Stanford English Notes
Stanford English Notes
Beyond the basic five-paragraph structure, different essay types serve distinct purposes and require
specific approaches.
I. Expository Essay
Purpose: To inform, explain, clarify, or define a subject. It presents facts, statistics, and examples to
illuminate a topic.
Key Characteristics:
Examples: "How-to" essays, descriptive essays, process analysis essays, cause and effect essays,
comparison and contrast essays.
Structure: Typically includes an introduction, body paragraphs that develop specific aspects of the topic,
and a conclusion that summarizes.
Purpose: To convince the reader to accept a particular viewpoint or to take a specific action. It presents
a clear thesis and supports it with logical reasoning and evidence, often addressing counterarguments.
Key Characteristics:
Structure: Introduction (with thesis), body paragraphs (each supporting a point, with evidence),
counterargument/refutation paragraph(s), conclusion.
Purpose: To tell a story, often a personal one, to convey a lesson, insight, or experience.
Key Characteristics:
Structure: Follows a story arc (introduction of characters/setting, rising action, climax, falling action,
resolution), but also includes reflection on the meaning of the experience.
Purpose: To examine, interpret, and explain aspects of a literary work (e.g., novel, poem, play). It argues
a specific interpretation supported by textual evidence.
Key Characteristics:
Focuses on elements like theme, character, symbolism, setting, literary devices, or author's style.
Structure: Introduction (with thesis about interpretation), body paragraphs (each analyzing a specific
element with textual evidence and explanation), conclusion.
V. Research Essay
Purpose: To present findings from extensive research on a topic, synthesizing information from multiple
sources to support an original argument or analysis.
Key Characteristics:
Structure: Similar to an argumentative or expository essay but with a strong emphasis on integrating and
citing external research.
Avoid starting every sentence the same way (e.g., with the subject).
Start with a Prepositional Phrase: In the quiet of the morning, the birds began to sing.
Start with a Participial Phrase: Running quickly, the dog chased the ball.
Start with a Dependent Clause: Although it was raining, they decided to go for a walk.
Start with a Conjunction (for effect): And so, the journey began. (Use sparingly).
Transform choppy simple sentences into more complex and fluid structures.
Combined: The sun was setting, and the sky turned orange.
Combined: Because she studied hard, she passed the exam. (or She passed the exam because she
studied hard.)
Common subordinating conjunctions: after, although, as, because, before, if, since, though, unless, until,
when, while, where.
Transitions connect ideas, sentences, and paragraphs, making your writing smooth and logical.
Contrasting: however, nevertheless, on the other hand, in contrast, conversely, although, despite.
Showing Cause & Effect: therefore, consequently, as a result, thus, hence, because, since.
Illustrating/Giving Examples: for example, for instance, specifically, to illustrate, such as.
Showing Time: first, next, then, meanwhile, subsequently, eventually, previously, currently.
Using the same pattern of words to show that two or more ideas have the same level of importance.
This adds balance and rhythm.
Correct: She likes to swim, to hike, and to ride bikes. (Parallel infinitives)
Correct: She likes swimming, hiking, and riding bikes. (Parallel gerunds)
Page 14: Common Writing Pitfalls & How to Avoid Them
Even experienced writers can fall into these traps. Awareness is the first step to improvement.
Solution:
Eliminate unnecessary phrases: "at this point in time" (now), "due to the fact that" (because), "in the
event that" (if).
Remove redundant words: "future plans" (plans), "true facts" (facts), "past history" (history), "personal
opinion" (opinion).
Replace weak verbs with stronger ones: "made a decision" (decided), "gave a presentation" (presented).
Avoid passive voice when active voice is clearer: "The ball was hit by John" (John hit the ball).
Solution:
Use concrete nouns and strong verbs: Instead of "He did something," try "He completed the task" or "He
destroyed the evidence."
Be specific with adjectives and adverbs: Instead of "a nice day," try "a sunny, breezy day." Instead of
"walked quickly," try "walked briskly."
Avoid clichés and jargon: They often lack originality and can be unclear to some readers.
III. Lack of Specificity/Generalizations
Solution:
Provide evidence: Back up claims with facts, statistics, examples, anecdotes, or expert opinions.
Show, don't tell: Instead of saying a character is "brave," describe their actions that demonstrate
bravery.
Problem: Shifting between first person (I, we), second person (you), and third person (he, she, it, they)
within a single piece of writing.
Second Person: For instructions, direct address (use sparingly in academic writing).
