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Samai Esma is organizing a trip for 20 students from Canterbury to the Black Mountains, requiring transportation, separate accommodations, and dietary considerations. Additionally, Samai has requested assistance retrieving a forgotten gym bag containing important items, and has expressed excitement about attending a friend's birthday dinner. The document also includes guidelines for writing essays, particularly for IELTS Writing Task 2, covering various question types and structures.

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Samai Esma is organizing a trip for 20 students from Canterbury to the Black Mountains, requiring transportation, separate accommodations, and dietary considerations. Additionally, Samai has requested assistance retrieving a forgotten gym bag containing important items, and has expressed excitement about attending a friend's birthday dinner. The document also includes guidelines for writing essays, particularly for IELTS Writing Task 2, covering various question types and structures.

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Dear sir ,

I’m writing this email inform you that we are planning to organize a trip
to the black mountains in west wales for a group of students from
Canterbury in kent, UK. Im samai esma the organizer of the trip, we
count on to visiting the black mountains by the end of next week first of
july and we are looking forward to stay at the hostel for about three
days and two nights. The number of students will be around 20 more
precisely 11 females and 9 males, but only 16 of them will be attending
the party. I will require from you some arrangements firstly we demand
a bus to transport the students from the hostel to the mountains,
secondly we will be in need of separate bedrooms for girls and boys
with shower included and lastly it is preferable at the dinner party to
have a various menu selections since some of the students are on a
gluten free diet and one of them has food allergy to milk and eggs.
We are looking forward to spending a good time at your hostel,in the
meantime I ll be waiting for your response.
Cordially
Samai esma
Dear sir/madam,
I’m writing to ask about a specific request regarding my gym bag that I
forgot yesterday at your gym. My name is samai esma and I’m an old
member of your gym and I have been training there for two years.
Unfortunately yesterday as I finished my training at 7pm and on my
way to go home I realized that I did not have my bag with me which
contains my personal important things one of them is my computer
that I really need for my work. My beautiful new backpack with leather
material is black colored and has decent size for a bag, it also has
white details in the front and on the handle, however the side pockets
are yellow.
As you announced that the gym will be closed for a week for some
renovation work I was really hoping that you could make an exception
for me, so I can get my bag tomorrow morning that as I said I really
need for my work
Kind regards
Dear Amina,
I hope you are doing well as you get my email, i have missed you a lot
since last time we met.
I was very happy as I received your invitation to the dinner party that
you planned at your house next weekend, and I’m very excited to be
there celebrating your birthday because it has been a long time since
we were all together you and me and our mutual friends.
I’m looking forward to seeing how you managed to decorate your
house for the party, and the kinds of food that you prepared for us. I
also hope that you could bring the Dj that Samantha had brought to
her party.
I can help you with the deserts if you want to, I have my sister who
makes good cakes and I will prepare by myself some cookies with
chocolate chips I know that they are your favorites.
Thank you a lot, your best friend Asma
XOXO
Extreme adjectives (extreme adver(dramatically-insanely-incredibly-
extremely plus an adjective )
Very happy=thrilled
Very small= tiny
Very big =gigantic
Very beautiful=gorgeous , stunning, breathtaking,mesmerizing
Very scary=frightening,terrifying
Very bad =horrible
Very old=ancient
Very modern =innovative
Very nice=pleasing
Very hot=boiling
Very cold=freezing
2 (18 min)
Dear Mr Brown,
I’m writing this email to ask for your help the day of my presentation
That I will be presenting in two days from now at 9am at the meeting
office number 3 of the second floor.
I have been preparing this project for almost 2 months and I worked so
hard on it, therefore I need this presentation to be at level of my
efforts. In addition my work promotion relies on this project. I have
been submerged with work to the point that I don’t have the time to
prepare all the arrangements of this presentation, this is why i’m in the
need of your help to provide for me some equipments
First of all I will be needing a projector and a cables to plug with my
computer, then I also need a microphone so that everyone in the room
can hear me and lastly I will count on you also to bring water and some
paper notes for the attendees of the presentation.
With sincere thanks.
Samai esma
3
Dear Sir/Madam,
As the manager of the local museum, I’m writing to you this email to
complain about my last visit which took place on the 4th of july.
Im Samai Esma one of the visitors , While was touring in your museum
with my grandmother who is a big fan of history and a former artist ,
we encountered several issues worth signaling ; there were not a
convenient entrance for people with disabilities, therefore I had to help
her take the stairs instead of using her wheelchair, after that when we
were moving to next floor the elevator was insanely narrow and a lot of
people were using it, so we had to wait for long time before it was
empty , and lastly when my grandmother wanted to use the restroom it
was very hard for her.
I suggest that you could arrange some modifications such as a special
entrance, restrooms and a second elevator for people with disabilities
so it would be a pleasing visit for them in the future .
Cordially
Essay
Opinion ( lawyer) Discussion (judge)

