployment, employers need to do very little to encourage
their staff to work hard, but when job vacancies are scarced, they have to find
effective ways of rewarding their staff to stop them from going elsewhere.

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One obvious way of doing this is to offer extra money to employees who are seen
to be working exceptionally hard and this is done in companies with a product to
sell. For example, real estate agents or department stores can offer a simple
commission on all sales.
This style of management favours people who can demonstrate their contribution
through sales figures, but does not take into account the work done by people
behind the scenes who have little contact with the public. A better approach is for
management to offer a bonus to all the staff at the end of year if the profits are
healthy. This, however, does not allow management to target individuals who
have genuinely worked harder than others.
Another possibility is to identify excellent staff through incentive schemes such
as ‘Employee of the Month’ or ‘Worker of the Week’ to make people feel
recognized. Such people are usually singled out with the help of clients. Hotels,
restaurants and tour operators may also allow staff to accept tips offered by clients
who are pleased with the service. However, tipping is a highly unreliable source
of money and does not favour everyone.
Basically, employees want to be recognized for their contribution - whether
through receiving more money or simply some encouraging words. They also
need to feel that their contribution to the whole organization is worthwhile. Good
management recognizes this need and responds appropriately.
(275 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
in times of: trong thời đại
scarce (adj): khan hiếm
exceptionally(adv): cực kỳ
take into account: cân nhắc kỹ lưỡng
worthwhile (adj): có góp phần quan trọng

Sample essay 14
Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of
trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do
in their spare time.

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To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons
for your answer.
In comparison with even the recent past, the choice of leisure activities on offer
today is vast, so it is reasonable to find that some of these activities reflect the
trends and fads of the day.
People have far more money and time than before to pursue their interests but the
ever-increasing number of activities does not automatically guarantee continuity.
In fact, new hobbies come and go. For example, sports such as roller- blading
lose their fascination after a few months. Similarly, although snowboarding has
taken over from traditional skiing, it is doubtful whether its popularity will last.
Other things like electronic games go out of date almost as soon as you have
bought them because the manufacturers promote the fact that only the latest
version is worth having. And so ensure continued sales.
On the other hand, not everyone is a victim of fashion in this way and people of
all ages and backgrounds may take up hobbies for social reasons. Traditional
hobbies range from participation in active sports like tennis to old favourites such
as chess and stamp collecting, and these continue to be popular. By joining a club,
people can make friends and feel part of a group with whom they can share a
common interest and leisure time. Where sport is concerned, most people know
what they like and participate out of love of the game, rather than because it is
currently fashionable.
I believe, therefore, that while fashion may have an influence, particularly among
the young, the majority of people enjoy their hobbies for their own sake.
(261 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
In comparison with: So với
reflect(v): phản ánh
continuity(n): sự tiếp tục
a victim of fashion: người đam mê thời trang
share a common interest: có chung một niềm yêu thích
out of love: vì tình yêu (cho điều gì)

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As most foreign aid often benefits the donor more than the receiver,
developing countries should refuse to repay their debts.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past 30 years, many countries have spent most of their income repaying
the interest on foreign debts. Many people consider the initial loans responsible
for these debts to be more beneficial to the lender than to the borrower. I agree
with this view.
In the past, most developing countries were short of ready funds to build the
infrastructure necessary for development. Therefore, foreign countries were
asked to provide loans for projects to help the countries become self-reliant.
However, this money was often used to make quick profits for developers or to
line the pockets of corrupt officials. Once the money is used, the problem of
repayment begins.
Since the 1970s many developing countries have found that they cannot pay back
the loans or even the interest accumulated on the loans. Consequently, the
countries have borrowed more money to pay back the interest. This gave Western
countries the power to dictate government policy through the World Bank and
the International Monetary Fund. These financial institutions are only interested
in balance sheets. Therefore, nations have been forced to adopt policies which
do nothing to develop their resources or improve the lives of the local people.
Countries that get caught in this debt spiral have no chance of paying back the
initial money borrowed, while the banks making the loans make two or three
times the money lent after the interest payments are taken into account. As most
donor countries have already been repaid, both in terms of money and in terms of
economic interest, it is morally right for developing countries to refuse to pay
back foreign loans.
In conclusion, as foreign aid does not always guarantee the well-being and the
economic development of the borrowers, it is reasonable for these countries to
refuse to repay their debts.
(264 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
repay the interest on foreign debts: trả lại lãi của các món nợ nước ngoài
self-reliant(adj): độc lập, tự phụ thuộc vào bản thân

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line the pockets: kiếm tiền một cách bất chính
accumulate(v): tích luỹ
dictate(v): quy định
balance sheet: bảng cân đối kế toán (trong bài trên có thể hiểu là tiền)
get caught in: bị vướng mắc vào
debt spiral: việc nợ chồng chất
morally(adv): về mặt đạo đức

Sample essay 16
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels
of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could
be taken to solve them?
Nowadays, obesity has become one of the outstanding problems in some
countries especially in developed and developing ones in addition to the fact that
the majority of people do not have a healthy body.
In this modern world, the individual’s activities are so limited. It is obviously
clear that the technology brings some benefits to the society like the availability
of doing business from home via the Internet or utilizing vacuum cleaners or
dishwashers which cause people to become so lazy. In this case, the lack of
physical movements leads to having excess weight. Another reason for gaining
extra weight could be the consumption of unhealthy foods, especially inorganic
fruits and vegetables which are grown by harmful chemical fertilizers and
artificial substances such as pesticides or substances used in order to boost the
harvest process. These seemingly technological achievements can seriously
harm humans’ health.
To halt these irrecoverable influences or reduce the detrimental effects on our
body, some pragmatic measures must be taken. Doctors believe that exercise is
one of the best solutions to decreasing obesity and being healthy. By doing
exercises just one hour per day, we will be able to improve our lifestyle
remarkably. Another step towards health could be to eat nutrient-rich foods
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metabolism. It is proven that digesting these kinds of foods is simpler for the
digestive system of our body than animals’ meat.
To conclude, I personally believe that the more we eat nutrition-dense foods or
do regular exercises, the healthier body we have as well as a healthier mindset.
(273 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
outstanding(adj): còn dang dở, chưa xử lý xong
the lack of physical movements: sự thiếu vận động chia tay
boost the harvest process: thúc đẩy quá trình thu hoạch
seemingly(adv): có vẻ như là
halt(v): dừng lại
irrecoverable influences: những ảnh hưởng không thể sửa chữa
pragmatic(adj): thực tiễn
nutrient-rich foods = nutrition-dense foods: những thực phẩm giàu dinh dưỡng
metabolism(n): hệ trao đổi chất

Sample essay 17
People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of
time often suffer badly from homesickness. Why is it? What are the best
ways to reduce this problem?
For overseas students and expatriates, homesickness has always been common.
I believe that most people who travel away from home for any length of time will
feel homesick at the beginning because missing their own home and country is a
natural reaction.
However, I think it becomes less of a problem as people adapt to the new
environment and start to enjoy new relationships and experiences. Today many
young people study abroad and for them it is probably their first time away from
family, friends and everything that is familiar.
The country they have moved to may have a completely different culture and
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ways. This can be very tiring, but until they can do so, they will feel out of place
and unable to form new relationships.
Professionals who have moved abroad for work may have left older parents
behind, or even young children. For them the separation can be worse because
they feel so far from the people they feel responsible for.
I personally think that people should try and prepare themselves for study or work
abroad. They need to learn a new language and try to be as adaptable and
independent as they can. At the same time, however, they need to set up ways of
communication quickly and easily with people back home, by using emails for
instance, so that they know what is happening there and do not need to worry. If
people are aware of the problems, they can do a lot to reduce their homesickness
and make their stay abroad a positive, exciting experience.
To conclude, the initial problem of getting oneself to fit in the new environment
is what causes homesickness among people who live far away from their home
country. The best solution is to be aware of the upcoming changes and prepared
to embrace differences.
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Synonym list:
overseas student: du học sinh
expatriate: người nước ngoài công tác tại nước khác
adapt(v): thích ứng
adjust(v): điều chỉnh
feel out of place: cảm thấy lạc lõng
separation(n): sự chia cách
reduce one’s homesickness: giảm thiểu sự nhớ nhà
embrace(v): đối mặt, đón nhận

Sample essay 18
The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should
be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or
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It is true to say that fossil fuels are still our main source of energy today, and as
more countries develop their industries and their economies, the scale of their use
continues to grow.
However, we are now well aware of the consequences of relying on this energy
source for our natural environment. Global warming and the damage to the
protective ozone layer are caused by carbon dioxide and other by-products of
fossil fuels. So I certainly agree that these problems are global rather than national
ones. They threaten our whole planet and no action by a single country could
solve them. Furthermore, these problems are urgent as nobody knows when our
natural world will be so damaged that it will no longer be able to support us.
While some countries already use safer alternative energy sources, such as wind,
water or solar power, it seems that there has not been sufficient investment in
developing the technology to make such alternatives viable for all. So it should
definitely be a global priority to invest in such research and development.
Obviously, there are other global priorities that we also need to address, such as
poverty and diseases. But while it may be the case that these problems are just as
important as the energy problem, there is a sense that time is ticking away for
our planet and any solutions to the energy issue will take some time to achieve.
So in conclusion, I agree that finding alternatives to fossil fuels is certainly the
most pressing global priority, if not the most important one for our world today.
(269 worlds) Band 9
Synonym list:
main source of energy: nguồn năng lượng chính
scale(n): quy mô
the damage to the protective ozone layer: sự huỷ hoại tầng ozon
by-products: sản phẩm phụ
viable(adj): khả thi
global priority: ưu tiên mang tính toàn cầu
time is ticking away: thời gian đang trôi nhanh

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In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic
development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban
areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for
the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be
reduced?
From the evidence of developing countries all over the world, it seems inevitable
that economic growth is generated in the business and industrial centers of the
major cities. As a result, urban citizens have access to jobs and facilities that
improve their living standards considerably. However, it is usually the case that
these are not equally enjoyed by people in the countryside and this generates
several problems for the countries concerned.
First of all, people from the countryside will try to move to the cities to get more
employment opportunities and better access to facilities available there. However,
this increase in the urban population puts great pressure on housing and services,
and leads to the creation of massive slum areas where conditions may be lower
than standards in the rural villages which are often left under-populated. This can
impact food production and can have severe effects for people in both urban and
rural areas.
Finally, as a country’s economy develops, there may be an increasing sense of
inequality as the towns get richer and the villages get poorer, and this may lead
to more crime and even civil unrest. The key to reducing these problems seems
to lie in improving the standard of living and the facilities available in the
countryside. Perhaps incentives can be offered to factories and companies to
relocate; road and rail networks can be built to make such relocation possible;
doctors and teachers could be required to spend part of their professional lives in
rural areas.
In conclusion, discrepancies in economic growth can cause pressures on the
overall living standards and many production activities. The essential way to deal
with this is to try to rebalance the equality scale between urban and rural areas,
by improving facilities and relocating businesses to the less advantaged regions.
(272 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
inevitable(adj): không thể tránh khỏi
generate(v): tạo ra, sản sinh ra

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put great pressure on: tạo áp lực lên
the creation of massive slum areas: sự hình thành các khu nhà ổ chuột
under-populated(adj): ít người sinh sống, dân số ít
sense of inequality: cảm giác về cuộc sống bất công
civil unrest: bất ổn xã hội
relocation(n): sự di dời
rebalance the equality scale: san bằng lại cán cân bình đẳng

Sample essay 20
Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people
believe that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others,
however, think that music can have a negative influence on both.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Generally, music is considered to be one of the most popular and ancient modes
of human expression. It features largely in all histories and all cultures and indeed
has been one of the main ways of passing on cultural traditions to new
generations.
Many people view music as a positive influence for societies. They also believe
that the influence on individuals is wholly beneficial as it is a long-established
way of communicating and helping us to understand the whole range of human
emotions and experience in a more spiritual language than words can represent.
However, there are different kinds of music and the qualities of classical music
traditions are not necessarily part of the music many people experience today. In
the modern world, there is a huge music industry that sells piped music to
supermarkets and advertisers. We are also constantly exposed to loud modern
music from people’s CD players, iPods or car radios. So the view of music today
as a kind of noise pollution produced by money-driven people, is also a common
and negative one, but it is difficult to think of a world without music.
Certainly, there is bad music that may have negative influences, particularly on
the young. But people’s taste in music tends to change as they get older, and it
would be difficult to find someone who had no positive musical associations at
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In conclusion, I think that music can have both positive and negative influences
on people and society, but it is an integral part of human expression that we cannot
really separate from our lives.
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Synonym list:
pass on cultural traditions: truyền lại những giá trị truyền thống văn hoá
long-established(adj): lâu đời, có từ lâu (và vẫn tiếp tục)
spiritual language: ngôn ngữ về mặt nội tâm
piped music: nhạc nền (phát trong siêu thị hoặc nơi công cộng nào đó)
be exposed to: được tiếp xúc với
money-driven(adj): làm mọi thứ vì tiền

Sample essay 21
Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence
than any previous young generation.
Why is this the case? What impact does this have on the relationship between
old and young people?
I would agree that young people today play a bigger role in society than their
parents’ or grandparents’ generation did. This is mainly due to the larger social
and technological changes that have increased the gap between the
generations. Young people today are generally better educated, and because they
have been trained from a young age to use computer technology, they have
Internet access to information in a way that was unimaginable for earlier
generations. This means that they are probably better informed than their parents’
grandparents were at their age, and their hi-tech skills give them confidence in
dealing with the very rapid changes in technology that are so uncomfortable for
older people.
In addition, younger people are often the most affected by globalization. They
follow fashions in clothes, music and social habits that are common among young
people throughout the world. So they have become powerful consumers who
influence big global markets today. As a result of these developments,
relationships with older people are often difficult. Teachers and parents are
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think they know everything, or at least can learn about everything from the
Internet. In many cultures, this has led to a decline in school discipline, an
increase in family breakdowns and even serious social problems.
However, the current generation gap is the responsibility of both younger and
older generations. Both have to make efforts to understand each other and a good
starting point would be for families to spend more time together than they
normally do today.
(264 Words) Band 9
Synonym list:
increase the gap between the generations: gia tăng khoảng cách giữa các thế hệ
unimaginable(adj): không thể tượng tượng được
hi-tech skills: các kỹ năng máy tính
undervalued (v): đánh giá thấp
a decline in school discipline: sự xuống thấp trong kỷ luật nhà trường
family breakdowns: việc các gia đình tan vỡ
a good starting point: một điểm khởi đầu tốt

Sample essay 22
Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some
people, therefore, think that governments should pay university fees for
students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to
study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding.
Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the
disadvantages?
In every country, there are fashions among students about which subjects are the
best to study at university. Sometimes the popularity of a subject is determined
by how much money a graduate could subsequently earn in that field. Or subjects
that are perceived as relatively ‘easy’ may also become popular, in spite of later
difficulties of finding appropriate employment. It is up to governments to give
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Obviously one way to do this would be for the government to pay the fees of
those choosing such subjects. The advantage would certainly be that a higher
number of students would enroll and would later fill the employment gaps.
However, the disadvantages of such a policy would be considerable. For example,
the students attracted by the funding may not have any real interest in or aptitude
for that subject. Such students may drop out before graduation or after working
only a short time in a related job. Furthermore, funding one group of students but
not other would penalize those with a genuine interest and ability for another
field. Such discrimination would certainly affect the whole higher education of
the country, and students would develop very negative attitudes towards going to
university altogether. This would be very counter-productive for any country.
In conclusion, I think there are many other incentives for students that could be
considered, such as making courses more interesting to take, or the job rewards
greater after graduation. The education policy proposed above, however, would
certainly have more long-term disadvantages than benefits for society.
Synonym list:
subsequently(adv): rồi sau đó, rồi thì
incentives(n): những hỗ trợ, thưởng (thường là về tài chính)
aptitude(n): năng khiếu
drop out(phrv): bỏ học
penalize(v): đưa ai vào tình thế khó khăn
discrimination(n): sự phân biệt đối xử
counter-productive(adj): phản tác dụng

Sample essay 23
The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing
the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is certainly true that today traffic in cities throughout the world has become a
major problem. This is obvious from the number of vehicles on our roads and the
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commuting for work, study and other purposes and this is evident in the rush
hours.
It is also true that today such daily commuting is not always necessary because
people can do these things from home, we can see this in the options Information
Technology gives us today. For instance, on-line work, distance learning and
shopping facilities are all available via the internet.
However, even if everyone had access to technology and the opportunity to work
from home, it is unrealistic to think that everyone would want to. Even though
the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line makes this option a
possibility, it would mean people had less freedom of choice and less social
contact in their lives. This would have a large impact on society as a whole. So,
in conclusion, I think that while this practice could reduce the traffic problems in
our cities, it is most unlikely to be an acceptable solution. In terms of other
solutions, perhaps we need to think more carefully about facilitating public
transport and limiting private cars in our city centers. The development of
public transport that is not road-based, such as sky trains or subways would
probably be a more workable alternative measure to reduce congestion on our
roads.
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Synonym list:
commute(v): đi lại
unrealistic(adj): không thực tiễn, viển vông
facilitate public transport: tạo điều kiện thuận lợi cho phương tiện công cộng
limit private cars: giới hạn số lượng xe cá nhân
road-based(adj): (về xe cộ) hoạt động trên đường

Sample essay 24
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed
because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people
make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

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It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between
people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion
there are both positive and negative effects.
Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social
life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different
countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like
Skype create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers.
For example, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different
city or country. Finally, many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make
new friends and find people who share common interests, and they can interact
through their computers rather than face to face.
On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation
between people in different countries was much more difficult when
communication was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays,
interactions via email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face
meetings, and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social
contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies
can also have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction.
For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than
bonding with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationships are
a poor substitute for real friendships.
In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between
people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.
(257 words)
Synonym list:
have an influence on: có ảnh hưởng lên
be limited to: giới hạn lại trong phạm vi nào đó
social contexts: các bối cảnh xã hội
discourage real interaction: làm nản lòng con người với tương tác ngoài đời
bond with peers: làm thân với bạn bè
substitute(n): sự thay thế
revolutionise(v): cách mạng hoá

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 Sample essay 25
Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge.
Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree
with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable.
On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of an activity
that is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little
equipment, it is simple to learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember learning to
swim at my local swimming pool when I was a child, and it never felt like a
demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby that I find easy and fun is
photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures without
knowing too much about the technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being
straightforward, taking photos is a satisfying activity.
On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity
is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we
manage to do it successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that requires a
high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years
before I became competent at this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I
did when I started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure when we
reach a higher level of performance because the results are better and the
feeling of achievement is greater.
In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can
be equally pleasurable for different reasons.
(266 words)
Synonym list:
present more of a challenge: mang dáng vẻ của một thử thách
enjoyable(adj): thích thú, hấp dẫn
inexpensive(adj): không đắt đỏ
technicalities: khía cạnh chuyên môn
a greater sense of satisfaction: cảm giác hài lòng lớn hơn
competent(adj): thành thạo, thông thạo

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reach a higher level of performance: đạt đến trình độ cao hơn

Sample essay 26
Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work
in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit
both the individual teenager and society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many young people work on a voluntary basis, and this can only be beneficial
for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we
should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.
Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies,
without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time.
School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students
to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When
young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with
their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have
many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.
At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging
young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the
values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against
their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who
would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told
how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is
surely the best system.
In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my
opinion we should not make this compulsory.
(250 words)
Synonym list:
work on a voluntary basis: làm việc không công
unpaid work: công việc không công
be under pressure: bị áp lực oblige(v): ép buộc
against one’s will: trái với ý nguyện của ai

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resentment(n): sự phẫn nộ
compulsory(adj): bắt buộc

Sample essay 27
There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need
music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the
international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music
is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that
traditional music is more important than modern, international music.
Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives. As children,
we are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language,
or simply as a form of enjoyment. Children delight in singing with others, and it
would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a connection between
participants, regardless of their age.
Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our
favourite songs as part of our life stories. Music both expresses and arouses
emotions in a way that words alone cannot. In short, it is difficult to imagine life
without it.
In my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international music
that has become so popular. International pop music is often catchy and fun, but
it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business
people. Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history
of a country. Traditional styles, such as jazz, can connect us to the past and form
part of our cultural identity. It would be a real pity if pop music became so
predominant that these national styles disappeared.
In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that
traditional music should be given more importance than international music.
(261 words)
Synonym list:
accompany(v): đồng hành
delight(v): vui vẻ với điều gì
arouse emotions: khơi dậy cảm xúc

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commercial product: sản phẩm thương mại
cultural identity: bản sắc văn hoá
predominant(adj): phổ biến, chủ yếu

Sample essay 28
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful
educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an
adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the
drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I
accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe
that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users,
or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting
and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these
games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical
thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming
context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can
improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such
as flying a plane.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.
Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new
targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend
hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher
score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack
of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours
on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been
linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany
gaming addiction.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more
significant than the possible benefits.
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be transported into virtual worlds: được đưa đến những thế giới ảo
engaging(adj): thu hút
encourage imagination and creativity: khuyến khích tính tưởng tượng và sáng tạo
addictive(adj): gây nghiện
progress through the levels of a game: lên level game
sedentary lifestyle: lối sống trì trệ

Sample essay 29
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What
problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures
that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever
before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this
trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older,
several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will
obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a
pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and
governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of
the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax
burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand
for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their
elderly relatives.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems
described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement
age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend
to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure
would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the
number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets
will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare,
accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are
certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.

