Group One TW
Group One TW
emphasis on:
Examples of Parallelism:
1. Mona can sing and dance.
2. We enjoy cooking and baking.
3. She is beautiful and talented.
4. I like to watch documentaries and to travel abroad.
5. Jenna acted quickly and carefully.
6. Filipinos love comedies, drama and documentaries.
Misplaced Modifier
-A misplaced modifier is a word, phrase, or clause that is improperly
separated from the word it modifies / describes.
• Example
On her way home, Jan found a gold man’s watch
• Misplaced modifiers can usually be corrected by moving the modifier to
a more sensible place in the sentence, generally next to the word it
modifies.
On her way home, Jan found a man’s gold watch.
• There are several kinds of misplaced modifiers:
• Example 2
may be corrected to
Now the sentence means that I was looking toward the west.
• Correction Method #2
• Change the dangling modifier phrase to a subordinate clause, creating
a subject and verb.
• Leave the rest of the sentence as it is.
Thus, the dangling modifier
may be corrected to
Now the sentence means that I (not my mother!) was nine years
old when my mother enrolled in medical school.
Paragraph Structure
Paragraphs are the units of organization for your essay. It develops
one main idea through a series of related sentences. This main idea is
usually introduced in the first sentence of the paragraph, called the
topic sentence. The idea is then developed further through the
sentences that follow. Using a clear structure for your paragraphs
helps guide the reader through your written work.
A. Topic Sentence (TS) - the beginning
A topic sentence usually comes at the beginning of a paragraph.
This will be your way of announcing the main focus of your
paragraph; it should tell the reader what your paragraph will be about.
In short, it must be general enough to express the paragraph’s overall
subject. The specific area delimited is called the controlling idea.
Topic Sentence Part
Topic Controlling Idea
People can avoid burglaries by taking certain precautions.
B. Supporting Sentences (SS) - the middle
This sentences are called “supporting” because they support,
explain, or back up the idea expressed in the topic sentence.
Example:
My Dog Romeo is so much fun to play with. One reason he’s fun is
because he loves to play catch. What’s also fun is that he follows me
around the house with a toy and drops it on my foot, so I will kick it.
Additionally, he can catch just about anything, but his favorite thing to
catch is a Frisbee. Finally, he loves it when I pretend like I’m falling
dead, and he runs over to lick me. All these reasons show why I really
have fun playing with Romeo.
C. Concluding Sentence (CS) - the end