TUGAS TUTORIAL 2

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 TASK 2
Question 1

Please look at the letter below.

Linda Lau
123 Main Street, Anytown, CA 12345 · linda.lau@email.com

March 5, 2020

Oscar Lee
Managing Editor
Acme Graphic & Design
123 Business Rd.
Business City, NY 54321

1 Dear Ms. Lee, answer : (it’s the part of heading, which mean this part is describe the receiver of the letter,
or the person whom you liked to sended, sometimes in informal way its will be suggest with a poem or
any greetings)
I would like to invite you to attend our upcoming Liberal Arts department job networking event. The
event will be held on the afternoon of May 1, 2020. We wish to provide our graduating seniors with
an opportunity to meet business leaders in the area who may be looking for new hires who hold
degrees in the Liberal Arts.
2
The event will be held at the Cox Student Center at Northern State University, and will last about 2 to
3 hours. If you have an interest in attending or sending a company representative to meet with our
students, please let me know at your earliest convenience and I can reserve a table for you.
Thank for your time and I hope to hear from you soon. answer: (it’s part of the body, it will be describe the
purposed of your letter, in this section we supposed to tell any of the details ex. Complaining, thanks or
any else, sometimes it will be contain a product description or any of the product details or maybe it will
inform the places that the activity was held or some accident that you want to tell the receiver)
Respectfully,

3 Linda Lau answer: (it’s the last part, sometimes people called it the sender address or name, but in
formal way its called as letters compliment that contain the detail of who the writers as a
person or company by name)
Linda Lau
Liberal Arts Department Chair

Questions

Please identify the part of the letter numbered 1-3.

Question 2

Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

The first dissmiss writing is about how we address the letter,
1660 Maple Court
we dont need to multiply wrote the heading of address, it
Kennett, MO 63857
supposed to write at the outside of the letters as compliment
for the post officers, but in occational either way, we can
July 21, 2021 write the details of the receiver in headings once, and its
supposed to wrote like this :
William Reed
Purchase Manager Wiliam Reed
The Cooking Store Purchase Manager, The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive 2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656 Mineral City
P/c. OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
1
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalogue, price list, and terms of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalogue, price list, and terms of payment together with samples
of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely, 2
In order way to inform the sender as a company not in
personal, we supposed to written in formal way, not
Robert Brown using a short pharapreses or any of dissloses word, in
The miss in here is just formal way we clearly using all of our honour and full
about how we double respect to the company we sended and we supposed
Robert Brown the sender of the letters, not to used question (?) mark on our letter, it will be
its just in occational uses more condores to use unpropotional question.
Sales Manager for once, and just write it
in ex,
Robert Brown
(As Represent Company)
Questions (Name of the company)

Please identify 3 (three) errors in the letter above.

3
 3. Answer
You ordered some cookies online and received an expired one. Please write a body letter Please write a
body letter in approximately 100-200 words that explains your disappointment and you are asking for a
refund/exchange

Biscuit Co.Ltd
19978 ABC Industry Area
California, DXS 18978
May 11th, 2024

Dear Sir/Madam,
O/c. Public Relations
I am writing to express my dismay of your product at XYZ Supermarket branch on
Saturday 10 May 2024.
I often collect the products from the groceries on behalf of my mother’s birthday, Mrs
Nurul. On this occasion there were two product I had bought from the store in the details,

1. Chocolate biscuit with crumbs 20 Pcs

2. White Mouse Cake with Pine Jam 10 Pcs

If I hadn't noticed the expired due date of the product it will be fatally for all the guest on
health issues and worst cases of poisoning by food, I barely looked the boxes after I arrived
at home and it clearly write down that the product already expired 6 (six) months later, On
behalf I wrote this letter is about 11th May 2024 and your product supposedly used before
2nd October 2023, when I go back to the grocery store, officially the store wouldn’t gave me
the reimbursed or change the product in reason that I already bring the products to home,
basically it’s same product and I can guarantee 100% I didn’t replace or exchange the
product with another one, so they just gave me some advises to wrote and send
complaining letters direct to your company as a responsible of product and consumer
behaviours.
The workers on that groceries told me that they can’t gave in return, with this letter I attempt
and gave you the bills detail and the photo of product that I bought, it cost me $50.50 to buy
all of your product, I didn’t expect for cash reimbursed, I just need some clarification and
explanation from your company, so it wouldn’t happen to anyone else.
I hope you can take steps to make sure this mistake does not happen again.

Yours faithfully,
HARIS
4. Answer
You initiate a fundraising event after a natural disaster and there is one person who donated a large
amount of money. Write a thank you email about the donation in approximately 50-100 words.
Jane Crueel
Director, Human Resources
Mariee Office Supplies
123 Business Rd.
Business City, NY 54321
May 13, 2024

Dear Ms. Crueel,

Thank you so much for supporting me and our fundraising NGo for the open donation that
we held at the church yesterday. I appreciate the time and all the materials you spent at
this event how your products prepared and how fast responses your fundraising team.
You’re clearly very knowledgeable about humanity and social affairs.

As we discussed during the MoU Assignment, my sales team will be picked up the items
bucket and all the payment receipt will deliver to your address as soon as possible, as
our discussion before, all the package will send to community late by this weekend, I hope
you will always open your CSR for our Community as a compliment. Maybe it’s just
pretended $1 dollar for anyone, but seems like one soul for help.

Thank you again for taking the time to talk to me about this social event. I believe you
can get the same way as you do to helps people and hopefully look forward to meeting
again soon. In the meantime, please let me know if you need any additional
information.

Sincerely,
Haris B.