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(265 words)
Synonym list:
mitigate(v): giảm thiểu, giảm sự trầm trọng của vấn đề
anticipate(v): lường trước
eligible(adj): hợp pháp
a greater tax burden: một gánh nặng lớn về thuế
encourage immigration: khuyến khích nhập cư

Sample essay 30
Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and
to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments
should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer,
while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before
they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal
testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal
experimentation for the development of medicines.
On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal
experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may
be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured.
Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animals
to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They
believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that
scientists should use alternative methods of research.
On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always
be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a
certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human
lives are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently
if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been
developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with
the banning of animal testing for non-medical products, and I feel that it may
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conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for
vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.
(270 words)
Synonym list:
morally wrong: sai trái về mặt đạo đức
animal experimentation: sự thử nghiệm trên động vật
ethical(adj): về mặt đạo đức
justify(v): thanh minh cho điều gì
banning of animal testing for non-medical products: việc cấm việc thử nghiệm
các sản phẩm không thuộc y tế lên động vật

Sample essay 31
Some people think that governments should give financial support to
creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative
artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give
your own opinion.
People have different views about the funding of creative artists. While some
people disagree with the idea of government support for artists, I believe that
money for art projects should come from both governments and other sources.
Some art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, there are many
works of art in public spaces, such as streets or squares in city centres. In
Liverpool, for example, there are several new statues and sculptures in the docks
area of the city, which has been redeveloped recently. These artworks represent
culture, heritage and history. They serve to educate people about the city, and act
as landmarks or talking points for visitors and tourists. Governments and local
councils should pay creative artists to produce this kind of art, because without
their funding our cities would be much less interesting and attractive.
On the other hand, I can understand the arguments against government funding
for art. The main reason for this view is that governments have more important
concerns. For example, state budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare,
infrastructure and security, among other areas. These public services are vital for
a country to function properly, whereas the work of creative artists, even in public
places, is a luxury. Another reason for this opinion is that artists do a job like any

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other professional, and they should therefore earn their own money by selling
their work.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative
sources of financial support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes
necessary.
(262 words)
Synonym list:
redevelop(v): phát triển lại
represent(v): đại diện
landmark(n); công trình được bảo vệ

Sample essay 32
Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and
historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
opinion?
It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than
local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with
this idea.
The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural
or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going,
which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites
through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view.
Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money
they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs,
accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country
should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from
the rest of the world to visit them.
If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and
cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to
that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and
many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like
Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price
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If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of
insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings.
In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from
overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local
residents.
(269 words)
Synonym list:
in favour of: ủng hộ điều gì
keep something going: duy trì cho cái gì tiếp tục
shortsighted(adj): thiển cận
subsidise(v): chu cấp
insufficient funding: thiếu quỹ tài trợ

Sample essay 33
Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each
other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on
others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than
people were in the past.
There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent
on each other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because
the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend
to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Property prices are higher
than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a
deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays,
and they want a better quality of life for their families. This means that both
parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from
grandparents and babysitters for child care.
However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent
these days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed,
which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We
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example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local
university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live
alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows
us to work alone and from any part of the world.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on
each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.
(279 words)
Synonym list:
rely on(phrv): phụ thuộc vào a
mbitious(adj): tham vọng
dispersed(adj): phân tán
count on(phrv): dựa vào

Sample essay 34
When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally,
I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a
career, because I believe that other factors are equally important.
On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their
basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills,
health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a
salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life.
If people choose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors,
they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for
instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not
always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a
family.
Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we
earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the work environment are
extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly
colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of
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satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn,
and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people
choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something
positive to society.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do
not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.
(275 words)
Synonym list:
meet basic needs: đáp ứng các nhu cầu cơ bản
provide sb with enough money to live comfortably: cung cấp tiền bạc cho ai để
sống thoải mái
raise a family: nuôi nấng gia đình
work environment: môi trường làm việc
professional achievements: những thành tựu chuyên môn
motivator: nhân tố thúc đẩy

Sample essay 35
Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than
for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that some celebrities are known for their glamorous lifestyles rather
than for the work they do. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example
for children, I believe that other famous people act as positive role models.
On the one hand, many people do achieve fame without really working for it.
They may have inherited money from parents, married a famous or wealthy
person, or they may have appeared in gossip magazines or on a reality TV
programme. A good example would be Paris Hilton, who is rich and famous for
the wrong reasons. She spends her time attending parties and nightclubs, and her
behaviour promotes the idea that appearance, glamour and media profile are more
important than hard work and good character. The message to young people is
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On the other hand, there are at least as many celebrities whose accomplishments
make them excellent role models for young people. Actors, musicians and sports
stars become famous idols because they have worked hard and applied
themselves to develop real skills and abilities. They demonstrate great effort,
determination and ambition, which is required for someone who wants to be truly
successful in their chosen field. An example is the actor and martial artist Jackie
Chan, who has become world famous through years of practice and hard work.
This kind of self-made celebrity can inspire children to develop their talents
through application and perseverance.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the influence of celebrities on young people
can be positive as well as negative.
(271 words)
Synonym list:
glamorous lifestyles: lối sống xa hoa
set a bad example: tạo ra tấm gương xấu
inherit(v): thừa kế
self-made celebrity: người nổi tiếng tự thân
perseverance(n): sự kiên trì

Sample essay 36
Families who send their children to private schools should not be required
to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should
not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely
disagree with this view.
For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay
for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount
of tax reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this
complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services
that we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have
to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not
expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax

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discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation
where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich.
In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that
supports public schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to have a
high-quality education system with equal opportunities for all young people. This
will result in a well-educated workforce, and in turn a more productive and
prosperous nation. Parents of children in private schools may also see the
advantages of this in their own lives. For example, a company owner will need
well qualified and competent staff, and a well-funded education system can
provide such employees. In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial
concessions should be made for people who choose private education.
(269 words)
Synonym list:
tax reduction: việc giảm thuế
tax discount: khấu trừ thuế
pay the share of the money that supports public schools: trả phần tiền xây dựng
các trường học công lập

Sample essay 37
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste
of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild
animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with
this point of view.
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st
century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans,
and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we
suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species.
Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out.
We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to
feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to
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I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is
usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals,
and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival.
For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the
Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting
changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting
wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on
Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should
exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
(269 words)
Synonym list:
the protection of wild animals: việc bảo vệ các động vật hoang dã
extinction(n): sự tuyệt chủng
die out(phrv): chết hết, tuyệt chủng
accommodate(v): sắp đặt (địa điểm sinh sống)
maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth: giữ gìn sự cân bằng tự nhiên của
mọi sự sống trên Trái Đất.

Sample essay 38
These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while
mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it
is a positive or a negative development?
It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of a househusband,
while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There could
be several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
In recent years, parents have had to adapt to various changes in our societies.
Equal rights movements have made great progress, and it has become normal
for women to gain qualifications and pursue a career. It has also become socially
acceptable for men to stay at home and look after their children. At the same time,
the rising cost of living has meant that both marriage partners usually need to
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children, they may decide who works and who stays at home depending on the
personal preference of each partner, or based on which partner earns more money.
In my view, the changes described above should be seen as progress. We should
be happy to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities,
and in which women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their careers.
Equally, it seems only fair that men should be free to leave their jobs in order to
assume childcare responsibilities if this is what they wish to do. Couples should
be left to make their own decisions about which parental role each partner takes,
according to their particular circumstances and needs.
In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women in the family are a result of
wider changes in society, and I believe that these developments are desirable.
(274 words)
Synonym list:
househusband: người chồng nội trợ
breadwinner: trụ cột gia đình
equal rights movements: các phong trào đòi quyền bình đẳng
progress(n): sự phát triển, tiến trình phát triển
sacrifice one’s careers: hy sinh sự nghiệp
assume childcare responsibilities: đảm nhiệm trách nhiệm chăm sóc con cái

Sample essay 39
Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key
to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures
would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views
and give your own opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads
safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used
together to promote better driving habits.
On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to
drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent,
meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various types of
driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness

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courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show
dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result, we
would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they follow
the rules more carefully.
On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different
ways that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people
properly before they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as
part of an extended or more difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could
be paid to safe road design. For example, signs can be used to warn people, speed
bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help
to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils
could reduce road accidents by investing in better public transport, which would
mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.
In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that
other road safety measures should also be introduced.
(269 words)
Synonym list:
strict punishments: những hình phạt nặng
act as a deterrent: như một tác nhân ngăn cản
licence suspension: thu bằng lái
deter sb from doing sth: ngăn cản ai khỏi việc làm gì

Sample essay 40
Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced
films.
Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local
film industries?
It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically
produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe
that governments should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry.
There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable
than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film
industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and

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to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’
or the James Bond films are examples of such productions, and their global appeal
is undeniable. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is
that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by
the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget
filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.
In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In
every country, there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be
given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget
productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors
and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments
did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film
industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New
Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the
Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies.
In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the
quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign
productions that currently dominate the market.
(294 words)
Synonym list:
domestically produced films: phim sản xuất trong nước
established film industries: ngành công nghiệp sản xuất phim lâu đời và có tiếng
tăm
blockbusters: phim bom tấn
big-budget films: những bộ phim có kinh phí sản xuất lớn
accomplished(adj): nổi tiếng, thành công
low-budget filmmaking: sản xuất phim với kinh phí thấp
dominate(v): thống trị

Sample essay 41
The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people
should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas
are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.

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To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem
incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some
traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not
be forgotten.
On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are
becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were
advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers
expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the
‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own
choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between
the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional
roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer
accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.
On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to
the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to
working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these
behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job
market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness
and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into
contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important
than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would
lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and
neighbourliness.
In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful
in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.
(299 words)
Synonym list:
be incompatible with: tương thích, phù hợp
outdated(adj): lỗi thời
relevant(adj): liên quan
erode(v): xói mòn, làm ăn mòn
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applicable(adj): áp dụng được
attach(v): gán với
sense of community and neighbourliness: tính cộng đồng và tình làng nghĩa xóm

Sample essay 42
Smoking can cause serious illnesses and should be made illegal. To what
extent do you agree?
There are clear arguments for banning smoking, based largely on health, but there
is perhaps a stronger case to be made for maintaining the current situation, as will
now be explained.
The most important factor for keeping smoking legal is that the decision to smoke
is not something that should be controlled by the government, but by the
individuals. If a person decides to smoke, they do so of their own free will and
this should be respected, as it is the government's role to advise against harmful
practices, but ultimately not to make decisions for its citizens.
The other reason for allowing smoking is that by making laws against it is more
likely to result in the sale of tobacco moving to the black market, and
consequently increasing the level of associated crime. There will still be people
who cannot overcome their addiction, and will search for any means available to
access cigarettes. A clear example of this reaction can be seen in the illegal sale
of other drugs such as cocaine and marijuana. Obviously, there is the fact that
smoking is known to have adverse health effects on both the smoker and those
around them who are affected by passive smoking. Yet there are other lifestyle
choices that also have a negative impact, such as fast food and alcohol, and
banning these items would restrict the choice available to the consumers.
In conclusion, the decision to ban smoking, although having some advantages,
would be more likely to have an overall negative effect. It would therefore be
better for the government to continue campaigns that educate people about the
potential dangers of the habit.
(278 words)
Synonym list:
do something on one’s free will: tự ý mình làm điều gì
practice(n): hành vi

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passive smoking: hút thuốc gián tiếp
restrict(v): giới hạn

Sample essay 43
We no longer need to have animals kept in zoos, so zoos should be closed. Do
you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
There has long been an argument against maintaining zoos in which animals are
kept away from their natural habitat, and there is strong evidence to suggest that
technology has developed to a point where such institutions are no longer needed,
as will now be argued.
Traditionally, the principal argument voiced by those who wish to retain zoos
was that it allowed children and adults to see animals which they more than likely
would not have had a chance to do if this had required visiting the creature's
natural environment. Yet there are now online videos and websites where these
animals can be seen in high definition, therefore no longer needing to go to
enclosures to see the animals. This is clearly evident by the declining number of
visitors in recent years.
In addition, there are many cases in which animals held in captivity are not well
cared for and are used solely to exploit them for profit. In some rare cases, the
animals can suffer from neglect or malnutrition, and rather than being kept
healthy are simply replaced when they are no longer of any value. Granted, there
are situations in which endangered species are protected and their numbers
allowed to rebuild by housing them in the security of a zoo. However, in most
cases the same effect is better achieved by using more open plan wildlife parks
rather than traditional caged enclosures.
In sum, the factors which first led to the creation of zoos have been reduced by
the ability of technology, so unless there is some advantage for the species itself,
then the use of zoos should no longer be supported.
(273 words)
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keep away from: giữ khỏi cái gì
voice(v): lên tiếng
enclosure(n): khu khép kín
be held in captivity: giam giữ
wildlife parks: các công viên hoang dã

Sample essay 44
In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could.
Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?
With an increasing world population and subsequent environmental concerns, it
is important to dispose of trash in an eco-friendly manner, yet there are a
significant number of places around the world that fail to do so.
There are a number of reasons that mean that recycling is not done as effectively
as it could, the primary problem being the attitude of the general public. Lethargy
or lack of knowledge leads people to throw all of their rubbish into one place,
meaning that material that could have been sorted and reused is buried in landfills.
In the UK, for example, over 20 million tonnes of waste is buried whilst less than
1 percent of that amount is actively recycled. There is also the matter of
availability, as there are situations in which recycling facilities are either
extremely limited or nonexistent.
In order to combat these issues, the first step would be educating the general
public about the facts of waste disposal and recycling, perhaps even enforcing
participation by levying a fine against those who do not separate their rubbish
into different types. Hand in hand with this, making recycling centres more
available would also help, or perhaps adopting a system used in some Asian
countries where households are given a number of different containers into which
to sort their rubbish for collection.
Overall, it seems that a change of attitude is needed as well as more resources
to manage different recyclable materials. This can be achieved through a
combination of education and penalties, as well as ensuring better access to
facilities.
(261 words)
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dispose of trash: loại bỏ rác thải
lethargy(n): sự thiếu hụt, sự thờ ơ
recycling facilities: các cơ sở tái chế
combat(v): đối mặt
levy a fine: áp đặt xử phạt
a change of attitude: sự thay đổi về thái độ hoặc cách nhìn nhận

Sample essay 45
In some countries, people are forced to retire when they reach a certain age.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Compulsory retirement is common in many countries when members of the
workforce reach 65 or 70, and this has both advantages and downsides, as will
now be considered.
The main advantage of requiring people to leave their job at a certain age is that
it provides opportunities for younger members of staff to join the workforce,
often meaning that companies benefit from having lower wages to pay for the
new recruits and also having younger, potentially more dynamic employees. This
in turn could well give the company the required boost to continue being
profitable.
Another advantage is that some older people may choose to keep working more
out of habit than enjoyment, and therefore a mandatory retirement may
encourage them to enjoy their life more, having the free time to engage in hobbies
and interests such as gardening, which they may not have previously had time for
up to that point.
Yet there are significant disadvantages in forced retirement. Older staff members
often have more experience, and may have no desire to leave their job. Requiring
them to leave could mean a skill shortage for the company as well as a feeling of
discontent from the employee. Added to that is the rising number of older people
and the subsequent drain on resources if they are not working; if there are more
elderly people on pensions or other benefits, the increased tax burden falls on the
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In conclusion, there are both social and economic benefits in allowing older
people to remain in employment if so desired, so compulsory retirement would
not be recommended.
(266 words)
Synonym list:
workforce(n): lực lượng lao động
dynamic(adj): năng động
boost(n): lực thúc đẩy
out of habit: vì thói quen
mandatory(adj): bắt buộc
engage in: tham gia vào
feeling of discontent: cảm giác bất mãn
drain(n): sự chảy ra, sự mất đi
fall on: đổ lên

Sample essay 46
In many countries, schoolchildren are required to wear school uniforms. Do
you think this should be enforced in all schools?
In many countries, pupils are required to wear uniforms when attending school,
and I believe this is something that should be enforced for the following reasons.
Primarily, students, especially those in their teenagers years, are under pressure
both academically and socially; insisting on a standardised uniform within the
school alleviates some of this as it means that the student does not have to worry
about whether their peers think that they are dressed well or in the latest fashions.
This has the added advantage for those from lower income families who may
simply not be able to afford the clothes worn by those from more affluent
families. Not only does it remove the social pressure, but wearing a school
uniform also has a psychological advantage, as the student is dressed in the mode
of attire used for study. Much like wearing a suit and tie may signal going to
work for many people, wearing a school uniform prepares the child for the day
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However, this perhaps works best for younger students. By age 16 or 17, it may
be appropriate for the student to wear more casual clothing when they reach their
later teens, as the idea of 'conforming' by wearing a uniform could discourage
the student from pursuing further education and this is often the time in which
young adults are looking to establish their own clear identity. It is at this point
that it may be more productive to allow more relaxed clothing such as jeans.
In conclusion, although a school uniform does have advantages at certain stages
of a student's academic career, there is also a time when the enforcement of a
standardised set of clothing may be counterproductive.
(282 words)
Synonym list:
be under pressure: dưới áp lực
standardised uniform: đồng phục tiêu chuẩn
alleviate(v): xoa dịu, làm giảm nhẹ
lower income families: những gia đình có thu nhập thấp hơn
attire(n): bộ trang phục
discourage(v): làm nản lòng
establish one’s identity: hình thành sự khác biệt hay bản sắc cá nhân

Sample essay 47
Some people think that social skills are as important as academic
qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traditionally, academic achievements are often regarded as an indispensable
factor for success. However, there are a handful of individuals who hold the belief
that the art of social interaction also shares equal importance in determining
one’s success in life. My sentiment is on par with this viewpoint, and some of
my good grounds will be presented in the essay below.
It is conspicuous that academic qualifications are of great significance when it
comes to seeking employment. Undoubtedly, academic qualifications reflect a
person’s educational background and personal experiences. This usually lays a
foundation for an overall evaluation of any candidate. Based on what is written
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appropriate one to join their organizations. In other words, educational
achievements can exert a tremendous impact on the judgement of the
employers who are looking for potential white-collar workers.
Simultaneously, it cannot be denied that the art of social interaction plays a
pivotal role in one’s success as well. In actual fact, in this day and age, having a
high level of social skills is considered to be a strength in the workplace. This is
due to the fact that managers often put an emphasis on the ability of
coordination, cooperation, and communication to enhance efficiency. A salient
example of this is the solidarity of the staff within an office, which would foster
a positive attitude towards work and a sense of community, leading to a sense
of self-satisfaction from their job.
To conclude, in a society in which people are becoming increasingly
interdependent, one cannot succeed with mere qualifications. Thus, social
interaction paves the way for a person to advance in his career as well.
(280 words)
Synonym list:
be regarded as: được đánh giá là
indispensable(adj): không thể thiếu
the art of social interaction: nghệ thuật tương tác xã hội
share equal importance: có cùng sự quan trọng
my sentiment is on par with: Quan điểm của tôi giống với
conspicuous(adj): rõ ràng
educational background: nền tảng học vấn
exert a tremendous impact on: tạo một tác động lớn lên
pivotal(adj): cực kỳ quan trọng
put an emphasis: đặt nặng
foster a positive attitude: nuôi dưỡng một thái độ tích cực
self-satisfaction(n): sự tự thoả mãn
interdependent(adj): phụ thuộc lẫn nhau

Sample essay 48
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In many cities, there are areas of land that are used as parks. With increasing
population levels, these areas would be better used to provide more housing.
Do you agree or disagree?
In many major metropolitan areas, land is set aside for all members of the public
to enjoy, and this is something that should remain as will now be discussed.
The main reason in support of retaining parkland is that it provides a communal
area for people who may otherwise live in apartments or small houses without
access to a garden. It has been well documented that time spent outdoors has clear
health benefits, not only for exercise and fresh air, but also for mental health.
Another reason is that increasing populations in urban areas has a number of
negative subsidiary effects, such as the pressure on sanitation and clean water
supplies. Replacing parks with more housing will only further compound this
problem. In Mexico City, for example, the population is so dense that in many
areas, delivery of fresh water supplies is under extreme pressure. On a related
note, there is also an environmental advantage in having parkland, as it is a source
of oxygen production which may otherwise be lacking in urban areas.
Admittedly, the level of the population relocating to urban areas is increasing for
employment reasons as there are often more jobs available, and for this to be
possible, additional land will need to be used for housing and this needs to be
sourced near the place of work to avoid excess travel. However, it is arguable that
it would be better to create larger suburbs than overcrowded centres of cities.
Overall, it is clear that there are no substantial advantages in removing these green
areas, and given their advantages, they should be retained, and even expanded,
wherever possible.
(273 words)
Synonym list:
set aside: dẹp sang một bên
parkland(n): khu vực nhiều cây cối
communal area: khu vực công cộng
pressure on sanitation and clean water supplies: áp lực lên vệ sinh và các nguồn
nước sạch
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overcrowd(adj): đông đúc quá mức