Third Person: Most common for academic essays, reports, objective writing.
V. Overuse of Qualifiers
Problem: Using too many words that dilute the strength of a statement (e.g., very, really, quite,
somewhat, rather, almost, perhaps, maybe, seems to, tends to).
Solution:
Be confident in your assertions: If you are sure, state it directly.
Choose stronger words: Instead of "very happy," use "ecstatic." Instead of "seems to suggest," use
"suggests."
Problem: Converting verbs into nouns, often making sentences longer and less direct.
A brief overview of major literary periods and their defining characteristics helps contextualize and
analyze texts.
Characteristics: Norman Conquest's influence (French vocabulary), rise of chivalry, romance, allegories.
Key Works/Authors: Geoffrey Chaucer (The Canterbury Tales), Sir Gawain and the Green Knight.
Key Works/Authors: William Shakespeare (plays, sonnets), Christopher Marlowe (plays), Edmund
Spenser (The Faerie Queene), John Milton (Paradise Lost).
Characteristics: Emphasis on reason, order, logic, satire, wit, classical forms, public discourse,
didacticism.
Key Works/Authors: John Dryden, Alexander Pope (The Rape of the Lock), Jonathan Swift (Gulliver's
Travels), Daniel Defoe (Robinson Crusoe), Samuel Johnson.
Characteristics: Emphasis on emotion, imagination, individualism, nature, the sublime, the supernatural,
rebellion against reason.
Key Works/Authors: William Wordsworth, Samuel Taylor Coleridge (Lyrical Ballads), Lord Byron, Percy
Bysshe Shelley, John Keats (poets); Mary Shelley (Frankenstein), Jane Austen (novels).
Characteristics: Industrial Revolution, social reform, realism, moral earnestness, class issues, growth of
the novel, exploration of doubt and faith.
Key Works/Authors: Charles Dickens, George Eliot, Thomas Hardy (novelists); Alfred, Lord Tennyson,
Robert Browning, Elizabeth Barrett Browning (poets).
Characteristics: Break from tradition, experimentation with form and narrative, stream of consciousness,
disillusionment, impact of World Wars, fragmentation.
Key Works/Authors: T.S. Eliot (The Waste Land), Virginia Woolf (Mrs. Dalloway), James Joyce (Ulysses),
F. Scott Fitzgerald (The Great Gatsby), Ernest Hemingway.
Key Works/Authors: Samuel Beckett (Waiting for Godot), Kurt Vonnegut (Slaughterhouse-Five), Gabriel
García Márquez (One Hundred Years of Solitude), Toni Morrison (Beloved).
Performing well on English exams requires not just knowledge but also effective test-taking skills.
I. General Preparation
Understand the Format: Know what types of questions will be on the exam (multiple choice, essay, short
answer, grammar identification, literary analysis).
Review Notes & Materials: Go over your class notes, assigned readings, and any study guides.
Practice: Work through practice questions, especially for grammar, vocabulary, and essay prompts.
Manage Your Time: Allocate study time effectively across different topics.
Read the Question Carefully: Understand exactly what is being asked. Look for keywords like "not,"
"except," "always," "never."
Read All Answer Choices: Don't pick the first one that looks correct. There might be a better answer.
Look for Distractors: Be aware of answers that sound plausible but are incorrect.
Context is Key: For vocabulary questions, consider how the word is used in the sentence.
Identify Keywords: What is the core topic? What are the specific instructions (e.g., "analyze," "compare,"
"contrast," "evaluate," "discuss")?
Outline Your Essay: Even a brief outline (thesis, main points for each paragraph, key evidence) will save
time and ensure coherence.
Craft a Strong Thesis Statement: This is the backbone of your essay. Make it clear, specific, and arguable.
Manage Your Time:
Ensure each body paragraph has a clear topic sentence, supporting evidence, and analysis.
Always explain how your evidence supports your point. Don't just drop quotes.
Proofread: After writing, quickly check for grammar, spelling, punctuation, and clarity errors. Even a
quick read-through can catch significant mistakes.
Be Direct & Concise: Answer the question directly without unnecessary elaboration.
Support with Evidence: If required, provide brief, relevant examples or details.
Scan the Entire Exam: Get a sense of the length and types of questions before you begin.
Prioritize: Start with questions you feel most confident about to build momentum.
Stay Calm: If you feel overwhelmed, take a deep breath and refocus.
Review Your Answers: If time permits, go back and check your work.