Use personal opinions Use impersonal opinions


- I think - It is true
- I my opinion - It is known
- I believe - It is generally believable
- In my view of point - It is undeniable that
- I cannot deny that
- I reckon

Introduction
*funnel is an easy type of introduction (generalize the topic and answer
the question generally)
-Paraphrase the question (thesis statement)
Body
Paragraph A
Part 1 topic sentence (smoking is bad) + controlling idea (e 3 reasons
why smoking is bad)
Part 2 supporting details (first – second- third) + evidence (examples,
quote, explanation, dates, result, condition, cause ...)
Paragraph B
The same
Paragraph C
Conclusion
You need to write at least 250 words and justify your opinion with
arguments, discussion, examples, problem outlining, proposing possible
solutions and supporting your position. You will have approximately 40
minutes to finish your Essay Writing. IELTS Writing Task 2 carries more
weights than Writing Task 1.
Do Don’t do
 analyse the topic  DON’T use contractions (e.g.
 Respond to all parts of the I don't --> I do not)
prompt fully.  avoid being personal (e.g. I,
 spend the first five minutes me. my)
planning your essay  DON’T use emotive
 in the introduction: language (e.g. disgusting,
Paraphrase the task and fabulous)
state the aim of your essay  DON’T use only personal
in a thesis statement examples
 divide your essay into  DON’T use colloquial
paragraphs (min. four: expressions (e.g. I had great
introduction, two main body time)
paragraphs, conclusion)  avoid simple vocabulary
 start each paragraph with a (e.g. say, think, bad) and
topic sentence basic linking words (e.g.
 provide a reason and an and. but, also)
example for each of your  DON’T repeat the same
arguments vocabulary throughout your
 summarise the points made essay
in the essay in the  DON’T write simple
conclusion sentences (e.g. Everyone
 if appropriate, state your thinks it's true. I disagree.)
opinion in formal style (e.g.  DON’T use
It is my firm belief that) overgeneralisations (e.g.
 use formal vocabulary (ex: everyone, always, never, all)
keep --> - maintain: make  DON’T copy the task in your
sure --> ensure) TIP: words introduction
that sound or look more  DON'T forget to answer ALL
French, Spanish, Italian or parts of the task
Portuguese will usually be  DON’T write less than 250
more formal. words
 use passive voice to sound  DON’T forget to summarise
more formal and objective and conclude your essay in
(e.g. The film will be the last paragraph
shown...)  DON’T use examples or
 avoid repetition by using arguments unrelated to the
synonyms (e.a. important = topic
vital = essential = crucial)
 use formal linking words
(e.g. despite, nevertheless,
furthermore)
 use complex sentences
 proofread your work to
avoid simple mistakes
 make sure you’ve written at
least 250 words

Task Achievement (25%)