Sample essay 49
We have become a disposable society, preferring to buy new products rather
than repair existing items.
Why do you think this is? How can this trend be reversed?
It has become common not to try to extend the life of items but rather to
purchase replacements, and this can be attributed to a number of social changes,
as will now be presented along with some thoughts on how this attitude can be
altered.
Of the many reasons why society in general opts not to repair items, perhaps the
most influential is changes in technology. Modernised production methods
allow goods to be mass produced at a lower cost, but often at the expense of
quality; this means that although they may not have the durability of handmade
items, they are cheaper and thus can be replaced. In addition, evolutions in
technology are now rapid, and the impulse to own the latest gadget encourages
purchasers to continually buy new items. A clear indication of this is mobile
phones, where in the last decade new features and abilities are released constantly.
To address this, there are a number of potential approaches. One is that
governments could raise the level of tax on brand new items whilst lowering the
taxation on repair shops, therefore supporting those who are happy with their
existing technology and penalising those who constantly race to acquire the very
latest model. In turn, this would encourage the companies producing such items
to build them in a way that new developments can be incorporated into it, rather
than requiring it to be disposed of.
To conclude, it is only by a change in attitude that we can decrease the
continued consumption of new items and increase the retention of those that
may need some repair.
(273 words)
Synonym list:
extend the life of items: kéo dài tuổi thọ của sản phẩm
purchase replacements: mua sản phẩm thay thế
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mass produce: sản xuất hàng loạt, sản xuất số lượng lớn
durability(n): sự bền (của sản phẩm)
impulse(n): hưng phấn, hứng
penalise(v): đưa ai vào tình thế bất lợi
be incorporated into: được kết hợp vào
dispose of: vứt bỏ
change in attitude: sự thay đổi về nhận thức, thái độ
decrease the continued consumption: giảm thiểu sự tiêu thụ đang tăng dần
retention(n): sự giữ lại

Sample essay 50
It is very important for people to be able to speak more than one language.
Therefore, children should start learning a foreign language as young as
possible. Do you agree or disagree?
Increasing globalisation has made it almost essential for many people to learn
more than their native tongue so they can converse with people from other
countries, and there are strong arguments to be made in support of acquiring
second or even third languages as a young child, as will now be considered.
Perhaps the most persuasive reason is that children have a far better ability to
learn when young compared to later on in life. Information is more readily
absorbed and put into practice, and younger children are able to retain what
they are taught. It has also been proven that when learning a language at a young
age, a child is able to better pronounce words or sounds that may be absent in
their own language. In addition, younger children also have fewer external
concerns to contend with. To illustrate, a parent with a job, bills and the
responsibilities of looking after their children will be less able to focus on learning
a new language compared to a child who is simply attending school. The younger
the better, as this also means that they are not yet overwhelmed with homework
and other preoccupations common to students in their early and mid teens.
Granted, there is an argument that attempting to learn an additional language at
an early age may result in the child confusing the primary and secondary
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as other children. However, this can be negated by having specific and separate
classes for each language, improving skills in both.
In conclusion, assuming the classes are well taught, then the advantages outweigh
the negatives.
(278 words)
Synonym list:
converse with: nói chuyện với
in support of: ủng hộ
absorb(v): hấp thụ
put into practice: đưa vào thực tiễn
be overwhelmed with: choáng ngợp với cái gì
confuse the primary and secondary language: lẫn lộn giữa tiếng mẹ đẻ và ngôn
ngữ thứ hai
have a good a grasp: nắm chắc kiến thức nào đó
negate: vô hiệu hoá

Sample essay 51
Driving a car is a valuable skill and should therefore be taught in schools. Do
you agree or disagree?
There are many important life skills such as the ability to operate a vehicle that
are developed both through childhood and early adulthood, but teaching these
should not necessarily be left to education departments, as will now be argued.
The principal provider of knowledge to a child should be the parent, and
although more academic subjects such as science and languages should be left to
professionals, abilities like driving and swimming are best taught by parents, at
least initially. If the parent feels they are not suited to the task, or the law in that
country does not allow parents to teach their children to drive, then a driving
instructor should be sought, not a school. In addition, it could be argued that
although operating a car is a useful skill, it is not essential and should be
something that each individual decides rather than being a compulsory part of
their education. Other subjects which provide a more rounded education should

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be emphasised, as this will allow the student to be able to find a position of
employment more easily once they graduate from school or further studies.
However, an argument could be made that the ability to drive could be required
in an emergency situation, and therefore should be taught. Yet situations where
this would actually be required would be rare, and less valuable than other skills
such as first aid.
To conclude, it would be better for schools to focus on academic topics, leaving
the parents or the student to decide when and how to learn other skills like driving.
(261 words)
Synonym list:
principal provider of knowledge: người truyền đạt kiến thức chính
be suited to: phù hợp với
compulsory(adj): bắt buộc
rounded education: nền giáo dục toàn diện
emphasise(v): nhấn mạnh
academic topics: các chuyên đề học thuật

Sample essay 52
Compared to previous generations, an increasing number of people are
travelling overseas for holidays.
Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
There are a number of factors which explain the rising tendency for people to
take trips overseas for pleasure, and this has both advantages and disadvantages
as will now be discussed.
Innovations in technology have made overseas travel not only faster, but also
more accessible for those on a limited budget, meaning that in some cases a
family can holiday in a different country with less inconvenience and a better
price than staying in their home country. A flight from the UK to Spain, for
example, can be accomplished in less time than it takes to get from one side of
England to the other.
One of the clearest advantages here is that it gives people the opportunity to
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world. By visiting other countries, people will understand more about other
cultures, and can learn to appreciate the cultural differences that exist. There
are also benefits for the holiday itself, as many people tend to holiday in
destinations that have better weather.
However, there are disadvantages for the country, as citizens are spending their
money overseas rather than in the domestic market. However, this is negated by
the fact that although people leave their own country for a holiday, other people
visit their country for the same reason. In New Zealand, for example, money spent
overseas by people leaving the country is replaced by those who visit the country
for their holiday.
To conclude, advances in technology have given the consumer more choice in
overseas holidays, and this has both positive and negative ramifications.
(266 words)
Synonym list:
rising tendency: xu hướng nổi lên
Innovations in technology: những tiến bộ trong công nghệ
give a broader perspective: mang lại một cái nhìn rộng hơn
appreciate the cultural differences: nhận biết những sự khác biệt về văn hoá

Sample essay 53
In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each
week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe
that this money should not be given.
Discuss both points of view and give your own point of view.
The payment of a benefit for those who are out of work is a sensitive issue with
strong opinions for and against. This essay will now examine both sides of the
argument and present a final conclusion.
Those in favour of this financial support argue that in some cases, it is not the
fault of the unemployed person, and that the assistance is needed for them to
survive while they continue to look for work. Without this, there is the potential
concern that crime would increase due to a lack of alternatives. To illustrate, if a
parent with dependent children could not find work and had no other help, they
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hungry. On the other hand, there are those that argue that paying someone who
does not work simply encourages people to remain unemployed, especially
when the alternative could be a relatively low paid job. There are situations where
people are simply not interested in finding a position of employment as it offers
very little additional money compared to doing nothing at home and receiving
free handouts. This situation could escalate as people who are on a low income
may resent paying a portion of their tax payments to support those who make
little or no effort to find employment.
Considering both points of view, it seems that a compromise may be the best
solution. Payment of the unemployment benefit should be limited to a short
period of time, after which the amount received should be progressively reduced.
This would encourage those receiving the benefit to be more proactive when
looking for work.
(277 words)
Synonym list:
be out of work: thất nghiệp
assistance(n): sự giúp đỡ
resort to: tìm đến cái gì như là lựa chọn cuối cùng
remain unemployed: giữ nguyên tình trạng thất nghiệp
escalate(v): leo thang
considering both points of view: Khi cân nhắc cả hai quan điểm
proactive(adj): chủ động

Sample essay 54
Teenagers are spending an increasing amount of time on the Internet, and
this is having a negative effect on their social skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is not uncommon these days for younger people to spend an hour or more a day
online, and although this does detract from time spent talking to family
members, it is not necessarily affecting their social development as will now be
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The primary reason to disagree with the statement is that a considerable amount
of time that youngsters are on the internet is actually spent on social networking
sites such as Facebook. As these sites are specifically designed for social
purposes, the argument that social skills are declining would appear to be invalid.
It is only when the time online is spent playing single player games or generally
surfing for entertainment without interacting with others online that this could be
considered unsociable.
In addition, an increasing dependence on the Internet for a broad range of tasks
from completing homework and studies to checking bank balances and searching
for employment means that being online is often simply an alternative manner of
working or completing necessary chores, and should not be considered related to
social skills at all. Admittedly, if too much time is spent online playing games or
looking at websites, then there is the potential for surfers to become less able to
interact with people directly. However, this can be negated by ensuring that time
online is limited to a reasonable amount, and can even be controlled by using
technology that actively records the amount of time online.
To sum up, it is not that the Internet is causing us to become less sociable, it is
simply that the nature of social interaction is changing.
(267 words)
Synonym list:
detract from: làm chệch hướng, làm xao nhãng
social networking sites: các trang web mạng xã hội
invalid(adj): vô lý
unsociable(adj): không giao tiếp xã hội
surfer(n): người lướt web

Sample essay 55
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having older people living in
the family home?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.

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In many traditional cultures, members of the same family will live together from
childhood to old age. In many cases, older family members living at home is a
trend which has both positive and negative aspects.
A significant point in favour of this is that it provides a good support network
for parents, both of whom may work outside of the home. Having grandparents
on hand to look after the children can potentially provide a more stable
environment as the child will have a familiar face at home until the parents have
finished working. The influence of the grandparents extends beyond simple
babysitting, however. They are able to provide a source of advice and knowledge
that can greatly benefit all members of the family on a range of subjects,
especially for when there are newborn babies in the home as this can be a stressful
time for new parents.
There are, of course, also disadvantages in having older people at home. There is
the issue of space, as the family home may not be big enough to accommodate
everyone comfortably. There is also the issue of deciding which members of the
family should live together, as both the husband and wife may both have living
parents.
To conclude, there are clear positives and negatives to having older members of
the family living in the same house. Although at times there may be typical
frictions when people live together, this is arguably outweighed by the
advantages of the support and knowledge older people are able to offer.
(256 words)
Synonym list:
in favour of: ủng hộ cho
extend(v): kéo dài, trải dài
babysitting: trông trẻ
accommodate(v): chứa
friction(n): rạn nứt

Sample essay 56
Medical procedures for cosmetic purposes should not be allowed. Do you
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There is a rising tendency for people of all ages to have surgery to improve their
appearance, although there are a number of arguments against this which will
now be examined.
The main reason that such procedures should be discouraged is that people
should be more confident in themselves, and not be swayed by images in the
media. People are constantly bombarded with pictures of people looking
glamorous, but these photos have often been digitally altered for the best effect.
Many young people, however, suffer from low self-esteem and feel that through
operations they could look like the celebrities they see.
Another argument against cosmetic procedures is that this diverts resources from
more necessary surgeries, which in turn causes longer delays for those in
desperate need. Even though such procedures may be done privately, it still
requires the attendance of medical staff that would perhaps otherwise be available
to the public health system. This can be seen in the waiting lists in the UK, for
example, where it can take several months or longer to have a hip replacement
operation.
However, there are situations when cosmetic surgery can vastly improve the
patient's quality of life, such as those who have suffered significant burns or
other disfigurements. There are many examples of people for whom surgical
work has allowed them to rebuild their life in ways which would have been
exceptionally difficult or impossible otherwise.
To conclude, it would perhaps be better if cosmetic surgery was discouraged
unless it offered significant improvements to the patient's quality of life, and
should perhaps also be limited to people between a certain age.
(270 words)
Synonym list:
procedure: thủ thuật y tế
sway(v): lay chuyển, thuyết phục
be bombarded with: bị choáng ngợp, vây quanh bởi điều gì
alter(v): thay đổi
self- esteem(n): lòng tự trọng
divert(v): làm chệch hướng

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burns or other disfigurements: các vết bỏng hoặc biến dạng trên cơ thể

Sample essay 57
Traditional methods of food preparation are becoming less popular. Why do
you think this is?
Meals made in an old fashion are not as common these days for a number of
different reasons, as will now be explained.
The primary factor is that more modern variants of traditional dishes are often
less time consuming to prepare. It is not uncommon for both parents to work
outside of the home, meaning that there is less opportunity for people to spend
the hours required in shopping, preparing and cooking, so opting for a quick and
easy meal is often preferred.
Another significant cause for this decline is that the skills that in previous
generations were handed down from parents to children are no longer considered
as valuable, and as such, many younger people simply lack the required
knowledge. Already many traditional skills such as bread making are no longer
passed on, and this is illustrated in the rising consumption of convenience food
among younger people.
A third contributor to the fall in traditional food preparation is also related to the
modern global nature of most societies. Historically, traditional meals were
common because the required ingredients were all that was available locally.
These days, however, most large cities have shops and restaurants with food from
all over the globe. A clear example of this influence is in the United Kingdom,
where the most popular takeaway food is Indian cuisine.
Ultimately, there are many factors both societal and economic that are leading to
the decline in traditional meals, and this is a trend that is likely to continue into
the future.
(254 words)
Synonym list:
variants of traditional dishes: các loại món ăn truyền thống
opt for: chọn lựa
hand down: truyền lại

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the rising consumption of convenience food: sự gia tăng trong việc tiêu thụ đồ ăn
nhanh

Sample essay 58
Traffic problems are increasing in most cities. What can be done about this?
Increasing urban populations have led to a corresponding increase in the number
of vehicles on the road, resulting in rising congestion in city centres. There are a
number of potential solutions to the problem, as will now be discussed.
Perhaps the first step to take would be to improve the availability of public
transport and install bus lanes throughout the city. Whilst this would, in the short
term, increase the pressure on the roads, it is likely to result in more people using
public transport and leaving their vehicles at home. One way of encouraging
people to adopt buses and trains is to lower the price and expand the timetable.
Following that, local councils or the government could make it more difficult for
car drivers to use their car by either charging a levy or only allowing certain
vehicles in city areas on certain days. A similar system has been running in
London for some time, and has resulted in fewer vehicles on the roads. An
alternative idea, one which is more extreme than levies and selective use, is to
simply prevent private passenger vehicles from entering the city at all. By having
only public transport options, there would be no problem with congestion and
would allow for more pedestrian areas in the metropolitan areas.
To sum up, there are a range of options available to reduce the number of cars in
the centre of cities, but ultimately they all rely on an increased public transport
system and encouraging drivers and their passengers to use it.
(256 words)
Synonym list:
corresponding(adj): tương ứng
congestion(n): sự tắc nghẽn
improve the availability of public transport: cải thiện sự có sẵn của hệ thống giao
thông công cộng
expand the timetable: mở rộng lịch trình chuyến đi
pedestrian areas: các khu vực dành riêng cho người đi bộ

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 Sample essay 59
Studying business or science related subjects at university level is more
important than arts related courses like literature.
Do you agree or disagree?
When considering tertiary level education, there is a school of thought that
believes that studying more practical topics such as commerce, physics or biology
is more valuable to society than spending time focussed on novels and other
literary subjects. However, this argument is flawed for a number of reasons as
will now be presented.
Although certain fields of study lead more directly into a position of employment,
university education is valuable not only for the education learned but also as an
indication that the person has the ability to learn, and as such it is irrelevant
whether it is a career based course of study or something more intangible, like
the arts. It suggests to potential employers that a person can learn new skills, and
this is often as important as what is already known.
Moreover, those that complete an arts related degree could potentially go on to
be writers, poets or playwrights, for example, and thus contribute to society in a
cultural form rather than financially or technologically. The opinion that the
writer is of less worth than the scientist is very biassed, especially when it comes
to a contribution to society.
Admittedly, there is the point that science and business related education can
financially benefit a country, whereas art and literature do not offer the same
value economically. However, a country's wealth is not calculated in financial
terms alone.
In sum, therefore, both types of education offer advantages to the country, so
neither should be preference over the other as both have a degree of value to
society.
(259 words)
Synonym list:
tertiary level education: giáo dục cấp cao
flawed(adj): còn thiếu sót, lỗ hổng
intangible(adj): không sờ thấy được, trừu tượng

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preference(n): việc thích cái này hơn cái khác

Sample essay 60
People who start a university course but do not complete it should be fined.
Do you agree or disagree?
Of the number of undergraduates that begin a course of tertiary study, there is a
percentage of those that do not finish the course, but the argument that they should
therefore be financially penalised is riddled with potential problems.
It needs to be considered first of all what motivated the student to leave their
studies before they have graduated. If the decision was made due to financial
constraints, then clearly adding an additional fine is simply adding to the
pressure. For example, there are many older people who decide to go back to
university but may already have a mortgage and dependent children, and may
consequently find that their income is insufficient to cover their needs.
Moreover, rather than attempting to make the student pay, it might be better to
consider whether the student was actually given sufficient support during their
studies. There are situations where the student may feel that they are not following
the course and are unable to complete the required assignments, and therefore
leave the course. Retention rates may be improved if there were personal tutors
on hand to offer advice to those students who are losing confidence in their ability
to remain on the course.
On the other hand, there is an argument that the risk of a penalty would dissuade
people from starting courses that they were not particularly motivated to
complete in the first place.
In conclusion, therefore, although the idea of being charged for non completion
of a course would perhaps reduce the number of uncommitted enrolments, it is
not an advisable solution for genuine students.
(263 words)
Synonym list:
be riddled with: tràn đầy lỗ hổng hoặc rắc rối
financial constraints: những ràng buộc tài chính
insufficient(adj): không đủ

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lose confidence: mất sự tự tin
dissuade sb from doing sth: thuyết phục ai không làm gì
uncommitted enrolments: những người học không có sự cam kết

Sample essay 61
Computers have changed the way people study.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computers as study
aids?
Advancements in technology have made a significant difference to the way in
which people are able to learn, and though this is mostly beneficial, there are also
some negative aspects that will also be considered.
Beginning with the positive points, the ability to work on assessments and
coursework on a computer means that work can be saved safely and transported
from place to place. Before the arrival of computers, students traditionally had
files and folders with their course notes, and this took up a considerable amount
of room and was difficult to keep track of; now, complete lecture notes and
much more can be stored on a flash drive that can be easily put in a pocket or
bag.
In addition, lectures and learning material can be made available online, allowing
for a multimedia educational environment. This is likely to engage a wider
range of students as it has the ability to cater for a wider range of learning styles.
For example, some students study best by repeatedly listening to a teacher, and
this can now be achieved more conveniently by having videos available.
On the downside, there are occasions where information stored digitally can be
deleted, overwritten or corrupted, all situations that do not occur on traditional
paper based work. There is also the concern that material can be garnered from
the Internet and passed off as the students own work, making plagiarism a
potential issue. However, the concept of plagiarism has long been a problem, and
there are computer programs available today that will pinpoint the source of non
original work.
In conclusion, although there are potential disadvantages, they are outweighed by
the positives.
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Synonym list:
work on assessments and coursework on a computer: làm các dự án hoặc bài tập
trên máy tính
arrival(n): sự đến, sự xuất hiện
take up a considerable amount of room: chiếm diện tích khá lớn
keep track of: theo dõi cái gì
be stored on a flash drive: được lưu trữ trong USB
multimedia educational environment: môi trường giáo dục đa phương tiện
cater for: cung ứng, cung cấp cho cái gì
digitally(adj): số hoá
be overwritten or corrupted: bị viết đè lên hoặc làm hỏng
file garner(v): thu thập
pass off: truyền lại plagiarism(n): việc đạo văn
pinpoint(v): xác định

Sample essay 62
Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in
today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
The world that we live in today is dominated by advertising. Adverts are on
television, on the World Wide Web, in the street and even on our mobile phones.
However, many of the strategies used to sell a product or service can be
considered immoral or unacceptable.
To begin with, the fact that we cannot escape from advertising is a significant
cause for complaint. Constant images and signs wherever we look can be very
intrusive and irritating at times. Take for example advertising on the mobile
phone. With the latest technology mobile companies are now able to send
advertising messages via SMS to consumer’s phones whenever they choose.
Although we expect adverts in numerous situations, it now seems that there are
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A further aspect of advertising that I would consider unethical is the way that it
encourages people to buy products they may not need or cannot afford. Children
and young people in particular are influenced by adverts showing the latest toys,
clothing or music and this can put enormous pressure on the parents to buy these
products. In addition, the advertising of tobacco products and alcohol has long
been a controversial issue, but cigarette adverts have only recently been banned
in many countries. It is quite possible that alcohol adverts encourage excessive
consumption and underage drinking, yet restrictions have not been placed on
this type of advertising in the same way as smoking.
It is certainly true to say that advertising is an everyday feature of our lives.
Therefore, people are constantly being encouraged to buy products or services
that might be too expensive, unnecessary or even unhealthy. In conclusion, many
aspects of advertising do appear to be morally wrong and are not acceptable in
today's society.
(296 words)
Synonym list:
be dominated: bị thống trị
immoral(adj): vô đạo đức
unacceptable(adj): không thể chấp nhận được
cause for complaint: lý do để phàn nàn
intrusive(adj): xâm phạm
unethical(adj): trái đạo đức
encourage excessive consumption and underage drinking: khuyến khích việc tiêu
thụ và sử dụng rượu bia cho người chưa đến tuổi

Sample essay 63
Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine.
However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be
dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional
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that it is dangerous, and feel that both alternative and conventional medicine can
be useful.
There are several reasons why the conventional medical community is often
dismissive of alternatives. Firstly, there has been little scientific research into
such medicine, so there is a scarcity of evidence to support the claims of their
supporters. Furthermore, people often try such treatment because of
recommendations from friends, and therefore come to the therapist with a very
positive attitude, which may be part of the reason for the cure. Moreover, these
therapies are usually only useful for long-term, chronic conditions. Acute medical
problems, such as accidental injury, often require more conventional methods.
On the other hand, there remain strong arguments for the use of alternatives.
Despite the lack of scientific proof, there is a lot of anecdotal evidence to suggest
that these therapies work. In addition, far from being dangerous, they often have
few or no side effects, so the worst outcome would be no change. One of the
strongest arguments for the effectiveness of alternative therapies in the West is
that, whilst conventional medicine is available without charge, many people are
prepared to pay considerable sums for alternatives. If they were totally unhelpful,
it would be surprising if this continues.
I strongly believe that conventional medicine and alternative therapies can and
should coexist. They have different strengths, and can both be used effectively to
target particular medical problems. The best situation would be for alternative
therapies to be used to support and complement conventional medicine.
(280 words)
Synonym list:
pre-date: xuất hiện hoặc xảy ra trước
be dismissive of: không ủng hộ, bài trừ
scarcity(n): sự khan hiếm
anecdotal(adj) mang tính cá nhân, không có chứng thực từ khoa học
coexist(v): cùng tồn tại

Sample essay 64

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get
better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university
education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, more and more people are making the choice to go to university.
While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of a university
education is to improve job prospects, others think that society and the individual
benefit in much broader ways.
It is certainly true that one of the main aims of university is to secure a better
job. The majority of people want to improve their future career prospects and
attending university is one of the best ways to do this as it increases a person's
marketable skills and attractiveness to potential employers. In addition, further
education is very expensive for many people, so most would not consider it if it
would not provide them with a more secure future and a higher standard of living.
Thus, job prospects are very important.
However, there are other benefits for individuals and society. Firstly, the
independence of living away from home is a benefit because it helps the students
develop better social skills and improve as a person. A case in point is that many
students will have to leave their families, live in halls of residence and meet new
friends. As a result, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to
live more fulfilling lives. Secondly, society will gain from the contribution that
the graduates can make to the economy. We are living in a very competitive
world, so countries need educated people in order to compete and prosper.
Therefore, I believe that although a main aim of university education is to get the
best job, there are clearly further benefits. If we continue to promote and
encourage university attendance, it will lead to a better future for individuals and
society.
(279 words)
Synonym list:
be of the opinion that: có quan điểm là
job prospects: triển vọng nghề nghiệp
secure a better job: giữ được một công việc tốt hơn

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đó
maturity(n): sự trưởng thành
prosper(v): phát triển thịnh vượng

Sample essay 65
Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison
sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of
reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Crime is a serious and growing problem in most societies. Although many people
believe that the best way to tackle this is to place people in prison for longer
periods, others are of the opinion that other measures will be more effective.
There are benefits of giving offenders longer prison sentences. Firstly, spending
a long time in prison provides an opportunity for the prison services to
rehabilitate a prisoner. For example, someone who has committed a serious
offence such as assault will need a long time in prison in order to be sure they can
be re-educated not to re-offend. In addition to this, longer prison sentences will
act as a deterrent for someone who is thinking of committing a crime.
However, some people argue that leaving people in prison for a long time means
that they will mix with other criminals and so their character will not improve.
One alternative is community service. This gives an offender the opportunity to
give something positive back to society, and so it may improve their character.
Also, the government could focus its resources on the causes of crime, which
would lead to less crime in the future.
In my opinion, it is important to look at alternative methods. Many countries have
lengthy prison sentences, but crime has continued to increase throughout the
world, so it is clear that this is not completely effective. That said, long prison
sentences should remain for those who commit serious crimes such as assault or
murder, as justice for the victim and their family should take priority.
To conclude, there are good arguments for and against long sentences, so
governments must continue to research the various methods of crime reduction
to ensure effective policies are in place.

