People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems?

What can be done to solve the problems?

Problems:
individual level: higher poverty rates - tuổi thọ cao -> financial
insecurity -> ko có pension, tiêu hụt savings -> ko đủ để chi trả phí
sinh hoạt + healthcare.
chán, cô độc -> xu hướng sống riêng cao -> bố mẹ sẽ phải sống 1m
xa rời con cái -> reduce level of contentment among người già
societal level: exert burden on public economy -> nhận pension, và
việc họ sống lâu hơn mà ko contribute gì cho economy (ko làm viejc
nữa) sẽ put pressure cho đất nước (trong khi tiền đó…)
Solutions
encourage elderly + their children living together -> con cái có cơ
hội chăm sóc bố mẹ tốt hơn, tránh financial vulnerability + tăng
bonding, sự vui vẻ của bố mẹ
kéo dài tuổi nghỉ hưu + suggest thêm 1 số cv part-time phù hợp với
ng già (nếu ngta có mong muốn làm việc)

It is true that people are living for a long time after their retirement.
There are a variety of possible problems for this, but steps can
definitely be taken to tackle the problem. ( Band 6.0)

It is confirmed that people's life expectancy/lifespan is being

extended after their retirement. There are a variety of possible
problems for this phenomenon, but steps can definitely be taken to
tackle the problem. ( Band 7.0 )

* It is true = It is cotirmed that ( Band Cao hdn )

* living for a
long time
 = life expectancy / lifespan is being extended after their retirement

To begin with, two main issues are associated with the way humans
prolong their lives. Firstly, on an individual level, if the elder live longer,
they might confront a precarious and lonely life as their children are
preoccupied working and taking care of their nuclear family. Therefore,
they might suffer loneliness during the rest of the time instead of
enjoying a wonderful life mentally and physically. Moreover, long life
spans might put financial additional on them since their savings could
not afford to pay for the ever-increasing healthcare costs and it could
lead to higher poverty rate among seniors. Secondly, in a society level,
elderly are entitled to have more care services as they are more prone
to chronic diseases such as Dementia and Alzheimer . Hence, a
considerable amount of money might be allocated for healthcare which
would lead to increased pressure on public finances. ( Band 7.0 )
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prolong their lives. Firstly, on an individual level, if the elderly live
longer, they might confront a precarious and lonely life as their children
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instead of enjoying a wonderful life mentally and physically. Moreover,
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healthcare costs and it could lead to higher poverty rate among seniors.
Secondly, in a society level, elderly are entitled to more care services as
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Alzheimer. Hence, a considerable amount of money might be allocated
for healthcare which would lead to increased pressure on public finances
and affect the flourish of other national sectors. ( Band 7. 5)
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Regarding those problems, the most obvious solution is for the

government to tackle these problems as much as possible. For example,
they should launch a campaign for raising the elder awareness about
taking part in more society activities and pension schemes. By doing
this, the elderly might stand a high chance of making more friends and
doing more valuable activities for society and their life. A further step
for the government is that they should extend the retirement age. As a
result, older people will be able to contribute more which would help to
reduce financial burden on societies and the government can utilize this
money for various worthwhile activities. ( Band 6.0)

Regarding those obstacles, the most obvious solution is for the

government to implement prompt/imperative measures. For example,
they should launch diverse campaigns for raising awareness among the
elderly about taking part in more society activities and pension
schemes. By doing this, the elderly might stand a high chance of
improving their social circle and doing more valuable activities for
society and their life. A further step for the government is that they
should extend the retirement age. As a result, older people will be
able to contribute more which would help to reduce financial burden
on societies and create increasing values for other worthwhile
activities in the community. 1 Band 7. 5)

* Problems = Obstacles

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campaign = diverse campaign

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Raising awareness
among elderly
friends social circle
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Making more = Improve

In conclusion, several problems have arisen due to the fact that people
are living longer after their retirement, but measures are available
and effective to deal with them. The main responsibilities for dealing
with these problems lies with people and the governments. ( Band 7.0)

In conclusion, several problems have arisen due to the fact that people
are living longer after their retirement, but measures are available
and effective to deal with them. The main responsibilities for dealing
with these problems lies in each individual and the authorities. ( Band
7. 0)

GOOD CONCLUSION

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