Coherence and Cohesion (25%)
Lexical Resource (25%)
Grammatical Range and Accuracy (25%)
the five most common IELTS Writing Task 2 questions are:
 Opinion (Agree or Disagree)
 Advantages and Disadvantages
 Problem and Solution
 Discussion (Discuss both views)
 Two-part Question
Opinion Questions (Agree or Disagree)
- Typical Question Words–
- What is your opinion?
- Do you agree or disagree?
- To what extent do you agree or disagree?
- Direct question.
- Example Question–
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be
compulsory in high school programmes (for example, working for a
charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger
children).
Do you agree or disagree?
Essay Structure
Introduction
1- Paraphrase Question
2- Give your opinion and outline the main ideas.
Main Body Paragraph 1
1- Topic Sentence

2- Explain Topic Sentence


3- Example
Main Body Paragraph 2
1- Topic Sentence
2- Explain Topic Sentence
3- Example
Conclusion
1- Summary of main points and opinion

Advantages and Disadvantages Questions


Typical Question Words
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
- What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Example Question
- Technology is being used more and more in education.
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Essay Structure
Introduction
1- Paraphrase Question
2- Outline Main Points
Main Body Paragraph 1
1- State Two Advantages
2- Expand/Explain First Advantage
3- Expand/Explain Second Advantage
3- Example
Main Body Paragraph 2
1- State Two Disadvantages
2- Expand/Explain First Disadvantage
3- Expand/Explain Second Disadvantage
3- Example
Conclusion
1- Summary of Main Points
Discuss Both Views Question (Discussion Essay)

Typical Question Words

Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Example Question

Technology is being used more and more in education.


Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others
argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own
opinion.

Essay Structure
Introduction

1- Paraphrase Question and/or state both viewpoints.

2- Thesis Statement

3- Outline Sentence
Main Body Paragraph 1

1- State first viewpoint

2- Discuss first viewpoint

3- Reason why you agree or disagree with viewpoint

4- Example to support your view

Main Body Paragraph 2

1- State second viewpoint

2- Discuss second viewpoint

3- Reason why you agree or disagree with viewpoint

4- Example to support your view

Conclusion

Sentence 1- Summary

Sentence 2- State which one is better or more important

Problem and Solution Questions


Typical Question Words

Problem and solution.

Cause and solution.


Example Question

Students are becoming more and more reliant on


technology.

What are some of the problems associated with reliance on


computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

Essay Structure
Introduction

1- Paraphrase Question

2- Outline Sentence

Main Body Paragraph 1

1- State Problems

2- Explain First Problem

3- Explain Second Problem

4- Example of Second Problem

Main Body Paragraph 2

1- State Solutions

2- Explain First Solution

3- Explain Second Solution

4- Example of Second Solution

Conclusion
1- Summary

Two-Part Questions
Typical Question Words

There will normally be a statement, and they will then ask


you to answer separate questions.

Example Question

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at


work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual
wellbeing.

What factor contributes to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all


workers?

Essay Structure
Introduction

1- Paraphrase Question

2- Outline Sentence (mention both questions)

Main Body Paragraph 1

1- Answer first question directly

2- Explain why

3- Further explain

4- Example
Main Body Paragraph 2

1- Answer second question directly

2- Explain why

3- Further explain

4- Example

Conclusion

1- Summary
The consumption of food is changing through the years, people
nowadays consume more imported and processed food then they used
to do years ago. This shift raises questions about the reasons behind
consumer choices and strategies to support local food.
One of the reasons that make people lean toward choosing imported
food is the appearance and variety of choices. The imported food may
be more appealing and can seem to be tastier that local aliment. For
example people would prefer buying French cheese, Italian pasta,
Suisse chocolate then the one that are produced locally. In addition to
globalization that helped providing every possible nouriture across the
world. Another reason that should brought the attention to is the
budget of the consumer since a large of imported food can be
incredibly cheaper due to low cost of production in other countries.
There are several strategies that can be highlighted. Firstly, supporting
the local farmer and agricultures by providing them with financial aid
and by reducing taxes, secondly raising the awereness about the
benefits of the local food and their biggest impact on our health and life
style. Lastly, tours to farms and visits can be established for consumers
to learn about the origin of their food and encourage them to buy it
more. Supermarkets should also be encouraged to put forward more
local food in their shelves

WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is
the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in
general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words

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