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(290 words)
Synonym list:
prison sentences: án tù
rehabilitate(v): hồi phục
act as a deterrent: là rào cản ngăn chặn
commit a crime: phạm tội
community service: dịch vụ cộng đồng
take priority: lên hàng đầu

Sample essay 66
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of
money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
These days, the government spends a large part of its budget not only on public
services, but also arts. Although I agree that it is important to spend money on
public services, I do not think spending on the arts is a waste of money.
There are several reasons for spending a significant amount of the government
budget on public services. First and foremost, public services are things such as
hospitals, roads and schools, and these things determine the quality of life that
most of us will have. For example, if the government doesn't spend enough money
on hospitals, the health of our society may decline. Similarly, if not enough
money is spent on schools, our children may not be properly educated. Also, it
will be the poor in our society that will be affected more if we do not spend
enough on these things because they are the ones more dependent on such
services.
However, this does not mean that the arts should be completely neglected. To
begin, it is difficult for many arts institutions to generate much profit, so without
some help from the government, many theaters and other such places may have
to close. Moreover, the arts also have an important impact on our quality of life.
Many people get great pleasure in going to see music and theatre performances
so it is important that the government assists such institutions so that they can
continue to provide entertainment to the public.

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To sum up, there are clear benefits of ensuring a large amount of investment goes
into public services as this influences the quality of life for nearly all of us. That
said, I do not believe spending money on the arts is a waste of money as this too
provides important benefits.
(299 words)
Synonym list:
a waste of money: sự phí phạm tiền của
determine(v): quyết định
get great pleasure in: có được niềm vui khi làm gì

Sample essay 67
Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.
What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Over the last few decades, many cities around the world have seen alarming
increases in the levels of youth crime. This essay will discuss the reasons for this
and provide some possible solutions.
The first reason is connected with the family. In order for a child to grow up in a
balanced way, it is very important that he or she is nurtured well by his or her
parents. However, these days, it is often the case that children are neglected. This
may be because of the fact that many parents in cities now both have to work so
are often not around to give their children support when needed. Another factor
is the increasing levels of poverty around the world. We have seen with
globalization the rich get richer and the poor get poorer, and this inevitably means
that those who are poorer will have to resort to illegal means to get what others
have. Of course, this will include the children in the poorer families.
However, there are ways to tackle such problems. Firstly, one of the ways to
combat the problem is to have stricter punishments. Although, as discussed
above, there can be outside factors that lead to crime, it is still important to have
severe punishments to deter teenagers from crime. All too often, because they are
young, the courts are too lenient. Parents also have to take more responsibility
for their children’s actions. They too should be punished if their children commit
crime.

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To sum up, several factors have led to increases in youth crime, but measures are
available to tackle this problem.
(267 words)
Synonym list:
alarming(adj): đáng báo động
nurture(v): nuôi dưỡng
resort to: tìm đến cái gì như là lựa chọn cuối cùng
lenient(adj): lỏng lẻo, dễ dãi

Sample essay 68
In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car
owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
Traffic congestion in many cities around the world is severe. One possible
solution to this problem is to impose heavy taxes on car drivers and use this
money to make public transport better. This essay will discuss the benefits and
drawbacks of such a measure.
One of the first benefits of such a measure is that the heavy taxes would
discourage car owners from using their cars because it would become very
expensive to drive. This would mean that they would begin to make use of public
transport instead, thus reducing traffic problems and pollution as well. Another
benefit would be that much more use would be made of public transport if it was
improved. It is often the case that public transport in cities is very poor. For
example, we often see old buses and trains that people would rather not use. High
taxes would generate enough money to make the necessary changes.
Nevertheless, there are drawbacks to such a solution. First and foremost, this
would be a heavy burden on the car drivers. At present, taxes are already high for
a lot of people, and so further taxes would only mean less money at the end of the
month for most people who may have no choice but to drive every day. In
addition, this type of tax would likely be set at a fixed amount. This would mean
that it would hit those with less money harder, whilst the rich could likely afford
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To conclude, this solution is worth considering to improve the current situation,
but there are advantages and disadvantages of introducing such a policy.
(277 words)
Synonym list:
impose(v): áp (thuế)
have no choice: không còn lựa chọn nào khác
fixed amount: một khoản cố định

Sample essay 69
Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and
individuals can tackle these problems.
Many countries of the world are currently experiencing problems caused by
rapidly growing populations in urban areas, and both governments and
individuals have a duty to find ways to overcome these problems.
Overpopulation can lead to overcrowding and poor quality housing in many
large cities. Poorly heated or damp housing could cause significant health
problems, resulting in illness, such as bronchitis or pneumonia. Another serious
consequence of overcrowding is a rising crime rate as poor living conditions
may lead young people in particular to take desperate measures and turn to crime
or drugs.
In terms of solutions, I believe the government should be largely responsible.
Firstly, it is vital that the state provides essential housing and healthcare for all its
citizens. Secondly, setting up community projects to help foster more community
spirit and help keep young people off the street is a good idea. For example, youth
clubs or evening classes for teenagers would keep them occupied. Finally, more
effective policing of inner city areas would also be beneficial. Naturally,
individuals should also act responsibly to address these problems, and the
motivation to do this would hopefully arise if the measures described above are
put into place by the government. This is because it will encourage people to
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Therefore, it is clear that the problems caused by overpopulation in urban areas
are very serious. Yet if governments and individuals share a collective
responsibility, then it may well become possible to offer some solutions.
(254 words)
Synonym list:
overpopulation(n): tình trạng quá tải dân số
poor quality housing: chất lượng nhà ở thấp
bronchitis(n): bệnh viêm phế quản
pneumonia(n): bệnh phổi
rising crime rate: tỷ lệ tội phạm tăng cao
foster(v): nuôi dưỡng
put into place: đưa vào thực tiễn

Sample essay 70
The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by
almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
Over the last ten years, western societies have seen close to a 20% rise in the
number of children who are overweight. This essay will discuss some reasons
why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this worrying trend.
The main cause of this problem is poor diet. Over the last decade there has been
a prolific increase in the number of fast food restaurants. For example, on nearly
every high street there is a MacDonald’s, Kentucky Fried Chicken and Pizza Hut.
The food in these places has been proven to be very unhealthy, and much of the
advertising is targeted at children, thus ensuring that they constitute the bulk of
the customers of these establishments. However, it is not only due to eating out,
but also the type of diet many children have at home. A lot of food consumed is
processed food, especially with regards to ready-made meals which are a quick
and easy option for parents who are working hard.
The effects of this have been and will continue to be very serious. Firstly, there
has been a large increase in health related diseases amongst children, especially
diabetes. This debilitating illness means a child has to be injected with insulin

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for the rest of their life. Not only this, very overweight children often experience
bullying from other children, which may affect their mental health. The negative
stigma of being overweight may also affect self-esteem.
To sum up, it is evident that there are several causes of obesity amongst children,
and a variety of negative effects. Society must ensure steps are taken to prevent
this problem from deteriorating further.
(275 words)
Synonym list:
overweight(adj): thừa cân, béo phì
poor diet: chế độ ăn ít dinh dưỡng
ready-made meals: bữa ăn làm sẵn
debilitating(adj): suy nhược
inject with: tiêm cái gì
stigma(n): suy nghĩ cổ hủ

Sample essay 71
As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order
to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people,
yet it is no longer mere science fiction.
To what extent do you agree with such a procedure? Have you any
reservations?
The cloning of animals has been occurring for a number of years now, and this
has now opened up the possibility of cloning humans too. Although there are clear
benefits to humankind of cloning to provide spare body parts, I believe it raises a
number of worrying ethical issues.
Due to breakthroughs in medical science and improved diets, people are living
much longer than in the past. This, though, has brought with it problems. As
people age, their organs can fail so they need replacing. If humans were cloned,
their organs could then be used to replace those of sick people. It is currently the
case that there are often not enough organ donors around to fulfil this need, so
cloning humans would overcome the issue as there would then be a ready supply.
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Firstly, there are religious arguments against it. It would involve creating another
human and then eventually killing it in order to use its organs, which it could be
argued is murder. This is obviously a sin according to religious contexts. Also,
dilemmas would arise over what rights these people have, as surely they would
be humans just like the rest of us. Furthermore, if we have the ability to clone
humans, it has to be questioned where this cloning will end. Is it then acceptable
for people to start cloning relatives or family members who have died?
To conclude, I do not agree with this procedure due to the ethical issues and
dilemmas it would create. Cloning animals has been a positive development, but
this is where it should end.
(276 words)
Synonym list:
cloning(n): việc nhân bản
occur(v): xảy ra
breakthrough(n): đột phá
sin(n): tội lỗi
dilemma(n): tình thế tiến thoái lưỡng nan

Sample essay 72
Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology
can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, computer technology is becoming more and more advanced. Many people
think that it is wasteful to spend money on maintaining public libraries because
most of their functions can be replaced with computer technology. However, I
firmly believe that libraries should never be disregarded by our society. On one
hand, the development of computer science has brought about lots of benefits to
our lives. Anyone could obtain and store a great amount of information online
easily instead of going to public libraries to search for them. People can also read
books on the move with their mobile devices such as iPhones, iPads, and so on.
Furthermore, people do not have to remember the deadline to return the books.
On the other hand, public libraries still have several advantages over the Internet.
First, a library always plays an important role as a reliable learning resource.
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public libraries. Second, individuals have more chances to make new friends and
exchange learning experiences when studying in a library. This opportunity can
rarely be found while studying in front of a computer. Compared with only
studying via the Internet, students could study in a more quiet and professional
environment for academic purposes such as doing research or graduate thesis.
In conclusion, I believe that both public libraries and computer technology are
necessary for people to expand their knowledge. Therefore, public libraries will
not disappear or be replaced by computer science in the near future because of
their unique features and benefits.
Synonym list:
advanced computer technology (n): công nghệ máy tính tiên tiến
online (adj): trực tuyến
mobile devices (n): các thiết bị di động
get access to (v): tiếp cận với
to do something on the move: vừa di chuyển vừa làm được việc gì đó

Sample essay 73
In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value
our artists such as musicians, painters, and writers. What can the arts tell us
about life that science and technology cannot?
Today, science and technology have a great impact on the whole world in all
aspects. However, the role of artists is also undeniable thanks to their contribution
to society.
There are many things that artists can tell us about life that science and
technology are not able to. To begin with, language, which is surprisingly a
branch of art, gives people the sense of humanity, and differentiates human
beings from animals. Furthermore, artists can boost our emotions and change
our feelings with their artworks. For example, lots of Beethoven’s fans feel
relieved and motivated when they listen to his masterpieces.
Another field in which we learn from art is related to culture and history. Many
countries show their history through a piece of painting or the way that people
perform their traditional dances in unique costumes. For instance, “Dong Ho”
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but also their dreams about a well-off life. For many people, exploring art is also
one type of entertainment. There are people who travel around the world to visit
historical places and art galleries, which helps them learn more about the culture
and history of other nations. By contrast, science and technology are all about
practical and physical aspects and contribute less to our lives emotionally and
socially.
To conclude, there is no denying that science and technology have great values
in our lives. However, artists can teach people about many aspects of their lives
that modern technology is not capable of.
Synonym list:
boost one’s emotions (c): thúc đẩy cảm xúc
artwork (n): tác phẩm nghệ thuật
masterpieces (n): kiệt tác
depict: miêu tả
historical places: di tích lịch sử
art galleries: triển lãm nghệ thuật

Sample essay 74
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to
a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight
after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, a lot of teenagers find it difficult to choose between getting a job or
continuing their education after graduating from high school. Even though there
are some benefits of working straight after school, I believe that going to college
or university is the better option.
There are several reasons why people believe that getting a job is the better
choice. First, if people start to work at the age of 18, they could earn money on
their own and be able to live independently without their parents’ financial
support. In fact, many students in Western countries tend to find a job after high
school to afford their living. Second, people who choose to start their career early
instead of going to university or college can have more opportunities to gain real
experience and learn exclusive skills for their jobs. Therefore, this may bring out

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a good chance of getting promoted to higher positions such as managers or
executives.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that students would gain more benefits if
they continue their studies. Firstly, plenty of employers might ask for high
academic qualifications from people applying for some professional jobs. For
many high-paying jobs such as statisticians, economists, and medical jobs, a
master's degree is one of the most vital requirements. Secondly, today's job
market is more competitive and a bachelor’s degree or master’s degree in your
resumé can be a huge advantage compared to other applicants. Employers would
prefer a person who has an adequate amount of knowledge to work efficiently
with less training time.
For the above reasons, it seems to me that students with higher academic
backgrounds are likely to be more successful in pursuing their dream jobs.
Synonym list:
financial support: hỗ trợ tài chính
exclusive skills: kỹ năng đặc thù
academic qualifications: các trình độ học thuật
high-paying jobs: các công việc lương cao
bachelor’s degree: bằng cử nhân
master’s degree: bằng thạc sĩ
resumé: hồ sơ xin việc
pursue one’s dream job: theo đuổi công việc mơ ước

Sample essay 75
Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is
it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Modern parents are giving into children’s demands and buying them all the latest
toys and gadgets. I would argue that on no account can this parenting style bring
any benefits for kids in the long run. Worse still, this negative education would
cause detrimental consequences when they reach adulthood.
First, over-indulgence can be harmful to young children, both socially and
developmentally. When kids are provided with the latest must-have items, they

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are less likely to grasp the notion of sharing or appreciation for their parents’
affection. Eventually, they interpret negative behaviours such as whining or
begging as a way to manipulate others. In addition, little do the young ones
comprehend the value of hard-earned money if adults keep showering them
with spending splurges. Consequently, spoiled kids can become insensitive to
the needs of others, are prone to temper tantrum and have trouble deferring
gratification.
Second, instant gratification could lead to adverse consequences in the future.
Children who are spoiled do not have to learn responsible behaviours. Nor do
they understand the concept of boundaries as adults and can develop problems
such as gambling, overeating or drinking. Lacking in emotional maturity and
having poor problem-solving skills, these adults might flounder and become
unhappy with their lives. Furthermore, as over-indulged and over-protected kids
do not grasp the lesson of giving and taking in a relationship, they can have
difficulty in establishing and maintaining meaningful friendships.
In short, sometimes effective parenting skills involve resisting the desire to give
kids whatever they want. Indeed, spoiled kids can lack life skills necessary to
successfully negotiate the demands of adulthood given that their troubles have
always been tackled by parents’ money.
(279 words)
Synonym list:
give into: làm theo
parenting style: cách nuôi con
over-indulgence: việc nuông chiều quá mức
grasp the notion of: nắm bắt khái niệm
interpret: hiểu, nhìn nhận
comprehend: hiểu toàn diện
hard-earned money: đồng tiền khó kiếm
splurge: lần tiên tiền xả láng
temper tantrum: việc nổi giận
defer gratification: trì hoãn sự thoả mãn cá nhân
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boundaries: những giới hạn
lacking in emotional maturity: việc thiếu thốn sự trưởng thành về cảm xúc
flounder: lúng túng

Sample essay 76
Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
It is said that all children should continue schooling until the age of eighteen.
While this policy may prove to be beneficial to a certain extent, I hold the view
that it is not fit for all.
To begin with, there are a number of apparent reasons for keeping school leaving
the age of eighteen. First, it is of paramount importance to equip youngsters
with fundamental life skills and knowledge so that they can enter the workforce
as highly-qualified candidates. Working at an early age, albeit providing
valuable hands-on experience, is likely to deter kids from pursuing higher
education. In fact, without the proper education and training, rarely could children
under eighteen make the right career decisions as well as possess appropriate skill
sets to negotiate a higher base salary. Moreover, teenage years are theoretical
milestones of adolescents’ development in shaping their personality traits. Thus,
only by staying in education under the guidance and orientation of adults could
young people grasp moral behaviours and become law-abiding citizens.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that not all children are obliged to attend a
school until eighteen. A notable exception is for those with poor academic
performance. There are multiple cases of successful entrepreneurs who dropout
of school, yet managed to establish a thriving business without any formal
education background. In other words, there is no one-size-fits-all approach to
learning. Some individuals would learn best through direct contacts with real life
circumstances. In addition, gifted kids with special talents should be noticed and
nurtured in a different training course to boost their innate ability to the fullest.
For example, a girl bestowed with a great voice should spend time on practicing
singing skills so that her talent can prosper instead of learning subjects which are
not her forte.
In short, compulsory education until the age of eighteen is acceptable since
children in teenage years still lack intellectual and emotional maturity. However,

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the essence of education is to tap into the potential in learners. Therefore, kids
should be given the freedom to follow the most suitable learning path based on
their individual style and inborn talents.
(352 words)
Synonym list:
paramount importance: tầm quan trọng tột bậc
equip: trang bị
highly-qualified candidates: những ứng viên chất lượng
hands-on experience: kinh nghiệm thực tế
theoretical milestones: những cột mốc mang tính lý thuyết
grasp: nắm bắt
poor academic performance: kết quả học tập kém
formal education background: lý lịch học tập đầy đủ
one-size-fits-all approach: cách tiếp cận phù hợp cho tất cả mọi người
boost their innate ability to the fullest: thúc đẩy tài năng thiên bẩm tới mức cao
nhất
be bestowed with: được ban tặng cái gì
prosper: phát triển thịnh vượng
forte: sở trường
tap into: chạm đến

Sample essay 77
Writing, reading and maths are the three major subjects. Some people think
that computer skill should be added as a fourth subject. What extent do you
agree or disagree?
It is argued that computer skills should be added to the school curriculum
alongside traditional core subjects, namely writing, reading and maths. I strongly
agree with this view for the following reasons.
First, reading skill is of paramount importance to a child’s success. The
comprehension of written words equip an individual with the ability to

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understand what is read, and therefore he or she can pursue any area of life that
they are interested in. Similarly, people with good writing skills are generally
associated as more credible, more capable than those who frequently has typos
and grammatical errors. The intrinsic value of literacy skills is to ensure effective
communication in our daily lives. Secondly, compulsory algebra courses in the
education system would nurture reasoning, analytical thinking which prepare
our mind for real problems in life.
On the other hand, there are a multitude of reasons why the introduction of
computer studies at school is crucial in the era of information technology.
Given the enormous amount of valuable material and knowledge available on the
Internet, only when one is well-acquainted with basic digital skills, can they take
advantage of the countless information resources worldwide. Lack of
fundamental computer skills could be easily classified as the biggest culprit
behind that causing one individual to lag behind their peers. In addition,
proficiency in office-based applications such as Word, Powerpoint and Excel is
one of the essential prerequisites if one aspires to thrive in the modern-day
workplace. In other words, primary computer-related skills are inextricably
linked with career progression as well as keeping apace with the surrounding
world.
In conclusion, as computer skill is an eligibility criterion for almost all the
modern-day jobs, it should be listed as a required subject along with literacy and
numeracy skills.
(288 words)
Synonym list:
core subjects: các môn chính
comprehension: tính toàn diện
intrinsic value: giá trị cốt lõi
nurture: nuôi dưỡng
the era of information technology: kỷ nguyên công nghệ thông tin
well-acquainted: quá quen với cái gì
fundamental computer skills: những kỹ năng máy tính căn bản
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lag behind: trì trệ, tụt lại phía sau
proficiency: sự thành thạo
office-based applications: ứng dụng tin học văn phòng
essential prerequisites: yêu cầu đầu vào cơ bản
thrive: phát triển mạnh
inextricably: phức tạp
career progression: sự thăng tiến sự nghiệp
keep apace with: bắt kịp, chạy theo với
eligibility criterion: tiêu chí phù hợp

Sample essay 78
Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money.
What are the reasons and solutions of this issue?
High school students are studying literature, chemistry and world history;
however, most are not learning fundamental money lessons to help them
financially navigate the real world. Parents’ lack of financial knowledge and
negligence towards the matter are the biggest culprits; thus, several measures
need to be taken to tackle those heightened concerns.
On the one hand, regardless of the fact that an overwhelming majority of teens
desire more financial education, neither parents nor educational institutions are
paying proper attention to financial literacy. It is said that a number of high
schools are doing the bare minimum to equip students with the required skills for
money management. In other words, state governments are focused on teaching
the core subjects of Maths and English that personal finance often gets
overlooked. In addition, parents today are not confident in their abilities to teach
their kids about money management. Sadly enough, many parents have not
learned critical financial values themselves; hence, they may be passing bad
financial habits to their kids.
In essence, most teenagers lack personal money management skills as no one
around them talks about it. Therefore, it is vital for parents to use financial
hardships and strained budgets as an opportunity to talk about finances and teach
kids about managing money around the dinner table. Teenage kids should also be
included in budget planning through a weekly or monthly allowance. Another

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feasible approach is the embedding of financial literacy courses into the school
curriculum. Amongst traditional core subjects, students should be required to
complete personal-finance classes to graduate.
In conclusion, lack of financial knowledge could leave serious implications on a
kid’s livelihood. This is calling for collective actions of parents and schools to
bring money-related education into everyday conversations as well as the official
curriculum.
(297 words)
Synonym list:
navigate: điều hướng, điều khiển
negligence: sự thờ ơ
financial literacy: khả năng quản lý tài chính
money management: khả năng quản lý tiền bạc
overlook: bỏ qua
strained budget: ngân sách hạn hẹp
embed: gán vào
allowance: tiền tiêu vặt
implication: hệ quả

Sample essay 79
Students learn far more with their teachers than other sources (internet or
television), To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The dominance of Internet technology has brought about drastic changes in
almost every aspect of our life, including education. While some people argue
that teachers remain the most important factor contributing to student
achievement, I am more convinced that students can gain more knowledge
through novel learning sources such as the Internet or television.
To start with, regarded as the global data warehouse, the Internet offers an
enormous amount of knowledge for just about every subject known to man,
ranging from arts, history to archeology and astronomy, the list is simply endless.
Thanks to the usefulness of the information available, motivated self-learners
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Realistically, one can probably find almost anything he wishes to know on the
World wide web. Whereas, rigid school curriculum is likely to keep students from
realizing their great individual potential. In fact, the needs and learning styles of
each student are so varied that a standardized curriculum will not work.
On the other hand, supporters of the traditional learning environment would argue
that the presence of qualified teachers is of paramount importance in helping
students acquire knowledge in a systematic way. However, there is mounting
evidence that students are becoming alienated and bored by traditional teaching
methods. In stark contrast, digital learning tools help every student learn at the
best pace and path for them. The opportunity to customize learning sequences for
each student will make education more productive. Moreover, by incorporating
both visual and audio contents, online learning would provide a more engaging
and dynamic experience for students of all ages. Eventually, better engagement
would lead to productivity and improved motivation.
In conclusion, with the advent of the world wide web, teachers are no longer the
only guidance for students. Self-motivated learners can obtain far more from
online resources, and customize the materials to fit their interest and learning
style.
(314 words)
Synonym list:
dominance: sự thống trị
amount of knowledge: lượng kiến thức
self-learner: người tự học
qualified teachers: những giáo viên có trình độ
advent: sự đến gần
customize: thay đổi, thích nghi cái gì

Sample essay 80
In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some
people think that this is the responsibility of governments to solve the
problem. What extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, obesity has become one of the most serious health problems
among people of all ages, especially children. Although there are people who

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believe that the government should take the full responsibility to find the
solutions for this problem, I would argue that parents and schools also play a vital
role in dealing with the issue.
On one hand, there are several effective solutions to this problem that the
government should consider. First, the government may conduct official
conferences and news on the symptoms and effects of obesity to raise public
awareness. By this way, people will be encouraged to have an active, healthy diet
and lifestyle. Second, advertisements on foods and drinks that contain high levels
of sugar and fat should be restricted on TV and other means of mass media. In
fact, since 2017, a ban on junk foods and soft drinks advertisements before 9 pm
has come into effect by the UK.
On the other hand, parents and schools are also responsible for maintaining a low
level of obesity among their children. One of the main causes that make children
overweight and unhealthy is the choice of daily diet by their parents. A healthy
nutritional balanced diet is necessary for every child to grow up normally
without having any serious diseases. As the lack of physical exercises can also
lead to an obese child, an adequate amount of physical education sessions needs
to be held weekly by schools for their young students to keep fit and stay healthy.
To conclude, childhood obesity has become a rising issue in modern society,
but I strongly believe that it can still be controlled if the government, parents, and
schools get together to help our children.
(286 words)
Synonym list:
childhood obesity: béo phì ở trẻ em
people of all ages: người ở mọi lứa tuổi
to take the full responsibility: chịu toàn bộ trách nhiệm
a healthy nutritional balanced diet: chế độ ăn uống lành mạnh và cân bằng dinh
dưỡng
a rising issue: vấn đề nóng

Sample essay 81
People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty
for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the hectic modern-day life, people are increasingly leaning towards a healthier
lifestyle. However, whether being health-conscious is for the sake of one
individual or for the benefit of society at large is open to debate. In my opinion, I
reckon that not only staying healthy would do good to oneself but it also indicates
the duty of every citizen.
To begin with, one’s mental and physical condition is inextricably linked to their
life quality. In essence, those who maintain a good overall health are capable
of performing their tasks more effectively than physically weaker counterparts.
In other words, a person’s well-being at the grass-roots level provides the
foundation for building wealth and reaching desirable financial status.
Additionally, a disease-free body allows people to live life to the fullest,
experiencing what life has to offer around you. To illustrate this, one can not
participate in extreme sports such as bungee jumping or skydiving if their fitness
level is not qualified.
On the other hand, each citizen should consider taking care of their health a
responsibility to sustain communal health. Take the outbreak of EBOLA and
SARS as a vivid illustration of a single patient infecting a disproportionate
number of contacts. This is an important wake-up call for ignorant members in
every community. In order to prevent and control the super spreading of emerging
viruses, concerted effort of the authority and each inhabitant of great importance.
Furthermore, a strong and healthy labour force plays a pivotal role in the
economic growth of a nation. Consequently, a thriving country with a steadily
rising budget would allocate necessary resources to improve the welfare system,
ensuring equal access to quality health care to all.
In short, human resources are the most valuable asset of a country. Therefore, a
healthy community calls for collective actions, in which all the sectors - the local
government, individual citizens as well as other groups work together for a
common purpose. Staying healthy both physically and mentally can do good to
each person and the community as a whole.
(339 words)
Synonym list:
health-conscious: quan tâm đến sức khoẻ
lean towards: thiên về
maintain a good overall health: giữ gìn sức khoẻ tổng thể tốt

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grass-roots level: mức độ cơ bản
live life to the fullest: sống cuộc đời trọn vẹn nhất
sustain communal health: bảo vệ sức khỏe cộng đồng
wake-up call: lời cảnh tỉnh

Sample essay 82
Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so
medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the
advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
In the hectic modern-day life, staying physically and mentally healthy is of
paramount importance. While some people argue that medical care should be
provided by private entities, I believe that the dominance of private hospitals and
clinics pose more threats than benefits.
To begin with, the private sector is supposedly more efficient and responsive to
patients’ needs because of market competition. In order to gain widespread
popularity, private practices would employ well-qualified personnel and top-
notch treatment facilities, attracting and retaining patients with competitive
services. Consequently, by virtue of high-quality medical care and favourable
staff’s attitude, patients often choose to bypass free public clinics and opt for
private doctors. Another argument in support of private services is the relatively
substantial funding compared to public ones. Bountiful financial resources
would eventually result in research findings on medicine and treatment for acute
health problems, from which patients are intended beneficiaries.
On the other hand, advocates of public sectors have highlighted inequities in
access to health care resulting from the inability of the poor to pay for private
services. There have been cases of private healthcare institutions charging
exorbitant fees for medical treatments. Sadly though, the government has little
control over the quality and the amount private hospitals and clinics charge the
patients. In this situation, citizens are left at the whim of healthcare providers who
are mostly driven by profit motives, rather than serving the ailing mankind.
Furthermore, there are also moral and ethical issues regarding doctors and nursing
staff in the private sector. Some physicians would prescribe brand-name
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In short, even though they offer better service and more cutting-edge medical
equipment than their public-sector counterparts, negative aspects of the private
providers such as overcharge and unethical staff overshadow the advantages.
Synonym list:
market competition: sự cạnh tranh trên thị trường
gain widespread popularity: có được sự phổ biến rộng rãi
bypass: bỏ qua
substantial funding: việc đầu tư lớn
acute health problems: các vấn đề sức khỏe nghiêm trọng
intended beneficiaries: đối tượng hưởng lợi chính
inequities: sự bất bình đẳng
exorbitant fees: phí quá cao
driven by profit motives: được thúc đẩy bởi mục đích lợi nhuận
commissions from pharmaceutical companies: tiền hoa hồng từ các công ty dược
phẩm
cutting-edge medical equipment: các thiết bị y tế tối tân
overshadow: che lấp

Sample essay 83
In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some
people think that it is the responsibility of governments to solve the problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Childhood obesity is one of the most serious public health threats in modern day
society. While some people say that the government should hold the
responsibility for tackling the problem, I strongly believe that collective actions
of individuals and the authorities are needed to combat the childhood obesity
crisis.
First, advocates of the former argument would point out that it is the duty of the
government to ensure healthy communities and address public health concerns
including the childhood obesity epidemic. For instance, they should initiate
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participation, thereby reducing obesity rates. In addition, the authority also has
a part to play in the heavy bombardment of unhealthy food advertising
targeting children. In other words, the authority should impose strict censorship
of material before it is published, slashing the constant stream of ads for junk
food.
On the other hand, eating behaviors that affect weight are heavily influenced by
elders in a family. The involvement of parents and caretakers, therefore, will be
needed to reverse the epidemic. During early childhood, parents are the main
source of children’s food and drink which determines whether or not kids
experience unhealthy weight gain. Moreover, as children often unconsciously
imitate the words and actions of others, parents could serve as powerful role
models in establishing healthy eating habits and being physically active.
Ultimately, under careful parental supervision, children would participate in more
active pursuits and adopt healthy eating patterns; hence, lower obesity rates
ensue.
In conclusion, in order to confront the growing level of childhood obesity, joint
efforts of government agencies and families are essential to promote a more
responsible lifestyle choice in young generations.
(274 words)
Synonym list:
childhood obesity: nạn béo phì ở trẻ em
habitual physical activity and sports participation: việc tham gia hoạt động thể
chất và thể thao thường xuyên
the heavy bombardment of unhealthy food advertising: việc tràn ngập các quảng
cáo về đồ ăn có hại cho sức khỏe
powerful role models: những tấm gương mạnh mẽ
promote a more responsible lifestyle choice: thúc đẩy sự lựa chọn lối sống có
trách nhiệm hơn

Sample essay 84
It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are
the causes and solutions?

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It is quite challenging for the city dwellers to exercise adequately. The
prevalence of low physical activity among urban populations is mainly associated
with limited access to exercise facilities and perceived lack of time. Fortunately,
there are several measures that can be taken to address these heightened concerns.
To begin with, myriad reasons can keep people off their feet; however, the
dearth of parks and open spaces in urban settings is identified as one of the
biggest culprits behind the decreased physical activity. Sadly enough, excessive
urbanization has led to the depletion and transformation of the natural landscape.
Ineffective land use and low priority to green spaces would eventually discourage
physical activity engagement among citizens. In addition, the shortage of time is
another factor that limits exercise participation in urban areas. As the hectic daily
schedule puts one in a constant state of stress and hurry, draining most of their
energy and time, reluctance to exercise would ensue.
In order to promote an active lifestyle among urban dwellers, joint efforts of the
authority and individuals are of paramount importance. First, urban designers and
planners should create supportive built environments to facilitate physical
activity engagement. As green spaces and recreational facilities are the perks of
a great neighborhood, their ubiquitous presence would encourage residents to
make active living part of their daily routine. Moreover, companies and schools
should join hands in incorporating regular exercises into work hours and school
hours. By instilling exercise sessions during office hours, businesses are building
fitness opportunities for workers to stay fit and healthy; thereby, increasing
energy levels, reducing sick days and giving employee productivity a boost.
In conclusion, urban infrastructure and the pressure of modern life are major
barriers against active living in big cities. Therefore, effective land use along with
the promotion of work-life balance will be essential to achieve the goal of
making physical activity a regular and natural part of people’s daily lives.
(321 words)
Synonym list:
adequately: đầy đủ
be associated with: liên quan đến
keep people off their feet: khiến mọi người ít vận động
the dearth of parks and open spaces: việc khan hiếm công viên và các khu vực
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drain: bòn rút
facilitate physical activity engagement: thúc đẩy việc tham gia các hoạt động thể
chất
ubiquitous: có ở khắp mọi nơi
incorporate: kết hợp
the promotion of work-life balance: việc thúc đẩy sự cân bằng giữa công việc và
cuộc sống

Sample essay 85
Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.
What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual
people do?
Since several environmental problems have been caused by humans’ forces,
we need to act responsibly to reduce the damage that we are doing to the Earth.
This essay will explain environmental problems and what governments and
individuals can do to address these problems.
Two of the threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Global
warming, which is well-known as a global issue because of its devastating
effect on the environment, is a result of gas emissions from factories and exhaust
fumes from vehicles. In addition, the increase in human population comes along
with a huge quantity of waste, which contaminates the Earth and pollutes rivers
and oceans.
On one hand, governments could reduce air pollution in many ways. First, they
could introduce laws to put a limit on factories’ gas emissions or force companies
to use renewable energy in production. Second, they could also innovate the
public transport system to become more convenient and greener. By this way,
governments can encourage people to take public transport instead of driving,
therefore reducing emissions.
On the other hand, individuals should also be responsible for lowering pollution
levels in their surroundings. They can take buses and subways or other means of
public transportation rather than driving, which could reduce the amount of
exhaust fumes from vehicles. Also, people should purchase reusable products and
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Vietnamese people are recommended to use reusable or paper bags when going
shopping instead of plastic bags to cut down on plastic bags consumption.
In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must understand the
harmful impact they have on the environment and be responsible to ease damage.
(283 words)
Synonym list:
environmental problems: vấn đề về môi trường
humans’ forces: tác động của con người
global warming: sự nóng lên toàn cầu
devastating effect: ảnh hưởng vô cùng nghiêm trọng
gas emission: khí thải
exhaust fumes: khí thải từ xe cộ
renewable energy: năng lượng tái tạo
public transport system: hệ thống giao thông công cộng
ease damage: giảm thiểu thiệt hại

Sample essay 86
Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically
successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both
views and give your opinion.
Sustainable development has gradually become a growing concern on a global
scale. While some people believe that balancing economic growth and
environment protection is nearly impractical, I am more convinced of the
opposite views for the following reasons.
First, it is common for the society to be induced to think that economic progress
is associated with pollutant emission growth and depletable resource
consumption. For instance, accelerating urbanization, despite being an
important instrument for economic development, is one of the driving forces
behind the loss of agricultural land. As a result, not only natural habitats that are
home to wildlife are endangered but also arable land is shrinking due to urban
expansion. In addition, exhaust emissions from manufacturing factories,
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that remain on the surface, are contaminating the environment at an alarming
rate. The pursuit of high growth at all costs, for example China - world’s second-
largest economy could lead to severe pollution.
On the other hand, I still hold a strong belief that the combination of economic
and environmental sustainability is within our reach. In this era of high
technology, scientists have developed multiple alternatives to replace traditional
sources of exploitation in many fields. The rise of renewable energy from wind,
sunlight or ocean waves would be the answer for escalating demand. What’s
even more encouraging is the fact that many countries are joining hands and
pooling their resources to cut down industrial pollution. Commitment to protect
the environment and prioritize sustainable development over resource
extraction would allow the economy to thrive in the long run.
In short, even though achieving economic goals is of utmost importance, each
nation should incorporate environmental issues in the policy making process.
Only then can the human race exist in perfect harmony with nature.
(301 words)
Synonym list:
balance economic growth and environment protection: cân bằng giữa sự phát
triển kinh tế và bảo vệ môi trường
pollutant emission growth: sự gia tăng khí thải độc hại
depletable resource consumption: sự tiêu thụ tài nguyên thiên nhiên đến kiệt quệ
accelerating urbanization: việc đô thị hoá gia tăng nhanh chóng
driving forces: các nguyên nhân thúc đẩy chính
shrink: thu hẹp contaminate: làm ô nhiễm
within our reach: nằm trong tầm với của chúng ta
escalating demand: nhu cầu tăng cao
prioritize: ưu tiên
resource extraction: việc khai phá tài nguyên

Sample essay 87
The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and
in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?

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It is frightening that myriads of terrestrial and marine animals are on the verge
of extinction due to human beings. My essay will shed light on the causes and
measures to this issue.
To begin with, the constant tampering of nature by humans has led to drastic
changes in the natural world resulting in animals and plants finding it more
difficult and difficult to survive. Nearly every kind of habitat or ecosystem - be it
land, air or water - has been affected by the uncontrollable destruction of
habitats by humans. The impact of humans taking land for buildings, farming and
timber has rendered species extinct at speeds unprecedented in Earth’s history.
Besides, humans, due to their industrial, agricultural, or normal day-to-day
activities, release an inordinate amount of toxic waste that is eventually dumped
into the air, water or landfills. Tragedies like oil spills have been known to destroy
and threaten many aquatic life forms.
Having said that, rapid, greatly intensified efforts to address the problem,
slowing the extinctions currently underway. First, each government should levy
exorbitant fines on devastating behaviors such as littering, illegal dumping or
other environmental offences. The implementation of stringent laws,
accompanied by extensive media coverage of the issue would raise
environmental awareness among all sections of the society. Second, international
organizations such as the United Nations should coordinate activities among
member countries as well as encourage participation by the private sector to
promote sustainable use of the world’s natural resources. Specifically, the
presence of such inter-governmental organizations plays a major role in initiating
negotiations on reducing industrial pollution level or other toxic waste.
In short, the blame for the most recent mass extinction is not natural calamities
– it is human. Therefore, several solutions need to be done to tackle this worrying
trend and save endangered species from the brink of extinction.
Synonym list:
on the verge of extinction: trên bờ vực tuyệt chủng
tamper: làm xáo trộn, làm hư hại
uncontrollable destruction: sự huỷ diệt không thể kiểm soát
render: gây ra
toxic waste: chất thải độc hại

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aquatic life forms: các hình thức sinh vật sống dưới nước
intensified efforts: các nỗ lực được đẩy mạnh
implementation: sự thực thi
extensive media coverage: việc truyền thông rộng rãi
calamity: thảm hoạ

Sample essay 88
Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an
international organization rather than each national government. Do you
agree or disagree?
People hold different views about how to cope with environmental problems.
While some people argue that it is the duty of an international organization, rather
than a single country, to solve environment-related issues, I believe that both
parties/ sides should join hands in solving this problem.
On the one hand, many countries may share the same environmental concerns;
however, they stem from various causes. Therefore, each nation should
implement different policies and measures to address the problem. For example,
over-exploitation of natural resources and deforestation are identified as the
biggest culprit for desertification in the USA; whereas, the growing rate of
desertified land in China has been mainly caused by rapid urbanization. In
addition, the priority regarding environmental issues is also varied in each
country, calling for different approaches and strategies to tackle the problem. To
illustrate, in emerging economies such as Vietnam, reducing the worrying level
of air pollution from industrial activities is of highest priority.
On the other hand, the problems that each government is experiencing are indeed
interconnected, hence, concerted efforts by all nations are necessary. Thus,
international organizations such as the United Nations play a vital role in
promoting and coordinating global action to reduce carbon footprint and curb
the global warming threat. Furthermore, wealthy countries should provide
financial and technological support for poor nations in the fight against green
issues, since the detrimental effects of environmental problems could spread
beyond national borders. In other words, an international effort is needed to yield
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In conclusion, while international organizations could exert huge impact on a
global scale, the combination of international and governmental efforts would
have even more profound influences on the environment.
(279 words)
Synonym list:
environment-related issues: các vấn đề liên quan về môi trường
stem from: bắt nguồn từ
over-exploitation of natural resources: việc khai thác quá nhiều các tài nguyên
thiên nhiên
emerging economies: các nền kinh tế mới nổi
interconnected: liên kết (giữa nhiều quốc gia)
reduce carbon footprint: giảm lượng khí thải cacbon
curb the global warming threat: kìm hãm việc nóng lên toàn cầu
yield an efficient environment protection scheme: đạt được một kế hoạch bảo vệ
môi trường hiệu quả

Sample essay 89
Nowadays in many countries more and more people are spending their time
away from their families. Why is this? What are the effects on themselves
and on their families?
In modern life, there are more and more people spending less time with their
family. This essay will examine the major causes and possible influences of this
phenomenon.
To begin with, there are several explanations that are worth mentioning about this
issue. The first reason is that due to the fast pace of modern life, people are now
living a busier one and devoting an increasing amount of time to work. It is
increasingly common that people tend to lose the balance between family and
clerical work since they usually spend more time at work and do not come home
until late at night. For example, due to the heavy workload many workers have to
work more than 10 hours a day, and sometimes they are required to work during
weekends or overnight to meet the deadline. The rapid development of social
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but hold their own mobile phones or laptops to communicate with online friends
on Facebook instead of talking with each other is easily seen these days.
This rising issue is having considerable impacts on both individuals themselves
and family. First, it is believed that family is where people can share their feelings
and problems, which helps them to release their stress. However, an individual
may experience emotional distress if they do not receive proper support from
his/ her immediate family. Second, the bonds between parents and children may
be weakened. For instance, when parents do not spend much time with their
children, their children will lack appropriate parental care and attention and are
likely to follow a path towards criminal behaviors.
In conclusion, there are two main factors leading to the fact that people hardly
make time for their family and not only individuals but also the family may
suffer from this trend in both physical and emotional ways.
(317 words)
Synonym list:
balance between family and clerical work: cân bằng giữa gia đình và công việc
văn phòng
parental care and attention: sự chăm lo từ bố mẹ
immediate family: gia đình ruột thịt
emotional distress: rối loạn tâm lý
to follow a path towards criminal behaviors: sa vào con đường của những hành
vi tội lỗi
hardly make time for one’s family: hầu như không dành thời gian cho gia đình
devote an increasing/a huge amount of time to work: dành phần lớn thời gian cho
công việc

Sample essay 90
Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls.
Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and
the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The young today spend a large amount of leisure time in shopping centers. It is
feared that this trend can bring about negative influences on the youths and the
society. Personally, I strongly disagree with this view.
On the one hand, for the young generation spending too much time at the
shopping malls can make them waste a great deal of money. As there are dozens
of brands with various prices and designs for them to choose from, they are easily
tempted to buy things impulsively and misspend money on unnecessary stuff.
For example, when some big brand names slash the prices, a shopaholic may
purchase 10 shirts and jeans in a row and this cost her somewhere $100; however,
such items often end up being left in the wardrobe. For society, because
youngsters are unlikely to participate in other activities such as their work or
studying, the economy may suffer due to less work being done and the youths
could slack off their knowledge acquisition, making the national education
standard drop significantly.
On the other hand, there are also some advantages to this trend. First, in terms of
the young, spending time at the malls is considered a method of relaxation. In
modern life these days, young people have to deal with lots of pressure from
school or the workplace, so this trend helps them enjoy their life and effectively
release their stress. Second, society also benefits from this phenomenon. The
increase in the amount of consumption will promote manufacture and commerce
in the fashion industry, which afterward will create more jobs and boost the
economic growth.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that devoting a huge amount of time in shopping
malls could lead to both negative and positive consequences to the young as well
as the society.
(299 words)
Synonym list:
buy things impulsively: mua hàng không theo chủ đích
big brand names: các thương hiệu lớn
slash prices: đại hạ giá
shopaholic: người nghiện mua sắm
slack off: giảm bớt
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release one’s stress: xả stress
boost the economic growth: thúc đẩy tăng trưởng kinh tế

Sample essay 91
The increase in people's life expectancy means that they have to work older
to pay for their retirement. One alternative is that people start to work at a
younger age. Is this alternative a positive or negative development?
Humans in general are experiencing a longer life expectancy, which leads to an
overwhelming number of people continuing to work after the legal retirement
age. Whereas, others opt for entering the workforce at an earlier age, and from
my perspective, this is a negative development.
First, choosing a career path - and the appropriate university courses for that
profession - is a decision of paramount importance. Contrary to popular belief,
landing on a job while studying - be it a part-time job or an apprenticeship, could
easily distract youngsters from fulfilling their duties at school. In essence, in the
current climate of obsession with early success, one is put under intense pressure
to become successful artists, entrepreneurs and startup CEOs before the age 25,
enjoying retirement with a generous income. That being said, that chilling reality
could be a pipe dream for most. In fact, many well-paid jobs, such as doctors or
lawyers, require a multi-year commitment to a long training course which can
take up to 6 years or more, and thus, are not suitable for those who start working
too early, yet lack formal education.
On the other hand, there is mounting evidence that many elderly people are
physically and mentally fit to stay in work until their 70s. I believe that people
who remain in paid employment past retirement age or involved in community or
voluntary work improve their chances of staying healthier for longer. Continuing
to have a routine and going into a place of work each day can prevent the sense
of loneliness that could come with retirement. Furthermore, by engaging in active
employment, two problems are solved: the pension and the retirement savings
crisis. Financial independence is the ultimate goal that everyone would pursue
in order to live comfortably in older age.
In short, the youth-obsessed culture has caused young people to take career
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age could result in lengthening life spans, improved health and financially secure
retirement.
(332 words)
Synonym list:
overwhelming: choáng ngợp
legal retirement age: tuổi nghỉ hưu hợp pháp
land on a job: giành được một công việc
the current climate of: trong thời thế, trong bối cảnh
pipe dream: giấc mơ viển vông
multi-year commitment: sự cam kết lâu dài
the sense of loneliness: cảm giác cô đơn
financial independence: sự độc lập tài chính
youth-obsessed culture: nền văn hóa trọng dụng người trẻ

Sample essay 92
People think that children nowadays have more freedom. To what extent do
you agree or disagree?
Freedom is an abstract concept that cannot be adequately measured on any
physical scales. However, many people incline to the view that children these
days enjoy a more liberal life than previous generations. My opinion is utterly
opposed on this issue for the following reasons.
One of the arguments put forth in support of the former statement is that the
digital age presents an unparalleled opportunity for kids to gain access to a
tremendous amount of information without geographical barriers. Ironically, the
advent of the Internet is more of a mixed blessing. Indeed, the obvious merits of
the world wide web cannot overshadow a worrying tendency of that growing
addiction to electrical gadgets such as laptops, tablets or smartphones. Therefore,
early exposure to the virtual world ended up erecting invisible boundaries,
inducing kids’ estrangement from actual human interactions.
On the other hand, amidst a modern-day hectic world, there is an inordinate
amount of pressure on young people to become successful artists, entrepreneurs
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offspring to enroll in highest-paying college majors, oblivious to their utmost
passion. In addition, adult supervision seems to be extending into every aspect of
children’s lives. Take the recent arrest and jailing in the US of a mother for
abandoning her nine- year-old daughter to play alone in the park while she
worked. In the current climate of obsession with children’s safety, parents who
let their youngsters out of sight court the accusation of irresponsibility, if not
gross negligence. However, this school of thought may accidentally cause the
erosion of children’s freedom to engage with the world at will.
In conclusion, while the proliferation of the electronic devices could hamper
children’s direct contact with the real world, parents may unintentionally impede
a child from acquiring their innate dreams and fundamental life skills for being
overprotective. Thus, I believe millennials feel confined rather than free during a
high tech era.
(322 words)
Synonym list:
abstract: trừu tượng
incline: thiên về, có xu hướng
unparalleled: không sánh được
tendency: xu hướng
compel: thuyết phục, ép buộc
be oblivious to: thờ ơ
erosion: sự xói mòn
proliferation: sự tăng trưởng, sự phát triển

Sample essay 93
The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-
face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way
outweigh the disadvantages?
In the era of information technology, the advent of social media websites such as
Facebook and Twitter has gradually become a substitute for face-to-face
communication. From my perspective, this growing trend offers more
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First, advocates of online communication would argue that it expands the
available time and place in which a meeting can occur. For example, one can stay
in constant touch with their loved ones via online messenger or video calls
regardless of geographical barriers. In a business context, rather than having to
travel to a specific location, people can plan to meet at times that work for all of
their schedules. In addition, for professionals and academics, social networking
sites allow users to create networks of like-minded people, expanding the
horizons of what sort of contacts they can make in their professional lives.
While it is impossible to deny the importance of these platforms, and the way that
they have revolutionized communication, it is essential to realize their detrimental
effects on our life. One issue with these digital forms of communication is that
they are counter-intuitive, they have led to fewer interactions rather than
encouraging frequent contacts of one person to another. Another negative impact
of social networking technology is on interpersonal skills. It is common sense to
handle tough conversations such as a breakup or getting fired in person. That
being said, many opt for delivering the message online, avoiding the nerve-
wracking feeling of telling someone bad news. In fact, the quality of decreasing
conversations are suffering as well due to the prevalence of social networking.
In conclusion, I believe that the negative influences of social media to people’s
relationships overshadow the advantages it might bring. Therefore, moderate use
of this modern communication tool is advisable.
(291 words)
Synonym list:
face-to-face communication: giao tiếp tận mặt, giao tiếp trực tiếp
geographical barriers: những rào cản địa lý
like-minded people: những người có tư tưởng giống nhau
counter-intuitive: gây ra tác động phản lại tính thấu hiểu

Sample essay 94
Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the
development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations
should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
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Today’s world has been divided into developing and industrialized countries
where the main difference between them is the amount of money that
governments apply in important sectors such as education, health and commerce.
Most of the poorer nations are buried in debts as a result of their unbalanced
finances which are reflected in a poor health care, an unstructured education
system and a weak international trade. This vicious cycle will continue
indefinitely unless wealthier nations show interest in minimizing the worldwide
economic differences, as well as taking more responsibility for assisting
unfortunate countries.
Most of the African countries live in inhuman conditions because of the extreme
poverty, upheaval, hunger, disease, unemployment, lack of education and both
inexperienced and corrupt administrations. The devastating consequences of the
AIDS epidemic in those countries could improve if the infected populations
receive free drugs to control the disease, have access to health professionals and
get information on how to prevent its spread. But this can only be achieved
through international help programs in which leaders of the world's richest
countries donate medicine and also send doctors and nurses to treat and educate
those in need.
Moreover, most of the poor countries rely on selling agricultural products and
raw material to rich nations and buying industrialized products from them which
results in a huge financial deficit. Consequently, they borrow a significant
amount of money from the World Bank to try to improve their broken economies,
but sometimes the money disappears with no significant changes and they cannot
even pay the interest to the bank. Regarding this issue, last year the G8, which is
composed of leaders of the eight richest nations, decided to forgive billions of
dollars worth of debt owed by the world's poorest nations. In addition, they
developed adequate loan programs to financially assist those countries.
In conclusion, leaders of the industrialized countries play an indispensable role in
assisting developing nations deal with essential areas such as health, education
and trade. Also, their aid is the key to breaking the vicious cycle, which results in
poverty and death.
Synonym list:
bury: chôn vùi
unbalanced finance: nền tài chính mất cân bằng

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weak international trade: giao thương quốc tế kém
vicious cycle: vòng quanh quẩn không lối thoát
minimize the worldwide economic differences: giảm thiểu tối đa sự bất cân bằng
giữa các nền kinh tế
inhuman conditions: những điều kiện làm việc có hại cho con người
international help programs: các chương trình hỗ trợ nhân đạo quốc tế
financial deficit: thâm hụt tài chính
loan programs: các chương trình cho vay

Sample essay 95
Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a positive way, its
negative side should not be forgotten.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the present age, globalization is playing an increasingly important role in our
lives. But in the meantime whether it is a blessing or a curse has sparked much
debate. Some people argue that globalization has a fundamentally beneficial
influence on our lives while many others contend that it has detrimental effects
as well.
Convincing argument can be made that globalization not only plays a pivotal
role in the development of technology and economy, but also promotes the
exchange of cultures between different countries. To start with, it is
globalization that impelled many corporations to become an international group,
thereby making contributions to local technology and employment. Specifically,
when a multinational group establishes a factory in a developing country, the new
equipment, the new management skill and the job vacancies are all in the best
interest of local society. Moreover, people worldwide can know each other better
through globalization.
Admittedly, profit-driven globalization severely affected the young people.
Today, in the metropolises in different countries, it is a very common sight that
teenagers are wearing NIKE T-shirts and Adidas footwear, playing Hip-hop
music with Apple Ipods and having KFC. The culture that took a thousand years
to form just seems similar in these cities; it looks like you can only distinguish
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of sweatshops is always the issue that concerns the WHOM. For instance, some
reports show that some teenagers who are employed by Nike's contractor always
stay in the factories that are filled with toxic gases over 14 hours a day, but they
only work for fifty cents per hour.
In summary, I would concede that globalization does come with some adverse
effects. Despite that, the benefits created by it far outweigh the disadvantages.
Overall, I am convinced that we should further promote globalization and
meanwhile the local government should take some measures to combat culture
assimilation and sweatshops.
Synonym list:
play a pivotal role: đóng một vai trò cực kỳ quan trọng
promote the exchange of cultures: thúc đẩy việc trao đổi văn hoá
impel: khiến việc gì xảy ra
profit-driven globalization: sự toàn cầu hóa hướng đến lợi nhuận
distinguish: phân biệt
sweatshop: nhà máy sản xuất nơi các công nhân bị bóc lột sức lao động
culture assimilation: sự đồng hoá văn hoá

Sample essay 96
Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are
more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change
jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that those who make early career choices and stick to it would
probably experience greater job satisfaction than job-hoppers. I strongly
disagree with these statements for the following reasons.
First, the pursuit of a career path for an extended period of time would ensure
financial stability, resulting in greater satisfaction. The interval between the last
interview and a job offer or rejection can be intensely frustrating for every
candidate. Job search fatigue can wear anyone down with the endless rounds of
leads and interviews that never seem to go anywhere. In addition to a steady
paycheck, holding down a job for years is a manifestation of loyalty and
commitment. From an employer’s perspective, these are significant indicators of
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closely linked to the opportunity to successfully move up/ climb the corporate
ladder.
However, advocates of job jumpers would argue that those who stay with a job
for a long time have less diverse skill sets and a relatively narrow range of
knowledge. In contrast, one of the greatest advantages of a regular job switch is
that it allows one individual to gain valuable skills and knowledge in different
environments and cultures. In today’s economy, this is equivalent to remaining
current and constantly updated in a highly competitive market. Furthermore,
changing jobs can certainly be a path to higher salary. If one hops once in a while,
their number of contacts expand following a bigger potential professional
network and more career choice in the future. Thus, job hoppers could actually
be in a much better negotiating position when it comes to dealing with a new job
offer on account of their diverse experience and contacts across different
industries.
In conclusion, frequent job changers might have higher levels of job satisfaction
and brighter career prospects whereas staying with a single job does not
guarantee the same sense of fulfillment later in life.
Synonym list:
job-hopper: người nhảy việc
experience greater job satisfaction: trải nghiệm sự hài lòng trong công việc cao
hơn
the pursuit of a career path: việc theo đuổi một con đường sự nghiệp
financial stability: ổn định tài chính
job search fatigue: sự mệt mỏi khi tìm việc
a manifestation of loyalty and commitment: sự thể hiện lòng trung thành và sự
gắn kết
regular job switch: sự thay đổi công việc thường xuyên
brighter career prospects: triển vọng công việc sáng lạn
sense of fulfillment: cảm giác hài lòng

Sample essay 97

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Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so
medical service should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the
advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
In the hectic modern-day life, staying physically and mentally healthy is of
paramount importance. While some people argue that medical care should be
provided by private entities, I believe that the dominance of private hospitals and
clinics pose more threats than benefits.
To begin with, the private sector is supposedly more efficient and responsive to
patients’ needs because of market competition. In order to gain widespread
popularity, private practices would employ well-qualified personnel and top-
notch treatment facilities, attracting and retaining patients with competitive
services. Consequently, by virtue of high-quality medical care and favorable
staff’s attitude, patients often choose to bypass free public clinics and opt for
private doctors. Another argument in support of private services is the relatively
substantial funding compared to public ones. Bountiful financial resources would
eventually result in research findings on medicine and treatment for acute health
problems, from which patients are intended beneficiaries.
On the other hand, advocates of public sectors have highlighted inequities in
access to health care resulting from the inability of the poor to pay for private
services. There have been cases of private healthcare institutions charging
exorbitant fees for medical treatments. Sadly though, the government has little
control over the quality and the amount private hospitals and clinics charge the
patients. In this situation, citizens are left at the whim of healthcare providers who
are mostly driven by profit motives, rather than serving the ailing mankind.
Furthermore, there are also moral and ethical issues regarding doctors and
nursing staff in the private sector. Some physicians would prescribe brand-name
medications based on the commissions from pharmaceutical companies.
In short, even though they offer better service and more cutting-edge medical
equipment than their public-sector counterparts, negative aspects of the private
providers such as overcharge and unethical staff overshadow the advantages.
Synonym list:
well-qualified personnel: nhân sự chất lượng cao
top-notch treatment facilities: những thiết bị y tế hàng đầu
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opt for private doctors: lựa chọn bác sĩ tư
acute health problems: những vấn đề về sức khỏe khó chữa
moral and ethical issues: những vấn đề về đạo đức
inequities in access to health care: sự bất công trong việc tiếp cận với hệ thống
chăm sóc sức khỏe
charge exorbitant fees: tính phí cao cắt cổ
have little control over: có ít sự kiểm soát đối với

Sample essay 98
People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty
for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree?
In the hectic modern-day life, people are increasingly leaning towards a healthier
lifestyle. However, whether being health-conscious is for the sake of one
individual or for the benefit of society at large is open to debate. In my opinion, I
reckon that not only staying healthy would do good to oneself but it also indicates
the duty of every citizen.
To begin with, one’s mental and physical condition is inextricably linked to their
life quality. In essence, those who maintain a good overall health are capable of
performing their tasks more effectively than physically weaker counterparts. In
other words, a person’s well-being at the grass-roots level provides the foundation
for building wealth and reaching desirable financial status. Additionally, a
disease-free body allows people to live life to the fullest, experiencing what life
has to offer around you. To illustrate this, one can not participate in extreme sports
such as bungee jumping or skydiving if their fitness level is not qualified.
On the other hand, each citizen should consider taking care of their health a
responsibility to sustain communal health. Take the outbreak of EBOLA and
SARS as a vivid illustration of a single patient infecting a disproportionate
number of contacts. This is an important wake-up call for ignorant members in
every community. In order to prevent and control the super spreading of emerging
viruses, concerted effort of the authority and each inhabitant of great importance.
Furthermore, a strong and healthy labour force plays a pivotal role in the
economic growth of a nation. Consequently, a thriving country with a steadily
rising budget would allocate necessary resources to improve the welfare system,
ensuring equal access to quality health care to all.

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In short, human resources are the most valuable asset of a country. Therefore, a
healthy community calls for collective actions, in which all the sectors - the local
government, individual citizens as well as other groups work together for a
common purpose. Staying healthy both physically and mentally can do good to
each person and the community as a whole.
(339 words)
Synonym list:
health-conscious: ý thức về sức khỏe
inextricably linked to: liên hệ mật thiết với
physically weaker counterparts: những đồng nghiệp có sức khỏe kém hơn
disease-free body: cơ thể khỏe mạnh, không bệnh tật
live life to the fullest: tận hưởng cuộc sống trọn vẹn nhất
sustain communal health: duy trì sức khỏe cộng đồng
the outbreak of EBOLA and SARS: sự bùng phát dịch EBOLA và SARS
concerted efforts: những nỗ lực chung
welfare system: hệ thống chăm sóc sức khỏe

Sample essay 99
Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is
it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
Modern parents are giving into children’s demands and buying them all the
latest toys and gadgets. I would argue that on no account can this parenting style
bring any benefits for kids in the long run. Worse still, this negative education
would cause detrimental consequences when they reach adulthood.
First, over-indulgence can be harmful to young children, both socially and
developmentally. When kids are provided with the latest must-have items, they
are less likely to grasp the notion of sharing or appreciation for their parents’
affection. Eventually, they interpret negative behaviours such as whining or
begging as a way to manipulate others. In addition, little do the young ones
comprehend the value of hard- earned money if adults keep showering them
in spending splurges. Consequently, spoilt kids can become insensitive to the

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needs of others, are prone to temper tantrums and have trouble deferring
gratification.
On the other hand, instant gratification could lead to adverse consequences in
the future. Children who are spoiled do not have to learn responsible behaviours.
Nor do they understand the concept of boundaries as adults and can develop
problems such as gambling, overeating or drinking. Lacking in emotional
maturity and having poor problem-solving skills, these adults might flounder
and become unhappy with their lives. Furthermore, as over-indulged and over-
protected kids do not grasp the lesson of giving and taking in a relationship, they
can have difficulty in establishing and maintaining meaningful friendships.
In short, sometimes effective parenting skills involve resisting the desire to give
kids whatever they want. Indeed, spoilt kids can lack life skills necessary to
successfully negotiate the demands of adulthood given that their troubles have
always been tackled by parents’ money.
(279 words)
Synonym list:
over-indulgence: sự nuông chiều quá mức
latest must-have items: những món đồ mới nhất, hot nhất
negative behaviours: những thái độ tiêu cực
grasp the notion of: hiểu được khái niệm của...
comprehend the value of hard-earned money: hiểu được giá trị đồng tiền
lack of emotional maturity: thiếu sự trưởng thành về cảm xúc
concept of boundaries: khái niệm về giới hạn
establish and maintain meaningful friendship: phát triển và duy trì những tình bạn
có ý nghĩa
effective parenting skill: kỹ năng làm cha mẹ hiệu quả

Sample essay 100

As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road
systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others,
however, think that the users should cover the costs. Discuss and give your
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The growing density of cars calls for a road improvement scheme. While some
people argue that it is the government’s responsibility to pay for road
construction, I believe that car users should be charged for the service.
To start with, there are some arguments put forth in support of the government’s
spending on road building and maintenance. First, an efficient road transport
system plays a pivotal role in ensuring smooth traffic flow, giving a boost in
trade activities within the country and economic growth at large. For example,
modern road infrastructure has a crucial part to play in the rapid development
of major cities in the world such as New York or Paris. Furthermore, the
convenience and safety of citizens should be of paramount concern of the
authority. Therefore, each level of government is obliged by law to provide and
maintain the national road network such as local roads, bridges or foot paths.
However, I strongly support the latter opinion that car commuters should
cover the cost of road infrastructure. Compared to walking or cycling which leave
little visual damage on the road, cars definitely take up more space on city
streets, and high demand for car use in everyday life causes road deterioration
at an increasingly fast rate. For this reason, road building and expansion mostly
facilitate drivers so that they can travel safely and smoothly. Besides, car owners
normally have significantly higher income than others. Funding for new
construction and repair, thus, is a form of lifting the financial burden on less
fortunate ones in order that the community as a whole can enjoy a better living
standard.
In conclusion, despite the fact that the government is responsible for national
affairs in general including road construction, I reckon that it is the moral and
legal duty of car users to pay for their regular road use and support poor
individuals. (308 words)
Synonym list:
road improvement scheme: kế hoạch cải tạo đường xá
road building and maintenance: việc xây dựng và duy trì đường xá
efficient road transport system: hệ thống giao thông hiệu quả
ensure smooth traffic flow: đảm bảo luồng giao thông trơn tru
modern road infrastructure: cơ sở hạ tầng giao thông hiện đại
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take up more space: chiếm nhiều không gian hơn
cause road deterioration: gây ra việc xuống cấp đường xá
road expansion: mở rộng đường
the financial burden: gánh nặng tài chính

Sample essay 101

Space travel has been possible for some time and some people believe that
space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive
or negative development?
Space tourism industry is officially open for business, and tickets are sold at
scarily exorbitant prices. However, the growing trend of paying a visit to outer
space is open to debate. From my perspective, this novel form of travel offers
more benefits than drawbacks.
To begin with, a holiday beyond the stratosphere is an eye-opening
experience for travellers. Since the dawn of time, it has been an intangible
desire to explore and challenge the boundaries of what we know and where we
have been amidst this vast universe. The possibility of being able to travel to
space would not only satisfy one’s curiosity but also enrich their knowledge to a
great extent. In addition, such a dramatic shift in perception would make an
individual learn to value life on Earth, raising self-awareness in protecting our
Mother Nature. Therefore, space travel should be made equally available to
ordinary members of the public.
On the other hand, opponents of space tourism argue that this extravagant
service is limited to professional astronauts and the top one percent of the
population who own the majority of the world’s wealth. This may be true given
the small customer base and during the pioneering phase. That being said,
growing demand accompanied by the development in orbital facilities will pave
the way for a mass phase in which tickets to orbit cost less and the number of
passengers per year expands quickly.
Eventually, a boom in space tourism would induce job opportunities in every
line of business - from construction to interior design and marketing. Once
orbital flights are made on a regular basis, scientists and government agencies
are motivated to reach new heights in space technology, achieving historic
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In conclusion, developing space tourism is a challenging issue and it may take a
long time to become an affordable service to all, rather than a pastime for the rich.
However, I believe space tourism should be perceived as a positive trend as it can
generate employment and provide a thorough understanding of the universe.
(344 words)
Synonym list:
exorbitant prices: giá cao đến mức cắt cổ
this novel form of travel: hình thức du lịch mới mẻ này
an eye-opening experience: một trải nghiệm giúp mở rộng tầm mắt
an intangible desire: một đam mê vô hình
a dramatic shift in perception: một sự thay đổi lớn về nhận thức
raise self-awareness: tăng ý thức cá nhân
extravagant service: dịch vụ đắt đỏ
small customer base: lượng khách hàng nhỏ
pave the way for: mở đường cho

Sample essay 102

Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and
motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree?
Whether the government budget should be invested in traffic infrastructure or
public transport systems is open to debate. In my opinion, each has substantial
contribution to the society; and therefore should receive equal fundings.
To start with, better road quality would have an instant positive effect on the daily
commute of citizens. In developing countries, it is relatively more convenient to
travel by private vehicles in lieu of waiting for buses and trains with restricted
routes and schedules. However, the staggering number of cars, motorbikes and
scooters has led to one of most aching issues in downtown areas which is urban
traffic congestion in downtown areas. A feasible measure to this matter is that
the authority should spend money on expanding road capacity and implement
a road improvement scheme. As a result, there will be more space for a larger
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On the other hand, state funding for public transport is another radical resolution
to the increasing traffic density. Take the metro systems in Hanoi which are
currently under construction and projected to be in operation by 2020. Beside
road building and maintenance, major cities like Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh city
invested a huge chunk of money in its metro projects to cope with heavy
congestion and frequent traffic accidents. Moreover, a better public transport
system would create a major lifestyle shift, encouraging people to give up their
private vehicles. In other words, promoting the use of public transport would
dramatically alleviate air pollution particularly in emerging economies.
In short, I believe that a similar amount of money should be allocated to road and
public transport to ensure smooth traffic flow.
(278 words)
Synonym list:
daily commutes of citizens: sự di chuyển hàng ngày của người dân
restricted routes and schedules: lịch trình và tuyến đường hạn chế
aching issues: những vấn đề nhức nhối
expand road capacity: mở rộng đường xá
road improvement scheme: chương trình cải tạo đường xá
traffic density: mật độ giao thông
road building and maintenance: xây dựng và bảo trì đường xá

Sample essay 103

Increasing travels between countries enables people to learn different
cultures or to increase tension between people from different countries?
Globalisation is a catch-all term that refers to any activity that Involves more
than one country, for example, travel from one country to another. The dramatic
increase in transnational travel in recent years has sparked controversy over the
potential impacts of this trend on individual countries, especially those new
member states of globalisation. Some people are concerned that the upsurge in
new arrivals' will promote local hostility against visitors, instead of promoting
their understanding of mutual cultural background. This notion should be rejected
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The first reason why international travels would never bring conflict is rooted in
the fact that both visitors and locals are economically motivated. International
travel opens up opportunities for business development throughout the world.
Entrepreneurs are interested not only in the domestic market but also in the
oversea market. Foreigners should learn the culture of a country before winning
over the local people. In turn, locals should show their hospitality to visitors in
exchange for their trust. They share a view that acceptance of each other's cultural
background is a necessary condition for cooperation.
Understanding a culture has other implications. Differences in social background,
cultural values and religious belief might make the discrepancy of foreigners and
local inhabitants on some issues indelible; however, the higher interaction, the
higher level of communication and understanding. Arabians, for example, used
to consider westerners as their foes. Now they have concrete relations with their
western allies in many fields. In the initial stage, their divergence seemed inherent
but over time, with better mutual understanding, they take the same position on
many issues.
Undeniably, it is likely that in some resorts, foreign visitors repel the local
community with their scant regard for the local environment and conventions
when they first arrive. However, it should be noted that most offenses are
accidental, rather than intentional. Instead, visitors disobey rules and conventions
simply because they have no knowledge of them. This situation is expected to be
improved with the passing of time when visitors from different countries increase
their knowledge of a local culture.
According to the above analysis, we can observe that the increase in international
travel should not be taken as the cause of any conflict that arises between two
countries. Alternatively, one should recognise its role in improving mutual
understanding between two countries.
Synonym list:
catch-all = all-embracing
hostility = enmity = resentment
rooted in = derived from = based on
entrepreneur = tycoon = mogul = industrialist
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foe = enemy = rival
concrete = tangible = solid
resort => tourist resort => holiday resort => beach resort => scenic
spot => place of interest
repel = revolt = repulse
scant = limited = scarce

Sample essay 104

When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements
and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global
audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has
negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?
As international media companies expand across the world, the growing
popularity and uniformity of some media programmes (such as TV shows,
movies, fashion shows) is causing worldwide concern. Many people have strong
views toward this trend. In my opinion, international media is closely linked to
cultural globalisation and cultural homogeneity.
The dominance of international media is a sign of Western cultural imperialism
and has the potential to thwart cultural diversity. It is not a secret that
international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations,
such as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the media market and place
national media companies at risk. The contraction in the number of media
owners will cause a proportional reduction in the variety of programmes
broadcasted. For example, painting, music and movies accessible in the media
have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of
artworks of different cultural backgrounds.
In addition to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment
companies affect cultural diversity by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and
norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and
ideals promoted by the leading mainstream media are of American origin.
American culture values individuality, maximisation of one's benefits and
material wealth, rather than communal life and family solidarity, the values and
norms previously treasured in many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian
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of family. This radical change can be attributed to those movies and TV
programmes that portray the success of American individuals or corporations.
The loss of media diversity is also responsible for people's narrow sense of ways
of life. The ruling class of many countries speaks English, favours Western food,
wears Western-style jackets and even prefers Western weddings. Young people
are captivated by American basketball and some even daubing the names of
NBA stars on their school sweatsuits. All these transformations in life are the
result of the audience's exposure to Hollywood movies, TV shows and sports
reports. The loss of media diversity will lead to degradation of culture and to a
minimisation of cultural diversity. It is a worrying trend, as people need cultural
diversity to preserve and pass on their valuable heritage to future generations,
including lifestyle.
As shown above, international media, controlled by a handful of transnational
media corporations, is exporting Western culture worldwide and putting many
indigenous cultures at the risk of extinction. The uniformity of media
programmes has led to that of artworks, norms and ways of life wherever
international media goes.
Synonym list:
dominance = domination = power
sign = symbol = mark = signal = indication
thwart = prevent = spoil = ruin
a handful of = a small number of
contraction = reduction
proportional = relative
perception = view = opinion
ideal = value = belief = principle
solidarity = unity = harmony = cohesion
be captivated by = be obsessed with = be passionate about = be addicted to = be
keen on = be enthusiastic about
pass on = give = impart = convey

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There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and culture
contact between countries on a country's identity. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends in the 21st century is a closer connection
between countries, in both economic and cultural aspects. There is a widespread
worry that this will lead to the gradual demise of countries' identities. This issue
should be viewed and analysed from multiple perspectives.
When a country tends to develop a closer relationship with the rest of the world,
it does not necessarily give up its culture. Culture is not a disgrace to but an asset
of a country. An indigenous culture can distinguish one country from others,
attracting foreign visitors and yielding high income. As most tourists travel
abroad for learning different cultures and sampling different ways of life, such as
Beijing opera in China, Japanese tea culture and Thai temples, many countries
have responded by protecting and preserving their cultural identities, in an effort
to keep themselves in the list of the most popular destinations. Increased tourism
instils fresh life force into these countries, aiding the conservation of their
features.
While tourism provides a driving force for cultural conversation, some
components of a culture, such as traditions, customs or taboos might die out over
time. It seems that in some countries, the locals have become more accustomed
to exotic cultures. It reflects the combined effects of the invasion of foreign
cultures, either through media or through direct business interaction. For
example, two decades ago, sex was a taboo subject in China and most Chinese
people felt embarrassed to talk openly about it. Over time the Western culture has
permeated into the Chinese lifestyle, and the Chinese people have broken many
of their time-honoured traditions. It occurs in the rest of the world as well.
As outlined above, increased interaction between countries in the domains of
business and culture can either strengthen or undermine the identities of countries
involved. To date there is no definite answer to this question.
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conspicuous = noticeable = prominent = striking
connection = linkage = relation = relationship
demise = disappearance = vanishing = fading
multiple = manifold = numerous = various = many

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disgrace = dishonour = shame = humiliation
life force = soul = essence
conservation = protection = preservation
exotic = bizarre = outlandish = from a far = mysteriously unusual
taboo = offensive = embarrassing = unacceptable = disgraceful = dishonourable
= humiliating
permeate = seep into = pervade = leak into
time-honoured = age-old = long-established
interaction = interplay = communication = relationship

Sample essay 106

Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism
revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a
culture.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is little room for doubt that tourism is one of the fastest-growing industries
in the world. However, its impact on culture remains a source of constant debate.
This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects of tourism from a
cultural perspective.
Providing economic incentives for cultural preservation is unarguably one of the
main contributions of tourism. To many tourists, culture and history are what they
first consider when choosing a destination. Their mindset has been recognised
by many tourism sites and money has been subsequently directed toward cultural
protection, including the maintenance of key historical sites. Tourism is
therefore one of the primary forces contributing to the preservation of a culture.
In addition to raising financing, tourism can make an indigenous culture known
to the world and rally support worldwide to protect it. When a historic site or a
site that shows a country's cultural heritage is made accessible to the public,
visitors from all over the world will soon flock there. They will share their
experience in the local culture with their friends and families once they return
home, assisting this site to gain international fame. Both financial and
technological support will flood in for the conservation of natural and cultural
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On the negative side, tourism develops sometimes at the expense of part of
culture. Food, festivals, costumes and other stimulating elements of a culture are
highlighted to entertain tourists, constituting an insult to the locals and causing
damage to the unique nature of a culture. Moreover, cultural commercialisation
has made the sacred elements of a culture commonplace and tourists are
encouraged to attach little importance to a unique tradition, which cannot be
found elsewhere.
In the light of these facts, one can conclude that tourism is neither a boon nor a
bane to cultural preservation. While its endeavour to protect an indigenous
culture should be recognised, it has put the integrity of a culture at risk.
Synonym list:
unarguably = unquestionably = indisputably = undeniably
destination = site = place
maintenance = preservation = upholding = protection
indigenous = original = aboriginal
fame = reputation = recognition = eminence
at the expense of = at the cost of
entertain = amuse = keep somebody amused
insult = offence
commonplace = ordinary
in the light of = in view of = considering = taking into account
endeavour = effort = attempt
integrity = entirety = unity
put at risk = endanger = jeopardise

Sample essay 107

Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when
immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to
a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two
views and give your opinion.

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The world in the 21st century is marked by high population mobility. When an
increasing number of people have chosen to leave their motherlands and resettle
in a new country, they are at crossroads whether to blend in with the local culture
or to cherish their own cultural heritages by establishing a minority community.
In my opinion, the convergence of different cultures does not require one culture
to yield to another. Instead, it can be achieved by building minority communities.
Most immigrants, at the first stage of their life in a new country, are faced with
merging into the new culture and integrating into the new society. Accepting the
local culture by observing the local traditions is a good starting point. Doing so
enables immigrants to interact with locals, especially in the workplace, where
locals predominantly work. For example, in Western culture, people customarily
keep a certain distance from each other when having a conversation, whereas in
some other cultures, the closeness of physical distance is taken as a sign of mutual
trust. Examples of this kind are many. A migrant to a new country should
recognise the differences and observe local conventions. It will help avoid
embarrassment and bring a sense of comfort.
While adopting local customs and blending into the local culture, migrants can
follow their individual cultural traditions. The coexistence of different minority
communities in a country benefits both immigrants and locals. On the one hand,
it enables immigrants to counteract the stress that results from culture shock and
to increase confidence in their residence in a new country. On the other hand, the
flourishing of different cultures contributes to the establishment of a multi-
cultural environment, a prerequisite for attracting skilled workforce from all
over the world to settle.
By comparing the immigration options above, one can conclude that immigrants
can adopt local conventions and cherish their own cultures simultaneously. This
allows both locals and immigrants to co-build a harmonious multi-cultural
community.
Synonym list:
motherland = native country
resettle = relocate
convergence = union = junction = meeting
merge into = blend into = integrate into
starting point = basis

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customarily = routinely = habitually = regularly = usually
closeness = nearness = proximity
counteract = offset = neutralise = counter
flourishing = blooming = budding
prerequisite = requirement = condition = must = precondition

Sample essay 108

The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue
to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In these years, there is a growing recognition that English is well on its way to
becoming the dominant global language. The impact of this trend is a subject of
intense debate. It is my opinion that the advantages of a dominant global language
will continue to outweigh its disadvantages.
The rise of a global language is a facilitator of cross-cultural communication and
the communication between people with different language backgrounds. In
different areas of global communication, such as science and news, recognising
a common language removes communication barriers and increases convenience.
On many formal occasions, English, as a working language, boosts efficiency and
avoids misunderstanding. Likewise, the exchange of essential information like
know-how and technologies will be tremendously prompted.
One might argue that the rise of a global language would endanger other
languages, in a belief that an increasing number of people have turned to English
as their first language. This viewpoint is flawed. The spread of global English has
little, if any, influence on non-English-speakers’ language proficiency. People
might be motivated to learn English as a foreign language but do not necessarily
drop their native language because learning beginner or intermediate level
English is sufficient for day-to-day communication.
The dominance of English as a global language is, therefore, not a cause of the
loss of language diversity. Its negative effect is reflected mainly in cultural
imperialism. As international media recognises English as its root language,
most of the broadcasted information is related to the lifestyle, norms and beliefs
of English-speaking countries. It might over time put many minority cultures on
the verge of extinction, when those ethnic groups gradually adopt the Western

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culture. The effects of shrinking cultural diversity are destructive, causing people
to live in a simple and monotonous world and think and act in similar ways.
The development of English is overall, a positive global trend. It connects people
who previously spoke different languages and enables them to exchange ideas,
although it might lead to the loss of cultural diversity.
Synonym list:
know-how = knowledge
prompt = encourage = stimulate = trigger
imperialism = colonialism
on the verge of = on the brink of = on the edge of
destructive = damaging = devastating = injurious = detrimental
connect = unite = link

Sample essay 109

Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruits and vegetables to
some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some
people consider it a good trend, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views
and give your opinion.
There has been a steady increase in the demand for imports throughout the world
in recent years, including those perishable items, such as fruits and vegetables.
Despite the boom in this business, importing agricultural products is very often
criticised as unnecessary and extravagant, especially when air freight is
involved. The criticism was correct in the past, but at the present time, there are
indications that this trade activity has brought various benefits.
First, it is important to note that contrary to popular belief, imports are now
increasingly affordable to the general population. Thanks to the rapid
development of the freight transport industry, air travel has become an
economical mode of transport, resulting in the subsequent decrease in the cost of
importing. Meanwhile, technical advances in the food processing industry have
made it much easier to preserve fresh fruits and vegetables over a long-haul air
flight. Because of the wide availability of imported crops, there are more varieties
in the food market, leading to the drop in the price of imports. The supply of
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adequate intake of nutrition is guaranteed for the general population throughout
the year.
Another fact to note is that import and export normally go hand in hand, and a
country that imports goods from other countries does not necessarily suffer a loss.
Trade is not unilateral but bilateral. Some countries are noted for an agrarian
economy, while others specialise in manufacturing industrial products. Countries
differ in their product structures because they have dissimilar natural resources,
climates, and geographical features. By adopting an enlightened policy and
promoting trade activities with other countries, a country can facilitate the
exchange of goods, services and capital with the rest of the world and promote
economic development.
On the negative side, some countries might become addicted to importing goods
and overlook the possibility of developing a self-contained economy. Scarcity
of resources or lack of technology might disable a country from producing crops
to feed its population, but it cannot be taken as an excuse for relying heavily on
imports. Government funding in scientific research can make it possible to make
a breakthrough and increase the yield, thereby resolving the food supply crisis.
Countries are therefore advised to promote international trade and to develop their
own industries simultaneously. Positive attitudes toward importing goods from
other countries demonstrate a government's stance on international trade,
although the government should also prevent itself from relying on imported
goods.
Synonym list:
perishable = easy to rot
boom = rapid growth = sudden increase = expansion = surge
extravagant = wasteful = luxurious
at the present time = at present = currently
indication = sign = hint = clue
variety = selection
go hand in hand = be closely connected = be inseparable
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overlook = neglect = ignore
self-contained = self-reliant = self-sufficient
scarcity = deficiency = shortage = dearth = deficit
yield = harvest = the amount of crops produced
simultaneously = at the same time
stance = position = stand

Sample essay 110

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people
argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on
Earth. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, there have been more and more countries involved and interested
in long-term space projects. Because of the enormous research expenditures
incurred, the value of space projects has been disputed. Some people suggest that
government funding should be diverted toward improving the living standard of
ordinary people. In evaluating the merits of space ambition, one should adopt a
broader perspective. The investment in space research can be paid off someday
in the future.
The first reason to support it is that our planet is now facing an unprecedented
resource problem, which can be tackled only by discovering and mining new
resources on other planets. The overuse or scarcity of some resources on the Earth
is a severe problem. Rare metals, such as gold or silver, eventually will be
depleted, as industrial production expands. These metals and other natural
resources, although rare on Earth, might abound on other planets. In that case,
conducting space research is a promising adventure.
Meanwhile, the world's population is now growing to a stage where there are too
many people for the planet to support, highlighting the need to seek land suitable
for people's re-settlement off the planet. Even if new urban developments are
able to accommodate the increasing population, water and electricity supply,
waste treatment, sewage disposal and sanitation will become unmanageable for
the capacity of our planet. As there are countless planets orbiting stars throughout
the universe, one can be confident that at least one of them is suitable for our
second home planet. Mars, for example, bearing a close resemblance to the Earth,
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In addition to searching for a shelter for future generations, space programmes
contribute considerably to the well-being of the Earth in some other aspects. For
example, by monitoring the ozone hole, global warming, the loss of rain forests
and other environmental threats to human survival, remote sensing satellites help
people trace the recovery from the worst environmental threats and thereby
improve the quality of life. Meanwhile, space research provides a new platform
on which scientists can carry out experiments and make new discoveries in a
variety of fields, such as agriculture.
As suggested above, in locating new resources, positioning new settlements,
addressing environmental concerns and facilitating scientific discovery, space
research will prove to be not only worthwhile, but also crucial to the survival and
sustainability of human civilisation.
Synonym list:
value = merit = worthiness = worth
divert = redirect = reroute = switch
overuse = overexploitation
abound = be plentiful = thrive = flourish = proliferate = grow in great numbers
adventure = voyage = journey
re-settlement = relocation = immigration
sewage = sullage = waste water
unmanageable = uncontrollable = unruly
backup = candidate = replacement
recovery = healing = recuperation
platform = stage

Sample essay 111

Space travel to the Moon is often cited as one giant leap for mankind. Yet
some people argue that this achievement made little difference to our daily
lives. What is your opinion?
The idea of travelling through space, even living and working on other planets,
has fascinated people for centuries. Despite numerous setbacks and daunting
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and provoke controversy. Sixty years after the first Moon landing, people
question whether the feat, previously thought of as a giant leap for mankind, has
substantially benefited people's lives. In my opinion, landing on the Moon has
enormous relevance for the quality of life, albeit not always explicit.
The first implication of Moon landing is reflected in the likelihood of travelling
on other planets. Moon, as the object in outer space closest to the Earth, can serve
as a launch site for journeys to other planets. Having no atmosphere, the Moon is
a permanent base for people to observe the universe easily and provide them with
sufficient evidence they require for decision making on a great many significant
issues, which are likely to have direct impact on them. For example, one can learn
more about the treaty of potentially hazardous objects that are likely to hit the
Earth and destroy our civilisation.
Another remarkable breakthrough made by the Moon landing is that it reignites
people's enthusiasm in the natural sciences. When today's youths become
increasingly interested in such subjects as commerce, finance and business, space
exploration successfully attracts and retains talents in space-related technologies.
These young minds are convinced that unravelling the unknown of the universe
is feasible, despite many challenges. They are inspired to think for the future,
instead of being preoccupied with contemporary issues only.
It should also be noted that the Moon has water, the basic resource for people's
survival, and it abounds in solar energy, a clean and readily obtainable resource.
It is also believed that minerals are plentiful there to be exploited. Some day, if
people are forced to move off the Earth, the Moon might be the best shelter.
Although people have not yet fully explored this possibility at this stage,
preliminary investigation is imperative.
Based on the above-mentioned facts, one can conclude that the Moon landing
greatly impacts the distant future, although its effect is not apparent for the time
being. The Moon is the eventual gateway to other planets and potentially the
place of residence for the future generations. The scientific knowledge and
economic benefits to be gained by building a sustainable Moon base are huge.
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unravel = find an answer to = work out
unknown = mysterious = unfamiliar
feasible = practicable = viable = practical = realistic
obtainable = available = accessible
preliminary = initial = preceding
imperative = necessary = essential = crucial = vital
for the time being = for now = for the moment
gateway = entry = doorway = access

Sample essay 112

Some people argue that the government should spend money on public
services and facilities, but not on the arts. Do you agree or disagree?
The role of arts in modern life is unique, providing people with entertainment and
yielding various psychological rewards, such as relief from stress. Despite these
benefits, the arts have been taken as luxury goods in many cases. It is suggested
that public money of a city should be concentrated in projects like public
facilities, which are more likely to bring immediate benefits to the public, rather
than the arts. There are a number of facts indicating that this position is right.
Public facilities, widely accepted as one of the main precursors to a city's
development, should be one of the highest priorities. Those underdeveloped cities
in particular, should direct sufficient funding toward public facilities. While
municipal office buildings, courthouses and post offices are essential
components of public services, libraries, hospitals, parks, playing fields,
gymnasiums and swimming pools are available to the public for social,
educational, athletic and cultural activities. By boosting spending on public
facilities, cities are more capable to satisfy the needs of citizens and improve their
standard of living.
In addition to social benefits, there are economic merits that public facilities can
offer to communities. An integrated transport network (maritime, land and
inland waterways transport and civil aviation), for example, promises the smooth
and speedy movement of goods and people in a city. Industrial products, as well
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steady income. Of equal importance are public Internet facilities. Providing
access to information by improving Internet and other telecommunications
facilities has relevance to the ease with which businesses in a city receive,
process, utilise and send information. It is no exaggeration to say that
entrepreneurs, either from home or abroad, will first examine the infrastructure
of a city before deciding whether to pursue business opportunities there.
The arts, by comparison, although enabling people to see the world and the human
condition differently and to see a truth one might have ignored before, do not
merit government spending. The first reason is that the arts - referring to music,
film and literature altogether - are more likely to attract the investment of the
private sector than public facilities. Businesspeople continue to invest in the arts
in the expectation of earning lump sum income and the arts in return, continue to
flourish without government spending. Meanwhile, the arts are a key component
of a culture and naturally passed down from one generation to another. Unlike
public facilities, they require no money to survive.
It is therefore clear that construction of public facilities should be given the
foremost consideration. The concern about the well-being of individual citizens
and that of a city is more acute than the apprehension about the survival and
prospects of the arts, something that businesses have a stake in.
Synonym list:
precursor = forerunner = foundation
municipal = urban = metropolitan
merit = value = advantage
integrate = amalgamate = combine = mix
merit = deserve = earn
flourish = thrive = burgeon = boom
apprehension = anxiety = uneasiness =dread = fearfulness
stake =involvement = concern = interest = share

Sample essay 113

Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical
care and education but not on theatres or sport stadiums. Do you agree or
disagree?

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Where public money goes is an issue of broad interest to the general public. Some
people advocate that the government should fund the sectors that bring tangible
and immediate benefits to the public, such as medical care and educational
systems, while opponents suggest that those large urban developments, such as
stadiums and theatres, are worth government funding. In my opinion, the
possibility remains that the two opinions can be reconciled and the government
can coordinate budgeting to meet the needs of both.
Medical care is essential to the economic and social well-being of a country,
particularly of an underdeveloped country. Both empirical knowledge and
academic research suggest that making education available throughout a country
and eliminating illiteracy can pave the way for economic development. By
receiving education, children from impoverished families can shake off poverty,
climb high in the social ladder and live better off. Education also allows citizens
to secure employment and earn regular income, thereby maintaining or improving
their standard of living. For a country as a whole, education is linked to skilled
workforce and to high productivity, affecting both resource use and national
output.
Government interference in healthcare and medical services is also highly
recommended. Availability of affordable medical service is a mark of the social
and economic development of a country. By providing the needy people with
medical service, a country can inspire the loyalty of citizens. People feel assured
living and working in a country where they can be given medical service when
unemployed, sick, injured or retired. By comparison, if they cannot afford the
high cost of visiting the clinic, hospitalisation, or buying drugs, they are less
likely to enjoy their living. Social solidarity will eventually suffer.
Although education and medical services are fundamental to the stability and
development of a country, it is not to say that theatres or sport stadiums have no
redeeming feature. In the hierarchy of human needs, those needs for food,
shelter and health are among the basic. After these targets are attained, people
turn to higher aspirations, entertainment and recreation. Leisure facilities like
stadiums and cinemas satisfy people's needs in these fields. A game between one's
motherland and a visiting country can raise people's sense of national pride and
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To draw a conclusion, the decision to finance theatres or sport stadiums depends
on the financial situation of a country. When an economy comes to maturity, the
launch of recreational and entertainment projects of this kind is reasonable.
Synonym list:
tangible = concrete = solid = material = touchable
reconcile = tailor = modify = alter = adapt
shake off = get rid of = get away with
assured = confident = self-confident = poised = self-assured
drug = medicine = prescription drug
redeeming feature = desirable quality
hierarchy = pyramid = pecking order = chain
shelter = safe haven = housing = accommodation = lodging
motherland = fatherland = nation state

Sample essay 114

The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral
obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it unnecessary,
because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss these
two points of view and give your opinion.
International aid refers to money, equipment or services that are provided by a
country or international organisation for countries that need them, known as
recipient countries. It reflects a moral ideal of mankind, that is, mutual support
and interdependence, according to those donor countries. However, some people
adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that aid money can be misspent by
the recipient countries. My view is that people should not withhold the
provision of money or material resources in aid.
Humanitarian aid is a moral imperative. Members of the global community have
the responsibility to provide relief to each other, especially to those disadvantaged
members and those victims of natural disasters and civil unrest. This aid is
essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their
normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief
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tsunami, draught, flood) throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild
their homeland
Humanitarian relief is meanwhile an instrument to promote peace and security.
The deep-rooted hostility between some countries can result from the disparity
in the material standard of living, or from physical distance. The provision of
humanitarian relief opens up the possibility of cultural, economic and social
interaction between countries, and thereby easing tension. Recipient countries can
thus participate in the global economy, a strategic step in shaking off poverty.
Admittedly, aid money is sometimes misused or spent on unintended
destinations, but these pitfalls can never overshadow the benefits. Misuse can
instead raise awareness of the global community to a venal regime and pressure
the recipient country to adjust its system. Meanwhile, it can be tackled by tight
regulations and scrutiny. In general, the abuse of international aid is an isolated
event, so its effect should not be overstated.
From what has been discussed above, one can reach a conclusion that the role of
humanitarian relief is not only to deliver urgent assistance to populations in need
but also to strengthen ties between countries. Although fraud and corruption
occur every now and then, they can be addressed in a way that enhances future
aid endeavours.
Synonym list:
misspend = mishandle = misuse = abuse
recipient = receiver = beneficiary
withhold = suspend = defer
provision = supply
unrest = turmoil = conflict = turbulence
result from = stem from = be caused by
open up = increase = raise
shake off = get rid of
pitfall = drawback = downside
venal = corrupt
isolated = exceptional

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endeavour = attempt = effort

Sample essay 115

Some people think the government should pay for health care and education,
but there is no agreement about whether it is the government's
responsibility. What is your opinion?
Not surprisingly, health care and education are two areas of government priority
in most, if not all, of the countries around the world. However, many tend to see
both areas as citizens' individual responsibilities. This belief is partly right. The
government and the citizens should be jointly responsible for the cost of education
and health care service.
The first point to note is that government funding for education is of great benefit
to families with children and the society as a whole. There are occasions on which
parents cannot afford the cost of their education and their savings are meagre,
compared with the formidable tuition fees being charged by a tertiary institution.
Poor academic experience can impair one's employability and put him or her into
a seriously disadvantaged position. Government spending addresses this issue by
providing aspiring students with access to a comfortable learning experience. In
this knowledge-based society, possibly nothing is more valuable than the access
to education.
Similarly, an individual should receive health care treatments, especially
lifesaving ones, whether he or she has the means to pay. Access to health care is
a basic human right and a measure to ensure a decent standard of living. In the
event of the need for urgent or emergency treatment, government spending
enables sufferers to receive immediate health care services. This is the fulfilment
of the government's responsibility to its members. Needless to say, health care
treatment costs are, in general, unaffordable to low-income families.
Government's financial support is therefore required.
Despite these facts, it is immoral that individuals shirk responsibility and try to
pass all medical costs on to the government. In view of the fact that the
government raises financing primarily from taxpayers' income, individual's over-
exploitation of a health care system will in fact add a heavy burden on those
hardworking and good-hearted citizens. Particular attention should be paid to
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habits (smoking, drinking, substance use or inactive lifestyle). In such cases, they
should not be entitled to public medical services.
As suggested above, education and healthcare services are of primary importance
to citizens, and the government has the responsibility to ensure that those services
are available and affordable. However, it is not to say that the government should
bear the costs of all healthcare and educational services that the citizens currently
enjoy.
Synonym list:
formidable = remarkable = astounding = daunting
employability = the ability to find a job
aspiring = promising = aspirant
standard of living = living standard = level of affluence = level of comfort
sufferer = victim = patient
good-hearted = charitable = benevolent = generous = altruistic
bear = assume = shoulder = take on

Sample essay 116

People should keep all the money they earn and should not pay taxes to the
state. Do you agree or disagree?
The role of taxation is providing funds necessary for carrying out a variety of
functions in a country. However, to many taxpayers, especially employers,
paying tax remains the biggest headache. In my opinion, tax revenue is essential
to a country. Below are some of its main functions.
Although many taxpayers see income tax as an appropriation of their earnings,
tax is in fact a relief to taxpayers and their families, for example, by providing a
safeguard against unemployment and a solution to other problems that they may
confront in life. For example, those who lose their earning capabilities because of
injuries, diseases and disabilities are entitled to the government's financial
support, derived mainly from tax revenue. There is no point in denying that tax is
the principal source of finance that sustains many of the benefits offered by the
welfare system of a country. Although most workers are not the beneficiaries
currently, they will count on these benefits in their later years (as pensioners).
So will their dependents (children and parents).

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Taxation is meanwhile an effective tool by which a society can achieve the
redistribution of income and close the gap between haves and have-nots. In most
countries, as a general rule, the higher the personal income, the higher the income
tax. By imposing different tax rates, the government is able to distribute the tax
burden across social classes, reducing income disparity between the rich and the
poor.
Corporate tax is deemed by business as a regular cost, which must be kept to a
minimum, but it is not necessarily a bane. By levying different types of tax, the
government can exert an influence on macroeconomic performance, which in turn
influences the income of the business world. When the economy is on the verge
of a recession, the government can reduce the tax and present tax incentives,
which proves to be an effective policy in reviving the economy. By contrast,
during periods of growth, the government can raise the tax rate so as to prevent
an overheated economy and combat inflation. It is fair to say that tax is one of the
main tools in establishing a healthy environment conducive to business's
sustained growth
What has been discussed above are the benefits brought by taxation, all being
essential to a country, its businesses and individual taxpayers. Although many
taxpayers feel pressured by taxes, they will eventually benefit from the taxes they
have paid and should therefore bear tax liabilities.
Synonym list:
headache = problem = annoyance
appropriation = acquisition = seizure = requisition
earning = remuneration = wage = income = take-home pay = salary
safeguard = protection = precaution
later years= last few years of one's life
haves and have-nots = rich and poor
recession = downturn = depression = slump
incentive = encouragement

Sample essay 117

It is widely accepted that people who have post-school qualifications earn a
higher salary than those less educated do. University students should,

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therefore, pay all the full cost incurred over the course of obtaining a college
education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the labour intensive economy gradually giving way to knowledge-focused
economy, the access to higher education has become an issue of broad interest.
The proposal to charge all university students with tuition fees and allow no
exemption arises mainly from the concern that tertiary education has to compete
with many other urgent demands for public funds and struggle with underfunding.
I believe that this policy, if implemented, will have an accumulative effect on
the well-being of either individual students or the society as a whole.
When laying the hope of future development over students, the government
cannot shirk from the responsibility to finance them. The sustained growth of a
country rests on young talents. In this sense, the government is investing, not
spending money. A standard example is America, a country investing multi
million dollars in higher education on an annual basis and sponsoring students'
study by different forms of aid, such as scholarships, subsidies, allowances and
student loans. It can be expected that these well-educated aspiring people, after
finishing their education, will constitute a main drive of a state's growth.
Moreover, the government should plough a reasonable proportion of tax revenue,
most being sourced from parents, back to their children.
Meanwhile, it is worth mentioning that some schools tend to force a complex of
charges over students, with the aim to extend their profit margin. Ignorant of their
not-for-profit nature, many universities might deviate from their most important
tasks, such as improving teaching quality. The persistence of this problem will
make their academic service much less credible and quality of teaching and
faculty staff uneven. A university can cover its expenses by various means, such
as the receipt of donations, or the government's funding, instead of levying a high
fee over students.
The reasons cited above have justified why university students need not pay more
than a lower payment. While depending on the younger generations, society
should be more considerate of their situation. The effort to encourage tertiary
education participation will pay back sooner, rather than later.
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give way to = succumb to = yield to
exemption = exception

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accumulative = growing = increasing = incremental = spiralling
shirk = evade = avoid = dodge = shun
sustained =everlasting = eternal = endless = unending = perpetual
rest on = hinge on = depend on
aspiring = hopeful = aspirant
deviate = diverge = stray
persistence = continuance
uneven = unbalanced = unequal

Sample essay 118

Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what
extent do you agree or disagree?
Housing shortage has become a serious urban social issue in many parts of the
world. It has been argued that only when the government has taken actions, can
demand for homes be fulfilled. Yet to the best of my knowledge, the government
alone cannot cope well with housing shortages.
One of the main objections to government intervention is that it would hamper
the private sector and simultaneously pose a huge burden upon the state. In
countries where the government is on a tight budget and the homeless population
is large, the involvement of private property developers is required and
recommended. Not only does it release the government from the burden of
funding large-sized construction programmes but it also fosters the housing
industry. Given its role in attracting public consumption and accelerating
economic development, the housing industry should be at the mercy of the
market, rather than the government.
Another drawback of state control over the housing market is that it could result
in the stagnancy of construction quality, functionality, facilities and other aspects
of housing. Apartment blocks or other residential constructions would be built in
a similar pattern and the cityscape would be monotonous. Excessive uniformity,
especially in the size and number of rooms, will fail to meet comprehensive
requirements raised by citizens on properties.
Despite these objections, government intervention is essential in some segments
of the market and can render more resistance to citizens. Single parents, the

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people with disabilities and other disadvantaged people are among those who are
not ready to afford commercial housing. The government can provide them either
with housing allowance to purchase their private properties or directly with
economical houses.
As indicated above, in addressing homelessness and inadequate housing, the joint
effort of both government and private sector is required. While government
intervention would impede the property market and negatively influence the
supply and demand relationship, government assistance is essential for low-
income families and vulnerable individuals in need of housing.
Synonym list:
objection = opposition = argument against
at the mercy of = reliant on
monotonous = repetitive
uniformity = sameness
comprehensive = wide-ranging = ample
intervention = interference = involvement
segment = sector = section
allowance = subsidy = payment
joint = combined =shared = united

Sample essay 119

There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of
mobile phones. What form do these problems take? Do problems with using
mobile phones outweigh the benefits?
Across the world, especially the wealthier parts, the mobile phone has taken the
place of the telephone as an electronic telecommunication device, with the
majority of the adult, teenager and even child owning one. As this technology has
become rife, its drawbacks, which can be seen from social, medical and technical
perspectives, deserve people's greatest attention.
Similar to many other hi-tech products, such as computers, mobile phones have
detrimental effects on users' health. For example, long-time heavy phone users
seem to be more prone to certain types of cancers, although evidence to date is

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inconclusive. Another lethal health concern is the link between mobile phones
and road accidents. It is argued that motorists have a much higher risk of
collisions and losing control of the vehicle when driving and talking on the phone
simultaneously, despite sometimes using hands-free systems.
When the mobile phone has brought considerable convenience, people's
obsession with convenience has meanwhile caused enormous disturbance.
That's why the use of mobile phones has been prohibited in many public places,
such as libraries, theatres, hospitals and even transports, such as trains, buses and
aircrafts. Speaking at increased volume is considered impolite or even offensive.
In schools, students are required to switch off cell phones before the class begins
because mobile phones are responsible for a high amount of class disruptions.
When its downside persists, the mobile phone has proven indispensable in
modern life. It is handheld, lightweight, portable and multi-functioned, allowing
users to send text messages, exchange music files, make voice calls, browse the
Internet, and so forth. Meanwhile, within twenty years, mobile phones are
expected to be more pervasive as technical advances and mass manufacture will
make them low-cost personal items. Given those factors, the mobile phone will
continue to perform its role as a key social tool, by which one keeps in touch with
others much more easily than did the generations before.
As suggested above, the contribution of the mobile phone to society is prominent
and people's dependence on it for communication is an irreversible trend,
although it has a number of problems that should be well handled.
Synonym list:
device = equipment = appliance = instrument
rife = widespread = prevalent = ubiquitous = predominant = rampant
prone to = susceptible to = vulnerable to
lethal = fatal = deadly = life-damaging
motorist = driver = car user
collision = crash = accident
disturbance = annoyance = interruption
disruption = interference = distraction
pervasive = prevalent = omnipresent

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irreversible = permanent = irrevocable = unalterable

Sample essay 120

It is said that the fast pace of our everyday life, as a direct result of the rapid
development of telecommunications technology and travel industry, has
negative effects on individuals, nations and the globe. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
Not surprisingly, many aspects of people's daily lives have undergone
considerable changes because of the recent development in technology. It is a
particular concern that the pace of everyday life is becoming faster, resulting from
the development in cars, air travel, telecommunications technology and the
Internet. As well as benefits, this trend is bringing problems.
On the positive side, the fast rhythm of life requires people to enhance efficiency
when working and then allows them to enjoy longer leisure time. With the
advance in telecommunications, people can make inquiries by phone, instead of
travelling long distances. Internet access makes it possible for one to perform
various tasks without leaving their offices. Even though people have to travel
every now and then for meeting business partners, visiting clients in other cities
or other purposes, modern transport networks reduce the amount of time they
spend on commutes.
The acceleration of the pace of life also implies the expansion of people's social
circle. In the past, social relationships were limited by physical factors such as
geographical distance and low mobility, but nowadays, one can travel further and
get acquainted with more people with those technological advances, such as the
railroad, the automobile and the telephone. For instance, the rapid penetration of
telecommunications technology has made the mobile phone a key social tool and
people rely on their mobile phone address book to keep in touch with their friends.
On the negative side, the fast-paced lifestyle is responsible for the upsurge in
lifestyle-related problems. Jobs become demanding and require workers' full
commitment, resulting in their depression and pressure. Underneath the facade
of continued contraction of official working hours, employees are actually
working longer, primarily because fax, e-mail or other communication devices
have made them accessible to their supervisors, colleagues and customers after
work. They have to respond Instantly to voice and email messages from others.
Private life has to be sacrificed.

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According to the facts outlined above, the doubts about the negative effects of the
acceleration of pace of life are not well-grounded. People now enjoy greater well-
being, which is reflected in more quality family time, less travel-related stress and
close contact with friends and family members However, they might have to
accept frequent intrusions as a by-product of convenient communication.
Synonym list:
penetration = invasion = permeating
facade = disguise = cover-up
contraction = reduction
intrusion = interruption
byproduct = unwanted product = anything produced in the course of making
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